Taarey SS-kassam ki kassam

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys...first of all m sorry as was lil busy n could not reply to ur pms n updates but i ll comment n all ur updates as soon as i post my ff-one touch other wise some one will kill me🤢 pls marna mat for not replying😭so this is a small apology from my side in the form of a ss for not commenting n replying🥱 ..well this is gona be 3-4 parts ss..sorry i could not go in details as i already have two ff s of my hanging n one is one its way ... so thoda sa adjust kar lo...

Taarey ss-kassam ki kaasam

Part 1

Its celebration time in st Louis they have three reasons to celebrate 1. D3 boys win the basket ball match..2.they got RH back n dance ban is lifted 3.sharon is back…so its party time for D3 gang..all are happy except rey n taani..as they have MU btw them..taani feels rey doenot love her n tries to stay away from him so he is not hurt by her…and rey is hurt when taani says he used her to ease his tension..he failed to notice the pain n love in her eyes when she was telling him this!!now that taani is avoiding him he feels she hates him….

Rey is effected badly when taani doesnot come to see BB match n to add insult to his injuries shivam is also back.. the gang is neutral with sihvam..but still they don't trust him..but they are ready to give him chance.. shivam is trying to woo taani..and trying to gain her trust back..this pisses rey off …he starts behaving more rudely with taani ..he is blinded by his ego so much that he doesnot realize that to satisfy his ego he is hurting taani beyond she could handle ..one day rey was supposed to assist taani in making report for BB match both were working alone ..rey is busy with some work..

Taani(herself n sad):nahi mai rey se kuch nahi kahungi..bas apna kaam karungi..agar kuch bhi kaha to fir se rudely behave karenge n kuch bol denge ..fir se ladai..meri kismet mai yahi likha hai Krishna ji ne..ki jisse mai pyaar karti hu wo meri insult kare..agar ismai unki khushi hai to yehi sahi.. tears fall from her eyes she wipes them n gets back to work..

Rey looks at taani is thinking meri zindagi mai pyaar likha hi nahi hai!!taani bhi mujhse nafrat karti hai n avoid bhi kar rhi hai..kyun nahi akregi uska ex boy friend jo wapas agya..ab to wo muhje hate n avoid karegi hi na..he is angry..he wants to ooze out his anger on her for hurting him..

Rey(rudely):taani mujhe wo BB ka arrangements ki file do..

Taani without looking at him hands him him file and gets back to work without uttering a word..

Rey(rudely):aj miss jhasi ki raani ko kya hua?aj kuch nahi bolegi??

Taani doesnot even look at him she is doing her work..her head is bend..she is hurt..but pretends that she is not effected by him .she was fed up pretending not to be effected by his rude remarks n comments..where in she was effected by his behavior..every rude remark from his mouth broke her heart into pieces.no matter how much she tries she cannot heal her wounds..whenever she tries his words ,behavior deepens her wounds..she hides her tears n fake a smile b4 others but how long can she hide behind a mask?it had already started to kill her from inside ..she cries in night so that ppl esp swayam cannot see her cry..how much more she has to suffer??she was fed up ,fed up with reys behavior,her scattered dreams,her broken heart, her life!!she wanted to end everything ,she wanted to end the pain at once but she never had guts to do it..neither could change it..so she accepted her fate ..

Rey(furious):kyun ab miss GS mere ko jawab dena bhi zaruri nahi samhjti??

Taani is now unable to control n starts crying still trying to hide her tears from rey..

Rey(yelling):han han jawab bhi kyun degi!!avoid jo karna hai..kyun ki miss GS ka EX jo wapas aya hai…to mujhse kya matlab..hai na GS?? Still taani does not answer him or lifts her head…rey s anger crosses all his limits n beds down holds her arms roughly n tightly .and pulls her to make her stand and face him as though she is a rag doll …he pulls her so roughly that his finger prints are on her arms..still she is bending her head face is covered by her hair..

Rey(rudely shaking her);kyun taani muh kyun chupa rhi ho? Sharam arha hai ?oh wait wait nahi daar lag rha hai ki kahi tumhre ex ne mere saat dekh liya toh tumhra recouncling kaise hoga?? Hai na!!

Then he feels something wet on his arm..he looks down he see a tear drop...he realizes that taani is crying..he had crossed his limit again..every time he does the same..he hates himself for making her cry..for hurting her..he doenot know y he gets so aggressive when it comes to her..why he cannot see her awaya from him..he wants her to be his..he cannot see her with anyone else..it kills him to see her avoid him,it kills him when she is not with him,it kills him when she is not talking to him..how badly he wanted her,claim her,hug her ,console her,kiss her..how badly he wanted her to know that he is incomplete without her,he loves her..but his ego got in btw always..his eyes are wet

He moves hair from her face..she is looking down..he holds her by her chin and lifts her head..he could see tears flowing from her eyes…he feels lump in his throat..he sees her hand where he had held her tightly he could se his finger marks n the area had turned blue he feels like a sinner for hurting her n making her cry.he felt like he should rot in hell for this..he felt a stab in his heart to see her like this..how could he stoop so low?how he hurt the person whom he loves the most.? he rubs her arms where he had hurt her slowly n gently with his thumb and kisses it gently ..now he is crying,taani is still crying she is numb due to crying.she doenot realize that rey had kissed her she is so hurt..he cups her face with his hands and kisses her fore head.. and tries to wipe her tears with his thumb..saying sorry..when taani is back to her senses..she holds his hands and pulls away his hand from her face n moves away from him..rey is shocked..he is trying to tell her sorry

Rey:taani..pls mujhe ma..b4 he could complete she cuts him..

