MG-SS-Different ..yet similar~pt 9-pg 16-15/3 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Geet khud phass gyi...


Precap is vry intrsting...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
part 3
nice part...
OMG these 2 are like will take the other's life...
hope what Geet does doesnt hurt Maan beyond the limit...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting update ...ab final blow kya hoga get ka ..kahi is k baad geet maan seprate to nahi ho rahe ..chalo acha he phir young maan geet k updatesaur bhi mazedaar aurr romantic honge
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey frnds
i have something to say u all
may be u ppl are not liking maan and geet's hatred towards each other
but its part of story...
well remember one thing they are just kids yaar...children.
its their fights and opinions on each other witch made them both hate the other
but opinions change...dont they?
generally children dont think whether the thing they are doing is right or wrong...they cant even think...parents will tell them what is good and what is bad...but here neither mohinder nor raj know about their hatred towards each other.
but when they grow up...their opinions change...they will know what life is...how ppl are...whom to belive and whom not to...
so pz wait patiently...who knows what happens...
aur haan...as i said opinions change as ppl grow doesnt say that maan and geet will not hate each other when they grow...😉
@sekhonpuneet thanks dear...for ur comment
u said why maan hates rich ppl this much...and that too geet especially...
i gave ur answer here yaar...plz check
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3342418&TPN=6

and every one thanks for ur comments
just another update on their childhood...and then u will see maan's side of story...
as they grow...

as --Fairy-- said...
itni nafrat...kahi pyaar na hojaye😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
geet looked maan in room
maan acing
geet punished
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi frns...i m sorry for being late but here i have to say u few things...

imp note:::actually i m planning 4 to 5 parts on maan's clg life but the thing is there wont be geet in this...so i want to ask u whether i shld proceed few parts without geet or do u directly want me to jump to maaneet's meet after they grow...but this wont be that interesting without maan's clg life...as i m planning few things or say surprises for geet...when she meets maan again...for now i cants say more than this so plz tell me shld i write maan's clg life or not...plzzz

Part 4

Its nearly 2 weeks after the suspension but she kept quite oddly. This made maan to think twice before he go anywhere...do anything and even eat anything...even meera started to doubt geet...ofcourse maan and geet's usual fights are going on but geet dint plan anything special for maan and this made both maan and meera a bit thoughtful.

Geet walked out of the class into the corridor as the school is over. As she walked few steps she collided with a boy and her books fell down.

"I m sorry geet" the boy smiled sweetly.

"ah its ok vivek bhai" geet smiled as she sat down to pick her books and vivek too got down to help her.

"hey me geet here teju wrote an imp note at the start of this update plz do check..."

Vivek is from maan's class and know geet well. Vivek is an intelligent boy but he is always 2nd in class as our beloved maan occupied the 1st position always. This irked vivek a lot. How much ever intelligent is vivek but still he had that traces of evilness in him. he hates maan and always thinks how to get him down and maan knows this and he hates vivek.

As maan and geet fight a lot'vivek likes geet''as like enemy's enemy is our friend''..

But our nave geet doest know this shade of vivek'.for her vivek is always a good brother who helps her always may it studies or school activites.

Maan behaves as if he doesn't bother who geet speaks to and be friend but he many a times asked meera to say to geet to stay away from vivek'.ofcourse meera felt it weird always'ha ha even i..hmm'. oh boy who is he speaking of!!! Geet'..geet handa'.as if she listens.

"geet itni jaldi kya hai...go slow" vivek smiled as they both stood back.

"nai vivek bhai'wo kya hai na aaj mujhe kuch imp kaam hai'jaldi jaana hai" geet smiled.

Vivek started to reply to geet but just then he saw meera coming out of the class. She looked at the both suspiciously and he instantly looked at geet as if he dint notice meera. He is sure meera cant hear them as she is quite at a distance from them.

"kya kaam hai? Revenge on maan ha?" vivek gave a smirk which dint go unnoticed by meera. He purposefully said 'maan' a bit loudly to let meera here but rest she cant and it did work..she stood behind the door and stared at them.

"hey its me geet yaar...teju wrote some imp note above this update...ja ja kar pehla usse check karo update baad mein pad sakthe hai aap log...pretty plz yaar...not check karo na(with puppy dog eyes pleading u)

"nai bhai'.aaj mama ke saat shopping jana hai" geet said.

