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Posted: 12 years ago

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itss kk but dont make it so long we are waiting here

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waitng chutkijaan :) update whn u get time

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Bacchi pehle padhai,

Phir Nangu aur Phoolan Devi ki ladhai.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti
Same to u dear. Thanx for ur lovely response.
And aoww, u frm south, am reallyy verry sorry for the inconvience but will try my best to to imrovise it so that u may too enjoy it to the fullest 😃

awww ur so sweeyt!!! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti
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Heyaa
guyzzz, I know sabb Update ka wait kar rahe honge, and am reallyyy showwiiee for delaying it too much 😭, but am stuck myself, after loonngg 15 days vaccations school resumed on 2nd of Jan with a flood of studies, assignments and FA's (unit tests), And also being in noon shift, whole day is spent in school till evening... 🤢

I tried writing bit by bit but till now have'nt succeeded in completing it.
And also many other problems further didnt allow me to get time.
But since the collector here felt cold now and declared a holiday, (though not for us) my timing from tomorrow will be 9-1 instead 1-5 so hope to complete the part ASAP.

Update will be ready by 2-3 days hopefully😃

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even i undergo ur stress bt n my case its wd my collge..so il undrstand u.don wry dr..bt am eagrly waitin fr d nxt update..make t quick asap 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: deepali1022
waiting dear...

m bhi

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anyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Helloosss, me back, and this time with an UPDATE for all.
Will be updating within an hour. Till then keep waiting 😉
Umm, jootey toh ni padenge na for this delay
Anywayss, UPDATING

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anyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Rami92

even i undergo ur stress bt n my case its wd my collge..so il undrstand u.don wry dr..bt am eagrly waitin fr d nxt update..make t quick asap 😉

Hmm college mei toh aur zyada tiring hoga
waise me updating now 😃

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anyaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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(credit for this superbb banner goes to Sobia di 🤗)

I know am just too late this time with the update, umm more than a week since last one, but what to do guyss am too stuck myself badly from all sides. I guess from now the update would be once in a week only I guess, coz I dont like leaving all waiting here. So in advance me saying the updates might be late from now.

Also not even whether would be able to reply you all like before or not So can't say anything.

Now Enjoyy the Update 😃

Rami di- Sholly couldnt do anything for ur conience this time 😭 Was too lazy to put translation

Plss bear it.

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>>>Happy Lohri to all friendzz<<<

PART-8

Suddenly Geet's eyes caught the sight of a girly pink barbie and she literally jumped seeing it and pulled it out from toys. Whereas Maan's eyes widened in horror seeing her holding the barbie and he knew he is in trouble now as Geet's eyes twitched in confusion thinking how can Maan have a barbie in his toy collection, and looked at him demanding an answer.

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Geet looked at him with a raised eyebrow and then asked "Yeh appki hai?? app isse khelte ho?"

Maan was left highly embarressed with the question, he knew some or
the other day he had to face such situation as boyss are'nt supposed to play withthe barbies, but he was fascinated by this one toy since long, and there's nothing wrong if a boy loves barbies, is it? But facing the actual situation is something total different, and now he regretted the moment he bought it from the mall the other
day with daadi.

Feeling shortage of words he stammered trying to form an excuse
and her extra curious face almost touching his made him more nervous and he blurted "Wo... wo. Fluffy ki hai" and closed his eyes tight, whereas Geet's eyes widened at the revealation.

But then after few seconds as Maan doubtedly looked her way on finding unexpected silence from Geet's side he found her cutely muttering something with ownself while making several faces, and he realized that she was muttering something for Fluffy... "Ajj kal ke kuttey bhi" she said dramatically shooking her head and before Maan could again start his Fluffy love, Geet was back toh her playful mode "Chaddoo, hume kyaa... Waise appko pata hai, hume doll se khelna bohooottt pasand hai, humare pass bhi ek gudiya hai, maa ne bnayi thi humare liye, aur...aur pata hai, humari maa na humare guddey gudiya ki shaadi bhi karati hai, badaa mazaa ata hai" "kyaa? shaadi..."
"Hmm, apko nahi pata? aise do dolls ki shaadi karate hai, ek dulha doll hota hai and ek dulhan doll, phil dono ki shaadi karte hai" saying so she started teaching him their new play, where Maan's babrbie was made the bride and his one bat-man doll was made the groom, and thus started their play, with Geet acting as Bat-man's mom and Maan as his barbie's dad... It was soo childish act, but a pure fun for the two individuals, Geet was all involved in the act and forced Maan too. For Maan it was a new experience all together, having Geet's company was'nt bad at all, infact he was liking it a lot.

Finally after the unique wedding which took place according to two's tuta futa knowledge, the act was over, leaving them all active and smiling. Maan was arrangning the toys whereas Geet too helping him sometimes and looking around the room the othertimes.

Daadi entered the room instructing something to Rano when her eyes fell on the state of the room and her eyes widened and she said to Maan "Maan yeh sab kya hai? Kya haal bana diya appne iss room ka?" Geet said to daadi "Wo daadi, maan hume apne khilaune(toys) dikha rahe the, toh issiliye bed pe gandaa ho gaya"

"Koi baat nahi maaji, hum saaf kar denge" Rano said to Daadi assuringly. "Thik hai Rano, aur ha Maan hum yeh kehne aye the k apna homework karna mat bhul jana khelne ke chakkar mei. Wo maths ke sums kiye appne jo apki teacher ne schul mei diye they?" Daadi asked with a raised brows and Maan bit his tongue thinking mei toh homework bhul hi gaya... and replied nervousely "Wo daadi, mei abhi karta hu, sorry bhul gayaa" he answered sincerely. Daadi just smiled sweetly and said "Arre, koi baat nahi bete, abhi kar lijiye... aur ha, shaam tak complete ho hi jaane chahiye saare sums, Samjhe app?" she ended with fake seriouseness at which Maan nodded cutely "ji daadi, pakka abhi karta hu" .

