Arhi FF: Humesha...~Chapter TWO~ UP...cmplt

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PROLOGUE:

After the kidnapping scene Khushi tells everyone about Shyam and what a lowly scum he is but no one believes except NK, Arnav and Payal as she didn't have any evidences. Mami calls Khushi a characterless girl and a gold digger, as she at first tried to trap Shyam and now has Arnav wrapped around her fingers.

Arnav: ENOUGH!! I won't tolerate anyone speaking against my wife...I believe her as I know that she's speaking the truth, and this scumbag (points towards Shyam) is going out of my house...
Arnav starts pushing Shyam out of the house.

Anjali: Chote...ruk jao...yeh tum kya kar rahe ho...yeh tumhare jija ji hai aur tum aaj iss ladki ke liye (points towards Khushi) inhe ghar se dhake maar kar nikaalna chahte ho...Hume sharam aati hai tumhe apna bhai kahete huye...(crying)...Tum humare chotte nahi ho sakte...tum sirf iss ladki k pati ho bas..
Anjali starts to feel dizzy but Arnav and Khushi hold her so that she doesn't fall...but she shrugs them off.

Arnav: Di..please...just listen to me...

Anjali:(just pushes him away)...Dur raho humse...Tum humare bhai nahi ho...You are just your father's son...He to left mom for another woman and today you to are supporting the another woman in your Di's life...Nafrat hai hume tumse..aur tumhari iss biwi se...At first she tried to snatch my husband but couldn't so she trapped you instead...and you got so blind in your love ki tum apne jija ji ke upar aise ilzaam...Chi!!!

Arnav is really broken listening to Anjali..his Di...his mother...hating him...He just couldn't bear the truth...Khushi couldn't see the love of her life broken like that...She got angry on the RAIZADA'S as they didn't support Arnav when Anjali was hurling those bitter words at him...And mostly she was angry on Anjali..as to how she can say those things to her chotte.

Khusi: BAS!!! Aap log samajhte kya hai apne aap?? Aaj aap sab ne uss insaan ka saath chod diya jisne aap sab ka humesha saath diya..jiske karaan aap sab aaj aise aalishaan zindagi bitaa rahe hai...Main ek anaath hu...aur maine humesha parivaar wale ke liye tarsa hai...lekin agar parivaar wale aap jaise hote hai...toh main bhagwaan ji ko shukhriya karti hu ki unhone mujhe anath paida kiya...Zara dikhiye Arnavji ki haalat...aur yeh sab ke zimmesaar aap log hai...Aap sab ko mujhse pareshaani hai...toh main jaa rahi hu...aur shayad waqt ke saath saath aap sab ko sahi aur galat me farq pata chal jayega...
Khushi leaves RM..

Outside:
Arnav: K..Khu..shi..i..(Khushi turms back hearing Arnav's voice...and she's shocked to see his condition...he looks like a broken, dejected man)

Khushi: Arnavji..yeh aap...yaha?? Aap please jaiye aur aaram kijiye..aapki haalat thik nahi hai...

Arnav: Please Khushi...mujhe chodke mat jao...main bhi tumhare saath chalunga...hum kahi sur chale jayenge..inn sab se door...I can't stay with them...They hate me...Please Khushi..I Love You...(Khushi is shocked to hear his confession)..Ha Khushi...main tumse bahut pyaar karta hu...Don't leve me..(Arnav goes down on his knees begging her)

Khushi: Nahi Arnavji...hum bhi aapse bahut pyaar karte hai...aap hume jaha le jayenge hum wahi chalenge...aur aap kabhi humare saamne aise gidgidayiga mat...ASR ko shobha nahi deta...(Khushi says to lighten the mood...she wipes his tears...kisses his cheek...and Arnav gives her a cute baby smile)

Arnav and Khushi just vanish from the lives of the RAIZADA'S...But only after giving Anjali and Akash their shares and promising NK that they'll be in touch with him alwayss...as he's the only one who supported them in times of need.

NOTE: Khushi is an orphan. Payal is not her sister but after marriage she becomes her best friend...So she knows everything about Shyam as Khushi told her everything.

Guyzz...I have always been a silent reader...but i just tried writing something...idk if itz good, bad or just plain pathetic...but plizz do tell me how it is so that i can continue...

