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hey guys here is your cutie with a brand new and interesting update! sorry sorry guys! i know it is very late update but i am very sorry! - kyun aisa hi kehti na aap logon ki cutie?

but unfortunately or fortunately mai aap logon ki cutie nahi hoon, mai aapki cutie ka boyfriend aditya hoon! i know you guys will be surprised ki aaj hamaari cutie ke jagah uska boyfriend kahaan se aa gaya! actually guys you all know that hum ek function ke liye dehradoon gaye the!

mai aur aditi wahaan par maze kar rahe the! actually use pata nahi tha ki mai bhi wahaan aa raha hoon! isliye maine use ek surprise diya! uski tabiyat abhi bohot kharab hai! actually function wale din ek ladki ne mujhe dance ke liye poocha! mai to jaana nahi chahta tha but usne bohot kaha to mai chala gaya!

ab aap logon ki cutie bohot gussa ho gayi! aur jab wo gussa, sad, happy ya teary hoti hai to chocolate ya phir icecream kha jaati hai n as it was a function wo poore 45 CUPS OF ICE CREAM kha gayi! can you guys imagine 45 cups of icecream in one go!

behna(taareeyforever) aur saali sahiba(rakhiankita) please jab aapki aditi wapas aaye na bohot daantna! koi aisa karta hai kya? agar mujhse gussa hai mujhe punishment de, apne aapko takleef kyun diya? use samajhme nahi aata ki chot use lagti hai aur dard mujhe hota hai! aisa bhi koi karta hai kya?

aap log bhi daantna! wo to abhi bhi bed rest me hai! sorry in dino mai bhi uska khayal rakhne me busy tha! wo theek se rest le rahi hai ki nahi, uski medicines, uska khana-peena!

wo to abhi thodi si theek hui hai bas thodi si! to request karne lagi ki please maine kabse apni stories update nahi ki hai, so maine kaha ki mai update kar doonga!

waise girls ye update bohot hi long hai kyunki ise aditi ne two parts me divide kiya tha par mere kehne par ek hi part me badal diya! so iss long update ka credit mujhko jaata hai par likha to usne hai isliye credit hum dono ka!

waise maine suna hai yahaan pe meri bohot saari saaliyan hai! hmm to ye do char din aapko mujhse hi kaam chalana padega! jab aapki cutie poori tarah se theek ho jaayegi tabhi wo yahaan aa sakti hai! sorry girls i can't help it! pyaar karta hoon usse! aur uska khayal rakhna meri zimmedaari hai! ok ye lo update! here you go-

PART 13: FEELINGS!

'Feelings', sun ne me kitna short and sweet lagta hai na! par I know iss shabd ko sunke aap sabke man me alag-alag thoughts aayi hongi!

Feelings kayi tarah ki hoti hain lekin har feeling se juda ek rishta hota hai! Aap sabke man me bhi kisi special ke baare me khayal aaye honge!

Of course it can be anyone! Par aapka unke saath ek rishta hoga! Un rishton ke saath judi kayi yaadein hongi! Kuch acchi aur kuch boori!

Un rishton se judi kayi feelings aisi hoti hain jinhe hum kabhi uss person ke saath ya fir kisi ke bhi saath share nahi kar paate! Wo baat dil me hi reh jaati hain! Hum wo feelings dil me nahi rakh sakte!

Isiliye hum aksar akele me apne aapse baatein karte hain! Mai bhi karti hoon aur duniya ka har insaan karta hai! Usi tarah meri iss story me bhi kuch aisa hi chal raha hai! Chaliye mai aap sabko unke paas le chalti hoon! Aakhir pata to chale unke man me chal kya raha hai! Let's go!

Taayam reached home! Swayam was surprised because the home was decorated with flowers and lightings!

Swayam- taani, ye sab tumne kiya hai?

Taani- aur nahi to kaun karega ye sab? Aaj raksha bandhan hai na so maine socha aap ko surprise doon!

Swayam hugged her- aww! Thanks!

Taani broke the hug- abhi surprises baaki hain!

Swayam- kya hai? Batao na taani please!

Taani- ahan! Just wait and watch! Accha abhi aap ready ho jayiye! Mai bhi jaati hoon!

Swayam- okay!

Taayam went to their rooms!

Hmm so pehla kaun hai?


Arey ye to humaari taani hai! Chaliye iski baatein sunte hain!

Taani went and kept her bag on the table and lay on the bed. She was very tired today. She closed her eyes and she saw rey close to her. Then she saw her first kiss and that too with her prince charming.

She opened her eyes. Her eyes were twinkling. The same twinkle which was lost very long ago. The same twinkle with which she came to Mumbai.

Same twinkle which was only to get her prince charming, to win his heart. The same eyes again holding dreams in it. There was smile on her lips.

The same smile which always played on her lips. The same smile which was always there when she was close to her prince charming.The same smile which was lost when he rejected her.

In these days, many things happened with her. She went through many difficulties which she had never thought in her worst dreams. In these days she lost herself.

She is not the real taani which she was used to. She was never like this! She remembered how she was being teased by her friends and even bhai that she is "miss jodhpur" because she was a full on chatterbox.

And now she hardly even talks. She was thinking how she changed so much. She was thinking more and talking less. If her friends would be here then they will not recognize this taani.

But what happened today was just next to impossible for her. Because she never thought that after the rejection she will never get her prince charming.

She didn't kissed her back. It was a moment when time stopped. She felt as if she could stay like this forever but she feared if it is dream then she will not be able to bear.

But the question is why did he did that? Does he loves her? But how? He rejected her. Taani frustrated got up and stood in front of the mirror. She saw her swollen lips.

She touched them with her hand and closed her eyes as if she can feel his lips on them now even. But she came to her senses. She composed herself even if no one was there. She again started looking at herself in the mirror.

Taani to herself- theek thak dikhti hoon! Poora jodhpur kehta tha ki mai beautiful hoon! Intelligent to hoon hi! Poore jodhpur me top kiya tha maine! Awaaz bhi acchi hai!

log bolte hain mai bohot kind aur caring hoon aur mere paas sone ka dil hai! n sabse badi baat mere dil me unke liye bohot pyaar hai! jab bhi unko meri zarurat padi mai unke liye haazir thi! isse zyada ek ladke ko ek ladki se aur kya expectations honi chahiye?

To phir kyun nahi kar sakte rey mujhse pyaar? Shaayad ho sakta hai rey abhi bhi kriya se pyaar karte ho! Par aaj jo hua wo kyun hua? Kya unko mujhse pyaar ho gaya hai? kya aisa ho sakta hai?(with twinkle in her eyes)

Her bubble appeared- of course ho sakta hai taani! unhone aaj tujhe kiss kiya n uss din rehearsal hall me jo hua tha bhool gayi kya? Haan unhe tujhse pyaar ho gaya hai!

