MG-SS-Different ..yet similar~pt 9-pg 16-15/3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok...so now plz don't throw eggs and tomatoes on me...I know I dint complete my two ff's and left them at last part but u know I m not getting anything to write for them...i tried many times to write a part but I m not satisfied with those writings and so I deleted them...I will surely try and write them back...

Now plz read this new SS on our dear maaneet and plzz plz plzzz comment and tell me how it is ...should I continue or not...plzzz

Different... yet similar


Prologue

Maan...just maan.....he is from a middle class family...he is cute, good looking, soft natured, loves all and everyone love him in return except the one girl who he too hates so so sooo much...geet handa...he is 16

Geet...THE GEET HANDA...she is rich and princess of her house...her word is their order...she is born to rule...yet sweet but strong headed...beautiful yet never care for her beauty...loves all and lovable by all except the one boy who she hates a lot...maan...she is 14

Mohinder Handa owns the Handa industries and is in a good status...while Raj Khurana is working as an manager at Mohinder handa...they are childhood friends and likes and respects each other a lot

But their children are always fighting...they hate eachother to the core...

Maan and geet doesn't even like to see each other's face...

They are different yet they are similar...

He is sweet but down to earth...she is sweet but strong headed

He is good but not rich...she is good but rich

He plays pranks on her just to irritate her...she plays pranks on him becoz she is irritated due to him

He hates her becoz he thinks she is feeling pride as she is rich...

She hates him becoz he always fights with her for no reason...

What happens when they meet each other after 10 years...

Will they fight? Or will they fall in love? Now how is maan? Whats he doing? And how is geet? Whats she doing?

They are different yet they are similar...

frnds plz say how it is and say should I continue?...plz like and comment.

Index

part 1

part 2

part 3

note

part 4

part 5

part 6

part 7

part 8

part 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely concept look forward to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW LOVELY CONCEPT CONT. SOON PLZ SEND ME PM ALSO
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats 4 new ss dear..
loved the concept..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOVELY CONCEPT LOOK FORWARD TO READING IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plzzz conti n add me to ur pmlist

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1

" HOW DARE U"

" ha ha I m dare enough"

"I'll kill u"

"wohhh try it darling"

"arghhh…..I HATE U"

"I HATE U MORE THAN U"

"daaad…..dad see what he is doing"

" wo daddy ki bachhi….u cant speak anything on ur own"

"I can"

"ya ya look who is speaking"

"I will not leave u today"

"as if u can catch me"

Thus started another fight of the day.

"uff yeh bachhe ….they will stop never" mohinder exclaimed looking at the two devils who are running around in the garden of handa mansion fighting.

Mohinder sat in the lawn chair in garden looking at some files and raj stood beside him handing him the files. Its Sunday so everyone are at home including the two devils.

Geet is behind maan trying to catch him and maan is not even in her range to catch.

As they ran around their fathers raj caught hold of maan while maan wriggled in his grip to leave him.

"papa chodo mujhe that double head is coming" maan tried to get out of raj's grip as geet came near him.

"maan stop this nonsense cant u be good?" raj looked at his son.

Even as being friend of mohinder raj never crossed his line…he thinks he is not equal to them and mohinder's family except him and his wife rano every other member in their family treats him only as a servent. Many times mohinder behaved with him and saw him as a friend but he maintained his distance. As he saw maan playing pranks on geet and irritating her…he many a times asked maan to behave and be away from geet….but that's next to impossible.

"yes I got u" geet shouted in happiness and held maan's shirt.

As raj loosened his hold on maan, maan smirked " do u really think so?"

Instantly maan ran from there and geet looked at him shocked and again started running behind him shouting at him and scolding him.

This is their daily routine…..

"raj" mohinder said closing the files and handing them to raj.

"yes sir" raj said slightly bending down at mohinder.

Mohinder took the coffee mug from the table and took a sip "oh raj…stop calling me sir…we are not in office"

"but sir.." raj started to say but cut by mohinder.

"u never change na" he sighed.

"but one day will come that u will call me by my name without the sir tag" mohinder smiled and raj smiled in return.

Meanwhile maan and geet ran and ran around the house.

Maan's mother is dead when he is 5 and from then mohinder asked raj to shift to their outhouse so raj along with maan and maan's mamaji stay in handa's outhouse.

Maan ran and collided with his mamaji and fell down while geet came to him and threw the whole bucket of water which is kept for gardening on maan. Maan looked at her angrily but geet laughed out loud and ran from there satisfied.

Maan sat there drenched and angry on geet. Mamaji held him and made him stand on his feet.

"challo maan. Andar challo aur kapade badallo nai to thand lagjayegi" mamaji held him and walked him inside the house.

"mamaji wo geet ko dekho. Kitna nakhre hai" maan cribbed.

"maan I told u to stay away from them dint i? those rich people are always like that…they don't think a sec before throwing mud on our face" mamaji said.

Mamaji is good but he doesn't like rich people. He had so much experience in his life…he saw many people, their behaviours and geet's family..except rano and mohinder everyone else are not that good…they are eligible to act according to time and they don't treat raj well….actually to be true they don't ever see raj as mohinder's friend he is always a mere employee to them. Mamaji knows this all even raj. But raj don't mind this as he too think that he is a mere employee.

"sach mamaji u r right. I so hate that geet….wo kudh ke baremein sochti kya ho….maharani?" maan shouted angrily.

"maan keep ur voice down" said raj angrily who came into the room just then.

"papa she is " maan started to say but stopped seeing the angry look in raj's eyes.

"maan how many times did I tell u to be away from geet mam. Why don't u understand. We are not equal to them. She can never be ur friend" raj said calming down.

"papa pehle stop calling her mam…she is just 14" maan said not able to digest his father calling some stupid 14 yr old as mam.

"aur haan I don't even want her as a friend never….not becoz she is rich and me not…but becoz she is stupid and she can never be equal to me…THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA" maan said with his head up.

"nakhre dekh is bache ki" raj said.

"its called attitude papa" maan smiled.

"one day he will become a successful person raj….i can see that in his confidence. He will be popular and defiantly rich" mamaji said.

"more rich than geet" maan grinned brightly.

"I hope that happens. I wanted to see maan successful in his life" raj said and smiled a little and left.

"when I m successful and rich I will see the end of geet" maan thought with hatred on geet.


precap:

so saw maan's view on geet...now lets see what geet thinks😊😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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YUPPIE Me first to comment.
Wow Beautiful update.

Nice concept.

Maan's father works for Mohinder. Even
Though they are friend but he stays in limit.
Loved Maaneet fighting n chasing each other.
It was sweet.
Raj scolding Maan , telling him to behave.
Wow Maan Geet ke haath me aa gaya. Geet
Drenching him.

Mamaji warning him.
Loved Maan's POV. Now its Geet's turn.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome update

loved it

cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh god!he hates her so much that he want to c her end!!
that was unexpected..!!

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