Prologue: page1 (up)
Character Sketch: page1 (scroll down)
Chapter One: page2
Chapter Two: page2


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Posted: 12 years ago
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You know what ! This awesome !
I'm sure in coming this will be a popular Story !!
I'm egarly waiting for it ! Guess me the first reader!!
Need any help let me know I'll be at your service !!
Love
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update yar loved it😊
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Thank u guyzz...it def means alot 2me...also thnkzz diva alot 4ur support...😃😃
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nice plot...

continue soon

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CHARACTER SKETCH

Arnav Singh Raizada: 30yrs old and co-owner of AK Designs..Ruthless, arrogant and egoistic to the whole world except his life who is his wife, his little sister and his three close friends...Can do anything for his wife and sister...They are his everything.

Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada: 26yrs old and co-owner of AK Designs..Full of life and a modern woman..Can do anything for her husband and princess...She is a little
Mrs. ASR but only for those whom she doesnt like and those who try to harm her family and friends.

Ria Singh Raizada: 21yrs old and sister of Arnav and Arshi's little princess...Is a bubbly, chirpy and fun loving girl but mature ..and also a pampered sister of The ASR...he can't say no to her..She has a bitter past (which will be revealed later) which connects her to Arnav and Khushi.

Dhruv Singhania: 26yrs old and the owner of Singhania group of industries..His a very calm and sweet person...His a very close friend of Arnav and Khushi..

NK (Nandkishore): 27yrs old and same as the serial...Is in a relationship with Lavanya since past a year...He is more of a friend to Arnav and Khushi than a brother..He's Ria's best friend.

Lavanya Kashyap: 26yrs old..Sweet and lovely girl...She was Arnav's ex but now evrything is normal between them..She's Khushi's best friend and also Arnav's close friend.

The Raizada's: Same as the serial but not that understanding except Payal.
Edited by gudiyanrani143 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohh ! I love it !

See Again me First ! :D

Well I loved the concept
You know the concept is like one of my story

Strong Love !

But yea it's quite different !

Will be waiting for Chap1 !

I'm at your service if you need any help !

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Really interesting one..

Cont, soon..

N do pm me when u update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter One

After two years:

It's a beautiful Sunday morning in London and a couple is shown sleeping while hugging each other. The girl is sleeping holding the man and has kept her face at the crook of his neck while the man is sleeping on his stomach possessively holding the girl and has buried his head at the side of her neck in her hairs. The girl and the man are none other than Arnav and Khushi and due to Arnav's tight hold Khushi is not able to turn properly thus waking up Arnav.
Arnav wakes up to a most beautiful site ever, as he see's his baby, his life trying to turn and snuggle more into him. He just smiles looking at her and loosens his grip while his baby turns around and hides her face in his chest holding him around his waist tightly, promising to never let him go.

Arnav: (caressing her face)...Baby..jaana get up..(no response)..baby..
Khushi: (snuggles more into him)..tsk...hmmm...
Arnav: (chuckles lightly)...aww...my cute angel..plizz wake up naa baby...aaj Sunday hai so abhi thodi hi der me sab aajayenge..(kisses her forehead)..pliz ma jaana wake up..
Khushi: (irritably)...tsk..kya hai Arnuu...sone do naa!!

Khushi leaves him and digs her face in the pillow.

Arnav: Mrs. KASR...if you don't wake up this instant it'll be bad for you..

Khushi ignores him and continues sleeping and Arnav gives a devilish grin and starts tickling her..

Khushi:..aahh..Arnav leave me..(starts laughing)..please..please..m a..wa..awake..no.ww..(still laughing)..ple..as.e..naa...babyyy...

While rolling on the bed Arnav gets on top of Khushi and stops tickling her...He grabs her both hands at her sides and allows her to catch her breath...

Khushi:(after catching her breath)(angry😔😔)..Mr.ASR...get of me this instant..
Arnav: No...
Khushi: (shocked..audicity of this mahn)..excuse me...if you can't see..m already wide awake because of you so if could please move..so that I can freshen up..
Arnav: What yaar jaana?? I woke you up so that I can spend some time with you before our stupid friends come but you wanna go..but sorry to say, i won't leave you...
Khushi: Whatever!!! m still angry on you..

Arnav starts giving her small wet kisses all over her face while mumbling I love you to her i between and then shows her the most innocent puppy dog eyes and Khushi instantly melts..

