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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys I am back again with my updates and I missed everyone and form now I will give one update everyday,, today I gave update of THAT ONE MISTAKE,, and tomorrow will update MY LOVE,, I am expecting your comments,,, thank you once again,,


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THAT ONE MISTAKE

PART 35

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Khushi was in her room and ansh was also there playing,, with his toys,, and ansh was observing Khushi at time intervals,, as Khushi is behaving weird,, he didn't saw his mamma like this before,, and Khushi after hearing the words from arnav,, she couldn't even sat somewhere in peace,, her mind was somewhere else,, even she is with her baby and family,,

Lavanya after her shoots and everything came back home,, and saw her home is in little peace,, no sound at all,, everything quite calm,, Lavanya became surprised,, as always when she is back home Khushi and ansh will be fighting or running here and there now how come here no sounds at all,, and where is her little kiddo and khush???

As la entered khushi's room she saw first kiddo was playing with his toys and was in his own land,, and then la looked at Khushi who was arranging dresses,, but then she saw Khushi arranging only one side and again and again touching and folding the same clothes,, and sometimes angry on something and then looking at something,, la really became worried seeing Khushi like this,,

That's when ansh saw his maasi,

Kiddo: Maashi,,

La: Oh,, kiddo come,,

Saying this la picked kiddo in her arms,, and hugged him,, even kiddo also hugged la,,

Kiddo: Maashi kiddo mished maashi,,

La: Ow,, maasi also missed kiddo very much,,

Kiddo: Maashi kiddo no talky maashi,, maashi ate,,,

La: Sorry baba maasi was busy in office,, sorry,,

Saying this la touched her ears as indicating really sorry,, and kiddo melted in her acts,,

Kiddo: Ok maashi,, kiddo lovesh maashi,,

La: Maasi too loves kiddo,,

Saying la kissed his cheeks,, then asked,,

La: Kiddo what happened to your mamma,,

Kiddo: Mamma angly,,,

La: Angry?? Why??

Kiddo: Mamma angly papa??

La: Papa??

Kiddo: Yesh

La: But when did you meet or khush meet ASR????

Kiddo: Mamma papa kiddo hopiatl,,

La: You meet him at hospital,,,

Kiddo: Yesh,,

La: [st] Now I know why khush is angry and upset,,

La: Ok kiddo,,

That's when vasu called ansh for having his milk,,

La: Ok kiddo you to naanu maa and have your milk,, maasi will come with your mamma in few minutes,,

Kiddo: Ok maashi,,

Saying kiddo left to vasu,,

Then la walked to Khushi and touched her shoulder,,

Khushi startled first and then looked back and saw la,,

Khushi: La you I,,

La: Where are you khush?? You are really,,,

Khushi couldn't hold her back,, she hugged la and cried,,,

Khushi: I,, I don't anything la,, I am really tired,, tired of everything,, tired of being suffering and sacrificing,, now I only left my baby, and,,

La: Shh,, khush we all are with you,, no one will come and take your son ok,, and we won't allow anyone to do that,,

Khushi: I don't know anything but I ant live with out my son,, if he will go away from me I will die la,, I will die,,

La hugged Khushi with tears pouring her eyes,, after composing herself la asked Khushi..

La: You met ASR today hai Na khush???

Khushi looked at la,, she became surprised to hear that,,

La: Kiddo told me,, as I asked him about your anger,,,

Khushi: Hmm,, we met in the hospital and he,,

La: May be done something to increase your temper,,

Khushi: Done something,, do you know what he did,, bacha wanted to stay with him,, so I said wait for me sometime,, but he took ansh with him and was playing somewhere else, and I told him to wait near the doctor's cabin,, I searched the whole hospital,, and I,, I thought I just lost my baby,,

La: Khush,,

Khushi: Yes la,, he is the only one in my life but,,

La: Shh,, khush don't worry,, by making you worry you are making kiddo and us also worry,, and why are you making yourself suffer because for that man,, and if you want to consider about ansh,, then ok,, we have time,, now don't make yourself a pagal,,

Khushi: Yes la may be thinking and seeing all these I will surely go mad,, surely,,,

La: Khush,, don't be stupid,, we all are here with you and kiddo ok,,

Khushi: Hmm,,

Khushi nodded her head and wiped her tears,,

La: Ok now come and have something,,

Khushi: Hmm,,

Saying they two left to kitchen,,,

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It was night and la was with vasu and she was in deep thoughts,, and seeing la vasu asked,,

Vasu: What happened choti?? You look really worried,,

La: Yes mamma actually I was thinking about khush,,,

Vasu: Khushi beta?? What happened to her???

