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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

Two Hearts

One concealed within numerous layers of mystery

While the other hidden beneath a farce

They meet

And burrowed feelings are ignited

Meeting under treacherous circumstances

Sparks rise

Leading to

Lethal Attractions

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 13 years ago

Author's Note

This is the first time I am attempting a total different genre. Hope u guys would like it.
The chapter's size would be mostly concise owing to the nature of the story. So please do adjust with it. I am highly grateful to Aditi di. Without her I don't think I would have been able to write this ff.
I express my gratitude to Anky di, Amy di, Yogi di and Shaffs. Thank u so much.

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 13 years ago

Index

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sorry It has been shifted to new location.

New link

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shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

res

finally ab unress kr ri hu mai haha

Amazing vaishu!!!

teko bola tha na maine ki mjhe isko padh kr PERFECT wali feeling ati h yaar...just WOW

da way u showed kria hayeee SEXY MUDERER

mai to rey n kria ke mast wale scene imagine kr ri hu hahahaha abhi

i love da way u write starting of dis n den kria ka description just AWSOME

jaldi se na nxt part post kr de n den rey n kria ko ek saath la de hahaha

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

res

unres

ps: laila ki res tune ki???

okay now coming to the update...i really loved the concept...

u see kisine likha nahi aaj tak KR pe iss theme pe..

and the start was amazing

i loved the way u described her...

but i dnt know y i was expecting more...

may be its because of my tired mind and body but i m expecting more from u...

i mean...ye tumhari wo THE UPDATE walon mei nahi hai..

but...i would say bang on start...

waiting for more...

and i really pray ki wo kill him

wala him rey ho...

already loving the story re...

but yeah expecting more..

meri koi galati nahi isme ur mistake to raise my hopes

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Misha

@Born2Dance

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Posted: 13 years ago

res

pakka unres karungi !

***************************************************

see i stand by my words !

unresing !

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O M G !

diii !!!

ye kya tha !

HAILA !

di mein aapki fan ho gai !

u no m not at all satisfied with this part !

itne vadiye part ko ITNI jaldi end vi kar diya ?

**pout**

i hate you 4 dis !

d start waali discription n den d attack waala part with her disappearance !

hayee !

just perfect !

2 d dot waala !

n den end mein uska attitude !

good going !

i so so so wish woh kill HIM rey ho !

hayee !

tab to "sone pe suhaga" !

av meko jaldi next part cahiye knowing ki u _ _ _ _ _ _ _. _ _ _ _ it !

*winks*

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

laila mujhse baat nahi kar rahi hai 😭

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Purple

@Ocean.eyes

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Posted: 13 years ago

R
unres

thankgod finally you posted...

...

This something different...woahhh

never read such story on KR...

So that makes ur story unique from others...
...

The start was great...loved the way you explained everything...

I mean it was bang on...nt less nt more...nt stretcy nt boring...just perfect

start to acha hai aage dekhte hai
wats in store for us

just a guess - "kill him" is that Rey?

waiting for the next part

jaldi post kario...

...
Like u said i stayed away frm the 1st pg :p...

Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 13 years ago