PuNir OS LOVE for LIFE

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PuNir [Purvi+Onir] One Shot

Characters:- Purvi & Onir

Theme:- PuNir Happy Love Story In Kolkata

Purvi moved to Kolkata 8 months ago to lead a happy life but life wasn't easy for her all this months. She struggled hard to find all the happiness she deserves. She was very lucky that she got Dr. Onir Dutt who loves her like anything probably more than his life. Purvi saw the simplicity, kindness, affectionate for her since their first meeting. Since then they are together leaving behind their past cause they trust & respect each other more than anything. All these months Onir discovered that his lady loves surprises.

Onir reached home around 7:30 pm on evening from clinic which surprised Purvi cause he usually returns home around 10:00 PM

Purvi, "Onir are you okay"

Onir, "Mishti, I am fine, please serve food fast, I am tired need to take rest"

Purvi on her usual concerned tone told

Him not to take so much stress and told him if he falls ill who ll treat his patients. He couldn't admire her seeing so much concern for him.

After dinner around 9 pm they slept on bed room. When Purvi on her fast sleep, Onir went to hall room and decorated it with flowers, balloons, and all other stuffs necessary for a perfect set up to celebrate his lady's BIRTHDAY. He also brought a chocolate cake, and Mishti's favorite Rosgulla.

At 11: 58 He called Purvi on her phone and she was surprised not to find Onir on bed. She quickly moved towards hall room. As soon as she step on the room at sharp 12, Onir Switched on all lights and Purvi got so delighted to see the arrangements that is undescribable and Onir loves her like that.

He slowly moved close to Purvi and whispered on her ear on soft romantic tone "Mishti, Happy Birthday" Purvi was feeling so cool at that moment. Both cut the cake holding each other's hands. Purvi feed Onir a piece of the cake so does Onir. Onir promised Purvi to spend whole day together as he has taken e day off to spend some quality times with his lady and share the day plan with her. She was listening this enthusiastically.

Then they danced on 'pehli nazar' slowly She hugged Onir tightly and felt the warmth of his body. Getting the response from Purvi, Onir cuped her face and looked into her eyes deeply. Slowly he lowered his face and her heartbeat started moving face but she was enjoying the heavenly moments so does Onir. Their breath was touching their face. Onir lowered his face a bit and their lips were touching now. He kissed her lower lip and she kissed his upper lips. They continued the kiss few minutes leaving the night behind them on each other's love.

They are sure that they are soul mate for life. They are meant for each other.

Edited by -Yaariyan- - 12 years ago

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sherma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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suoerb,wow first punir os.excellent,pld dowrite mre,and pm me whnevr u write mre
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sherma

suoerb,wow first punir os.excellent,pld dowrite mre,and pm me whnevr u write mre

thanks for liking. ll pm you if i write more
Sakhile thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet story. Purvi's birthday wa snever celebrated in the show, so this is a really nice touch!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow this is so romantic...❤️
loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dont really follow up PR. Bt ur os is just so beautifully written. Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakhile

Sweet story. Purvi's birthday wa snever celebrated in the show, so this is a really nice touch!

I JUST WANTED TO WRITE SOMETHING ON THEM THATS WHY
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PuvZ

Dont really follow up PR. Bt ur os is just so beautifully written. Loved it.

wow thanks Puv dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Never follow PR but loved your story dear😛👏

Angel is Thinking


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sipokobusak

wow this is so romantic...❤️
loved it..

thanks a lot dear

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