Taani looking at the bubble- sach keh rahi ho tum?

Bubble- mai to tumhari parchayi hoon, dil ki awaaz hoon! Koi apne apse bhi jhooth bolta hai kya? Jhalli kahinki! Hey Krishna ji iss ladki ka kuch karo!

Taani- chup kar! Hey Krishna ji thank you!(very happy) lekin agar ye sach nahi hua to? Mai phir se wo sab nahi dekh sakti! Hey Krishna ji please iss baar aisa mat karna! Mai aaj hi mauka dekhkar rey se pooch loongi ki aakhirkar unhone aisa kyun kiya! Haan! Ab mai aisa hi karungi!

Bubble- oh taani ji! Come out of your dreamland! Tum to sahi ki rey ki deewani nikli! Aaj raksha bandhan hai aur phir bhi tum bhai ke bare me sochne ke bajaye apne prince charming ke bare me soch rahi ho!

Taani- ab mai apne prince charming ki deewani nahi banungi to kiski banungi? N ek minute! Tune bhai ko bhai kaise bulaya?(shocked angry)

Bubble- kaise kya kaise? Dekh aise bhai!

Taani- uggh! Tu bhai ko bhai nahi bula sakti!

Bubble- kyun? Wo mere bhi to bhai hain na!

Taani- nahi! Wo sirf mere bhai hain n don't you dare to call him bhai again! Samjhi!

Bubble- haan haan theek hai! samajh gayi mai! Protective and possessive sister! Tu apne bhai se bohot pyaar karti hai na?

Taani- ye bhi koi poochne wali baat hai? of course! Mai unse itnaaa pyaaar karti hoon!(she twirled with her arms showing the quantity of the love and she falls down) ouch!(stand ups)

Bubble- tera kuch nahi ho sakta!

Taani- sorry! Aur ab to tujhe pata chal hi gaya hoga ki mai bhai se kitna pyaar karti hoon! Wo mere life me sabse important person hain mere liye!

Pata hai jab mere saath koi nahi tha tab maine sirf bhai ko apne side me paaya! Unhone mere life ke har ups and downs me mera saath diya! Mera khayal rakha!

Jab meri aansuon ki kisiko kadra nahi thi tab unhone mere aansu pooche aur mujhe smile karna sikhaya!(sighs) arey! Bhai se yaad aaya! Mere gifts!(little bit excited, little bit worried)

Bubble- gifts?

Taani- haan wo, iss baar main na bhai ko ek nahi balki ek se zyada gifts doongi!

Bubble- sacchi?

Taani- mucchi!(winks with both eyes) pata hai ye raksha bandhan ab takka best raksha bandhan hoga hum dono ke liye! Har baar wo mujhe surprises dete the iss baar mai unhe doongi! Mazaa aayega!

Bubble- mazaa to aayega!

Taani- accha ab tu jaa! Mujhe taiyaar hona hai!(blows away the bubble)

So guys ye thi hamaari taani! bilkul jhalli hai! but cute hai! matlab cutely weird! Iski iss heart full smile ko maine kitna miss kiya! Hey Krishna ji hamaari taani ko hamesha aise hi rakhiyega! She is perfect! Not so mature not so bubbly! Perfect combination!

Accha accha! Abhi doosre person ke paas jaate hain! Hmm so guess kaun hai! ab apne dimaag ko itna zor mat dijiye! Chaliye hum sab khud hi dekh lete hain!


So pehchana? Of course pehchan liya hoga! After all hamaara hero rey jo hai! chaliye ab iski baatein sunte hain!

Rey went to his home! All the way he was thinking what happened today in the store room! His car stopped in a halt in front of his home! He sighed and climbed down the car!

He straightly went to his room! He threw his mobile on the bed and sat down his face in his hands! After sometime he moved his hands in his hair! He was looking very tensed, confused and happy yet sad!

All the emotions were clearly visible on his face! He couldn't understand what is happening in his life! There was a time when he was a simple handsome guy whose life was very cool and now his life and even he himself has become complicated!

He was never like this! He was very happy and full of life! He himself and his life has changed a lot! 'love' yes love changed his life! From the time kriya entered into his life everything changed in his life!

Love was always complicated for him! Kriya! When she entered his life he felt as if the thing he was searching for he found it! She came like a strong breeze which filled him up and his heart with love!

her big eyes, her charming smile, her passion for dance, her bindass character, her will power everything attracted him towards her! Yes he was in love!

he was going to tell her that day! He was so happy! But he left her! She broke all his dreams! She took away him with her! She told that she never loved him! She only used him!

He was shattered! His world fell down that moment! His friends tried to make him smile and keep him happy! He was all alone! Then taani came in his life! she came like a sunshine, like a new ray of hope!

He didn't even realized when she started to heal, to mend his broken heart! Unknowingly she again taught him how to smile, how to be happy, how to enjoy your life fully and especially how to love again!

To love his friends, to love his parents, to love his life, to love himself and with that to love someone else very special and unknowingly to him his heart chose her as that special one!

Her cute weird antics, her saying Krishna ji, her falling down while twirling in happiness, her deep brown eyes, her sweet smile, her tears, her pain everything made him fall in love with her! Her sweet charming smile which can make smile anyone!

Her pain, her tears which can make even the god feel guilty that why did he gave pain to her! Her eyes in which anyone can go and dive his whole life! guys well in the diving case only hamaara hero rey haan! Mai kisi aur ko bardasht nahi kar sakti taani ke aankhon me doobe hue!

But then she confessed her love for him! His heart was still in the pain of the betrayal but still it was shouting say yes! Say yes! But his mind didn't agree with his heart!

He rejected her and that to very harshly because inside him there was a war going on between his heart and mind! He himself was frustrated because of this fight!

But when he cooled down her tears, her pain, her avoiding him started affecting him and he realized his mistake! He shouldn't have shouted at her! She only confessed her love for him!

There was nothing wrong! Anyone can fall in love with anyone at any place, at any time! He became soft towards her! Then that article! She was so much in pain, she was having tears in her eyes!

Seeing all this his heart, his every cell was in pain! He was thinking how the hell the god can be so harsh to her! He fought not for her but for himself as he can't see those tears in her eyes! Her pain was unbearable for him!

And when she bandaged his hand, he got lost in her care for him! But when she announced that she is in a relationship he didn't even knew why he felt a pang of pain in his heart!

He felt like leaving this world and go to somewhere with her where no one is around to take her from him! But when he thought that nothing can be worse than this, the worst came! It was announced that she was in a relationship with shivam!