La: Mamma I think she is going to so much mental trauma,, you know from the time ASR started to visit her she is really worried,, and thinking about ansh,,

Vasu: I know beta but,, the truth is arnav beta have the right to come to ansh,,

La: Yes mamma but hat about Khushi then?? She don't have any right,,

Vasu: Yes beta she have,, but a kid needs both his father and mother,, and ansh also,, if arnav beta can really give Khushi beta the happiness and rights she deserves then everything will be fine and ansh also will be happy with his parents,,

La: Mamma it's good to hear but,, but seeing khushi's acts I think she will go insane,,

Vasu: No beta,, she loves her husband from inside,, and she can't ever replace arnav beta in her life, and also ansh,, I really wish they soon becomes together,, because of misunderstandings and fate they separated and now for ansh they will unite,,,

La: Mamma,, I don't know all these but I would like to see my khushi's happiness,,,

Vasu: Yes beta and that happiness is with arnav beta,,

La: May be I don't know,,,

Saying this la went to sleep,,

Vasu: [st] you know beta but don't want to accept the fact because you aren't able to trust him,, I wish your trust also comes to him soon,,,

Saying this vasu also left to her room,,,

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Payal was making arrangement to sleep and she was thinking and her eyes getting teary sometimes,, that's when akash entered,, and seeing his wife like that akash got worried,,

Akash: Payal what happened are you ok????

Payal wiping her tears,,,

Payal: Yes akash ji,, I am fine,, just thinking something,,

Akash: Payal please don't lie,, at least not to me,,

Payal: I,, I wasn't lying akash ji,, really,,

Akash: Oh really then why were you crying???

Payal: I,, I wasn't,,

But akash make her turn to him,, before she could do anything or protest anything,,

Akash: Payal look at me,, I am your husband and I am asking you,, what happened,,,

Payal: Akash ji,,

Payal calling him out,, started crying badly,,

Akash: Payal I know you supressed all your feeling inside you,, don't worry,, you can share anything with me,, tell me,,,

Payal: Akash ji,, our,, our baby,,

Akash: Payal shh,, I also wanted a baby,, but it wasn't with us,, that god,,

Payal: Why akash ji?? Why?? Why god punished dour baby for the mistake which he o she didn't done, it was me and my amma done hai na,,

Akash: No Payal,, you weren't anywhere at fault,, it was,,

Payal: No akash ji if I wished everything should have been fine and ansh,, ansh wouldn't have been with here all of us and Khushi,, wont have been to suffer all those,, she will be happy and,,

Payal couldn't complete,,, then akash said,,,

Akash: No payal everything is not in our hands,, it happens with time,, and you don't worry,, everything will be fine soon,, and once bhabhi and anshu will come and starts to stay here then,,

Payal: Yes akash ji,, I too wish that Khushi will come here soon, and forgives us,,

Akash: Payal,,, bhabhi isn't angry on us payal,, especially you,, she is your sister and she knows your state,,, and yes bhabhi is angry on bhai because what he did with her is unforgivable,, and I know he will make it up with her,, and then ansh will get his parents love,, I have trust in bhai,, he wont make us down this time payal,, I know that,,

Payal: Hmmm,,,

Akash: And then,, everything will be ok and fine,, and we will have or own baby,, a girl like you,, little shy and innocent,, nice to heart,,

Payal: And will call ansh always bhai like you calls arnav ji,,,

Payal and akash were laughed,,

Akash: And then I know Lavanya ji loves nk bhai,, they also will get married and,, we will live happily,,

Payal smiled at akash's thought,, then she said sadly,,

Payal: Akash ji you think it will happen,,,

Akash looked ta payal's sad eyes and said,,

Akash: Yes payal,, soon,,

Then they hugged each other,, and consoled,,

But akash also knew this will take a little time,, but will happen surely,,,

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It was next day arnav and nk were getting ready for office and akash was at with anish,, as he wanted to go to park,, and akash told he will take him out so that he can take payal also out,, it will be a change for her,,

