FF-Love Conquers Death NOTE PG 150

Character Sketch -

Guys if you dint liked just say it openly i wont feel bad...This will only help to know should i continue with my FF or not...😊

Seems very interesting FF.plz do continue

Chapter 1-

Archana and Manav in office cabin are standing in front of each other after 18 long years. They are shocked seeing each other as well as happy too. The both have lots of thoughts coming in their minds. Also there are lots of question in their eyes too but are still not able to talk to each other. They want to run to each other and have a hug but can't as they are still upset with each other.

Manav (thinking) - Why Archana? Why? Why din't you came with me. Why?

Archana (thinking) - U never called me. Just sent Savita Aai with the custody papers of our children.

Manav(thinking)- U should have atleast came to the airport. I would have never left you.

Archana(thinking)- I called you many time Manav on that night but you didn't received my calls or waited for me.

Both had many question in their eyes to ask to each other but weren't able to talk.

Suddenly a staff comes I their cabin and ArMan comes out of their world of thoughts. Archana wipes her tears which were rolling when see suddenly saw Manav after 18 long years.

Staff to Manav - Sir, what about Mrs. Archana Deshmukh? Is she confirmed for the job or not?

Manav - Yes she is confirmed and she can continue to work here only.

Archana - Thank you Sir.

Saying this she left his cabin with an angry and shocked expression on her face.

Outside, Purvi has been waiting for her mother to know what has happened inside. She thinks that Manav Sir is a very kind person and employer and is not like her other Khadoos Boss Mr. Arjun Kirloskar. Manav Sir will definitely give Aai her job back.

At that very point Archana comes out of the cabin. Purvi sees her and goes near her to ask what happened inside. Archana starts walking from there in a huff. Purvi also walks behind her questioning her what happened. She continuously asks her "Aai tell na what happened inside"'This is heard by Manav. Manav hears Purvi telling Archana her Aai and is shocked. Lots of questions running in his mind and sees both Purvi and Archana going away from the corridor of his office.

Precap - Purvi is sleeping when Archana comes near her and caresses her hair and mutters "Sorry beta I am really sorry that I am keeping you away from Manav your father. But I am helpless. Sorry beta please forgive me"

I like the character sketch plz continue

don't bash me up if its lame just tried my writing skill a little bit...😊

Well ...GREAT START 👍🏼 I find ur ff interesting and keep it up u r doing superb.Pls add me to ur PM list.

good start of ur FF.waiting 4 next chapter.
try to update soon.

I like the first part plz update the next part soon

Great start! Please continue soon.