He was speechless! He went blank! When he held her hand and took her from there, he felt like just beating him up and taking away her and claim to the world that she is only his! When the days were passing it was going difficult for him!

When he saw them talking, him making her laugh, having lunch together, he felt like why he is still alive to see all this! And when in the dance camp he kissed her, he felt like killing him!

He was feeling like happiest ever man on the earth when she broke up with him! Things were going well between them but that dance ban came in between! He realized now only that how much he hurt her saying those hurtful words!

The rasiya scene was flashing in front of his eyes! How pure and full of love it was! Then she said that he used her! He was hurt and he took out all the anger on her!

Now when he saw shivam kissing her, it made his anger froth! Thank god he is only his 'best friend' not 'boyfriend'. Well now he knows that he loves her and he also knows that she loves him too!

But he also knows that he had hurt her very much! She might reject him like he did! But she loves him then why she will reject him! Oh god! So many thoughts were coming in his mind!

Rey- hey taani ke Krishna ji! Aap hamesha taani ki help karte ho aaj meri bhi kar do! Mai aaj taani ko apni dil ki baat kehne jaa raha hoon! Aap bas ek haan dilwa do uski taraf se!

Please itna kar do! I promise mai phir kabhi taani ko nahi daantunga! Kabhi uski aankhon me aansu nahi aane doonga! Pakka promise! but please, please ek yes dilwa do!

Accha agar taani ne yes keh diya to mai aapko bohot makkhan lagaunga! Uh I mean makkhan chadhaunga! Aur makkhan ke saath dahi free! Bas taani maan jaaye!

Rey's heart appeared- arey kyun nahi maanegi? Of course maanegi! Arey tu to girls ka heart throb hai! girls tere peeche bhaagti hain! So taani bhi maan jaayegi!

Rey- oh hello! Taani un baaki girls jaisi nahi hai ok! Wo to bohot different hai!(lost in taani dreamland)

Heart- oh hello! Mr. reyaansh singhania! Humaari taani ke dreamland se bahar aao!

Rey- uff! Chain se sapne bhi nahi dekh sakta! N wait a minute! Tune taani ko humaari kaha?(shocked angry)

Heart- haan! Of course! Actually mujhe meri kehna chahiye tha as taani mere andar rehti hai! so she is mine!(lost in taani dreamland)

Rey- aye! Khabardar jo taani ko apni kaha to! She is only mine! Understand!

Heart- arey kyun? Mai to tumhara hi heart hoon na n manners nahi seekhe kya? Sharing is caring dude! Kabhi meri care nahi ki! Jab dekho mere khilaf jaake taani ko reject kiya, use hurt kiya! Tum kabhi meri sunte kahaan ho? Kabhi mere bare me bhi socha karo! Mujhe bhi dard hota hai!

Rey- sorry dude! Kaash maine tumhari baat maani hoti to aaj taani meri baahon mai hoti! Abse mai tumhari care karoonga! N for your kind information taani ke mamle me no manners! Understand! So no sharing! Taani is only mine n dare you call her yours!(shooting murderous glares)

Heart- okay, okay! Take it easy man! She is only yours! Well you are being so possessive! Hmm so possessive and protective boyfriend! Not bad!

Rey- ya thanks! Well I am so happy that she liked that cake!

Heart- oh ya! Maan na padega haan! Pehli baar me itna tasty cake! Well shaadi ke baad to taani hi cook karegi! You don't have to cook anymore!

Rey- arey meri taani kya har waqt kaam karti rahegi? Use bhi to rest milna chahiye na! so kabhi kabhi mai bhi cook kar loonga! She is my princess you know!

N jab taani pregnant hogi tab mai use bilkul bhi kitchen mai ghusne nahi doonga! Kitchen to door ki baat, mai use ghar ka koi bhi kaam nahi karne doonga!

Saara kaam mai hi karoonga! Kapda, bartan n I know use saaf safai kitni pasand hai so jhadu-pocha bhi mai hi karoonga!

Heart- woah, woah! Arey ye shaadi n pregnancy ki baatein kahaan se aa gayi! Pehle propose to kar le n sabse badi baat ye jo tere shaadi ke baad ke sapne hain na wo taani ki haan ya na pe depend karta hai! so agar usne na keh diya to tere sapne to toot jaayenge!

Rey- kaisa dil hai tu? Positive bolne ke jagah pe negative bol raha hai! but you are right! Agar na bol diya to(shudders at the thought) to kya? Maine kaha tha na ki jabardasti shaadi kar loonga!

Heart- idea bura nahi hai but tu ye sab karega kaise? I mean dekh uska bhai bhi to hoga na!

Rey- dekh it is very simple! Pehle to mai raat ko uske kamre mai jaaunga! Aur phir meri sleeping beauty ke muh par chloroform se bhara roomal rakh doonga!

N phir use uthakar gaadi tak le jaaunga! Phir mai use lekar kahin paas wale mandir chala jaaunga n jab tak wo uthegi marriage ki saari preparations ho chuki hongi!

Mai use bolunga phere lene ke liye! Agar wo maan gayi to theek hai warna uska haath pakadkar jabardasti phere le lunga! N phir honeymoon ke liye hum kahin door jaayenge!

N honeymoom manane ke baad mai wapas aa jaaunga! Aur shaadi ke baad swayam ko hume accept karna hi padega!

Heart- okay plan accha hai! but agar raat ko swayam jaaga hua ho to?

Rey- aye swayam koi bull dog thodi na hai jo raat bhar chaukidaari karta phire! N waise bhi raat ko use Sharon ke sapne dekhne hote hain! So no chance ki swayam jaag raha ho!

Heart- okay! Lekin agar shaadi ke baad bhi swayam nahi maana to?

Rey- kitna negative sochta hai tu! N swayam mujhe kyun nahi accept karega? I mean accha khasa handsome dikhta hoon! Insaan bhi accha hoon! Mere dil yaani tujhme koi mail(kachra) nahi hai! khud kama bhi sakta hoon!

N sabse badi baat uski behen se itna pyaar karta hoon! Uski behen ko hamesha khush rakhoonga! N isse zyada kya chahiye ek bhai ko apni behen ke liye? Agar phir bhi nahi maana to best friend banke emotional torture! N wo bhi nahi kaam kiya to uske pairon pe gir jaaunga!

Heart- kitna gira hua insaan hai tu!

Rey- WHAT!!!

Heart- no no! I mean ki tu ye sab abhi kyun soch raha hai? pehle tu propose to kar n taani ka jawab to sunle! Uske baad ye sab plan karna!

