OS: A Game Of Wits - Page 3

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

oye tu yaha bhi aa gayi..
chal pad kar edit karti hu...


first of all tere post ke sath mai yellow ho gayi..😆😆😆
second nice one..
mad eye moody.. haaye i miss harry potter like hell even if it is over...
outside wali enimity aur inside fraandship..
loved the thing which "they don't know"...😊

Congratulations on going green Mannu🤗
Hah, I understand your feelings about Harry Potter.😆
Yup they have a twisted equation. Bahar se kuch, andar se kuch aur😆

Originally posted by: sonnal_17

beautiful OS...really it was mind blowing and so cute...and pls continue this one...pls pls...thx 👏

Hey thanks for the review, but sorry yaar, this is supposed to be a OS, and I haven't thought of this story more than that

Originally posted by: deepak148

hey nice os dear and welcome to mb forum, i didn't like the end, because i will love to see it as ss if u want to continue and pm me

Thankyou but continuing erm I am not sure

Originally posted by: punam2712

CONGRATS ON YOUR ENTRY IN MADHUBALA

AWESOME STORY

DOES IT HAVE MORE PARTS

Thanks Punam, no it doesn't have more parts.

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

WOW! Welcome! What an OS! So creative and within their conversation, you see the different shades in both Madhu's and Rk's character. Very very well written! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Thank you for the wonderful os. I would wish you continue it if you possibly can! Congrats on a great OS! 👏

Thank you so much for the review girl. I am glad that you observed the nuances in their characters. I am not sure about continuing this particular piece but I would come up with more OS on Madhu RK. Thank you again for your response

Originally posted by: Licyabhingya

oh god... you brought this story to life... you painted this picture so vividly with your words, i could almost see the images in my head...
plz continue coz i would love to read more of it!
You are an amazing writer!
pm me if you continue

Thank you so much for the review but I am afraid I don't have anything in my mind for continuation of this particular story. Sowwiiee

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

This is so well written! It is awesome! You wrote about her life till now and probably the most important moment of her life. *sighs* And the game! It is brilliant! Like so good! It resembled their relationship so well!

Yes, it is an important moment of her life, when she is in search of something dear and parts with something dearer. Glad you liked it :)[

QUOTE=EverGirl]Omg.. Awsome story.. Can you please please pretttyyy pleaaase continue the story.. :D I'm totally hooked.. :D p.s.. Your a GREAT writer.. :)

Thanks for the review, but sorry man there's no continuation for this story

Originally posted by: amrithas

Oh! Its beautiful! Please do continue it as SS!

Thanks man, but sorry I really don't have anything in my head for this story so it would be a OS only :(

Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago