New arshi FF- Chotey acche lagte hai. UPDATED

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NEW ARSHI FAN FICTION


CHOTEY ACCHE LAGTE HAIN

Helo frends. I had been writing stories other than arshi stories. But this time i have made an attempt to enter the arshi zone. Hope u like it.


PROLOGUE



Location : Office of Tirupati Telefilms in andheri east Mumbai
ESHIKA KHANNA the famous Tv and film producer sitting in her cabin

Eshika: Khushi wud u like to have some coffee??

Khushi: No thanks eshika mam

Eshika: Iam just too happy with you. You have done your guest apperance role too well in our show Kabhi to naina milao. The TRP's had been awesome . .I just want you to do a main lead in my next show... havent conceptualised the theme finally yet as iam busy with my movies on hold. But if u feel u need work right now... i can offer you a supporting role in any of my films too.

Khushi: Mam, thank you so so much. But iam not ready for films now..So i would wait for your serial . Today iam a star, I have my car , my flat . people come to take autograph .All this is because of you eshika mam.

Eshika: Well Khushi. The moment adi and karan recommended your audition footages i was sure. I had to cast you somewhere. Your beauty is unparallel. M jealous too ( she laughs). I am getting calls from the industry big wigs, asking me where did u spot that girl.
Ok but when u gave those power packed scenes i could understand, certainly you had some big grief..The same tale of a women hurted in love. Sorry to say that but i saw it in your eyes when you delivered the scenes.
Can i ask you, has that guy watched your show? has he contacted you , now that you are a TV star?

Khushi: Mam, i had initially told u many things. I havent contacted him. Last we parted our ways back around 13 months back. After that i told you how i had struggled day and night and how i met adi, karan ,who helped me to get to you and audition for your shows over the months,And finally i land here in Tirupati Telefilms.
i heard he has been in london, LA and france... over ayear ..and is dating some model called Lavanya kashyap.

Eshika: whoa khushi ...u seemed to keep a track of him.Ok ok just joking. I hope he gets to know that u a big Tv star now. I wont ask u who he is but I hate these sic men. I bet the moment he knows that you are a star, and even u have a male fan following.Just see how he changes his colour like chameleon. Sorry Khushi , iam speaking too much.But when it comes to women being subjected to pathetic behaviour by men , i dont know why i cant control my anger.

Khushi: Can i hug you once mam? with tearful eyes.

Eshika: Do u need to ask it. Come over here.

a bear hug between eshika and Khushi

Eshika: Khushi u truly helped me .Many people turned down the role because it was a cameo.But you had another offer from colors but still u took my show . You are certainly one of the most trustworthy people in my company now. Do tell me whenever u need me.
Khushi if u want you can tell me evrything of ur past, how it all started and all and share your grief.

Khushi: Mam, its your brand that made me choose over any other show. Plus i knew you being a women would represent me well. I will surely tell you about that guy. But i have moved ahead.
Iam star now.Iam also an important figure in public, I am a celebrity not any damn business moghul who for no reasons are famous. But i wud certainly like to meet him someday and see his reactions and then pass him off by ignoring him. Lol

Eeshika: Khushi dammit u are surely going to kill that man by making him repent that he missed a beauty a celebrity..as his life partner. LOL.

Khushi: But to be honest it doesnt matter now. Iam enjoying my sucess. I have brands, endorsements. Dancing in award shows..So many things

Eshika : You cant lie to me Khushi. I know u want to show that poor ass what u have achieved without him. I have just struck an idea. You tell me the instances what ever hurt he has given you..I will incoroporate that scenes in my new serial ..And if by chance he gets to see it..than wah wah kehna hi kya. He might feel uneasy to realise his story being told and get mad..Rofl
And you will play the role of Khushi ih that very serial enacting the scenes .

Khushi: OMG..are u serious mam?? If he sees his real life being played on reel, he will scream out his lungs..OMG he will just get paranoid. But will he watch the show or tune in when its telecasted.

Eshika: dont worry about that. Through someone his close buddy we will pass him the message that a Tv show is being aired that has some resemblance to his life. And to see you in the show he will automatically watch it. By the way whats 's his name? I have to look for a suitable person to play that role

Khushi: ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA, the business tycoon .

EEshika: What??? That cassanova?






Guys how was it.Hope i didnt bore that much. Hope u understood eeshika will name her serial as the title of my FF. as khushi tells her that he is used to be referred a chhotey in home.
I have just started writing some parts and have decided to copyright it sooner.
Anyways Do tell me shud i proceed ahead or let it be closed here only.