Rey- wo kya hai na meri DS kehti thi ki beta hamesha door ki sochni chahiye!

Heart- ye DS kaun hai?

Rey- kaisa dil hai tu? Tujhe mere bare mai kuch pata bhi hai ya nahi! DS means daadi saheb! Well wo to ab iss duniya me nahin hai but unki blessings mere saath hain! N wo mera saath zaroor dengi taani ko apni dil ki baat kehne me!

Heart- haan! Daadi sahib to hamesha tumhare saath rahengi!

Rey+heart- (looking at the sky from the window) DS we miss you!

Rey- accha tu abhi ja! Mujhe ready hone de! Uske baad mujhe propose karne ke liye practice bhi to karna hai!(blows him off)

Rey takes out his dress for the party from the cupboard n again looks at the sky.

Rey- hey DS! Aaj mai taani ko yaani aapke pote ki hone waali biwi ko apni dil ki baat kehne jaa raha hoon, mujhe good luck wish nahi karoge?

In the sky a star brightens more. Rey closes his eyes and a soft breeze blows! He enjoys it with his closed eyes! he slowly opens his eyes n saw a shooting star! He again closes his eyes n makes a wish! A wish to win his taani's heart! He opens his eyes!

Rey- thanks DS! Ab aapki wish mere saath hai na! dekhna mai apni taani ka dil jeet kar rahoonga! Usko apni banakar rahoonga!(winks at the star)

The star also seemed like winking back! Rey goes to change for the party!

So ye tha hamaara rey! Oops! Taani ka rey! Romeo, majnu, aashik, awara! Wo to in sabse kahin zyada hai! maan na padega haan! Kya planning hai taani ko bhagake shaadi karne ki!

N yaar he so sweet! Ghar ka kaam bhi karne ko taiyaar hai! bhagwan kare iske jaisa life partner har ladki ko miley! Waise wo sab chodo!

Hamaara rey bohot bada kaam karne jaa raha hai! arey taani ko propose karne jaa raha hai! good luck wish nahi karoge? Jaldi wish kardo jaise uski DS ne kiya!

Wish kar diya? Ok, ab hum next person ke paas chalte hain! So kaun hai ye? Any guesses? Aap log rehne hi do! Mai hoon na!


Pehchana ya nahi? Of course pehchaan liya hoga! Ye to apna shivam hai! riya ka romeo! Ab guys ye mat kehna ki iski bhi feelings hain? Sabki feelings hoti hain iski bhi hai!

ab apne ss ka romeo jo thehra! N isne bohot help kiya hai taarey n taayam ko milaane me n aage bhi karega! N nikhita please apne aapko riya ki jagah imagine karle!

Ok! Chaliye iski baatein sunte hain! Lekin use pehle ye jaante hain ki ye new love birds gaye kahaan the aur kya kar rahe the!

shivam and riya went to eat ice-cream! Both of them wanted to eat a chocobar! But unfortunately or fortunately the ice-cream man had only one chocobar!

But riya wanted to eat so he bought it! They sat on a bench! Riya wanted shivam to eat and shivam wanted riya to eat and finally they decided to share it! (jo log 'humse hai life' dekha karte the, they can imagine the scene! The RaSia/SiRa chocobar scene!)

Riya takes one bite then shivam takes one bite! It was going all romantic, lovey-dovey scene! Finally the ice-cream came to an end and only one bite was there!

Riya- arey shivam last piece hai kha lo! Acchi wife milegi!

Shivam- kyun tum acchi nahi ho kya? Well tum jaisi bhi ho ab to tum hi meri wife banogi!

Riya was blushing like hell! She was looking like a tomato! Their eyes met and they got lost in each other! They came closer and closer! Their lips were inches apart!

Suddenly they came to their senses as the ice-cream melted down! There was an awkward moment between the two!

Shivam- uh! I am sorry riya! Wo pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha! I am really very sorry!

Riya- it's okay shivam! uh chale? Party ke liye ready bhi to hona hai!

Shivam- oh ya! Chalo mai tumhe drop kar deta hoon!

Riya- okay! But hum jaayenge kisme?

Shivam- meri bike pe!

Riya- ok then let's go!

They went to shivam's bike! Riya sat at the back! The bike started and they headed to riya's home! On the way riya was thinking whether to keep hands on his shoulder or not!

Here our shivam was irritated that why riya is not holding him! He got an idea! Aakhirkar dimaag ki batti jal hi gayi! He slowly put the brakes so that riya holds him!

When he applied the brakes riya's hands went upto his shoulders automatically! But she withdrewed her hands from his shoulders! Shivam didn't liked this so he again applied brakes but with a greater force! This time also she withdrewed her hands!

Shivam- jab itna man kar raha hai to pakadti kyun nahi?

Riya blushed furiously!

Shivam- ab blush hi karti rahogi ya pakdogi bhi?

Soon her hands flew around his chest! Ab jaake romeo ke dil ko thandak pahunchi! They reached at riya's home! Riya was near the door when shivam called her!

Shivam- riya!

Riya turned back- haan shivam!

Shivam- kuch kehna tha!

Riya- haan kaho na!

Shivam- I love you!

Riya blushed- I love you too!

Shivam was about to go but then riya called him!

Riya- shivam!

Shivam- haan riya!

Riya came near him- wo mujhe kuch dena tha!

Shivam- haan to do na!

Riya quickly pecked his cheek and ran into her house! Shivam was smiling like crazy! He went to his home and straight went to his room!

As soon as he reached his room he closed the door and started dancing like crazy! Throwing pillows here and there! Finally he stops!

Shivam- wohoo! Mai iss duniya ka sabse happiest person hoon aaj! Mai bata nahi sakta mai kaisa feel kar raha hoon! Meri riya mujhe mil gayi! Ahan correction romeo ko uski Juliet mil gayi!

Aur ye sab sirf aur sirf taani partner ki wajah se! Agar wo nahi hoti to ye sab kabhi nahi ho pata! Meri pehli true friend hai wo! Wo ek pehli aisi thi jisne mujhko badalne ki, mujhe ek accha insaan banane ki koshish ki!

Maine uske saath kitna galat kiya phir bhi usne mujhe maaf kar diya! Jab mere saath koi nahi tha to wo mere paas baithkar mujhse baatein karti thi!

Mere saath baatein share karti thi! Meri friend to wo thi hi, aur dekhte hi dekhte wo meri best friend bhi ban gayi! Uske jaisa insaan maine aaj tak nahi dekha!

Mai ye nahi samajh paa raha hoon ki rey ne iss jaisi ladki ko kaise reject kiya! Wo to iss duniya ka luckiest person hai ki taani use pyaar karti hai! koi gadha, bevakoof, ullu ka pattha hi hoga jo use reject kar de!

