LoVE- NO PAINS, NO GAINS ;a KR ss

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys! This is my very first attempt to write something like this , so please do tell me if i should continue it or not... So here it goes...
concept - It has been two years since kria left mumbai and now she is getting married to her childhood friend karan ...
Will she get married to karan or...
PROLOGUE
Location:-

Dehradun

It was a lazy Sunday morning; a beautiful girl was sleeping on her large ,circular and cozy bed, holding a cute teddy in her hand and with an angelic smile on her face'''

But her sleep was disturbed by the loud noise coming from her phone which was continuously ringing for past fifteen minutes...

Irritated with the continuous sound, the girl picks up the call without seeing the caller's i.d and says in an annoyed and angry tone '

G -Who's this?

Caller - GOOD MORNING, love!

G - Karan!!!! itni subah - subah call kyun kia??

You disturbed my sleep!!!!!!!!!

Ka -SORRY baby! Tumhari bohut yaad aa rahi thi so I thought to call you ' but it's okay tum so jao'

G - No it's ok.. batao kya baat karni thi?

Ka- kuch imp. Nahi bas kal ke bare mein baat karni thi'

G - kyun kal kya hai ????

Ka- kria!!!!!!!!! kal hamari engagement hai''.

How can you forget?!

Kr - OH! (her face went pale at the sudden realization)

Yeah... umm.. vo actually abhi so kar uthi na ; that's why..

Ka (interrupting her) hey! It's fine I know ki tum kal ka din nahi bhul sakti aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ki tum kal keliye utni hi exited ho jitna ki mai... after all kal hum humari nai life ki taraf first step lenge''

Kr- (interrupting him) acha karan I think maamiji is calling me ..

I need to go'(a bit uncomfortable)

Ka - see you at the evening ..bye.. Love you..

Kr -um...

Ka - it's ok ' I know ki tum abhi comfortable nai ho but I know ki ek din tum mujhe vo reply jaroor dogi jise sunne ke liye main kab se wait kar raha hun..

Kr ' karan I need to go... Bye!

And with this she cuts the call and tears start coming out from her eyes and she hides her face in a pillow and starts crying hard😭😭 and says in between her sobs :-

Sorry karan *sob* mein tumse kabhi pyaar nahi kar sakti* sobs* kabhi nai''.

SO this update ends here
if you guys want me to continue then plzzz hit like tab and comment...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing
continue nd pm me😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...pls continue and pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing SS 😃...
Loved it ❤️...
Continue soon 😊.
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amazinggg,,,,,luv it
plz pm me😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...
plz continue n plz pm me...
update soon...
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lykd it
do continue it
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amazing and awesome chapter... continue soon and post me into this...
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@jaanvi_Arsha: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊

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