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>>>This is a special update to welcome 2013, and a gud bye to 2012... 😃 May this new year bring lotss and lotss of happiness to u and ur family.<<<

PART-7

She peeped a little inside the room and something wierd caught her attention at which her eyes widened in horror and next moment she dashed in his room looking at the creature with anger...

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Moving inside she pulled the quilt at once startling both Maan and Fluffy who were sleeping inside the quilt all cuddled up, once fluffy was fully uncovered she gasped looking at him and shouted loudly for her maa who was busy arranging his room and till now was unknown about Geet's presence, "Maaa... dekho, ye wohi hai""Kon kya hai Geet?" rano said "Yeh... yeh wo din walaa kutta hai, jo hume chod ke bhaagg gayaa tha ush din" she said glaring dangerously at poor puppy who hid behind Maan the moment he saw her face... Maan who was quiet till now said "Wo kuttaa nahi hai, fluffy hai" "jo bhi ho,... parr issko toh hum dekh lenge ajj, iske karan hume shardi ho gayi, gandi dawai khani padi aur... aurr.. jalnaa bhi pala" she said this marching towards fluffy who crawled more and more behind maan's back while he shielded him with his small hands. "Geet app shaant hoiye pehle, dekhiye bechara fluffy kitnaa darr gaya hai" Rano tried calming her while fluffy too whimpered a bit trying to gain their sympathy so that he could be saved from this torture. Rano softly picked Fluffy in her arms and said to Geet "Geet dekhiye, kitnaa pyaara hai humara Fluffy, maaf kardo na inhe" Rano said sweetly flaunting her cute pleading face while Fluffy's heartbeat was incresing as Rano bought him closer to geet's face. But Geet moved her face away making a yucky face and said "Cheee, gandaaa kuttaa" Maan who was sitting there quietly till now jumped out of bed and taking Fluffy from Rano he frustatedly spat to Geet "mera Fluffy gandaa nahi hai" slight anger was clearly visible from his face, he was annoyed with Geet's behaviour towards his Fluffy. Geet bit her tongue smacking herself mentally.

Geet(st): Jhalli, pehle hi kal shey wo gussha hai, maa ne kaha tha unhe manane ko, aul tuney unhe phil guccha dila diyaa... Babaji, abb kaa kalu mei...

Geet pouted twisting her lips, while maan carried Fluffy towards his small basket, and Fluffy clinged to maan, licking his face fondly, assuming Maan as his saviour who saved him from that Geet.

Maan sat on his knees besides the bed and bent his face to view Fluffy's basket which was beneath his bed and that too out of his hands reach. He was trying hard to reach the basket handling Fluffy clumsily when grumpy geet saw it and instantly her face beamed getting an idea to manaofy angry Maan and she too sat on knees crawling near Maan, and poked his shoulder with her small finger

Rano shooked her head at Geet's antics and left the two alone for sometime letting them sort their problems by themselves and went to kitchen to prepare for breakfast.

Maan turned sensing her poke and saw Geet looking at him innocently with a cute smile, nd raised his one eyebrow as if asking her 'what' and Geet said "Hum nikale?" Maan scrunched his brows and looked at her suspectedly and Fluffy too did the same copying him... Geet got frustated with their expression nd controlling her emotions again repeated "hum, andar ghus ke nikaleee?" Maan moved from place after thinking a bit and saying a "hmm".

Geet's face brightened and she crawled inside the bed, her small structure fit perfectly in there and she came out with the basket and handles it to Maan. He placed Fluffy inside it and covered him with his soft blanky.

He was carresing his head when Geet too did the same saying "waise itnaa bhi bura nahi yeh" but maan shoved her hand and with a glare said "abb kyu chu rahi ho mele Fluffy ko? Wo toh gandaa hai na" but geet said with biig eyess, "Nahii, bilkul nahi, balki yeh toh bohot pyaala kutta hai" and then bit her lips seeing both Maan and Fluffy's dangerous glare and then realized her mistake, "Matl..abb pyaalaa pillaa hai" "dur raho mele Fluffy sey" said maan again shoving her hand a bit... but Geet pouted pleadingly "umm, sholly na... " "nahi" saying Maan got up but she followed him "Pleashhee maaf kardo na (while following him), abhi ke liye bhi, aur kal ke liye bhi..."

