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keshiya

@keshiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Its awesome.

This was what I wanted the canteen scene to be. The emotions are very well portrayed and flawlessly written. Have always loved your work.

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Ammu

@ItsMe_Ammu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Beautiful.. This is how I really wanted that scene to be..

Well done..👏👏👏

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Yoshita0411

@Yoshita0411

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

WOAH!
I simply have no words for it.

I seriously don't.

Just one thing - I'd love to read more from you.

-Yoshita

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Shaz

@..DamonCrazy..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Loved it o to the core.There was so much meaning in it.THIS is how I wanted the scene to be.The ending was AMAZING.Very symbolic.

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

You always know how to pacify the audience don't you? 😆

Brilliantly written, as usual. Loved it to bits! Absolutely described the inner turmoil and the other sides to the characters.

Kudos! 😳

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...Diya...

@...Diya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

This is amazing..you wrote this scene exactly how I wanted it to play out..You should have been the writer of this show,,watching it would have been pure bliss then
Do write more stories 😊

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..Amina..

@..Amina..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Omg this was indeed beautiful! Exactly how i wanted the scene to be shown. Loved it so much <3

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_FATIMA_

@_FATIMA_

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Lovely os
Wish the real scene was carried out this way but oh we'll.
Do continue because you write really well and are awesome with descriptions.

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snowflake.

@snowflake.

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Another master piece, great job dear :)

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