swaron new year os: unforgettable surprises

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Okay, now I really dunno what I have written.I was reading a book and this random thought of surprise just took over me...so thought of sharing it with u guys and some of the surprises are inspired from the book...except that I have put my own words to it...

I was so not in a mood to bore u guys with an os this new year, but this is for my sweety simren, this is just for u, surprise from ur umm brave dii.. I hope I have done justice to the story...if not then atleast u wont tell me to write one again 😆

And this was first read by my bestie kullu(kulsum_vish), without her my every work is incomplete'I love u girl and yes I did add ur suggestions too'❤️ 😳


THE UNFORGETTABLE SURPRISES

Swayam was the guy whom every girl in town used to drool over, he got himself almost everything that he always dreamt of owing. A big house, two cars ;one of which is a sports coupe - and a life that is almost to a point of being jealous of. He was tall, and guy for his intellect carried himself too well. His normal attire was a check shirt with a tee inside, but during his office hours he used to wear the boring executive blazers making him look like a "perfect" gentleman. Swayam believed in the philosophy that "one should work hard and party even harder."

For a person of his age, he had everything except for love. It was the only thing that was missing in his life. His parents always provided a reminder about this by asking him to get married. "For God's sake! you are 30 now. Get married" is what his mom used to say over the phone. All these years he avoided having any kind of relationship. This was because he had a belief that once he got into all the lovey-dovey stuffs, he might happen to loose focus on his career. He was too much of a workaholic person.

Finally, out of his mom's compulsion, Swayam got married to a beautiful girl named Sharon. Though it was an arranged marriage, the duo seemed like they were a match made in heaven. Even for their parents, seeing both of them together, it was hard to believe that they couldn't have known each other before. Their union was magical and initially both of them were having a hard time to believe that this was actually happening. Swayam never even thought something would come to his life which is above his own precious job. But she had turned to be everything for him, you can say the sole reason for him to live now. She have actually changed a materialistic person to a man who is caring and who respects other's emotions at the same time.

One year passed and the very next day was new year's eve, who knew that sharon was awaiting for the biggest surprise of her life...the day she can cherish for a lifetime. Swayam was out of the city on an assignment but he did promise her to be back by tomorrow evening. Unhappy though; Sharon knew that she didn't have any option given all the work pressure that Swayam was always found to be in. So, instead of just sulking the whole day, she made up her mind by looking forward to a very special evening. And prayed hard.

The next day morning, she found an SMS from Swayam telling her ; "2day will b a day u will never forget". "Yes, it will coz you are not there!"mused Sharon to herself as if smiling with a tickle. She opened the main door to find a gift waiting for her. It was a tray with a bunch of beautifully decorated red roses, a nicely wrapped gift bag and a red velvet box. There was a lovely black pearl necklace, she had an eye on it for many months. A note in the box read, "I remembered the color of your eyes when I saw this!"

Sharon thought of giving Swayam a call, but refrained herself, thinking; "He must be busy." The driver announced that he had been asked to take her to her favorite cafe. She knew that it was Swayam's plan because they had an apple pie for her. There were a box of chocolates too and as she opened it, she found a note;"Miss me when you have these."Sharon was wearing a grin after reading the note. Ofcourse she missed him each second and that was not a thing to be mentioned.

Back home, she didn't know how she was going to get through with the entire lonely evening. She just had a sandwich, didn't think she could have anything else. Suddenly the door bell rang and thinking it was Swayam, she hurriedly ran to the door expecting only him. However, it was only the courier guy with an envelope in her name. She didn't even want to take a look at it. But something made her change her mind ... may be the unusual shape of the package.

It was an airline ticket to Paris where Swayam was having his conference!!! There was even a note inside that instructed her to grab her bag and rush to the airport.Gosh! she had never packed so much fast before. She picked up one of her sexy dresses and changed in no time. She decided to drive the car herself, how could she not, such was her desperation to reach the airport on time.

When she reached Paris, there was a grand Volkswagen waiting for her in the airport. She was not a car freak, so she couldn't understand which model was it, it was Swayam who was crazy about automobiles...sometimes she used to wonder whether he loved his car more than her. She chuckled at her thought and rushed into the car.

Paris, yes it was her dream destination. " From pictures I have seen its beautiful, specially the eiffel tower." Oh my she just said it and there the car was being parked nearby a tall tower with an antenna atop. "Wow its more amazing than how it is being shown in the pictures." She was busy admiring the infrastructure of the tallest building in Paris, to be specific her dream place. But something was missing while all this was happening, that was him, it has been so long since she reached Paris and she havent seen him yet. Wasn't he missing her, what is he so busy with? All her thoughts were interrupted when a small kid came to her with a rose and a note stating "Come forward, the person whom u are missing is waiting for u."

She looks around but couldn't find anyone, so she started walking ahead and found herself walking on rose petals, she kept walking and headed towards a restaurant "Le 58 Tour Eiffel". There he was in his gorgeous looks waiting for her and she even noticed that the whole place was being reserved. He gave a smile knowingly and for once she understood that the whole restaurant was being booked by him.

