AR OS: Proposals (Updated p.3)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ...vibha...
sorry for late comment
happy that armaan agrees for marriage
loved their cute proposal😳

Hey!!

It's okayy! No need to apologizee (=

Im glad you commented 😃

So thankss 😃

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: basket_101

Heyy!!
☺️ Im just replying from heart 😳
Im 17.. and live in Canada now 😊
Was born and brought up in India though.. moved here 8 years ago
How about you?

And yes.. the OS is on AR
AS per your suggestion on the "Will You Be Mine" comment... I actually do have a concept in mind for KR... Gonna start writing today, and see how it turns out 😉

Yup, I know your comments are right from the heart. 😃

Even I am 17. *same pinch*

Okay, I stay in Delhi. Canada? That's cool.

8 years is a long time. You may not miss India though..

Okay, I'll be waiting for something on Kriyaansh from your side. 😃

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basket_101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: surbhi_d3
Yup, I know your comments are right from the heart. 😃
Even I am 17. *same pinch*
Okay, I stay in Delhi. Canada? That's cool.
8 years is a long time. You may not miss India though..
Okay, I'll be waiting for something on Kriyaansh from your side. 😃

😃 Nice! I've actually been to Delhi.. though that was only once.. and i was like 8 years old 😆

And honestly, I miss India every single day!

I've actually planned to come back to India after I finish my studies (=

I'm not living here... Life is nice here too.. But it's not the same

Especially because most of my family that actually and genuinely care about me are in India... plus life overall here is too stressful...

And I'm halfway done writing it (=

Just need to think of a way to end it 😛

That usually takes me the longest 😆

and AR OS.. I forgot to post it on Friday.. and then I went to America to my aunt's house so I couldnt.. I will post it tomorrow for sure (=

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Archana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Hinal <3

This is actually the first time I'm reading an AR OS :)

Though it was an adaptation of FRIENDS, I really liked it :D

I loved how you brought out Ridhima's confusion. Simply too good <3

My favourite line from the first part is two paths that once connected, split into different paths once again'

It was cute how Ridz wanted Armaan to ask her out :P

In the 2nd part, I really loved Atul <3 I was literally imagining Joey doing/saying all of that :P

And yeah, I liked the conversation between Sid and Ridz. Very heart-warming <3

Good work once again! :D

Love you <3

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teenorchid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

hellooww... Aur update mile gi?

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basket_101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Arch.Archu
Hinal <3

This is actually the first time I'm reading an AR OS :)

Though it was an adaptation of FRIENDS, I really liked it :D

I loved how you brought out Ridhima's confusion. Simply too good <3

My favourite line from the first part is two paths that once connected, split into different paths once again'

It was cute how Ridz wanted Armaan to ask her out :P

In the 2nd part, I really loved Atul <3 I was literally imagining Joey doing/saying all of that :P

And yeah, I liked the conversation between Sid and Ridz. Very heart-warming <3

Good work once again! :D

Love you <3

Archuuu <3

Thanks once again for your comment!!

Means so much to me!!

And glad to be the first person of whose AR OS you are reading 😉

I must admit, Joey is my fav. character so had to show him too 😆

Appreciate the comment!! Really 😳

Love youu <3

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basket_101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: teenorchid
hellooww... Aur update mile gi?

Hey!

I'll try writing other OS' on AR... But this OS is completed... Sorry

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Sammara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Heyyy hinal
Wat can i say
Ur os is jus fab n brill.
I loved how armaan riddhima met.
But wen ammy said he was not intrested in marriage i thought oh no.
N wen she went bak to sid i was lyk pls dont
N thn surprise.
In the end riddhima proposed
N soo did ammy
It was such a cute os.
Happy sid neva got riddhima
Pls write more OS
Loved it the concept storylyn.. Everything
Both the paerts rocked.
N loved the flashbacks too
Tc
Sammara

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basket_101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Sammaraxx
Heyyy hinal
Wat can i say
Ur os is jus fab n brill.
I loved how armaan riddhima met.
But wen ammy said he was not intrested in marriage i thought oh no.
N wen she went bak to sid i was lyk pls dont
N thn surprise.
In the end riddhima proposed
N soo did ammy
It was such a cute os.
Happy sid neva got riddhima
Pls write more OS
Loved it the concept storylyn.. Everything
Both the paerts rocked.
N loved the flashbacks too
Tc
Sammara

Hey Sami!!

Thanks soo much for such a sweet comment <3 <3 😳

I'm so glad you loved it =D

I had the best time writing this OS <3 Especially after seeing it picturised on Monica and Chandler (who I love!!)

I will definitely try to write more OS' =)

Take care <3

And thanks for commenting 😃

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Aayushi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Hey Guys!

I'm Hinal or as per my username, Basket, as some people called me...

An old member of the DMG forum on IF...

I was inactive for a couple of years, and now have returned... 😳

I wrote this a long time ago, and only posted it on the blog

So decided to post it here until my recent OS is completely written 😊

Oh and before I continue... It's directly taken from F.R.I.E.N.D.S.

I loved the concept of how Monica and Chandler end up together, so tweaked it a very tiny bit, and put our own Armaan and Riddhima in..

Hope you guys like it!

Here it is:

Proposals

It was a busy day at work today with people coming to the restaurant at all times' being a head chef might pay a lot and have its perks, but the stress level' oh my gosh! I was literally going crazy! I was so glad that I have a great evening to look forward to' me and my live-in boyfriend, Armaan, were celebrating Valentines Day today' though it was a few weeks back, both of us had to work overtime then, therefore the adjustment

Waiter ' ridz' someone's here to compliment your food

I was surprised! I usually didn't have any face-to-face approach with any customers.. I was so used to getting feedbacks from the editorial reviews that for a few moments, I lost myself in the worries of how to deal with the situation'

I quickly put my chef hat on, as I told the waiter to bring the customer in

I turned to mix the pasta sauce that I had been preparing for the afternoon's special when I heard him

Person ' riddhima! (he said ever so gently and passionately)

My fingers froze as I realized who it was' I hesitantly turned around and there he was' I wondered what made him come here after what had happened between us

Me ' what are you doing here?

Sid ' riddhima.. I want to talk to you

Me ' you're not here to compliment me are you?

Sid ' (smiling) no, not really

Me ' so.. how have you been? (placing the pasta sauce off of the stove, to cool down)

Sid ' I've been better

Me ' okay just tell me what you're here for... I know you must have a reason

Sid ' ridz, I know you're with Armaan but I just wanted to let you know that I'm ready for marriage and kids! Could we please give our relationship another chance?

I stared at him in shock' I couldn't even form any words' I looked away and held the counter for balance

Me ' why now sid? Its been well over 5 years since we ended our relationship'

Sid ' I know riddhima, but when we met in the caf last year, I just couldn't stop myself from thinking about you

I looked back at him

Me ' and the 4 years in between? Did you ever think of me? But no, now that I have a beautiful relationship with armaan, you have to tell me that you're now ready for a better relationship?

This was sooo unexpected' I was tired of having to wait for him, and now that I've forgotten him and moved forward.. he's back.. and not only that but he was back with somewhat of a proposal'

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