"acha'.yeh to imp kaam hai'after all u love to shop hai na" vivek said.

"haan right'.i love to shop'." Geet smiled.

"grt geet have a good time" vivek smirked.

"sure bhai'.bye" geet said and walked ahead.

Vivek took 2 steps back near to the door and meera hid completely. Now she cant see him but hear him. as geet walked more steps vivek said so that meera can hear but not geet.

"ok geet u don't worry'u told ur plan to me and leave it to me I will execute ur plan'we r going to show maan his position" vivek laughed evilly and walked away.

He hid behind a pillar in the corridor and looked at the door. Meera came out of the door and looked at retreating figure of happy geet. Vivek saw this and smirked and left.

Meera instantly ran to maan.

"maan maaan" meera came to a half breathing hard. Now she is infront of maan at the school gate.

"kya hua meera?" maan asked confused.

"geet'..geet is planning something" meera said.

"huh as I expected" maan snored.

"no maan this time I think its big" meera said.

"don't worry meera she cant do anything to me" maan said.

"no she had partner"meera said.

"partner?" maan asked confused.

"ya'.that vivek" meera said.

Maan gritted his teeth'his anger is rising' "that moron"

"maan calm down'.we have to think of something" meera said.

"don't worry meera'.lets wait and see what she planned for me" maan said with red eyes.

"but maan.." meera tried to say but he cut her in middle.

"no meera let us see'wo kis hadd tak ja sakthi hai" maan said and left from there leaving behind a worried meera.

Few days later'..

Today is the day of last exam for both 11th students and 9th students.

Ok if u are confused or not clear let me say'.geet is in her 9th while maan in 11th.

Everyone entered the exam hall and sat in their respective places. The exam started and everyone are busy giving their answers'.vivek turned back and looked at maan smirking and turned back to his exam which went unnoticed by maan.

Its one hour since the exam started and the invigilator is taking rounds. Suddenly he stopped at a boy and asked him to get up.

Invigilator: stand up u boy.

The boy stood giving the invigilator a worried look.

In: give me that

He extened his hand and the boy scared.

Boy: I have nothing sir.

In: stop acting. I saw u taking the slip from him.

He turned to the next boy before him and asked him to stand as well.

Boy 2: sir its his slip sir. He threw it in my bench so I returned it to him.

In: if its not ur u should give it to me not to him. u gave it to him which means u both are together in this.

The boys know they were caught and there is no escape. So they accepted bending their heads down.

In: take out al ur slips and who else are ther with u?

The boys handed him all the slips which are with them.

Boy 2: sir maan is also having few slips. He is with us.

Maan who is writing his paper without even looking at the drama happening in class looked up at them shocked.

In: maan

The invigilator came to maan and asked him to stand up. Maan stood up and spoke.

Maan: I dunno what these are saying. I don't have any slips. I don't cheat.

In: oh really'let me check.

The invigilator checked maan'.his pockets and all but he found none.

Then he turned to the 2 boys.

In: u lied to me.

Boy 1: no sir they are not in his dress'they are in his stencil box.

That is when maan looked at the stencil box which is kept in his desk but as far as he remembered he forgot to bring it to exam. The invigilator opened the box and there are the slips.

In : whats this maan. Now what do u want to say? They are right u cheated.

Maan: no sir'I dunno whose box is this'I dint bring mine to exam today.

In: stop ur lies maan.

Maan: but sir'

In: I said stop it'now u three come with me to principal's cabin.

He called another teacher and asked him to continue the invigilation and took the three to principal. As they walked pass the room maan saw vivek smirking at him and that's when he understood how the slips came to him.

At principal's cabin maan and the other two boys stood before the principal.

Principal after hearing what all happened in the exam hall and looking at the proofs said "u three are not eligible for writing this exam and u have to redo this exam before the whole faculty.. so be prepared for the exam on day after tomorrow. U r going to get detention from ur class teacher for a month in ur next promoted class. Now get out."

Maan was sad hearing this'its not about that he have to redo this exam before faculty as he is topper of class and he can do the exam well but the thing is he got insulted before his whole class and faculty'he is unable to digest this.

All the three along with the teacher turned and walked out of the room. Maan is the last one to walk out when the principal called him back.

p: maan wait.

Maan turned back and looked at him sad.

Maan: yes sir.