In hall daadi Anjali shyam mama and maami and anish were there,, that's when akash payal came,,

Daadi: Akash beta,, I wanted to tell you something,,

Akash: Yes daadi,,,

Daadi: WO me and Anjali bitiya were decide to arrange a puja at home,,,

Akash: Puja,, daadi so suddenly,,

Daadi: Wo beta we all know here whatever happened in our home wasn't good enough,, so we thought and asked pundit ji about this and decided to keep a puja here,, we all will get the blessings of good future and you and payal bitiya also,, this will be good for you two,,,

Payal: Ji daadi,,,

Maami: And we will call some relatives also,,,

Akash: Hmm,,

Daadi: And akash beta,, we thought of calling Khushi bitiya Lavanya bitiya and her mom,, ansh will also be with there,,

Akash: But daadi do you think bhabhi will come here after what happened,,

Anjali: Akash she will come we will go and invite her,, and if we said this to anshu he will surely insist Khushi to come here,,

Shyam: Yes akash Anjali is right,, and it will help arnav to do his patch up,,,

Akash: That's right jijaji..

Daadi: And payal bitiya if you want you can invite your amma,,, and maa and papa,,

Before payal could say anything they heard a voice,,,

Arnav: No,, no one will invite them,, or call them,, never ever in this house,, they have lost the right to come here,, now they have no need to come here,,

Everyone looked back and saw arnav coming down with NK,,,

Arnav: Yes daadi,, they don't have to come here and no need to call them here for any function ok,,,

Daadi: But chote,,,

Payal: Arnav ji is right daadi ji,, me also can't forget what happened with me and Khushi because of my amma and maa and papa,, as arnav ji said you don't have to call them,, they have no right to be a part of our happiness nor sadness,,

Akash: Payal you,,

Payal: Yes akash ji,, you don't worry,, I am fine,, and I know what I am saying,, when my amma did something to harm a baby,, then she lost the right to call me as her beti,, and what she did to Khushi,, it can never forgive,, and maa and papa also didn't do anything for Khushi,, they also cant call as parents,, so need to inform anything to them,,,

As payal said all these everyone became shocked das this is first time payal said something like this,, but whatever she said dis right,, and also arnav,,

Arnav: Thanks payal,,

Payal: No arnav ji,, if I didn't do something like this now then,, I wont be able to look at me or Khushi,, I wont able to meet my own eyes with shame,,

Daadi: Bitiya,,,

Payal: No daadi ji,, its ok,,

Arnav: Ok daadi I am going office,, akash aren't you coming,,

Akash: No bhai actually I was taking anish and payal out so,,

Arnav: Ok akash carry on,,

Saying arnav and nk left,,,

And after sometime akash with payal and anish also left for their outing,,

***********AR***************

La was busy in her shoots ,, and Khushi in her new fashion show's work,, as she was totally immersed in her works,, she didn't notice that arnav was observing her from long time,,

That's when nk entered arnav's cabin,, and he saw arnav looking at Khushi,,

Nk: Nannav,, you know Khushi ji won't fall in your this observing tricks,,

Arnav came out his dream land and aw nk,,

Arnav: Nk, you here,, what are you doing here at this time,, you don't have nay work???

Nk: It's my break time Nannav,, and you don't worry,, I won't say this to anyone,,

Arnav: Even if you say then I have no problem nk,,,, she is my wife,, you know,,

Nk: No Nannav,, ex-wife,, for your correction,,

Arnav: Nk,,

Arnav called with pain,, in his voice,,

Nk: Sorry Nannav but,, you know you should do something big and make her believe you love her and be with her rest of your life,,

Arnav: Yes I am nk but she is not believing me,,

Why should she Nannav????

Arnav: Because I love her,,

Nk: You should make this understand this to her ok,, and I will help you for this,,

Arnav: How???

Nk: I will give you new ideas to woo your wife,,

Arnav: Like????