Sach me gadha kahinka! Mujhe to pehle se hi lagta tha ki isme akal nahi hai ab conferm ho gaya hai! aaj to swayam ki akal bhi ghaas charne gayi thi!

Mujhe samajhme nahi aata ki in dono best friends ki akal beech-beech me kahaan chali jaati hai! kisi aur ke yahan part time job karne jaate hain kya inke brains?

Mujhe na in dono pe itna gussa aa raha hai ki mai kya kahoon! Specially rey pe! Mujhe bataya taani partner ne ki rey ne aaj tak kya-kya kaha use! Taani to ye sab bhi aise keh rahi thi ki jaise ye sab uske liye ek mamuli baat ho!

Sachem bohot deeply hurt kiya hai aaj tak usne taani ko! Mai apni best friend ko iss haalat me nahi dekh sakta! Mujhe uski smile wapas chahiye chahe iske liye mujhe kuch bhi karna pade!

Ab to tum dekhte jaao Mr. reyaansh singhania ki ye shivam apni best friend ke chehre pe smile dekhne ke liye tumse kya-kya karvata hai! ab tumhe mujhse kaun bachayega!(smirks)

Woah! Apna Romeo to aaj bada khush hai! kyun na ho! Usko apni Juliet jo mil gayi! Aww! Apni best friend ko kitna pyaar karta hai! so sweet! Waise sahi keh raha hai I also wonder ki rey aur swayam ke brains beech-beech me kahaan chale jaate hain!

Guys agar aap logon ko kahin mil jaaye to reyam ko sahi salamat de dijiyega! Lolz! (just for fun guys! Didn't intented to hurt anyone) shivam ki smirk dekhkar lagta hai usne sachme kuch interesting plan kiya hai!

hmm so reyaansh singhania bachke rehna! Guys wo kya karne wala hai uske liye to hume wait karna padega! Mujhe nahi sirf aap logon ko! Lolz!

Ok chaliye ab dekhte hain humaara next person kaun hai! iss baar to dimaag chalao! Guess karo guys! Ok mai hi bata deti hoon!


(sheena bajaj- aaliya of humse hai life)

Pehchana ya nahi? I know nahi pehchana! Okay guys here I am presenting over you all for the first time 'riya kapoor'! kaisi lagi hamaare romeo ki Juliet?

I know acchi hi lagi hogi! So chaliye sunte hain Juliet ki baatein! Waise mujhe abhi ek news reporter ki tarah poochne ka man kar raha hai- bataiye miss riya kapoor, aapko kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai apne relationship ke pehle din pe? Lolz!

Riya went to her room! She just went and twirled holding her teddy bear! She stops and blushes so much that she hide her face behind her teddy bear! She was at cloud nine today!

Riya- thank you gannu ji! Thank you so much! Aaj tak apse mai jis cheez ki maang karti thi wo mujhe mil gayi! Haan haan mujhe mera promise yaad hai!

aapko ek thaali modak chadhaungi mai! Ye sab taani ki wajah se! gannu ji jaise aapne mujhe mera shivam dilwa diya usi tarah taani ko bhi uska prince charming dilwa do!

Ab aap to jaante hi ho ki taani ka prince charming kaun hai! aur haan uss rey ka dimaag bhi uske thikane laga dijiye please! Gadha kahinka! Meri best friend ko itna hurt kiya!

Gannu ji mera man to karta hai ki abhi use ek thappad maar doon lekin kya karoon taani ke prince charming ko maarungi to taani mujhe maar daalegi! Rey to pehle se hi aisa hai par aaj to swayam bhi! I know boys! Ye kabhi nahi sudhar sakte!

Hey agar koi ladka padh raha ho to sorry! But no sorry! Because she is right! Boys kabhi nahi sudhar sakte! I can't believe ki wo raksha bandhan bhool gaya! Hoe could he do that! Taani kitni acchi hai jo use maaf kar diya!

Agar mere bhai ne aisa kiya hota na to next moment me world war 3, mahabharat 2, battle of panipath aur duniya me jitne bhi fight hue hain sab ho jaati! Hunh!

Par mera shivam aisa nahi hai! wo to sabse alag hai! aur agar wo hamaari anniversary, meri birthday ya fir koi bhi special day bhool gaya na to usko mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta! Ab ye sab to jhelna hi padega!

Ab riya kapoor se pyaar karne ki galti jo ki hai! accha wo sab chodo mujhe ready hona hai! aaj to mai aise taiyaar houngi ki agar shivam ke hosh na ude to mera naam bhi riya kapoor nahi! Haan nahi to!

Riya ki ye side to maine kabhi nahi dekhi thi! Oye hoye! Itna blush! Jab hamaare romeo jaisa boyfriend ho to blush to banta hai boss! Nikhi ye dialogue tere liye tha!

Bechara rey! Usko aaj gaaliyan hi gaaliyan mil rahi hai! haww! Shivam saare dates diary me note karke rakhna! Agar bhool gaye to gannu ji hi jaane ki kya hoga!

Lolz! Haaye! Aaj to riya tumhe kill kar degi party me! Shivam tumhare hosh na ude to apna naam badal dijo! Ab girlfriend saj dhaj kar aayi ho to boyfriend ke hosh to udne hi chahiye!

Accha chalo ab dekhte hain ki next kaun hai! iss baar to guess karlo! Uff bohot lazy dimaag hai aap logon ka! (Didn't intended to hurt anyone) mai hi bata deti hoon!


Pehchana? Of course pehchan liya! Ab hamaari siren Sharon jo hai! hmm to aaj confess kar diya hai so kaisa lag raha hai miss Sharon? Chaliye Sharon baatein sunte hain!

Sharon went to her home and lay on the bed holding her pillow! She was smiling and blushing at the same time! Did she even know that she was looking like cherry and strawberry! Cherry and strawberry! Swayam is lucky! Perfect combination sweet and sour! She gets up!

Sharon- mai bata nahi sakti ki mai aaj kaisa mehsoos kar rahi hoon! Aaj maine apni dil ki baat keh hi di! (in her ears the words were ringing- I love you swayam!) iss trial relationship se maine jaana ki swayam is the one for me n I love him!

Sahi kaha tha usne, he made me fall in love with him! Maine use apne aap se jitna door karne ki koshish ki wo utna hi mere paas aata gaya!

Maine uske saath kitna bura bartav kiya taaki wo mera peecha chod de but no he loved me then and he loves me now and I am sure he will always love me!

Tum itne acche kyun ho swayam? Mai bohot lucky hoon ki tum mujhe mile! I am sorry for all the things I have done in the past but now I know you are perfect for me!

