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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

Great update!!!!!



Can we please have another chapter as a spin off when shaktimaan comes back to earth to see the grandchild?😆

ha ha😆😆😆😆😆 no sequels simi di😛😛😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

ha ha😆 no sequels simi di😉



awww why not?😭
Please?😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi frens.here am going with the os..Do give your comments.😛

ANGEL PRINCESS WEDS PRINCE OF MARS
TRING TRING..
The bell was continuously ringing.The caller on the other side was getting irritated.this is the limit.At the last bell the call was attended.
"what the hell are you doing?"
"why are you shouting ,am not deaf?"
"This is the limit.Do you even realis that today is Saturday and now the time is 8'o' clock and am your so called lover who was supposed to be having a date with you by 6 'o' clk."
"oh shit shit shit,am really really sorry.I just entirely collapsed it.I was busy .Am sorry sorry honey.Don't get tensed.please"
"What??You are busy?Then what am I doing just sitting simply and watering plants.Do you even realize this is the third time your missing our date and giving a stupid reason you are busy.we both know what would have held you up.Don't you think after being commited with you for 3 yrs I would not know you.You must have been busy in sleeping and give me a silly story about your dream"
"Argh Maan!!what are you thinking about yourself.Well I missed our 3 dates since I slept off.And ofcourse I said you what I dreamt about that doesnot mean my dream is silly.I was dreaming about "Sakthimaan.my favourite " this time you know what had happened you and me are falling down from a big building and my hero is saving both of us.nice na???"
"Geet am not a child who keeps licking the lolliup and believ the dream story.Admit it that u slept off and I'll leave you.Seeing your story saying skills I bet if you pen this down in IF you will be the fav author of many.And then coming to "YOUR HERO" am afraid I'll be convicted of doing "CHILD MARRIAGE".do you even realize your 24 grow up and watch some other shows."
"Do you think am cooking up stories?Do you think I wontedly miss our outings?Don't you know that I love you with all my heart?Do you think am a child"asked Geet in almost choking voice.
That's it Maan's anger meltened.He was scolding himself for being harsh on her."No baby nothing such way.see don't cry na sona.your my princess na.i'll not say those things again.if you want to sleep continue your sleep.Sweet heart can you come upto KM tomorrow to meet you savithri daadi.She will be surprised to meet you."He was going on blabbering to her to make her normal.
And there she goes.one time angry on him the next second getting all sweety and lovely"no maan am sorry na for being such a stupid on our date.ok ill tell you a best idea I'll meet you with in one hourin XYZ hotel.we will have a moon light dinner"
Maan was so happy that atlast she became normal."ok then ill come and pick u up."
"No maan I'll come up with dadu.He said he needs to meetup with his old friend near the hotel.he'll drop me"
"oki sweet heart bye"
With that they both started to get ready for the date.they both were seeing each other for the past 3 yrs.within the start of their relationship they confessed their feeling.But maan thought to propose her in a spl way and get engaged to her that was the reason for today's date.but geet spoiled it.Now again he got a chance to present her the ring he had brought for her.He was happy to give her a surprise.
Geet was living with her dadu Gangadhar Handa while maan with his dadi Savithri khurana.Maan owns KC.
"Dadu am meeting maan at xyz place.you said your gona meet your friend na drop me.today ill be there before him.lemme give him a surprise" said geet chirpily.
"ok angel"replied mr.handa.
AT KC:
"wo MK wat is that your looking at.seems like a ring" asked the head architect sasha.
"ya sasha atlast today am gonna put this engagement ring on my angel's delicate finger" replied maan lovingly.
Sasha was happy that it was her whom he was referring the next thing came as a lightning on her head.
"Am meeting Geet at xyz hotel sasha.you tc of the work here.see you tomorrow"
Sasha was fuming at the words of maan.this is not she was expecting.She is ready to do whatever that costs her to reach Maan.now she is going to kill geet to reach maan.
At xyz hotel:
"dadu ill come home with maan.you eat and take medicines.see you"
"take care angel see you" with that get ran to the terrace for the moon light dinner which was arranged by her for the date.
There she was surprised to see Sasha hed architect of KC standing.Sasha in a sweet tone said to geet "Hi geet"
"Hi sasha.your here.how come?anything important?" geet questioned with the same flawless tone.
"need to talk to you geet.shall we talk there"said sahsa pointing towards the wall of the terrace.
"say it sasha" said geet moving towards the wall.
That is the thing she had known after which she was flying in the air.geet could not understand what had happened.
MAAN pov:
He was in the lift to the terrace when he was thinking what had happened while coming towards the hotel.on the parking lot someone bumped on him and he fell down.when he looked who it was ,it was similar to sasha's figure.he thought he would have mistakedc someone..but in the terrace wht he saw was the thing his eyes couldn't believe.sasha pushing geet towards the ground.the next thinghe done was to follow geet.
Sasha never thought maan would reach so fast and he would jump with geet.
But alas what is it she seeing.Sakthimaan standing in front of her with maan and geet.
Geet couldnot believe her eyes.her hero has saved her.before sasha could realize what is happenng she has been burnt into ashes.
Geet and maan was startled.geet pinched maan and said"maan am saying truly.am trying to wake up from this and to come to the date but I cannot"
Soon she heard maan's word"me too geet.am also dreaming as such you."
Both of them heard a chuckle and turned back.it was dadi."enough gangadhar say them the truth."it was then they realized it was geet's dadu who was standing there.
"you yourself say them geetha"
"dadu my dadi name is savithri not geetha.and how you know her."
Dadu started speaking."Maan your not a human.your the Prince of Mars and Geet is the princess of Angels.When you two were born your elders decided to get you both married but the dark princess or the dark witch,tried to kill princess to get to you.so the elders decided and came to a conclusion to protect both of yuou by handing it to the "Son of Sun" that is me "Sakthimaan".this you both landed up with me.geetha in the name of Savithri took care of you and me took care of princess"
"We both named you after our love.me named you Maan after Sakthimaan and she was named Geet after by his love that his me Geetha.and the reason geet getting dreams about sakthimaan his due to the fact that she is living with him and the vibes of him has caused her to become more close with sakthimaan" said daadi.
"when you both fall in love Sasha,the dark witch came to know and came after geet.i was given power only to destroy her if she tries to kill geet.thats what had happened today.i was meeting geetha whenever you two would meet the same way I was meeting her today and came at the scene of crime." Explained Gangadhar oops Sakthimaan
Geet and maan couldnot believ this but after hearing the stories they remembered their world and their elders.
"Now what will happen" asked maan and geet in unison.
"Angel princess weds Prince of Mars"
Venue:"Mars"
You are invited by"Sakthimaan and Geetha"