Princi: do u have anything to say?

Maan: will ppl listen if I say truth.

Princi: I may listen.

Maan looked at him confused.

Princi: u r topper maan u came school top in ur 10th .do u expect me to believe that u cheated in exam?

Maan looked at him surprised.

Maan: but sir u already gave me punishment.

Princi: yes. and that's not gonna change. But the truth can change and u may be proved innocent. Don't u want that to happen?

Maan eyes had hope know.

Princi: tell me what happened.

maan said all that happened in class and about vivek but eliminated geet's name.

maan: I think vivek is behind this sir.

Princi: its just ur doubt maan how can u prove.

Maan nodded sadly. But an idea stuck to him and he looked at princi excitedly.

Maan: if u can help sir'..if u help I can prove it.

Princi: I m ready to help u maan'.what do u want to do?

Maan: sir I have a plan'.

Maan explained the plan to princi and princi smiled at him and nodded in agreement.

Princi: u leave now and come in when I call u.

Maan nodded and left from there. princi immediately called the office boy and asked him to call the two boys along with maan and the invigilator to his cabin now.

After few minutes all the 4 entered his cabin.

Princi looked at them and asked the invigilator to take his seat and turned to the 3 boys.

Princi: so u three I felt the punishment I gave u is less'if I leave u this easy other wont change. Ur punishment should make others to rethink before doing any kind of cheating in school. What do u say sir.

In: yes sir..u r right.

The 2 boys are scared as they heard the princi'they though they escaped with little punishment ofcourse writhing the paper infront of the whole faculty is not small but still'..Maan smiled inwardly looking at their scared faces.

Princi: then this is ur punishment'..u r not giving ur exams now as u can do it along with ur juniors'I mean u r not promoted to ur next class and hence u have to do this year again.

The boys got shock of their life'.how can that be done'what if their parents come to know about this'.no way.

Boy 1: s'ir'.sir'how can u say this'.no sir'plz'we dind do any cheating.

Boy 2: yes sir we didn't cheated.

Princi: sorry boys u agreed u cheated and u r caught cheating.

Boy 2: no sir they r not our slips we just helped him'.wo uska plan hain maan ko phasane keliyeh.

Boy 1: yes sir'yes we r saying truth plz believe us.

Princi smirked at them looking at maan who gave him a victorious smile.

Princi: tell me the whole. Who asked u to do this?

Boy 2: vivek'vivek asked us to trap maan.

Princi: u can go.

Boy 1: but sir the punishment.

Princi: u have to rewrite the exam that too before faculty and nothing more than that'so leave.

The both boys wished him thanks and left.

In: I m shocked sir'how can someone do such.

Princi: hmm we should see. Thank u sir for bringing this to my notice.

The invigilator left after that leaving maan behind.

Princi: maan u have to rewrite the test before faculty to prove urselves innocent. I know u will top again. All the best maan.

Maan: but sir what about vivek?

Princi: I will see that to him. u can leave now.

Maan: thank u sir.

Maan turned to leave when princi said.

Princi: u r brilliant maan.. u will succeed in ur life..u will reach the heights. Keep it as my word. Remember me when u grow'I will see u one day when u r a success.

Maan turned to him and smiled : I m this becoz of u sir'I can never forget u' thanks for everything sir.

Maan left from there.

As he came out ,he saw geet smiling at vivek and vivek signaling her a thumbs up. He gritted his teeth in anger.

Edited by teju2292 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
oh god mu between maneet..
bcoz of vivek
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update..

Geet is quite all along.
Vicky is evil. He is planning
Against Maan pretending Geet
Is also wid him.

Maan is careful all the while fearing
Geet quiteness. Meera gets trap in
Vicky's plan.

Maan caught cheating. Pleading Princi
For proving innocence.
Maan's plan is successful

Maan misunderstood Geet.

I m fine if u show Maan's colg life.
I m interested to read.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4
nice part...
OMG Geet is sure haughty and brat but shes too innocent...
Maan should know this...
she fights only with him not with all...
this is gonna lead to a big misunderstanding...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5

plz read the note below...

As he came out ,he saw geet smiling at vivek and vivek signaling her a thumbs up. He gritted his teeth in anger.

"I told u maan…I told u she is planning something big…look what she did" meera said as she came to him.

Maan is still looking at geet who now walking in the corridor speaking animatedly with her friends and laughing and giggling in between.