Aaj mai apni zindagi ki ek nayi shuruat karna chahti hoon! Tumhare saath! Aaj party me mai iss relationship ko real bana dungi! Waise party se yaad aaya ki aaj swayan ne taani pe chillaya! I still can't believe that!

But usko manane ka tareeka bhi bohot cute tha! Aww teddy bears to mujhe bhi bohot pasand hain! Sach me taani aur meri bohot jamegi ab mai uski bhabhi jo hoon! Waise bhabhi se yaad aaya ki mujhe aaj hamaari relationship officially announce karni hai so aaj to mujhe accha dikhna hi hoga!

umm aaj raksha bandhan hai so traditional of course! Well I wish mera bhi ek swayam jitna pyaar karne wala bhai hota aur mai use rakhi baandh paati!

Taani kitni lucky hai ki uske paas itna pyaar karne wala bhai hai but my bad luck, I don't have one! Waise agar mera bhai hota to wo bhi swayam jitna possessive hota!

I know typical indian brothers! To phir mere aur swayam ke relationship ka kya hota? Well I wonder ki jab taani sachme kisi relationship me jaayegi as wo shivam ke saath to kuch bhi nahi tha! Tab swayam ka kya reaction hoga!

Kya swayam reject kar dega? I think wo un dono ko accept kar lega! He can't say no as wo apni behen se itna pyaar karta hai! swayam taani ki khushi kabhi nahi cheenega!

Chalo jab taani relationship me jaayegi tab ki tab dekhenge! Abhi mai jaakar ready ho jaati hoon! Waise mujhe swayam ke hosh udane ki koi zarurat nahi hai as uske hosh to pehle se hi ude hue hain n uske hosh udane ke liye meri ek wink kaafi hai! ok Mai chali! Mujhe taiyaar hona hai! well I am really excited for the party!

Ahaa swayam ko hona chahiye tha Sharon ki blush dekhne ke liye! Hmm aaj to party me mazaa aane wala hai! waise taani aur Sharon ki bohot jamegi!

Ab bhabhi-nanand ki Jodi hai! aww! I know everyone wants a loving and caring bro as swayam! Well Sharon ne pate ki baat ki hai! aaj to rey taani ko confess karne wala hai!

so kya swayam inhe accept karega? Use taani ki khushiyaan kitni pyaari hain? Kya hoga? Well guys mai to bas itna kahungi ki job hi hoga accha hi hoga!

Par haan iss party me bohot kuch hoga jo ki bohot dhamakedaar hoga! Nahi samjhe? Abhi nahi samjhoge! Arey jab maine kuch samjhaya hi nahi to kaise samjhoge ki mai kya samjhane ki koshish kar rahi hoon! Abhi ke liye bas itna hi samajh lo ki abhi aap logo ko kuch bhi samajhne ki zaroorat nahi hai! Samjhe ya samjhaun?

Ok ok! Bohot samajh liye aap log aur maine bhi ek super hit dialogue maar diya! Well rawte ke 'SAMJHE YA SAMJHAUN' aur rathore ke 'DAMN IT' pe kaun nahi fida hota! Arey mai bhi D3 se kahaan arjun pahunch gayi! Sorry!

Chaliye abhi aaj ke last person se milte hain! Hmm iss baar to bolungi hi nahi guess karne ke liye! Chalo bata deti hoon! Ab likhte likhte mere haath dard kar rahe hain!


Hmm so pehchana? I know aap log bol rahe hoge- cutie! Ye bhi koi poochne wali baat hai? hmm so ye hamaara majnu swayam shekhawat! Arey bro of this ss! Ahan Sharon aur baaki girls ka nahi! Warna aap log mujhe daantoge!(puppy face) ok ok! Aaj chaliye swayam ki baatein sunte hain! so here we go!

Swayam went to his room! He threw his bag on the bed and jumped on the bed! And he started dancing holding a pillow!

Swayam- chahe koi mujhe jungle kahe!

Kehne do ji kehta rahe!

Hum pyaar ke toofanon me ghire hain,

hum kya kare?

Yahoo!

Swayam control! Taani sun legi! Arey sunti hai to sunne do! Aaj mai khush hoon na ki man karta hai ki taani ke saath dance karoon! Aaj finally mujhe wo mil gaya jo mai hamesha se chahta tha!

Jin three magical words ko sunne ke liye mai bekarar thaw o three words mujhe aaj Sharon ke muh se sunne ko mil gaye! She loves me! I still can't believe!

Ye sapna to nahi hai na! Sharon really loves me! Wohoo! Abhi kya mujhe Sharon ko sabke saamne propose karna chahiye?

Negative swayam appears- of course not! Arey paagal ho gaya hai kya swayam? Agar Sharon uncomfortable ho gayi n usne no keh diya to? Just think dude jitni attention mil rahi hai wo bhi nahi milegi! N may be she get hurt!

Swayam- ya you are right! Maine Sharon ko promise kiya tha ki jab tak wo nahi kahegi tab tak mai ye baat kisiko nahi bataunga ki hum dono ek relationship me hain! bhale hi wo trial kyun na ho! N I don't wanna hurt her!

Positive swayam appeared- dude seriously! You are listening to him! Wo to bakwas karta rehta hai! arey tujhe propose karna chahiye! Arey why she will get hurt? Abhi to she loves you na!

Swayam- hmm! Actually you have a point! Pehle ki baat alag thi! Now she loves me!

Negative- dekh swayam! Iski baat mat sun! don't forget she is the dazzler Sharon!

Swayam- ya that's true!

Positive- oye hello! Sharon is changed! Wo abhi wo wali Sharon nahi hai!

Swayam- this is also true!

Negative- whatever! Swayam tu meri baat sun! propose mat kar!

Positive- uski baat mat sun! propose kar!

Negative- maine kaha na no!

Positive- maine kaha na yes!

Negative- no!

Positive- yes!

Negative- no!

Positive- yes!

Swayam looking from this side to other side like a tennis match is going on! He was hell confuse ki wo kisko sune aur kisko nahi! Suddenly a neutral swayam appeared! Guys jahaan positive aur negative hota hai wahaan neutral to hota hi hai! ab itni physics-chemistry to aap log jaante hi ho!

Neutral- hey you both stop it! Kya bacchon jaise ladh rahe ho? And tu! In dono ki chod meri baat sun! haan mana ki tujhe Sharon mil gayi but taani ke bare me soch!

Remember aaj raksha bandhan hai valentines day nahi! Har din to tu Sharon ko notice kartarehta hai! ek din apni behen ko bhi notice kar liya kar!

