new jeeka ss: *unnamed*

hi guyz. i just wantd to write a ss on jeeka wid a little reet without all family drama. this is my first attempt at such things. pls ignore the type mistake as i use net frm my phn. so here it goes. chapter 1-page 1

chapter 1: Jeet's diary- friday Its 11 at night.It has been 4weeks since rano's wedding wid shekhar. All the time i am feeling lyk there is a part of me is missing. i cant find it anywhere. I dont know why is that, was she really that much part of my lyf?? will i ever be recoverd from this condition?? Does my destiny also have stored some1 spcl for me who can erase all the pain and sadness covering me?? IS THERE SOME1??? I DONT HAVE THE ANSWER. Jeet closes the diary and sits still with eyes closed thinking abt bebe. Suddenly a cool breeze blows over his face refreshing him. He gets up and goes to the open window with the thought of seeing someone. NO,there was no one. 'stupid'-he thought of himself. Little did he know that there was some1 veiled with dark fogs,just to see him for 1 moment,to remove all the pain in his lyf. She stands there with tears in her eyes which no one can see.

character sketch: Jeet- a very introvert boy whose only dream is becoming boaxing champion. his parents didnt have tym for him since childhood for their buisness. his best friend is rano who is now married to shekhar. RANO-She is a cute,fun loving girl. jeet is her best friend. but she also have a dark secret attached to her. no one knows abt that yet. ANAMIKA-she is a beautiful woman,she is not human. no one can see her without special power or without past connections with her. she had a tragedic past with jeet. she still longs for him.

was it that bad?? huh. no likes,no comment.