"lets go meera" maan said still looking at geet.

"maan why don't u understand we have to say this to princi" meera said.

"its not her plan" maan spoke still looking at geet.

"what do u mean? How can u say that? I saw maan…I saw with my eyes" meera said.

"its not her meera….its vivek. And the thing that u saw is….did u hear what they spoke?" maan asked now looking at meera.

"no….but…." meera tried to say but maan cut her.

"I will tell u what happen…..after u said to me about geet that day at the gate I saw vivek listening to us. After we moved I saw him leaving from there smirking….that is when I got the doubt….if geet is in this plan vivek will be upset hearing that we came to know there plan but he is oddly happy that u heard….or may be he wanted u to hear…." Maan said as he started walking from there.

Meera walked beside him listening to him carefully.

"then the other day I saw vivek speaking to the 2 boys…I dunno what they are planning but what I heard is….they wanted to plan against me and make everyone believe that geet has done this. All will really believe along with u and me as me and geet are like almost enemies…..thats when I came to know that geet is innocent" maan finished.

"omg…that vivek…..i dint expect this maan…..even I thought geet is behind this" meera exclaimed.

"hmm" maan said.

"hey dude" adi and dev shouted in union as they reached meera and maan.

"so when is ur reexam?" dev asked.

"day after tomorrow" maan said.

Just then pinky came running to them breathing hard.

As she came near everyone saw that she is crying.

"pinky kya hua?" maan quickly went to her side and held her by shoulders.

"bhai….bhai…" pinky cried.

"kya hua pinky?" meera asked.

They all saw raj walking towards them silently.

"papa aap yaha?" maan asked confused.

"meera beta come with me" raj said softly and walked ahead while meera followed him without further questions. Maan tried to follow but pinky stopped him

"kya hua pinky?" maan asked again.

"meera's father….meera's father is no more bhai" pinky cried in his arms while maan stood there shocked and sad for his friend.

Dev and adi were also equally shocked. But they heard an unexpected voice which made them all turn to the person.

"what!!!!" geet shouted as she heard pinky. Tears formed in her eyes and she instantly ran towards the gate.

Maan dint liked her tears dunno y. He calmly turned to pinky as he said "pinky this is the time for us to be strong and support meera…les go to her place"

They all left to meera's place. As they reached they saw many people in front of her house. They made their way in and saw meera's father's body lying on the floor covered by a white cloth while her mother is sitting beside his body crying badly. They looked for meera and found her sitting against the wall with no expression. Geet sat beside her holding her but there is no expression on meera's face. This made maan scare and he instantly ran to her. geet said nothing as he sat beside meera and started jerking her to make her come out of the shock. But nothing worked. He called her a lot of times and even pulled her into his hug but no difference. He looked at geet who is looking at them tears flowing in her eyes continuosly. He said nothing and again concentrated on meera.

After an hour or so they saw meera's fathers body is lifted and taken away but even then she sat there blank faced. Her mother cried sitting there while other ladies along with mrs.handa tried to control her. she was taken inside and maan made meera stand up and took her inside her room while geet and other followed them. They all sat in her room for god knows how long. Finally raj came to them and asked them all to return to their houses.

Maan said he will stay there and also raj dint object. Raj had many other things to take care there and he definitely want maan's help. Now maan is not a kid.

Suddenly geet stood up and left the room. Maan looked at her confused..he dunno y but he dint think even geet has to go home. but to his surprise she came back after few minutes holding a glass and sat beside meera. She asked meera to drink the juice she brought but meera dint even flinch. Tears slipped from geet's eyes.

Maan immediately left the room and sat in the balcony thinking about meera and geet. Few minutes later he walked back to meera's room but stopped outside as he heard geet's voice.

"meera speak meera…say something…they took ur father away meera….they took ur father away…cry meera..plz cry….plzzz meera……don't sit like this meera….meera speak" geet held meera by solders and is jerking her hardly.

"meera why are u sitting like a rock…oh yes how can I forget..u r a rock…u don't lve ur father na….say it meera….say I m right….ur father is dead now…u can be happy" geet said rudely.

This made maan so angry…how dare she say that to meera…that too in this condition. Meera loves her father….but what happened next made him shock.

As geet finished her sentence meera slapped geet hard on her cheek with such a force that geet fell down and her lip started bleeding.