He immediately went to bring his books from bag, which was kept in lower shelf of cupboard and headed towards his small study table while Daadi left the room and Rano became busy clearing the room. Geet too followed Maan and after looking around dragged a chair for herself too with difficulty and arranging it beside maan, she sat there peeping at Maan's books and looking at him curiousely while he did the sums with concentration. After a while her curiosity grew looking at Maan soo deeply involved in thinking and then scribling some numbers in his notebook. Her patience broke and she finally asked him "Yeh app kya karr rahe ho?"

Her question interrupted Maan's thoughts as he looked towards her and asked "Kya kya karr raha hu?" "Yeh, aise kitaab (book) me kya karr rahe ho?" "Yeh? yeh toh me apna homework kar raha hu, maths ka bohot saara diya tha teacher ne" "Homework kya hota hai?" Geet asked again due to curiosity as the term homework was unknown to her Homework? homework wo hota hai jo teacher school me hume deti hai, ghar pe karne ke liye" "School??????" she asked cutely with her questioning eyes "Hmm School, kyu tum school nahi jaati?" Maan asked with a frown "Nahi" she replied gloomily, "Parr aisa kaise ho sakta hai, school toh sab jate hai..." "Sab jaate hai?" "Hmm" he nodded seriousely this time "Parr mei toh nahi jaati" now she was almost on verge of crying, if all goes to school then why not she? She too wanted to go to school like Maan...

"Abhi nahi jaati toh kya huya? Hum maa se bolenge na ke tumhe bhi school bheje wo, phir hum na saath mei school jayenge, thik hai??" he said cutely trying to cheer her up on seeing her getting too upset "Hum bhi school jayenge?" "Hmm, bilkul jaogi, abhi chalo hum maa se baat karte hai ke Geet ko bhi school bheje mere saath" saying he closed his books while Geet sniffed her nose rubbing off those spilled tears with back of her palm clumsily "Hum abhi maa sey baat karte hai" saying so she dashed out while Maan too followed her.

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"Maaa... maa" she called out for her maa coming the hall. Rano came out of the kitchen wiping her hands with the pallu "Kya huya Geet, chilla kyu rahi hai app?" Daadi who was sitting there on sofa too turned towards Geet "maa, hume bhi Maan k saath school jana hai, unhone kaha k sabb school jate hai, toh hume bhi school jana hai maa, hum kyu school nahi jaatey?" Her sudden demand was a shock for Rano as she stood there rooted for few seconds.

Geet was alwayzz a total understanding baby as she never demanded something to Rano which was out of her reach. Whatever possible happiness Rano could provide with the llittle money she owned, she provided her baby without even her asking for it. "Geet, bacche yeh achanak aise app..." "Uff maa, yeh sabb chaddo hume batao na k hum bhi school jayenge na? Maan k tarah?" "H.aa Geet, zaroor jayenge lekin abhi nahi, thode din ke baad. Abhi humari pari bohot choti hai na, maa k bina kaise rahengi wo school mei?" Rano tried consoling Geet with her baseless reason but Geet was adamant

"Nahi, Maan bhi toh jatey hai na, toh hum kyu ni jaa sakte? Hume bhi school jana hai matlabb jana hai" She said determined this time, Rano was losing her patience slowly, her inner turmoil was eating her up and thus it all came out with harshness towards Geet. "Geet yeh kya zidd laga rakhi hai appne? humne appsey kaha na k app nahi jaa sakte school, ek baar mei samajh nahi ata kya appko?"

Her pitch was enough to scare even Daadi, whereas Geet's eyes filled up immediately hearing her maa shout at her for no fault of hers. Even her wails did'nt affect or calm Rano's inner situation. So she once again warned her "Geet, abb rona band kijiye app" Daadi had to inerwine in mid looking at Geet's condition "Ssshh, Geet bacche chup ho jayiye, koi kuch nahi bolega humari Pari ko abb. Samjhii app Rano?" Daadi faked sternness infront of Geet hugging her. "Maan, app Geet ko andarr le jayiye hum abhi innki Maa ki khabar lete hai" saying soo Daadi tried shooing the kids so that she can talk to Rano in private.

Before going with Maan Geet said to Daadi still sniffing "Zyaada ni daatna maa ko, nahi toh woh royengi" saying so she dissapeared with Maan. A smile touched both elders lips listening to their little pari still caring for her Maa innocently.

Here Daadi asked Rano about why she didnt send Geet to a school, to which Rano opened up her bruised heart and told her about how tough their life had been with lots of hardships, and how even providing enough food to her baby was a challenge for Rano, many times she had to compromise her own meal to feed Geet. Coping up with each other these days somehow they are here, but this one requirement was still pending to be filled, to which Daadi offered to afford all the expenses for Geet's studies. After all she too was just like Maan to her. Rano was too much greatfull for this effort by Daadi. After lots of convincing from Daadi Rano agreed to it, but only on one condition that whatever she'll be able to repay for it, she will once collected enough money. Now only breaking this news to both the babies was left, for which Rano and Daadi left to Maan's room.

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Maneet going to school 😳 BUT usse pehle Geet taking basic lessons from... 😉

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phew* finally updated part 8... tried making it as good and readable as possible. Pweasee tell me kaisaa hai

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Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago

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