Are All Marriages Made In Heaven- OS: Updt pg17

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

both the chapter are beautiful put into it...
awesome and amazing keep it

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Awww!!!!! wow awsome ending

i love daway wen rey said "toh ku chali gayi"
hayeee!!!!!! dat was a sweet moment for me

n awwwiiieee second honeymoon
gosh first to dikha deti...lol

n ansh aww dere 5yr old baby
hahaha loved it

kria in jansi ki rani avtar
hayeee!!!!!! i m missing all dis seriously

but in whole i love da update
awsome...awsome...awsome

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chetna

@crazysky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

its awesome

loved it

wow

i loved the convo wen they were blaming eachother while sniffing woww..

loved it namy..i read ur note n happy that u r back on IF

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Wow !!!

Nazuk kalli this ws a Fab OS yaar ...

Really ... i got very emotional wid this one ...

U'r such a natural writer !!!

Hats Off !!!!

May u continue some like these ...

Waiting for ur works ... esp. a FF to start ... :-*

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

fabulous os

finally they realized that they love each other..

ending ws superb...

2nd honeymoon..wah

i loved rey-manager convo...

"gore...breakfast hi toh kar raha tha".🤣

i loved it...

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

you.. you dagabaaz... tune mjhe PM tak ni kara... 😡

sharam ni aayi teko... 😡

teko bola tha na PM karne ko haan...huh huh huh... 😡

okay now coming to your chappy...so i was waiting lonnnggg to read it...

it was sooo beautiful yarrr... 😳

you write soo amazingly pta hai...

i loved it... i loved it sooo much...😳

there is one part which i personally loved the most... i.e -

""rey!! aap yahan ??" kria said disbelieving. He moved close to her. "kyu ? nahi aa sakta ??" he asked looking straight at her eyes. her voice was stuck in her throat, her breath was held tight, her heart was jumping high, her knees went numb. He touched her cheeks and moved closer standing an inch away from her. "temme na baatcutter.. missing me ?" his eyes was read how genuinely he wanted an answer. He cautiously looked her expressions trying to read what he wanted to read.

She nodded no, and his expressions slumped low. She placed her hand on his, when he was about to let his hand fall down from her cheeks.. "bahut miss kia.." she said tears brimming in her eyes. he smiled as his own eyes welled up too, he cupped both her face kissing her forehead "toh kyu chali gayi ?" he asked her, their foreheads touched as they both sniffed. "jaane kyu dia..?" she retorted.

"rukh jaati na.." he said caressing her cheeks with his own.. "rok dete na.." she said still sniffing. Finally he gave in as he took her into a tight hug. Kria cried silently but clinged onto him as her life was in his arms.

"I missed u kria.." he said.. "I missed u too.." she said."

whn i read it..i was like aawww... 😳 ... read it 2 times ek saath he...

haaye... dey r sooo cute... 😳

and now... they finally living a happily married life... 😃

and wat u wrote last mei...

"Sometimes all marriages aren't made in heaven, may be.. but what matters is not heaven or hell, how you bring up your life with your partner.. what if the marriages aren't made in heaven, sometimes the two will be just made for each other.. !! When that's the case, they have to meet, have to fall in love now or later.. they will !!"

i loved it to the core...

awesomeee OS nams... 😳 👏

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Nams . . . . Everytime I read a new story of urs . . . . . I'm surprised wid ur amazing ideas 😊
its simply beautiful . . . . Very well executed 🤗
relationships are so complicated today,,, they could'nt see the true feelings of each other in a whole year 😳
they married on a deal . . . . . Just to make his mom happy 🤔
its gud that she came to knw abt this & told them to move on fast . . . . . Otherwise they won't be able to realize their feelings any soon 😛
kriya came as an angel to the life of that little gal & stopped her parent's divorce . . . . . . & they returned her gratitude by showing rey the right way 👍🏼
he came there to get her back . . . . . Awww 😃
he too loved her,,, but too scared to confess bcoz of those insecurities
but,, they are back together finally . . . . . 🥳
wid a 5yr old & his mom . . . . . 😉
2nd honeymoon . . . . . Very gud . . . . Enjoy ur breakfast 🤣
They lived happily ever after 👏

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

superb update...loved it very very much

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Anyaa_KriYaansh

@Anyaa_KriYaansh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

aahhhmaazinggg!!!
peeerrfect ending i shud say!!
totally luvvv both the parts!!
:'):')
Aaawww Reyansh was juzz like D3 Rey!!
already head over heels fr Kria!!
<3
too gudd ,,,awesomeee writing!!:D
fabb!!
<3 KriYaansh!!!!

Edited by Anyaa_KriYaansh - 12 years ago