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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 28

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

wow what an awesome upd.

simply outstanding.👏

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Gopiii

@Gopiii

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

FD super love it. Paro the fearless fighter and Shankar coming to rescue her and gets stunned by her bravery. He gets to see her face only when she falls unconscious but is stunned by the beauty. Wow loved this update I can imagine Shankar carrying Paro in his arms. Shankar Parvati names kitne ache lagte hain. So sweet to the lips.

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Kalyani Nitin Bujone

@Kore-Soteira

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Nice one. Sorry friend I was busy in my college work & today got some free time.I think the situation will be worth watching. 3 cheers to Stree Shakti.

Keep up the good work.

But I just want to tell you that I will be again busy & won't be available till Monday. Hope you'll understand me.

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soumya vohra

@coolfizzy

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

RES...

wud update it tomorrow evening :)

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Foram

@foram.

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Wow nice update.
Lovd to knw that shankara got mesmerhsd by parvati's beauty and bravery.

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Originally posted by fairy dreams
Himalayan Way

Before the eastern sky started turning into red Parvati starts her journey..she can't waste a moment no..she has a great responsibility in her shoulder..and she has promised Ganga she will come back before the evening..so she started far more early..neither those Asuras who planned her abduction nor Shankar and Vishnu expected she will start that early..so they missed to follow her..
Parvati without any obstacle reached to her destination...she reached to the peak where the tree was..the path was very slippery and narrow

Parvati : Jaya , Vijaya tum dono yahin raho..hum pusp le ate hai

Jaya : Parvati vo shikhar baht hi durgam hai..tum akele aise

Vijaya : humein bhai lag rahe hai..

Parvati : dekho tum dono bhalibhati jante ho ke humare nikat koi aur vikalp nahin hai..isi liye samay nast na karke jo hum karne aye the usi pr dhyan dena uchit hoga..

Parvati tied her cloth tightly..then ties a rope in her waise..ad threw the hook which was tied on the other parts of the rope towards the peak..it got stalked in rocks..she then started climbing up the cliff skillfully..

Vijaya : humare rajkumari ki swargiya roop aur komal swavab ko dekh k koi sandeh bhi nhi kar payega..k vo her un karya mein saksham hai jo ek veer yodha karte hai..

Jaya : vo to ek hi sath ekadhik yodha k samna karne mein bhi saksham hai..yadi asura ye jan le to unhe haran karne k chinta bhi nahin karega..yadi unhe unke pran priya ho to..

Parvati reached to the tree..and gathered the flowers and put all in her bag which was tied on her back..and then she climbed down again skillfully..

Jaya and Vijaya were watching her admiringly ..

Parvati : aise kya dekh rahe ho??

Jaya : tum kaise itne kathin karya kar lete ho rajkumari

Parvati : apni ichashakti se..aur Kartikeya ki sahayata se...yudhkala itna kathin nhi hai ..tum bhi sikh sakte ho..

Jaya : hum to shikhna chahte hi the..kintu ye Vijaya didi manti hi nhi hai..

Vijaya : are yudhkala se garhasthya kala nari k liye adhik avashyak hai..

Parvati : acha ab tum dono chalo nhi to humein Parvatpur pohuchne mein der ho jayenge..

"itne bhi kya shighrata hai Sundari"

the girls found that they are surrounded by seven-eight people..whose ugly posture and cruel lustful face were saying that they are asurs..

Jaya and Vijaya got frightened..but Parvati didn't ..

Parvati : kya chahte ho tumlog..hamare marg rudh kyun kiya??

one Asur : humare marg ko aapke marg banane k liye sundari..aapk swargiya soundarya hamare asurlok mein hi shobha denge..to bina prashna kare chaliye humare sath..anyatha..

Parvati (fuming in anger ) : anyatha..

2nd asur : humein val ka prayog karna hoga..jo aapke liye peeradayak ho sakta hai..

Jaya : humein baht bhai lag rahe hai..ye asur narilolup hote hai...

Vijaya : ab hum kya karenge..

Parvati (turning to them) : nidar raho
(to Asur) : kintu humein apne sath le jane k liye..tumhe purv humein sparsh karna padega...kar paoge??

Asur took it as joke and got burst into laughter..

one Asur : ye bhi koi karya hai kya..hum to kabse tumhe sparsh karne k liye lalayit hai sundari..

he comes closer to Parvati and before one can blink Parvati kicked him with such a force that that Asur fell on ground covering at least 2 arms distance
in the sudden shock no asur could say anything..they never expected such a thing could happen..
Parvati without wasting another moment ..ran and rided on horse..Jaya and Vijaya also followed her
Asuras became conscious and followed them with horse..

Jaya : ye asur to humare paschadhavan kar rahe hai..

Vijaya : ye humse adhik dur nahin hai..hum kya kare Parvati??

Parvati gave the bag where she gathered the flowers to Jaya

Parvati : tum log ye pusp leke Parvatpur prasthan karo..hum in Asuro ko uchit shiksha deke ate hai..