Nk: Like take her for an outing,, with ansh not the point ok,, then gifting her,, her favourite flowers,, you know her favourite and la's favourite is red roses,,

Arnav looked at him,, and seeing this,,

Nk: Don't be angry Nannav she is friend ok,,

Arnav: Ok nk but you know all this possible only after our patch-up so stop irritating me and do your work,, bye,,

Nk: But Nannav,,

Arnav: Ok then go and talk to la and clear the things between you two,,

Nk: Nannav,,, she don't want to talk me about our relation,, so,,

Arnav: I am sorry nk,, I know it's because of me and us,,,

Nk: So that Nannav I am here to make you and Khushi ji path up,,

Arnav: Oh,,

Nk: Yes,,

Nk smiled sheepishly,,

Nk: And Nannav you have a chance you know daadi ji is conducting a puja at our house and she will invite Khushi ji and ansh also la,, so we have a good chance and make it work nannav,,,

Arnav: Ok nk now go and do some work I also have important work to do,,

Nk: I know what you're important work,, is staring at your beautiful wife and drooling over her,, and be in your dream land,,

Arnav: Nk shut up,,

Nk: Ok,, ok,, I am going nannav be in your dream land,,,

Saying nk left and arnav looked back at Khushi and smiled,, that's when he thought,,

Arnav: [st] ASR behave yourself,, you are ASR,,,

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It was sometime later,, Khushi knocked arnav's cabin,, as she wanted to take his signs in some papers,, so she came there,,

Khushi: May I come in sir????

Arnav: Yes come in,,

Arnav saw Khushi and smiled at her,, but Khushi looked away,,

Arnav: Come and have a seat Khushi,,

Khushi: Thank you sir,,,

Then Khushi sat in the chair and said,,

Khushi: Sir actually I came here to take your signs in these papers, we have to send this to the textiles so they will send us the material,,

Arnav: Yes Khushi,, give me that papers,,

Then Khushi handed over the papers and that's when her hand touched arnav's,, she looked at arnav shocked and her eyes widened,, but arnav enjoyed it a lot,,

Khushi held her hand back and arnav came out of his trance,,

Arnav: Sorry I,,

Khushi: Its ok sir,,

Then he signed the papers,, and gave that back to Khushi and asked,,

Arnav: Khushi how is ansh now?? Is he missing me???

Khushi: Sir my son is fine and he doesn't misses anyone ok,,

Arnav: But,,

Khushi: Ok sir as now my work is done,, I am leaving,,

Arnav: But,,

Khushi then stood up and walked to the door but she couldn't move,, before that her duppatta got stuck in the chair and she was about to fall,, arnav caught her hand,,, now she is in mid air,,

Khushi opened her eyes and saw arnav holding her hand,, first she became happy but again her past,, she came out of her trance and said,,

Khushi: Sir why you saved me??? I would have been managed,,

Arnav: Khushi I wont let you fall down,,

Khushi: But sir you know my husband,, sorry my ex-husband let me fall down when I needed him the most then,, I don't think you aren't more than that,,,

Arnav: Khushi,,

Arnav felt tears in his hand,, he composed himself and said,,

Arnav: Khushi I don't know about your husband but I am not like that,, and I wont let my own things fall ok,,

Saying this he held her close himself,, and hugged her,,

Khushi started to protest, and started to push arnav,,, but arnav was tightening his hold,,

Khushi failed in her attempt,, and that's when nk and Lavanya both without knocking came inside arnav's cabin,, and saw arnav and Khushi in such a close pause,, Khushi became embarrassed,, nk's face lit up with happiness,, Lavanya shocked and arnav smirked to himself his first victory,,

Khushi pushed arnav and came out form his hold and ran to her cabin and la followed her,,

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**edited**

Awesome
I love the last part
arnav n khushi huging 😳
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first page...wowww i'm patting my shoulder ...😆


found this before ur pm...

lovely


arnav...u go man...show ur romantic side to khushi...


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finally...its like waiting for ages...
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wow... awesome update... i loveddd it...
really superb update...😊
thanks 4 pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
*nw unres*
lvly update
enjyd a lot
kidoo iz so sweet mama angry papa
ops arshi moments were seen by nk la
thnx 4 pm
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likedvit dear
bt link is nt opening
try to give correct one
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ! Poor Arnav ! I will alwayz support Arnav coz I think he went through more punishment !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav has to try something big to win khushi back..looks lije it...
Nice update...
Last scene...hugging made my day

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