At one point, they just stood staring into each other's eyes. The messages they conveyed with their eyes, took foreplay to a whole new level of romance ,where they were in their own world..

Once the waiter arrived, he ordered for peppersteak pie, with crme caramel as topping, which was sharon's favorite which had apparently been his favorite too. It was all so unexpected that Sharon couldn't help but could only stare into Swayam's face and his calm expression almost took her breath away. She knew that he was the only person she loved with everything she had and he was the one who loved her over all else. Seeing her happy had turn to be the motto in his life. He kneeled beneath her and asked for her hand. She approvingly nodded and gave her hand. "Mrs. Sharon Swayam Shekawat, are u ready to pass more years of ur life with this philosophical and possessive husband of urs, Will u wake me up every morning by giving a peck, will u be my side everytime when I m stressed out of work, will u give me the privilege to cook for u whenever u are ill, I promise that v can make cute baby sharons over years and I m also ready to be ur slave my whole lifetime...Happy New Year my love!!" By now Sharon had tears rolling down, "Yes yes, I vl and always be there beside u..Happy New Year to u too...I love u!!"

The week was well spent talking, laughing and mostly making love, of course! It was so perfect a getaway, away from work and all the hassles. It was the best weekend Sharon have had in her whole life. And yes, as Swayam had said before, "you would never ever forget it!"

"There is no surprise more magical than the surprise of being loved: It is God's finger on man's shoulder."

PS; Thanks for taking ur precious time to read this os...

HAPPY NEW YEAR GUYS 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW This OS was like really perfect. It was so romantic and cute! Totally fun to read! It really took me into SwaRonland! Mr Majnu Swayam doing all this for his wife..It made me so happy reading it.😳

I loved how you kept the SwaRon essence yet u made it different since you showed them having an arranged marriage.

Please write more. Thanks for the PM.

And Happy New Year😊

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES FOR SIMI ...

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Awwie i love ur comment...u are special...🤗

Binju Dii aapko biiiggg hugs...🤗
Awwwiiieee thnkx a lot Dii yeh OS mere liye likhne ko...
Binju dii aapne itna acha OS likha hai, that I m short of word....
This OS was soo cutee and Romantic....
Appko pata hai aapne mujhe mere ghar se alag kardiya mein seedha Swaronland pohoch gayi yeh read karte waqqt.... :P
Swaron were so perfect in this OS....
Sharon turned Swayam from a workaholic person to a romantic person....hayyyeee *dreamy mode*
Our Swayam doing so much for his Sharon...That is So our majnu boy....Loved it
Paris the world's best and romantic Destination....WOW
You have nicely penned down their romance....
Oyy hoyyy Binju aap toh romantic shomantic likhne mein sabse agghe nikli... :P
Thnkx you sooo sooo much Diii for such a wonderful and best New year gift....
Aur mujhe aapka surprise bohot bohot bohot zyaada pasand aya...muuuaahhh
Love you Diii...😃


Edited by binuja_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye tu ne new os likha aur mujhe btaya bhi nahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Binju...🤗🤗🤗

That was just AMAZING ...truly a new year bonanza ...loved it ...the was u shaped up the characters ...swayam...the workaholic turned in to a loving caring husband...thats d power of love ...ahh...such a blissful thought ...lovely OS...


The love...the longing for each other...the passion...i m in my dream world...he noticed every single wish of hers...and fulfilled it...be it the necklace...the trip to paris...his each and every move...to make her special...and how all she wanted to be with him...nothing else...

The lovely proposal from him made me fall in love with swaron all over again..


"Mrs. Sharon Swayam Shekawat, are u ready to pass more years of ur life with this philosophical and possessive husband of urs, Will u wake me up every morning by giving a peck, will u be my side everytime when I m stressed out of work, will u give me the privilege to cook for u whenever u are ill, I promise that v can make cute baby sharons over years and I m also ready to be ur slave my whole lifetime...Happy New Year my love!!"   By now Sharon had tears rolling down, "Yes yes, I vl and always be there beside u..Happy New Year to u too...I love u!!"




Just PERFECT...i loved every bit of it...

Do write more dear...u are amazing..😳

Luv
Deep

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os binju

u totaally rock my frnd

how beautifully u have wrote swaron romance in d world's most beautiful n romantic place

aur aise hi keh rehi thi ki mein bohot bakwas likhti hun...agar yeh bakwas hain toh achcha kya hota hain

d best new year gift...thnx 1ce again n jhappi 4m my side
Edited by ShrutikaSwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Binju its magical awesome and really romantic ...;)
And tuff to imagine swayam nt romatic the end madeup the whole thing :-)
I must say yu are really creative in writing and a great swaron fan so yu must try writing more often coz yu will do tht very well ..:D
Luv yu 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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And luv yu too binju <3
Ma twinnie is a writer nw and am soo proud of yu; )
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os dii
It was soo cute n romantic.
Keep writting more os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow beautiful work binuja, totally like sharon we too wont forget the entire experience. Hats of to you to get such a beautiful dream

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