Vijaya : ye kaise samvav hai..humne sada tumhare sath rehneka vachan diya..

Parvati : tark na karo..is samay Parvatpur k shishuyon k pran raksha adhik avashyak hai..aur chinta na karo..hum shighra hi laut ayenge..

Jaya : kintu Ganga didi aur maharani Mainavati se hum kya kahenge??

Parvati : hum usse purv hi pohuch jayenge..samay nasht na karo vo Asur nikat hai..jao tum log..

and she moved her horse to another direction..

the Asurs got confused..then two of them followed Jaya and Vijaya..rest Asuras followed Parvati
after running a while ..Parvati understood she won't be able to run away without facing the Asurs s Asur won't let her go in such ease..so she stopped the horse and came down..all the asurs came down too..

a Asur : kyun sundari..parjay sweekar kar liya???? yadi puv mein hi ye samajh leti ke humse banch k ja nahin paoge to vyarth itna parishram na karna padta..

Parvati : humne Parajay sweekar karke nhi tum sab ko parajit karne hetu aswa se utre hai..

she brought out her sword...

Asurs laugh...

acha to humse yudh karogi...kyun apne komal hast aur shareer ko peera de rahe ho sundari..

Parvati : peera kise de rahi hun vo tumhe isi kshan gyat ho jayega..

she kept the sword on the shoulder of a Asur..Asurs growled inanger..

"to thik hai hum tumhe jeetke apne sath le jayenge.."

all the asur surrounded her and attacked on her

Vishnu and Shankar couldn't locate the place where Parvati and her friends went..so they were going through the general root of Himalaya..that's why they got late..

Shankar (tensed) : kahin humne baht vilamb to nhi kar diya Vishnu..ab tak koi bhi dikhai nhi diya..humein duschinta ho raha hai k asur us kanya ko hani na pohuchaye

Vishnu : chinta humein bhi ho rahe hai..humne to us kanya ko thikse dekha tak nhi..na jane kaise humse itna bada bhul ho gaye..

and at the very moment they heard a scream of female voce..

"Raksha karo humara"..and a loud laughter...

they ran their horse towards the direction..and found two horses are coming towards them..one of which a girl was riding..and on another one there was a man who was surely an asur..the asur was trying to grab the girl on his horse..and the girl was trying to save herself and was screaming

Shankar : kadachit yehi vo kanya hai...

Vishnu (in mind) : ye hai voh parmasundari kanya?? kintu ismein to aise koi vises soundarya dikha nhi dete..

both the friends went in front of them

Shankar : asur chor de kanya ko..

Asur : tere kehne pad hum is ko chod denge aisa tune socha kaise murkh.. tu hai kaun??

Vishnu : tere mrityu

Asur : itna bada sahas!!

he attacked Vishnu with sword...Vishnu held his hand and wrenched it..so the asurs sword got into himself..and the Asur fell from horse and died in few moments..

Shankar (to the girl) : Devi is asur ne aapko hani to nhi pohuchaya..

Vishnu : aur devi aap kaun hai..yahan akele kya kar rahe hai??

The Girl : hum Jaya hai..hum aur hamare didi Vijaya hamari prabhukanya Uma k sath yahan aye the ek avashyak karya hetu..pathi madhya asuro ne hum pr akraman kar diya..Uma purv disha mein chali gayi aur Vijaya didi ko hamare aswa se ek asur uthake le gaye...

Vishnu (in mind) : Uma..naam se hi prateet hote hai k Kanya kitni sundar hogi..

Shankar : tumhare didi ko kahan le gaye vo asur??

Vishnu : Rudra (Shankar's pet name) hum inke didi k sandhan karte hai tu jake inke prabhukanya Uma k sahayata kar..

Shankar : thik hai

and he leaves towards east..

   after going a while he hears some familier sound of sword fighting..he goes forward..and gets amazed to see a girl alone is fighting with at least five asurs single handedly..Shankar's feet got sticked on the ground to see The girl's skill..though he couldn't see her face..as she was surrounded by the Asurs..Shankar couldn't even blink to see the none of those were able to touch the girl..and the girl was preventing each and every attack of them..and one by one Asura's started falling on her feet..bleeding profusely..Shankar felt there is no need to help her..she is lone capable to save herself..and then only she say someone very silently was coming towards the girl..he was coming from the girl's back..and the girl was busy in fighting with rest two..so she couldn't notice the new arrival..but Shankar could sense the danger..and ran to stop the man..but before he could reach...the man blew a pipe ..from which a small pin pierced on the girl's neck..Shankar understood the man used the tribal weapon..he stabbed the man..but it was too late..
   the pin which pierced Parvati had medicine applied on it which takes away sense for few hours..as soon as the pin pinched her neck..her head started turning round..and her eye sight got complete dark..she fell on ground senseless..
   the asuras laughed on their victory ...but before their laughter fade or before they could touch or pick senseless Parvati..like a storm Shankar jumped in the middle guarding her body..his furious red eyes and open sword made the asuras feel danger..but still they were not able to let the beauty go from their hand ..

