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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: safia25

I know that uday is not mr. Shark.. U r making us confused by making mr. Shark's behavior and habits just like uday... Yeahh i gott it i think so. .. Well i m not so right in doing predictions.. 👎🏼 now coming to the update so plz andy do unmask mr. Shark in hurry as now i m getting irritate by mr. Shark..errghh 😡 .. The update was super duper awesome+ marvelous.. Good job andy.. 👍🏼 update soon.. ❤️

thanks safia😛
do some more guesses dear
you will get the answer soon😃
will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

SO FINALLY OUR UDAY IS MR SHARK!!!
WUHOO
NEVER HAD IMAGINED UDAY AS 'THE KILLER'!!

HOPE MANYATA UNDERSTANDS HIS CONDITION!!

thanks sanju,
yes even i feel that manyata should understand his condition😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shahista01

😉😉Very nice update andy.thanks dear😛

once again you gave us more questions😆yes as usual😆
Glad that you gave us insight into Mr Sharks past
Hard to believe he actually had a heart and sense of care.yes he was once a kind fellow witha heart
Honestly i dont believe Mr Shark is Uday... my bet is Ajay.we will see😉
and this why...

''Manyata was dumbstruck she didn't know what to do .uday pulled her away from the path of the speeding car in a nick of a second. the car passed them the distance between them and the car about 10 cm''

She held udays hand as they crossed the road and uday started the car

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Mr shark was angry, very very angry as he drove his car away

who is that guy trying to spoil his plans

he was trying hard to finish this assignment soon and here comes a guy trying to spoil his whole plan he will pay for his mistake he had noted the car's number he will pay dearly...
So it cant be uday...
also Mr Shark aka Ajay knows Uday...😆

''He knew who that person was- udayveer singh ,age 25 years A self made man, a business tycoon Owner of many industries, factories , hotels, malls ,cinema theaters and many others His latest venture ' a joint collaboration with manyata kumara to start a school for illiterates in that city Mother and father dead rather killed by underworld dons Yes there was many more to that past Yes he knew that past as well as udayveer Mr shark took another photo of his soon to be victim and pinned it beside manyatas picture''good detective work dear. i think we have to wait and watch. 😊mr shark cannot stay for long in the dark he has to come out one day

Its Manyata who is confused that Uday could be Mr Shark... lol i think. But You know best.😉 Now put us out of our misery sooon😆😉yes really soon for sure😉

thanks for this long lovely comment
good piece of detective work dear 😉
but is it correct
we will see. we will see
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Great update andy!!👏thanks so much😃😛
its very confusing i doubt sometimes on uday to be mr. shark but at the same time i am not sure as every single person in the story has some point in it which i doubt at!yes it could be anyone. all thanks to my confusing style of writing😆
pta chalay end main manyata hi Mr. shark ho😆ha ha ha this line is making me laugh so much😆 no for sure not manyata
suraj , ajay and uday!! the three best friends!! but i have a doubt on all😕yes dont believe anyone lets wait for the next chapter for the confusion to be confused further🤣!!yes i will try my best to do so😆
over all a very good update andy!!Tongue
please update soon so the Mr.shark unfolds!!😉yes for sure
thanks for the pm!😊

thanks so much for this comment
i really loved it . 😃😆
i am so happy reading it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya46

oh dear uday is the killer cause only his story is similar to mr shark's story

may be may not be
we have to wait to see😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: edward123

Just read the entire chapter
Mr. Shark called Manyata PRINCESS
ok...i think it's Uday
But this Suraj guy may also be the one
But i don't think he

yes it could be
even iam not so sure😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 17.1

Suraj was holding unni's hand as he lead her away

U: now where are we going suraj?

S: come unni don't you believe me. Today I want to give something special.

U: what?

S: is it not your brother's birthday today. So I am organizing a small party for him in SHG hotel. We will take a room there, decorate it and keep it as a surprise. Later I will bring him here saying any excuse and you and bhai can surprise him, how do you like the idea?