Taani:its ok ..and turns to leaves..rey holds her wrist but she removes his hand n says pls ab aur nahi n leaves..

Rey is sad upset angry n bangs his hand on wall..he then kneels on ground holding his head n breaks down.. Taani is sad and lost when shivam sees her he knows what must have happened .he knew rey must be rude with her..he is sad to see taani sad he s angry on rey but he wants her to be with him..he fell in love with her her innocence..his love for him changed him..he wants her to be happy , he wants her to give him a chance to prove his love for her…he wants to take away all her tears..so he goes to her

Shivam(keeps his hand on her shoulder):taani!i know what u must be going through..i can understand..taani rey doenot love you..wo tumse pyaar nahi karta to kyun tum apnea p ko taklif de rhi ho???bhul jao use..wo tumra feelings nahi samhjsaqta..zindagi mai agaye badho..pyaar ko ek aur mauka do.

Taani:nahi shivam mai unhe bhul nahi saqti..bhale hi wo muhjse pyaar na karte ho par mai unse bahut pyaar karti hu..unki khusi mhje dard dene mai hai to yahi sahi mai is dard k saat puri zindagi jeene ko tyaar hu..but unke siva kis aur ko pyaar nahi kar saqti..m sorry shivam and runs away from there.

Shivam(sad n upset):kyun taani tum mujhe ek mauka nhi deti! Bas ek baar mujhe dikhne do ki mai tumse kitna pyaar karta hu..

In night taani is writing her dairy..almost all the pages of her dairy are soaked with her tears..her dairy holds her precious feelings and tears….which she doesnot want ny one to find them..she is crying while writing the dairy…when she hears knock on her door..its swayam

Swayam:taani kya tum so gayi??kuch baat karna hai

Taani wipes her tears n washes her face,hides her dairy..and opens the door..

Taani:sorry bhai wo mai bathroom mai thi trying to hide her swollen eyes from him..but swayam sees her and ..holds her hands n asks her tum thik to ho na taani..pichle kuch dino se bahut hi stressed n upset lag rhi ho…kya hua?

Taani:ku..kuch nahi bhai…wo bas thoda kaam jyda hua h..swayam:taani tum mujhse jhoot nahi bol saqti mai janta hu kuch aur baat hai.. and taani breaks down..and starts crying..and hugs swayam..he hugs back..swayam is trying to consol her..after some time..she stops crying..

Sw:mai janta hu ki.. tum rey k wajhse se upset ho..uske behavior k wajhe se..taani looks at him with shocked expression..

Sw:wo bura nahi hai but usko thoda time do..uske life mai bahut kuch hua hai..n chal rha hai..he is craving for love..uske parents usko kabhi time nahi dete the..uski haar jeet mai uska saat nahi dete the..jab usko unki zarurt thi wo kabi uske saat nahi hote the..is liye jab koi uska saat nahi deta wo rude ho jata h..n jab uske zindagi mai pyaar aya wo bhi cheen gaya ..is liye wo rude baat karta hai

Taani(sad she knows reys stry ): janti hu bahi is liye unse dur rheti hu..ab se nahi roungi unki baato ka bura nhi maungi.

Swayam too smiles.and hugs taani after some time….taani:aap kya baat karne aye the??

Swayam:arey han mai toh bhul h gaya..newyear k liye gang lonavala jar ha h ..subhe tayar rhena..yeh dekho maine room bhi buk wo bhi tumhre fav resort mai 5 din k liye.and shows her reservations (kind of bill)..

Taani(smiles):says thnx bhai n hugs him…then swayam leaves wishing her gn..and forgets reservation bill there..and taani too goes to bed..after talking to her bhai she felt light..

Mean while with rey..

He is still upset for hurting taani..but he could not help it..she never understood him..he hated him for hurting her..he was dancing aggressively on addicted song..thinkinng abt her..when his phone rang ..it was syam he had called him to inform that they r going to lonavala.but rey is not ready to go with gang as taani will also b there but swayam s emotional talk convince him…..


howz it guys ?2nd part n 9th part of one touch to be updated soon...mostly by tommrow eve😊

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honeey95 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww thats was sad !!! :(((
I still dont like shivam !!!!!
Cant wait for your update !!! :))))))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yipeee...! Me first ...awsum Ss Di...luved it...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome one!
and most importantly u included shivam as positive that was like cherry on the cake👏👏
plz taarey ko milwa do jaldi n off course shivam ko bhi aisehi positive rakhke usko thoda important banao plzzz
i wanna see more of taarey romance n taavam friendship
continue soon
thanx 4 d pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was amazing. Really nice start nd the scenes were really believable and I could imagine it happening. Hm. A love triangle? That makes me hate Shivam more. Hope, lonawala Taarey ko pas laye.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar i sooo loved it...amazing...plz update soon...wil w8 4 ur update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oww its nyc update soon bags...:P aka bhagyashree😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gotta say bags... The best apology ever!! ;-) I totally loved it! Rey n Taani.. Gosh! It really was sad.. M in love with ur writing.. Seriously.. Update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum dear
perfect...
bt cant wait fr upcuming scene
update asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear.
oooff rey is hurting taani...
taarey ko aise nahi dekh sakti..
so jaldi se patch up karva dena.
aur ye ky shivam taani se pyar karne laga hai..
waiting for your next part and yes one touch ka part bhi jaldi se update karna varna jarur tu mar khayegi.

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