Asura : ye kanya humare bandini hai..hum ise hamare sath le jayenge..humare marg chodo..

Shankar : durachari asur..tumhara itna sahas k Himalya k pavitra sthan pr nari ka apmaan kar rahe ho?? aj tum sab ka mrityu nischit hai..

Asura got furious and ran towards him..

it didn't take more than some moments that each and every Asura's lifeless body rolling on his feet...the white ice got red with their blood

Shankar (painfully) : Himalaya k pavitra bhoomi ko aj asuro k rakt se humein dushit karna pada..hum jitna Asuro se mitrata karna chahte hai utna hi unse yudh karne mein vivas ho jate hai..na jane iska ant kab hoga

then he turnedd to the girl and bent on his knees near her..the girl's face was covered with her long , silky , black hair..Shankar leaned a bit to her..and he got a scent from her hairs..he felt the scent he got earlier too ..

Shankar : kahin ye kanya vohi to nhi jinke kesh hamare muh ko sparsh kiya tha??

he gently removed the hairs from Parvati's face as he felt the hair will make obstacle to take breath..as he removed the hair Parvati's divine face got visible to him..he got stunned to see Parvati's soft and heavenly beautful face and her young age..

Shankar : ascharya..ye kanya to matra ek balika hai..is komal , sundar rup k paschad aise veerangana murti bhi reh sakti hai??..ati advut...

then he realized the girl need to be treated which is not possible..in open cold air..he picked Parvati in his arms..and again stared at her face..he was truly amazed to see this young girl's bravery..he started admiring her..

then Shankar leaves in search for some resting place carrying Parvati in his arms

Hmm...very good. Carry on.
😆Just kidding.Tumio na..rege jao khub tadatadi.
Jaya-Vijaya so bad...kauke dekhe appreciate kara uchit.Khub bhalo...kintu seta jodi sikhtei na parle tahole appreciation na karai uchit.Parvati shikheche mon diye...tai asadharan hoyeche Juddhovidya r parvatarohane...kintu tar pichone tar parishram ache. Sei karone o parvate uthte pedeche r tomader rakshao korte pereche...kintu bhai tomra okey rakhsa karte esechhile .Ganga ke ei bolei to or sange chhile..tomadero ki uchit chhilo na or sange parbatorohan kara ba juddhe or pashe darano. Kintu tomra tate byartho.Tomader na janata tomader dosh noi kintu ta tomader guno noi.Tomadero saksham hote hobe.Sikhte hobe.
Shankar Maharaj ki beauty Parloure kaj korechen.Ek jhalakei ki kore bujhlen ei chuler jhaptai uni kheyechen??Parvati ke laste uni chul dekhe chnlen.Parvati R Shankar...Mesmerizingly awesome.
And now Di you are really a magician. Again you have spell bounded me. Btw is this possible that Shankar will marry Parvati and someone else marry Sati.Cause in your previous updates you have written that Sati didn't want to share her life partner. so...
P.S. THERE IS NO NEED TO BE SAD MAHARAJ SHANKAR.AFTER 5000YEARS FROM YOUR TIME THE DIVINE LAND OF HIMALAYAS AGAIN COLOURS IN RED.THANKS TO THE MODERN DAY ASURAS...AL QUAIDA AND ITS FOLLOWER GROUPS.

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago

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sindhupv

@sindhupv

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Fairy love it. Shankar meeting Paro in a dramatic style. But unlike in films where hero goes to help heroine. Here the heroine is strong to defend herself which I liked a lot. Shankar and Paro getting lost in the woods would be so amazing. Paro not waking in his arms. Shankar wanting to carry Paro in his arms forever😉...Superb please update the next part soon.

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Kalyani Nitin Bujone

@Kore-Soteira

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Love it, truly.

The drama & story telling was very good.

Keep posting like this.

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

wow di super amazing part...i mean shany's n paro's meeting was awww...he was total gonner after seeing paro's bravery...n even beauty too...😳...n balika...well we know how this balika is going to affect you...🤪...😆...😉

😆poor vishnu thought that jaya is the princes but she is not that beautiful as he got the information she would be...but ji ye wo nahi thi humari paro toh apke bhi hosh uda degi...😉

n some one said it true that don't challenge stree shakti couz agar wo khud pe a gaye toh dhul chata dengi......n paro did the same, just in few minutes every asur were on ground...👍🏼...untill that stupid asur attacked her from behind...😡

well let's see what these asur r planing to do???????????????...n what will happen when paro will gain her sense's...😳

update soon...

luv u...😊

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sweetsandhya

@sweetsandhya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Well and truly amazing the way Shankar meets Parvati. He is amazed by both her bravery and beauty. Liked the update very much. The detail and everything is superb. 😃

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