U: but SHG is a real expensive hotel.😕

S: don't worry, he is my friend. He deserves the best😃

They go to the hotel. The receptionist gives suraj a knowing smile and hands him the key. Suraj gives him back his wicked smile

They enter the room. It was well furnished and spotless clean

Suraj asked unni to wait for him there as he forgot to take his wallet from the reception area

S: don't lock the door I will be back in 10 minutes

U: ok I will wait

Suraj went straight to the presidential suite and knocked. He then entered the room, there was a 56 year old man in that room, he was fat, had a huge tummy. Thick gold chains were there on his hands and neck. He wore many big gold rings. He was mixing himself a drink

S: good afternoon mr kapoor

K:ah good to see you suraj, did you get that lovely dove for me

S: yes sir, she is in the room

K: good boy, I saw her yesterday when I went to negotiate with that ranjat(mr shark's father). She was over there and my heart wanted her badly. I asked you yesterday and lo, today you bring her here. Pretty fast you are.

S: yes sir,he smiles knowingly

K: ah, the money. Here it is 50000 rupees. Happy aren't you?

S: yes sir, do tell me if you want anyone else

He takes that money and leaves the hotel

Mr kapoor finishes his drink and moves to the room where unni was. He enters the room and locks it behind him. Unni gets scared seeing a stranger in her room. She tries to scream but he was powerful he pushed her to the bed and tore her apart like a wild animal 🤢

Unknown to suraj someone noticed suraj entering the hotel and leaving alone all this

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The three friends were busy celebrating mr shark's birthday. They had a wild time. Mr shark wanted to ask about unni to suraj, but then he knew unni would be safe. Maybe he went outside to buy her something, he left the place soon as he had other amends to do, now in this mood of celebration he forgot his worries

Unknown to mr shark his family was in danger

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Mr kapoor after his business at the hotel asked his goons to throw the body in front of any train. The girl did not survive his love. He never had any regrets in it. It was time to meet her family to finalise that land deal.

He entered the house with his goons.

K: so rangat do we have a deal?

R: sir I told you yesterday itself that I was not interested to sell this house. It is my hard earned property

K: is this your final word?

R: yes

K: you wont change it

R: no please…

K: burn them

Saying this mr kapoor left the house. The goons tied mr sharks dad and mom together and opened the gas cylinder. They also poured kerosene on them

They left the house and threw a lighted match stick into the house. What followed next was a huge explosion. The goons then left the place

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Mr shark was very happy as anything today. He returned home earlier than usual. His maa would have prepared his favorite kheer for his birthday

As he reached near his house, there were many people standing outside it. as he made way through the crowd he saw the burnt remains of his home. He hears people around him talking

Person 1: ranjat's daughter committed suicide

Person 2: it is said that her parents committed suicide to escape the shame

Person 3: shame?

Person 2: yes she was caught in the hotel some hrs back, so she jumped in front of the train

Person 4: so that is why they committed suicide

Person 2: yes…

Mr shark could not take more, he lost control and he left the place. He walked aimlessly but his mind was answering his questions first he needed to see his so called friend, he wanted to kill him with his bare hands. He bought a big knife and hid it inside his shirt.

He met suraj on the way. Suraj came and hugged him and cried

S: bhai my unni,

Mr shark controlled himself.ms: I know

I need you to accompany me to that place, I cant go alone

S: ok

They reached the place where unnis body was recovered. The body was removed from there. Only some blood stains was visible

Suraj was literally crying his heart out

Mr shark could not take this drama much longer

He held the knife securely in his hand and held suraj by his collar. He asked him

Ms: suraj what did you do to my sister

S: what? I don't know what your saying

Ms: don't lie I saw you taking my sister tell me the truth or else, he pointed the knife to suraj's chest