"how dare u say that geet…..i love my dad" meera shouted.

But what made him more shock is geet stood up smiling looking at meera which shining eyes.

"u spoke" geet said "thank god u spoke"

Maan looked at geet shocked as he realized for what she did speak like that. She is trying to get meera speak.

Meera instantly remembered all that happened…how she came home and saw her father's dead body. Tears started flowing from her eyes and geet instantly hugged her sitting beside her. meera kept her head on geet shoulder and started crying. Her cries became loud and she wetted geet's top but geet held her intact and let her cry on her as tears flowed even in geet's eyes. meera cried with long gasps for long time…as geet dint move a bit holding meera against her while maan stood there watching them.

Minutes turned into hours and its so dark out..meera cried and cried and collapsed on geet. Geet made her sleep on the bed and covered with blanket. She sat beside her caressing her hair and after few minutes even she slept leaning on the bed post. Maan who still stood at the entrance with tears came in and pulled the blanket of meera a bit and even covered geet with it and left from there caressing meera's hair.

Next morning maan came to check on meera and found her still sleeping but geet is nowhere to be found. He turned back when suddenly he heard her "maan plz don't move"

He stood still…plzz!!! Plz was never geet's word and that too for maan…no way!!

He turned and saw geet holding a big tray with a soup bowl on it and is trying hard to balance it. He instantly hels it and geet looked at him.

"I will carry" he said as geet nodded and left the tray in his hand. They both walked in and he kept the ugtray on table while geet sat beside meera and woke her up. Meera woke up and looked at geet and then maan. She again started crying and maan immediately came and sat beside her. she held maan and cried. Geet caressed her hair and they sat there like that letting meera cry. Finally unable to take maan pulled meera and held her by sholders. He dunno what to say but he don't want her to cry he want her to be strong. Just then geet kept her hand on his hand which is on meera's sholder and meera looked at her.

"meera…I don't say u to not cry…u have to cry…u have to let ur pain out but how many days will u be like this crying meera? Once go and look at ur mom who is in beside room crying all the night. U need to look after her meera. U need to be strong…for u…for ur mother….u don't have any brother meera…so u have to take his position….u should take care of ur house…ur mother…..ur father's dreams…ur father is not expecting u to sit and cry like this…he wants u to be strong…to take care of ur family….u must take ur father's position….u shld be strong meera…strong" geet said.

Meera looked at her tears flowing out of her eyes but the loud cried reduced while maan looked at geet shocked…these are the word he is trying to put out but unable to but geet saying them…he never thought….he never thought that geet could speak this mature….she is always a kid…a fun loving girl and a strong headed rich brat….is what he thought of her.

Meera instantly hugged her. geet made her drink the soup and made her get up and fresh. Maan left the room giving some privacy to meera.

The days passed and meera now became strong but still is crying now and then in geet's arms. Geet stais there all the days. The ceremony on 12th day went well. But made meera weak for few hours but geet helped her and she got back her strength. Meera helped her mother and sat beside her mostly all the day as her support.

Now it's 2 weeks from the ceremony and geet daily visited meera and ofcourse maan was with meera mostly all the time. One day raj came to them.

"meera go and pack ur's and aasha di's(meera's mother) clothes and all u need in a separate bag" raj said.

"are they going anywhere papa?" maan asked not liking this.

"we all are going maan. From today meera and aasha di will stay with us and we all are shifting to delhi. u will be leaving for tomorrow's train and I will follow u ppl with all the luggage loaded in a truck through road way…the packers will come by this evening and u people pack ur cloths and necessities" raj said.

Hearing this meera just nodded but tears flowed in geet's eyes and she instantly ran from there crying.

"but what about my 12th and meera's 10th?" maan asked.

" I took admission in one of the schools in delhi..u will complete there" raj said.

"but papa why this sudden" maan asked.

"its my decision maan. No more arguments now go and pack ur stuff" raj said seriously and maan sighed and left while meera opened her suitcase and started packing.

Precap: Delhi…away from geet….

I know guys I m late and now even after giving an update after these many days it's a short one. But plz I m sorry don't be mad at me…I m unable to write…I m not getting any likes and comments and its really discouraging me a lot…plzzz like and comment….plz…I will try to update more frequently…last time u ppl dint even reply to my question whether to continue with maan's clg life or not…so plz say that too..

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