Based on the response i will update or wont proceed ahead.





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Chapter one - Pg 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey nice concept loved it. Update fast.
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very interesting...

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wow interesting
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awesome add me to pm list loved the concept can't wait to read more and welcome to iskknd forum i like this khushi can't wait for her to show the asr face to the world

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Wonderful concept dear ! Plz do continue !
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sorry frends iam late with updating and hanging u all ...as i had some problem at home..
Hope u all like the update below..Thankyou




Characters

Khushi Kumari Gupta- 19 yr old girl from lucknow. Biological Daughter of shashi Gupta, the halwai, owner of sweets and confectionary store. No mother. Brought up by father and Buaji(aunt) .

Presently got launched as a Tv serial actress after auditioning. First show superhit . she is a star now living in the city of dreams Mumbai. Coping with her past.

Arnav singh Raizada- 29 yr old handsome , hunk entrepreneur from south delhi. Loves his family . Can go to any heights for fulfilling their wishes. He is not arrogant or rough or rude in general terms but has huge EGO . Not at all dark but is funloving. But temperamental when it comes to family only. Good looking Women is his weakness. He doesn't hunt for women . Women hunt him and that inflates his ego .


Subhadra Raizada- grandmother of ASR . Rude,Egoistic. Doesn't value middle class.

Manorama Raizada- Subhadra's bahu from his second son Avinash raizada. Has a son akash ..who remains cut off from all as he hates his dadi.

Anjali Jha- Elder sister of Arnav. Simplistic .But too soft to believe anybody at instant.

Monica Khurana- Daughter of businessman Anil Khurana and his wife padmini Khurana

Kallu awasthi ' mami's brother and Monica's secretary

Shashi Gupta- Father of Khushi and halwai


EEshika Khanna- Sucessful Tv producer

Other characters will make entry as per the needs


Edited by SwagataKapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arshi Story...

CHOTEY ACCHE LAGTE HAIN


CHAPTER ONE


16 months back

Sheesh Mahal, Lucknow,U.P, India



Subhadra raizada: Comeone evry one ..please hurry up Chote helicopter will be landing soon directly from Mumbai. Finally my grandson has decided to tie the Knot this time with the Khurana's daughter. My Chhotey .. our raizada pride, Honour and hope one day I wil have a heir who will cary forward our legacy. Manorama please get the bed sheets, curtains of chotey's room changed. Hari prakash hurry up, and Anjali bitiya where is damaadji?

Manorama- Yejj sasumaa as u say ,,,meanwhile anjali bitiya's nani ji and ur phrend Devyani ji said she will reach late. Ijj it Ok..?

The raizadas basically lived in new delhi..But it was anjali's anniversary which they decided to celebrate in Sheesh mahal in a grand way and aslo due to anjali's pregnancy news which bought smile on all raizadas and a reason to celebrate.Meanwhile the biggest event was that subhadra had selected a girl for her grand son's and decided to atleast conduct the engagement in sheesh mahal along with anjali's celebration. So all flew down to Lucknow while arnav was coming on his way as he had a metting in Mumbai past 1 week. Arnav has always asked them to give him time to get married. He earlier said to subhadra and Anjali that; " let me enjoy my life ,I will marry the lady you all choose for me later. So chill ladies" . Meanwhile Anjali and subhadra knew by enjoying life what he meant . Anjali howver always scolded him about his lifestlyle and wished he gets a decent girl in his life. She even wished let Arnav marry one of those good looking models he dated so that he atleast settles down. But Arnav was arnav. While subhadra never objected on the attitude, ego that arnav was harbouring. She always thought he is a born prince . Courting various ladies is also a symbol of royal families. She never made him realize the values of simple living high thinking. Instead she spoiled him since his parents died in accident.

Arnav enters sheesh mahal'what the' what is all these dadi..these aarti and all. I am not coming from London after 5 years like shahrukh in devdas and Di atleast u understand. It has been just 1 month I had been away from u all in Mumbai.You all are behaving same as if I had returned after my MBA in harward .

Anjali: What chotey?cant we atleast express our emotions? We love u so much. And u giving this example of devdas? Am I day dreaming..? Oh I forgot u had a huge crush on aishwarya rai..oops sorry Aishwarya Rai bachchan.

Manorama : Bhaaat ? Arnav bitwa and aeswarya fan? I thought he is malika sherawat , veena malik or rakhi sawant fan.

Arnav: Stop it di. and manorama chichi.

Subhadra: Ok. Everyone stop teasing my gem, my sweet grandson'He is tired and u all are pulling his leg.