Seeing his friend in this hyperangry mode suraj blurted out the truth

Mr shark then plunged the knife into his heart

Ms: why did you? You traitor I always considered you as my brother

Ms: how could you sell my sister😡

Ms: and you gave me party with that money you creep😡

And he plunged it again and again 🤢

A train was speeding towards then. Suraj looked scared and tried to move. But mr shark held him still when the train was about 5m back mr shark pushed him in front of the train and jumped to the side. the train speed past him, its wheels further mutilated suraj' body. Mr shark smiled in satisfaction. Now to meet his second prey, who wiped of his entire family- mr kapoor . that idiot business man had to die tonight. He decided to meet that fellow personally.

Rage filled his eyes as he walked towards the hotel. Mr kapoor had taken away unni's life and burned his family alive he would pay for that

Mr kapoor finished his drink and went to his car to return home, he got in the car an dwas about to on the ignition when a knife was pointed to his neck from behind

" drive the car to the place I say or I will slash this neck of yours.

" ok if you want money I will give you anything you want

" I don't want money I want your life, now drive

" but"

" don't talk I will kill you this instant if one more sound comes from your guilt mouth"

He took mr kapoor to a empty go down and tied him to a chair

Then he cut the vein and allowed the blood to flow freely. The person would be dead in say half to one hour. But he did not stop there . he took the blood stained knife and cut his fingers

"this is for threatnening my father😡

Then he started to cut him out alive, taking huge chunks of muscle at the time

Mr kapoor could not not even scream as his mouth was cellotaped. His eyes reddened due to the pain

"this is for my mother😡

" this is for my sister😡

" this is for spoiling our happiness"😡

Saying these he continued his work

After his work was over, he collected the flesh and and put it in a packet

He then buried the bones

He drove to a forest area and put that packet for wild animals to feast on

As he looked on his blood stained hands he proclaimed

" I am mr shark the agent of death"

The next day mr kapoor's wife gave a complain that her husband was missing. But he was never seen again. Mr shark left that place for Mumbai and rest was history

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Mr shark woke up from his thoughts. Circumstances , yes circumstances made him this ruthless. If not for these people he would be still living happily with his parents, his sister and maybe he would have got a good job near his job(his present jobs earns him millions ie business )

He never felt remorse for his actions until today. It was time he met manyata . he needed to finish that chapter soon. He walked to the basement area and entered the room. There in the middle of the bed sat manyata. One of her legs were chained so that she would not escape. All basic nacessities were available in that room.

Ms: good morning princess good to see you awake. So how was your sleep

M: enough of this drama, you brought me here to kill me then why not finish your job soon, why is all this torture

Ms: not so soon baby, we need to spend sometime together before that

And he smirked

M: how could you kill people and stand without any shame. How do you? Oh I feel disgusted to even talk to you

Ms: to kill someone you need guts and a strong mind. I have both manayta kumari😈

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That's all for today.. finally mr sharks past is revealed

Next chapter his identity will be revealed😃

So how was it?

if anyone found this update offensive, forgive me

Do press the like button and do comment please

Your comment encourages me to write more

So are you waiting for mr shark to be unmasked😛?
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Posted: 12 years ago


Andy baby!!...This was brilliant and more than that..Now I am 200% sure as to who is Mr. Shark.😉 He is Uday. 😲That is why you have shown his past which was more than pathetic and tragic😭. He has reasons to be bad. But maybe he will come out from this very soon. Love changes everything😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update andy.
I am really excited 4 next chapter.
More important plez pm me
please
please
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi




<font size="3" color="#6633ff">Andy baby!!...This was brilliant and more than that..Now I am 200% sure as to who is Mr. Shark.😉 He is Uday. 😲That is why you have shown his past which was more than pathetic and tragic😭. He has reasons to be bad. But maybe he will come out from this very soon. Love changes everything😊</font>


thank you so much gargi
mr sharks past made him this cruel
yes it is love that changes mr shark
you r sure mr shark is uday?

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