Yelled both the elder in unison.Thus Prince of mars and angel princess lived happily thereafter..

Ignore grammar and spellin mistakes.😊criticisms are welcome😊

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Posted: 12 years ago


superb super!
amazing!
i loved the os palindrome wrote
the shaktimaan jig and the entire super hero story cracked me up!
so amusing and loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
another story on ...
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome os by RAMI

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello all... a very long time since I had written something... 've never either written or read an Os so ignore ignore if the content is either too short or long... this whole concept of picking a character n woving a maaneet story appears challenging so I thought will give it a try.

p.s. ignore spellings :/ am from tab so expect all kinds of errors...LOL...




OS - POWER OF MAAN' (shaktiMAAN's) LOVE - GEET!!!!!!



it was the umpteenth time she had read through the letter, each word etched to her hearts n the signature brought tears of joy** was it really maan.**... Her years of love had reciprocated but she couldn't fathom how the secretive n shy maan take such an initiative to express love on parchment. Tat was so unnatural for him, but when did he do natural stuff he was the supernatural hero.

Geet Handa was a reporter trainee at Orlance Media, whose sole purpose to join Orlance was to get daily glimpse of Maan Singh Khurana... Maan was a research scientist at Orlance but a full time state detective at New Hampshire.. His extraordinary skills had landed him into State job. His scientific training was worth a million dollars n every other year his milestones were the topic of trends at Google+ ;) His achievements made the numerous followers he got , but for last 5 years his purpose of life Had been diversified to his nutshell of the lab. Ppl failed to understand until one fine day he submitted his most worked upon paper - The Invention..



No one had any idea abt his invention except the defence branch of New Hampshire & it was on tat auspicious day did finally Geet Handa lay her hands at Orlance :) She from then on had tried many ways to approach him but Maan would either be involved in his labs or else field reporting for the unsolved mysteries of Hampshire...



It was one such late evening did she receive her first love letter signed by Maan, initially she had imagined it to be some prank but as days went by the letters n msgs became frequent . at office Geet had hardly any time for any confrontation but she made a point to reply to his every letter n drop at his lab before departure. initially the letters were once a month , then the frequency increased fortnightly n then biweekly... What she never understood was y a man of his nature resort to writing??? But wat she noticed over a period of year was tat she received such letters only during the days when Maan would reportedly be on field duty n not his labs.



Geet sat by her window n called him the umpteenth time only to hear the voice mail - Maan had never replied for the last 1 year... It all appeared gloomy to her now, at the initial days it all appeared like a typical love story n every time she kept consoling herself Maans busy schedule n all the reasons under the sky, but today somewhere in her hearts doubt took form. She was on holiday yet cycled to the office to find out abt a bomb explosion at a military base where Maan was under charge for investigation.


After strenous search She made her way to crime spot to see a baffled Maan stare at her n what baffled her was the physical work out by Maan tat was superlative - in front of her vision she could see 2 replicas of Maan, a wounded Maan who was struggling to stand up n a perfectly fine Maan who was apparently working on the remsintans of the explosion. She stood there flabbergasted but what took her by surprise is wen Maan came near her n hugged her tight. She closed her eyes in peace only to open back seeing him gone. But the wounded maan stood there still...



Confused Geet walked towards him n he spoke ghar chalthe hai geet. She silently nodded. It was when Maan took her back to the lab she confronted with replica Maan again... Maan holded her hands n spoke, Geet meet him he is shaktiMAAN *LOL LOL LOL LOL* my invention the help of whose I have gained doubled name n fame this past one year, my human robot who works 24 hrs n aids me at all cases, Geet stared, it was due to him tat I had to keep away from all, my work commitments never permitted me to accept u since our college days, probably I never had the courage to confess my love but THE POWER OF MY LOVE HAS SURPASSED ALL BOUNDARIES N MY EMOTIONS REACHED U VIA shaktiMAAN... I LOVE U GEET - WILL U LET ME BE A PART OF YOUR LIFE!!! geet never blinked her eyes n only then she understood what maan was trying to tell, his love was so powerful tat it few through his invention shaktiMAAN n touched her heart, Maan in this many years had never tried to contact her or express those unsaid feelings, but his invention had stirred or transformed those feelings to her heart :)


LOVE AT IT'S PUREST FORM WILL ALWAYS FIND A WAY THOSE UNSPOKEN WORDS WILL ONE DAY FIND SOLACE...




pls dnt throw slippers... took 45 min to type this from mob... I know it's stupid phir bhi would want to see ur opinions on this :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mali u here.. and did not even tel abt the os

anyways its awesom
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Posted: 12 years ago
dhobha I was going through my pms n found this link... so many days since I wrote anything so wrote this !!!! it's my first Os n I know it's horrible :/


y dnt u too write dhobha :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

@ainagurti nice story...




thank u mannu... I thought this was pathetic...,

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