Kya tune ye notice kiya ki taani jabse Mumbai aayi hai kitni badal gayi hai! shivam ke saath relationship and all those things se teri behen kitni affect hui hai!

uski smile lost ho gayi hai in dino! Kuch to hua hai! koi cheez use bohot deeply hurt kar rahi hai! and tu uss cheez ko kabhi jaan ne ki koshish hi nahi karta hai!

aaj to tune had kar di yaar! Sach me swayam tu bohot badal gaya hai! ek samay tha jab taani teri first priority hua karti thi n aaj tum log ek hi chat ke neeche rehkar bhi strangers ki tarah rehte ho!

Taani kya kahegi mai khud teri dil ki awaaz ye keh raha hoon kit u wo swayam nahi raha jo taani se itna pyaar karta tha ki usne agar man me bhi BHAI bola to tu dauda chala aata tha uske paas!

Agar taani ne ek baar cheenk(sneez) liya to tu ghar par doctor ko bula leta tha! Taani jis cheez par haath rakh deti thi tu wo cheez use de deta tha! Wo swayam to kahin kho gaya hai yaar! Aaj tune use hurt kiya! Swayam are you the same swayam who his taani the most?

Swayam tears in his eyes- hey watch it okay! Tumhari himmat kaise hui ye kehne ki, ki mai ab taani se utna pyaar nahi karta hoon!

Ek baat kaan khol ke sun lo taani ko mujhse koi nahi cheen sakta! She will always be my sis! Mai use ab bhi utna hi pyaar karta hoon jitna pehle karta tha! N I will show it to you!

Neutral- mujhe dikhane se kya hoga? Taani ko dikha ki tu usse ab bhi utna hi pyaar karta hai! N swayam mai ye nahi keh raha kit u Sharon ko kar importance de ya uske saath ya uske khayalon me time spend mat kar!

Of course kar because Sharon tera pyaar hai! But agar swayam Sharon ka boyfriend hai to wo taani ka bhai bhi hai n unfortunately or fortunately dono ek hi insaan hain! You have to balance between these two!

Kyunki ye dono teri life ke wo do lady loves hain jinke bina teri life kuch bhi nahi hai! Arey zyada kuch karne ko nahi keh raha hoon! Jab kabhi tere paas free time ho to uske paas ja haath me do cup coffee lekar! Use baatein kar!

Uski life me iss samay kya chal raha hai uske bare me pooch! Agar uske life me kuch chal raha hai to use ye bata ki tu hamesha uske saath hai!

Raat ko good night bolte waqt uske maathe(forehead) par ek kiss de de! Subah jab wo uthe to tu uske ek good morning hug de de! Bas itna kar! Taani ko accha lagega! Use lagega uska bhai hamesha uke saath hai!

Swayam ek baat bata jab taani ka shivam ke saath break up hua, to tune use poocha ki ye sab kyun hua? Tujhe jaan ne ki zaroorat nahi mehsoos hui ki kahin shivam ne teri behen ko hurt to nahi kiya!

Tujhe ye pata hai na ki jab tu uske paas nahi hota hai tab wo dar jaati hai kyunki tu hi to uski himmat hai! Pehle jab taani dar jaati thi tab wo tera haath pakad leti thi kyunki she feels safe when you are by her side!

And ab jab taani ke upar itni saari responsibilities hai wo agar dar jaayegi to wo kiska haath pakdegi kyunki tum to kuch time se uske side me nahi ho!

Pata hai swayam taani shayad ek na ek din tere bina rehna seekh le but tu kabhi uske bina rehna seekh nahi paayega! You can't even imagine your life without her!

Positive+negative- iss baat pe hum dono agree karte hain!

Swayam fell on his knees- (tears are flowing out of his eyes) I am sorry taani! I am really very sorry! Maine vaada kiya tha ki jab bhi tumko meri zaroorat hogi mai tumhare saath rahunga aur jab tumko meri sabse zyada zaroorat thi tab mai tumhare side me nahi tha!

Tumhara haath pakadne ke liye, tumhe hug karke tumhare dar ko bhagane ke liye nahi tha wahan par! I am sorry! Maine tumhe sabse zyada hurt kiya hai!

Mai shayad ek accha boyfriend, ek accha dost, ek accha insaan ban gaya par ek accha bhai nahi ban paya! Mujhe maaf kar do taani! Pata hai tum meri responsibility nahi meri zaroorat ho!

Jab bhi mai depressed hota tha tab tum mere paas hoti thi! Mai tumhari god(lap) me sar rakhta tha, tum mere sar par apna haath pher deti thi aur utne se hi meri saari tension, saara dard jaise chutkiyon me gayab ho jaata tha!

Tumhare haath ki chai ya coffee peekar jaise din ki saari thakaan chali jaati thi! Tumne hamesha mera khayal rakha lekin mai! Huh! Pata hai tum meri sis hi nahi meri best friend bhi ho!

Yaad hai jab mere saare friends mujhe chodkar picnic par chale gaye tab tum meri friend bankar mujhe ek choti si picnic par le gayi! Jahaan humne bohot mazaa kiya, bohot ghoome!

Jahaan par sirf tum aur mai the! Tum rey se pehle wo ek hi person thi jisse mai bina kisi hesitation ke apni dil ki baatein share kar paata tha!

Mai tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon ye to mai bata bhi nahi sakta kyunki maine kabhi ise measure hi nahi kiya! Mujhe nahi pata pyaar ka measurement kya hota hai!

Pata hai jab tum meri life me aayi tabse meri poori life hi badal gayi! Jab tum aayi tab mujhe ye pata chala ki dance me mujhe interest hai! Mai kaise bataun tumhe ki mai tumse kitna pyaar kata hoon! (crying)

Neutral- oye chal apne aansu poch! Agar taani ne dekh liya to use bura lagega! Waise tujhe pata hai sirf Sharon aur taani wo do hain jo teri aankhon me aansu laa sakte hain!

Swayam- I know! Aaj party me taani ko ye dikhaaunga ki uska bhai ab bhi use utna hi pyaar karta hai! N thanks yaar! Tu nahi hota to mujhe ye realise hi nahi hota ki taani ignore ho rahi hai!

Positive+negative+neutral- arey no dude! Ye to hamaara farz tha! Now best of luck n don't hurt taani or Sharon! Bye!

Swayam- bye!(three of them disappeared) ab aur nahi taani! Tumhe tumhara bhai wapas mil jaayega! Aaj party me mai hamaari saari dooriyaan, saari misunderstanding clear kar doonga!

Ye raksha bandhan bohot special hoga hamaare liye! I promise taani ab hum pehle jaise ho jaayenge! Ok abhi mai ready ho jaata hoon aakhirkaar aaj meri dono lady loves mere hosh udane wali hain so mujhe bhi thoda handsome dikhna chahiye!