Khushi: aww...ma bacha..I love you too...(gives him a sweet yet passionate kiss on his lips)
Arnav: woww..that's a great start for the day..(winks at her)..acha baby you and get freshened up while i just wake up princess...abhi dekhna..wo bhi uthne me natak karegi..(frowning)..you two have really become spoilt...
Khushi: Ab what to do...we have a man in our life who loves and pampers us alot..and he's our best man...and if you gotta problem with that..sorry but we can not do anything about it...

Arnav then goes to wake up his princess.

Arnav: Princess...(caressing her head)..wake up..
Ria: hmm...bhai..
Arnav: Princess...uth jaa na bacha..your bhabz is already up..aur thode hi der me sab aajayenge..
Ria: (whines)..tsk bhai..(keeps her head on his lap and sleeps holding his waist)
Arnav: (makes a sad face)..mera princess apni bhai ki baat nai manega..??
Ria: Bhai!!!...not fair..(starts whining)..you're just plainly blackmailing me...jao main aapse baat nai karti..(jumps of the bed)

Before she escapes, Arnav holds her wrist, pulls her and makes her sit on his lap.

Arnav: My bacha got angry..(Ria doesn't look at him)..acha see m holding my ears..m sorry princess..but you were not getting up naa...(Ria still pretending to be angry)..how about we'll go to your favourite ice-cream parlour after dinner??
Ria: Promise??
Arnav: Gentleman's promise..

Both start laughing.

Arnav: Acha go and freshen up..we'll meet at the breakfast table..

Breakfast table

Ria: Good morning bhabz..(hugs her and kisses her cheeks)
Khushi: Good morning princess..bhai ne subha subha neend bigaad di??
Arnav: What is with you to yaar?? Wo log bas aate..(door bell rings)..lo aagaye..

Arnav glares at them and both of them start laughing. A servant opens the door and in enters..NK, Lavanya and Dhruv..Nk and La seemed excited whereas Dhruv seemed highly irritated..

Khsuhi: Hy guyzz...what's up?? And Dhruv what's wrong..why do u seem angry??
Dhruv: Well Khush m angry because this dumbo (points towards NK)..woke me up so early and isn't even telling me the reason..
Khushi: Chill yaar..come and sit..

Everybody sits down for breakfast.

NK: Guys we need to tell you something..(everyone gives a go on look)..our marriage date has been finalised..(everyone looks shocked)..guyss...hello..say something..

Khushi: OMG..ssly?? M soo happy for both of you..(hugs them tightly)
Arnav: Congtratz guys..really happy for you..(hugs them)
Dhruv: Stupid..idiot..pahele nai bata sakta tha..khamaka tere me gussa ho gaya..anyway..Congratulations...
Ria: Seriously NK bhai..you're getting married..oohh...m sooo excited..(kisses both of them on the cheeks and hugs them)

Arnav: So guys...when's the big day??
Lavanya: Actually shaasi ki date 2 weeks baad ki hai..
K & R: What?? are you serious??
Khushi: La swity..itne kam waqt me yeh sab kaise hoga??
Lavanya: Tu hai naa yaar..I know you'll manage..and by the way..the wedding is at Maldives..
Everyone except La and NK: WHAT!!!

Arnav: So when do we have to leave??
Nk: A day after tommoro..
Dhruv: Guyzz yaar..now we have to wrap up our work and that to in two dayss..
Arnav: Exactly..and we have to be fast..
Khushi: Don't worry guyss..we know you'll manage..How about you guys go and wrap up your work while we make list of things we need to do at the wedding..because the guest list i gues is prepared by aunty and uncle i guess..(both NK and La nod)..great so we only need to focus on shopping, catering, and the rituals.
Arnav: You guyss carry on..we are leaving for work..
Ria: Bhai atleast have your breakfast.

After breakfast guys leave for their work while girls make list of things.
Like this only their two days are spent and the day to leave for Maldives has arrived.

PRECAP: Arhi and the gang to meet the Raizada's..(are they still the same or have changed???)

GUYZZ...plizzz do comment and like it...and do share your views abt this ff so that i can improvise it..and mke it up2 ur expectations..
Love
Doll
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thanks...great job...please update sooon and pm me when you do update

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