Arnav: Dadi u r the sweetest.. Im alreadt tired..Plus iam doing favour on u all by sacrificing my precious bachelorhood.and what I get teases..Huh'?

Anjali: Chotey u r saying as if u r sacrificing me ..u sister.

Arnav: Di'''Shut up.How could u say that. You are my life .There is nothing bigger than you. I can never sacrifice you for anything.I will sacrifice my life. Di..You are everything to me after my mother . promise me you wont say such things.

Anajali: Sorry Chotey, give me a hug'I promise I wont say such things.Mera Pyara Bhai'.But when bhabhi will come don't forget me chotey.

Arnav: Again di??? U wont change na?? U know u r my everything.. Love for wife is different and love for sister is different.It wont clash ever.

Anajali: Sorry sorry..

Arnav: where is my other girlfriend...devyani darling?

Subhadra: She always is upset with me ..we are so different u know..U only ask when she arrives, why she is late?? only she will answer u...Ok children'get ready for dinner, and arnav get fresh soon and come down.

Arnav: dadi??ok stop it..i dont like both my fav women annoyed with one another..


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After dinner at subhadra's room

Arnav: Dadi I don't know if Monica can fit well with you and all. I mean I agreed to marry her.We belong to same class, same lifestyle and standards..But as a daughter in law will she be able to make u all happy.

Subhadra: Chotey,,dont worry she will learn with time and after kids she wont have that time for her lifestyle. She will be busy with upbringing kids. But look at the positive side. She is the only daughter of the Khurana's and these collaboration of two families is good for your business too. U will get all the million properties stacked in UAE,

Arnav: Dadi..iam not marrying for money.Raizada industries is rich enough. We dont need Khuranas wealth.So please dadi don't put this angle and don't keep expectations. You know very well. We are double richer than them .Infact instead of us its they who benefit from Raizadas.

Subhadra: Ok chotey fine,, go and sleep now..the Khuranas are arriving soon in day after tomorrow and will halt in the nearby hotel. U already have talked with monica few times I guess over business meets.Hope it wont be uncomfortable for you.

Arnav: Dadi there is nothing called uncomfortable for ASR. Others get Uncomfortable near me.

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Next Day

Gupta Halwai stores,Lucknow

Khushi: Bauji'my vacations have started..and my 12th results wil be out after vacation. Please give me the sweets I will deliver them to the concerned place.Now this entire vacation I am free. bauji,I will help u after all iam halwai's daughter.You shud share responsibility to me bauji. By the way where is

Shashi : My gudiya'You concentrate on studies. I don't want you be be a failure like me in studies. Studying, and education is very important beta. I want to see you independent and earning yourself even fatr I wed you to a suitable groom. Ur Buaji have gone to mandir.

Khushi: What Bauji?I wont marry. I will stay with you always

Shashi: Chup paagal'.

Khushi,Do one thing please deliver these sweets at Sheesh Mahal. Its their daughters anniversary day in Coming week. While there are many guests and relatives staying so they have ordered to delver sweets for puja, and general eating for three days..So today is one day they hv ordered 'and the next times I will tell you or if iam free I will go and deliver myself

Khushi : Bauji what event it is?

Shashi: Khushi I heard the raizadas and some Khuranas from delhi arrived and are having a grand party in sheesh mahal in coming days.

Khushi: Ok bauji, I will deliver sweets and if I get chance I will show them buaji's chikankari sarees too for sale.

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Sheesh Mahal

Arnav: Kya jijaji, its your anniversary and you are arriving now ?

Shyam : salesaaab,,hehhhehe'Humara anniversary to bahana hai' the real motive is you and your engagement. So are you serious or still in the flings

Arnav: What the jijaji,,I have still time for my bacherlood to expire..Before that let me explore some chicks from lucknow.Please jiju,,u r like my friend,,,You know me na,, after marriage it will be me and that nautanki queen monica..Let me enjoy a little before na jeej.

Shyam: Badmaash..Arnav u hv become more naughty. Completely not .Earlier it was oK..but not now..and what is this ..you are calling your wud be fiance as nautanki? Very bad haa!!!

If Anjali comes to know about your naughty plans she will be seriously hurted. So beware..arnav

Arnav: Ok jeej


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Precap: Arnav surfing po*n images in his laptop..but someone was observing him . A young girl most probably 😉

Edited by SwagataKapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey thnxx fr d pm, loved the update. Ohh so arnav is nt a ruthless guy in it. Sounds intersting. Loved it. Keep updatig.
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wow quite intriguing story

and very different tooo..

i the dadi looks hitler here...

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