KR FF: Coveted Affairs (Updated Ch4 Pg 28)

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.....pujan.....

@.....pujan.....

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

quite unique n interesting story...

eagerly waiting for next update...

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Naya FF...aur woh bhi itna thrilling? :D
Kria...a killer? :o
looking forward to read more :-)

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Pinkpearly

@Pinkpearly

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

different concept
Luv it
D way u describe kriya was awsum
Thanx for d pm

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awesome start 😊

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

it was awesome loved it

it was great

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Woww. . . .
Vaishu di. . . . . .
Kya concpt hai. . . .
Superb. . . . . . . . . . . .
Sach mai maine aisi type story i mean the lead girl is a contract killer bt never-ever imagind it on kriyaansh. . . . . .lovd it di. . . . . . .
Kriya-the contract killer,awsome. . .kya describe kiya hai usse aapne di. . . .woww. . . .
Its realy realy realy realy realy interesting. . .
Looking 4ward to it. . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna,
and thanks 4 d pm. . .
And haan di,
i realy realy lovd the tittle of this ff. . . .
"LETHAL ATTRACTIONS"

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Sanj

@-Sanj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awesome Concept...Loved it...Waiting for the updates...

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Aditi

@NxtRockstar..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Res

Dhinka chika dhinka chika

Yay yay yay!!

Finally this is published...Hayeee!!🥳

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Un-reserving

Congrats for publishing this wonderful FF! There's a lot to look forward to!

First of all, I am flying somewhere near clouds after seeing my name on first page.😃 I am grinning😃 like an idiot because this amazing FF has my name on first page..😃 Thanks Vaishu!! But I would say "all the praise for this work is wholly to you". You gave me and many an awesome story...Love ya🤗

Now coming to update...I have already said so much to you about it but I still have bucket full of things.😛

I am in love with character conceptualization.😳 You nailed it while shaping Kria-The sniper. She is coming as crystal clear described character. You know finesse of story is coming across well!

Now I totally loved her entry scene. She was well-prepared and precise about her target. She is strong headed about her profession. she follows set of rules. Which is quite impressive for me!😳 She knew that she is the best. That smug expression in writing is really cool. 😎

The way she replied to flirt client, was amazing! She is sharp. blunt, mysterious, masked and attractive. Now this set of qualities are lethal. ☺️

That "kill him" has an impact on readers..hehehe..I read all the comments...😉

Amazing concept!👍🏼

Amazing write up!👍🏼

Amazing writer!🤗

Amazingly awesome piece of art!❤️

Update soon!😳

Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 12 years ago