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Posted: 12 years ago

IMPORTANT please read the text in blue before reading the story.

The story Madhu & RK [from Set Fire to the Rain] is set in the future where Madhu has become a lawyer and RK is well settled into his family business. The plot concerning the Exotic couple is a continuation from where we last left of.


All the merry readers who, in the spirit of skepticism, pointed out the loop holes in my idea of making Madhu the attorney (seeing as she is only a student in her respective SS), I would advise you to keep good faith in me. I assure you I stand for anything but implausible plot. At this moment, I would request you to consider the essential untimely marriage twist exempt of my usual rules of plot construction. Thus, in the name of creativity and healthy critique thereof, I invite you all to join me in my new endeavour: a coming together of Kundras from alternate dimensions.

The following chapter [and SS: Exotic as a whole] can be read as a stand alone or in conjunction with Set Fire to the Rain.


"Watch where you are going. Aankhen hain ya button", a tall man in shades lashed out on the lady he had just hit.


"I apologize. Now, please help me gather my belongings from the floor".


"Do you know who I am? Bittuji, take care of this please. I have pressing issues at hand".


"Sir, I am only asking for a courteous response to a minor social situation. I wouldn't want your time of the day otherwise".


"I am sure you just wanted in on my personal life. Can anyone leave me and my wife alone?"


"I am sorry about whatever is going on. However, I have the least bit of interest. If you would kindly move over, I need to pick up the documents you ever so abruptly dropped".


"Dekho, mere dimaag ka dahi mat banao. I am tense as is. Bittuji did you find the attorney we were looking for?"


His assistant nodded a hesitant no. R.K. flared up in the true movie star fashion.

"Here, I am a lawyer. Give this card to the poor soul who is fighting the case against your boss. I will make sure he gets his day in court", she handed her business card to the chubby P.A.


"Chief, yeh vakeel kaisee rahegi?"


"Dood peeti bacchi nahi chahiye meri Madhu ko bachane ke liye", RK shrugged her off as a distraction and continued panicking.

"How do you know my name?"

"I don't"

"You said it, Madhu"

"That is my wife's name".

"Also my name".


"Maybe this is some indication from the Gods. Chief, why don't we ask her for representation", Bittuji offered his two cents.


"Mazel tough. Let us find a reputable firm".

"I am in no position to say. However, if you are heading for an unconventional trial, I have contacts. Of course, I wouldn't want to represent an arrogant prick such as yourself but, sounds like something concerning family. Consider me a well wisher".


"I'll pass. Bittuji, get this woman out of my sight".

"Singhania & Associates, my law firm. I am a Kundra. Good day sir".

"What did you just say?" He stopped in his tracks.


"Surely my firm isn't that impressive so as to stun you and I am only a first year".

"What did you say your name was?"

"Madhubala Kundra".


RK pressed his temples with his two fingers to get his mind to stop playing tricks on him. A girl barely of legal age shared the same name and faintly resembled the love of his life.

"You are hired".

"Excuse me. Hired for what? When I gave you my card I was looking to represent the other side. I am not one to keep the bad guys out on the streets. I prosecute".


"I don't care. My wife, Madhubala Kundra, same name, better looking, is in jail. I need to get her out".


"What's the charge?"

"Murder in the first degree".

"Why would I defend this woman when I have clearly stated my conflict of morals in representing convicts".

"She shot a serial killer. He deserved to die".

"Let's grab a coffee. She will be out of jail by the end of the working day".

"I like you".

"You are old".

"It was her father".

"Why didn't she kill him sooner? By the way, you should know I am not a Harvard graduate".


"National Law, Mumbai. I had Bittuji look you up".

"You knew?"

"I carry a smartphone with me at all times".


"I had considered that bleak possibility. What I had not seen coming was, you asking you assistant to surf the web for you".


Bittuji feared a heart attack as he panted to catch up with the duo rushing to the nearest Starbucks.


"I also watch his movies for him young lady", an out of breath assistant trailed behind.

Edited by iiDona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Everyone will be impressed to see Lawyer Madhu taking up Madhubala's Case. The interaction between Lawyer Madhu and Superstar RK is amazing.
I am very happy with your dealing of my favourite Lawyer Madhu. The collaboration of your two FF's will be Simply Awesome.
Thank you Jasleen for this Amazing work.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm I do really like the conversation style between RK The Superstar and Madhu the lawyer👏. Its going to be interesting to see how this combination of both the stories will fall into place. I was thinking about the fact that they are the same characters in different perspectives. I like how it is going so far. hahaha I'm waiting for the day where young RK and Madhu, and the Superstar RK and Madhu will be in the same room!😆 that will be epic. To be honest its too early for me to say if I love this or not, so I will be waiting for the next update to see where this is heading! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
U r such an exeptional wen comes to writin..simply superb collaberation of ur two ff 'll b owesome..further part would b worth watchn i mean worth readin..continue soon.. Happy weeknd
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Posted: 12 years ago
collab is amezing dear...but 1 thing am nt getting means madhu and her businessman husband(RK) [from set on the...]are living together or they are seperated?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

hmmm I do really like the conversation style between RK The Superstar and Madhu the lawyer👏. Its going to be interesting to see how this combination of both the stories will fall into place. I was thinking about the fact that they are the same characters in different perspectives. I like how it is going so far. hahaha I'm waiting for the day where young RK and Madhu, and the Superstar RK and Madhu will be in the same room!😆 that will be epic. To be honest its too early for me to say if I love this or not, so I will be waiting for the next update to see where this is heading! 😊


That is perfectly acceptable. I do not assume you will fall in love with the plot at first read. I hope your opinion changes. Even if it doesn't, I welcome you express your views. I am thrilled you like it so far.

Thanks❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Clara20

collab is amezing dear...but 1 thing am nt getting means madhu and her businessman husband(RK) [from set on the...]are living together or they are seperated?


😆😆 I wouldn't dare accusing of a cunning attempt at getting the plot of me😆😆

Only time will tell.
Thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Desire6

U r such an exeptional wen comes to writin..simply superb collaberation of ur two ff 'll b owesome..further part would b worth watchn i mean worth readin..continue soon.. Happy weeknd


Thank you.
You as well😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
i lovw the idea, but u gonna ruin set fire to the rain plot. how she deal with malik, her disease, and u took in futuure
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iiDona


That is perfectly acceptable. I do not assume you will fall in love with the plot at first read. I hope your opinion changes. Even if it doesn't, I welcome you express your views. I am thrilled you like it so far.

Thanks❤️


Thanks! I am just waiting to see how this all falls into place. Actually I am really excited, although the four share same names, they are extremely different from each other obviously. So I guess what I mean is I am excited to the difference between the two couples, two perspectives. 👏I can't wait for the story to progress! 😃Once I get a peek into the contrast, I'll know how I feel, (hopefully soon😉)

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