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Posted: 12 years ago
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Will you be my date???? Please - an SS

Hey everyone I am writing an SS which revolves around our darling yuvreen and takes place around New Year's...
Here
It has been a week since yuvreen have confessed to each other...although the super seven know about them as a couple, everyone else, i.e the college don't know about them...

Now
I hope you guys like it...pls comment and if you don't...still comment

Chappals and jhootas and tomatoes and potatoes and rotten eggs and what not are more than welcome...

Btw, this will probably have 5 updates and it will probably get over by march

Chapter 1 - Teasing the Couple

The superb seven were in the canteen enjoying the company rather than the food...mannu and rathi were busy making chopsey of each other...naro and Annie were busy cracking up over the two of them and also from zorro's hilarious jokes...



Oh wait...that's only 5 people...so who are the other two?????
Yes...it's the hero and heroine of the show, yuvraj and suvreen, who were sitting side by side at the end of the table...
They were lost in each others eyes...and the other five noticed it...

Zorro started softly: ahem...ahem...

The two were still lost in each other...

The five then started: AHEM!! AHEM!!

The two then quickly came out of their EYELOCK and u couldn't tell who was blushing harder...yuvraj or suvreen...the five then started teasing them...

Rathi and Manu then started singing: bin tere...bin tere...bin tere...
Koi khalish hai
Hawaon Mai bin tere...

And then the other five also joined them: bin tere...bin tere...

And then yuvraj became mad and was getting up: oi!! Trilokpuri ki chichore!!

And yeah...mannu and rathi just ran away from there...while everyone else just laughed looking at them...

As yuvraj was sitting down, he noticed that suvreen was beyond embarassed...her face was as red as a tomato...he then put his hand in hers and said: don't worry topper...mein hoon na tere saath...and stop blushing so much otherwise I will have to change your name from topper to tomato!!!!

And on queue, suvreen started blushing even harder...

Annie noticed this and asked: what happened suvreen??? What romantic dialogue did your romeo tell u????

And before anyone could react, Miss Alisha Dewan enters the canteen...and tells everyone to settle down...

I will be holding a new Year's eve party at my house...everyone is invited...there is going to be karaoke, dancing and of course there is going to be drinking...

To which there were hoots from many and an angry glare from yuvraj...

She continues: now, what's celebrating new year without some fun???? So I'm going to be putting out some obligations for everyone which will be in relation to the party...I will be telling u your first obligation today, your last obligation will be told to u on new year's eve, i.e on the day of the party...which u HAVE to complete I order to attend my party...(guys, imagine that the college will still be open and tomorrow is new Year's eve...)
So, guys I will message u all the details for tommorows party and I hope everyone comes (specifically eyeing yuvraj)

Guys, pls remember in my SS it is the super seven not super eight...

Everyone then becomes excited especially boys as it is a party of the HOT Alisha Dewan, girls excited as she is the daughter of Mrs. Dewan and everyone excited for these 'obligations'...

So guys, I bid u adieu now cuz I have to hand over my iPod now...I know it was a really short one do
I will try my best to make the next one a long one...I know u guys are wondering as to where the title of my SS comes into play but don't worry u will figure it out by the end of this SS...

Also pls pls
Pls comment

And u know the drill
If u want pms hit the 'buddy' button...

Please comment and like!!!!

Xoxoxooxoox
Maria

The next update within 2 weeks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start Maria..!! and ya it is seriously interesting to see how this forum is just engrosed into FFs OSs and SSs..!! Its just awesome..!! We are proving that when it coems to creativity our forum is just awesome..!! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manish_Shetty

Awesome start Maria..!! and ya it is seriously interesting to see how this forum is just engrosed into FFs OSs and SSs..!! Its just awesome..!! We are proving that when it coems to creativity our forum is just awesome..!!😃😃😃

Thank u Manish!!!!
And baba when are u updating LCA????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice post maria...good update...so u also turning into sort of romantic writer re.. 😆 nice start dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...this was super osum

w8ng 4 further updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

do update soon as u r rockng in here!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!!! 👏 It was fab! Pls continue soon!!! 😃 Btw, Shasha here... Changed my user name...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_rox14

Thank u Manish!!!!
And baba when are u updating LCA????



hehehe...LCA I will update...but then not sure when...actually exams are coming up...so dont know when will I update...!! Sorry for the delay..!! 😭 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gud one maria...u r writing v.nyc...do contnue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey !!

Alisha doesn't know about Yuvreen here, right??
Or she is after Yuvraj even knowing about them??
Do, tell me...eh??

Btw...good one yaar!!!
Definitely expecting something terrible yet crazy and sweet in party 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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do cntinue it...looking 4wrd to it..

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