Maan turned towards her and she continued with a pouty nervousness "hmm, wo aurr kal subah daraane ke liye bhi" Maan too twisted his lips at her mention about her acts, and said "Tum meko bohot sataati hu" "Pakkaa plomish abb nahi sataengey hum" she said shaking her head but seeing him still unsure she pinched her throat "Pakaaa naaa" "Thik hai.." Maan said a bit convinced and she beamed in happiness with it. "Toh dosht?" she said extending her hand BUT "umm, lekin phir tumhe mujh sey plomish karna hoga k tum mujhe NANGU ni bulaogi" he said "Kyuuu?" Maan frowned and said "Kyunki, meraa naam MAAN hai na" "Toh kya huya isme agar apka naam Maan hai toh?" "Toh tum mujhe Maan bulao na, Nangu mat bola karo" maan said pouting but Geet denied straightway "Nahi, hum nahi manengey yeh" Geet said with finality crossing her little arms on her chest with puffed up cheeks, afterall he was her Nangu, how can she accept .
"yeh toh cheating haii..." Geet made a cute face this time with his words knwing that anyhow she needs to manofy him "umm, hum tryy karengey but koi plomish nee" Maan thought for a while and then decided to agree to it as may be she will really try.
Thus he too got agree and forwarded his hand saying, "Ohkk, then me tayyaar hu" and Geet with a squeel forwarded hers too and shooked maan's hand strogly while half jumping. Maan smiled a little looking at her excietment and also thinking that finally he too have a FRIEND of his own.

After this Geet ran out of the room calling and shouting for Rano loudly "Maaa... Nangu maaan gaye" at which Maan hit his head with his forehead and murmered "Isska kuch nii ho saktaa" and shaking his head went inside to resume his daily routines.

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In the dining hall of KM, after Maan finished his bath and routines with the help of his Maa, Rano Daadi and Maan sat there having their Breakfast. Geet too was sat there to accompany them after lots and insistance by daadi. Rano was serving them and also feeding both occassionally, whereas Geet was all time blabbering chirpily telling both them how she manaofied maan and how they both became friendzz, with all silently listening to her. Once maneet were done with their breakfast Daadi asked Maan to take Geet and show her his toys and other things to which Geet instantly jumped off her chair and dragged Maan to his room, getting highly excieted.

Once inside the room she comfily sat on his bed and Maan went to his large basket full of toyss and dropped all of them on the bed near Geet. Her eyes twinkled with joy looking at those cute soft toys and typical boyish games... While Maan kept breafing her about each one proudly. Suddenly Geet's eyes caught the sight of a girly pink barbie and she literally jumped seeing it and pulled it out from toys. Whereas Maan's eyes widened in horror seeing her holding the barbie and he knew he is in trouble now as Geet's eyes twitched in confusion thinking how can Maan have a barbie in his toy collection, and looked at him demanding an answer.

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PRECAP-

Barbie doll 😉...

AND

school??
Hmm, school...!, kyu tum school ni jaati?
Nahi, she said shooking her head in denial gloomily

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phew* finally updated part 7... tried making it as good and readable as possible. Pweasee tell me kaisaa hai. bacche ko niraash na karnaa dosto 😭

PS- Sowwiee for Late update, I know I told to update the gone yestrday, but then me thought to give this update as a New Year Welcome 😃

SO, how was the welcome 😉? Gud ya Bad 🤢

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Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago

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Anya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#608

happy new year!! Lovely update

Edited by xoanyaxo - 12 years ago

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Brown-Eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

firstly Happy new year choti (BEWDI 😉 )
UPDATE WAS SOOO CUTE
LOVE IT TO THE CORE

choti tu itna mast likhte hai

haayee me in love with geet's naangu <img src="http://images.zaazu.com/img/Boy---Girl-In-love-heart-valentine-tattoo-smiley-emoticon-000794-large.gif" alt="" />
CONTINUE SOON 😃

Edited by Brown-Eyes - 12 years ago