Ab mere paas koi shabd hi nahi bache hain! Main kya bolun? Itna pyaar! Mai roun ya smile karoon? Mai bas itna kehna chahungi ki Krishna ji karein ki in dono bhai-behen ki Jodi hamesha salamat rahe! Inko kisiki nazar na lage!

Ok ok ab bahut emotional atyaachar kar diya maine! Abhi topic ye hai ki party me kya hone wala hai? Kya taani rey se pooch paayegi uss kiss ke bare me?

Kya rey taani ko apni dil ki baat keh paayega? Shivam kya karne wala hai rey ke saath? Gang kaise react karegi taarey couple par?

Aur kya swayam taarey ko accept karega? Inn sab sawalon ka jawab aapko next kuch updates me milega! Tab tak ke liye wait kijiye!

hey girls! here the update ends! hope aap logon ko meri life partner ki ye update pasand aayi hogi! i know its awesome aakhir likha to meri girlfriend ne hai! ab girlfriend kiski hai? waise guys aditi aap logon se baat karna chahti thi so here you go!

hey guys! how are you? i am so sorry! mai itne dino absent rahi and you guys know what i am flooded with pms! 350+ pms! sab log apni stories update kar rahe hain n mai hoon jo bed par hoon!

sry abhi to aapke updates padh nahi paaungi kyunki adi mujhe padhne nahi dega! ok guys mujhe actually iss ss ke baare me kuch kehna tha!

guys ye ss ek taayam post se start hua tha! maine ek post banaya tha taayam pe during the basketball match! aur meri bohot acchi dost nikhi yaani hamaari nikhita yaani hamaari lavin ki deewani(nuckts) ne mujhse kaha ki kya mai koi os ya ss bana sakti hoon taayam par!

so maine bhi haan keh di n mai seriously chahti thi ki raksha bandhan d3 me dikhaya jaaye! pehle to maine socha tha ki three shot banaungi!

phir pehle update ke baad aap sabke comments dekhkar maine ek twist lane ka socha so maine wo misunderstanding n wo jhagda daal diya!

maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mai taayam ki feelings n wo flashbacks dikhaungi! wo sab to aap logon ke pyaar ke wajah se hai!

mai to ye ss wo taayam fire exit conversation me khatam karne wali thi! lekin pata nahi jab mai ye wo update likh rahi thi to mujhko jaise aap logon ke pyaare pyaare comments yaad aa gaye aur maine ise continue kiya!

maine ek chulbuli taani dikhane ka socha! meri story me ek aur twist aa gaya! the three missions! uss uopdate ke baad nikhi ne mujhse kaha ki mai rey aur taani ko aise dikhaun jisse ki swayam possessive ho jaye!

ab maine kaha ki this is not possible because rey to khud mission raksha bandhan ka part hai isliye rey ke jagah maine shivam ko include klar diya ab shivam ke liye bhi koi partner honi chahiye thi isliye maine riya ko include kiya!

i hope aap logon ko riya pasand aayi! maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki mai iss taayam ss me taarey ko include karungi!

haan wo chote chote scenes deti thi par unka confession include karne ka koi iraada nahi tha mera! ye ss maine purely taayam pe socha tha!

but phir kuch fans ne kaha ki mai thoda taarey bhi include karron! ab guys mai bhi die hard taarey fan hoon yaar! isliye mission cutely weird include kar diya!

guys ye jo part tha feelings! iske baare me maine kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha! i don't know aap logon ko ye pasand aaya ki nahi! guys ek din pe!

not even 24 hours maine thirteen parts likh diye hain! all this because of your love and care! kisine sapne me bhi nahi socha hoga ki nikhi ka ek request ek itna bada ss create karega n mera jo doosra wala taayam ff hai wo bhi maine iss ss ke comments se influenced hokar create kiya hai!

pata hai guys maine jab ye ss banaya tha to maine sirf first and last scene socha tha! beech ka to aap logon ke pyaar ne create karwaya hai!

guys isme chahe jitna bhi taarey, swaron, reyam, taaron, taavam, shriya n gang kyun na ho the last scene will be of pure taayam! and i promise ki wo part mai sabse cutest part banaungi!

guys abhi to ss baaki hai! mai to 20 parts tak expect kar rahi hoon! aap log to chahte ho ki ye ss kabhi khatam na ho! aap logon ke comments mujhe ise khatam karne se rok rahe hain!

abhi dekhiye maine ye shivam ka plan bhi include kar diya! guys ek baat batana bhool hi gayi teeno missions abhi tak khatam nahi hui hain! mission raksha bandhan, mission sweet and possessive bhai and mission cutely weird sab abhi tak ongoing hai!

pata hai agar aap isi tarah pyaar karte rahoge to mujhe to lagta hai iska second thread bhi create ho jaayega! he he!

okay okay! pata hai guys aap logon se bas itna baat karne ke liye adi ne mujhse 4 cheek kisses liye hain n update ke liye 2 cheek kisses!

bas copy paste karne ke liye 2 cheek kisses! zulm ho raha hai! ab agar aap logon ne comment nahi kiya mere update aur aur mere iss lambe chaude note pe to mai kabhi update nahi karungi!

demand poori ho jaaye tab bhi nahi! arey haan demand bhool gayi thi! so mere works ki parampara DEMAND PG 77! ab mai itne din absent rahi aap logon ne mujhe miss nahi kiya?(puppy face)

ok ab mai chalti hoon warna adi ya to mujhe daantenge ya phir ek aur kiss le lenge! bye! jald hi aaungi aap sabko pareshaan karne ke liye ek naye update ke saath!

uff! bohot bolti hai na? par mujhe to iski ye baat bhi pasand hai! i know aap logon ko bohot awkward lag raha hoga mujhse baat karna kyunki you all are used to aditi!

ok ok !ab mai bhi bolna band karta hoon warna aap log mujhe bhi chatter box bologe! aur phir bologe chatter box ko chatter box mil gayi! ram ji ne kya jodi hai banayi! he he!

ok bye guys! take care! n comments and likes are must ab mai pehli baar yahaan pe aap sabse milne aaya hoon so ek welcome to banta hai! bye!

Edited by adi.cutiepie - 12 years ago
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Thannks for this lambu update. I loved it.. Its amazing. I love our philosophic boy swayam.. Rey ke souls bhi naughty hai. Star of your ss our bubbly Taani.. Shes so cute. Pls update d next part. Take care chottu🤗

Edited by gowri_amy - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gowri_amy

will read it later. break time over

koi baat nahi! read and comment whenever you have time!😊

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