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Posted: 12 years ago

Oooppss!! I know I am too too too late but still would love to give you all a new year treat!! Enjoy….

p.s. sorry for such a short update!!

Chapter 8

(the previous chapter was the morning scene)

AFTERNOON

Simmi: guys, hum kuch bhool rahe hain…..

Sharon: sim, bhoolne ki aadat humme nahi rinni ko hain!

Rinni: Sharon!!! Tum mere baarein aisa sochti ho!

Sharon:chill rins, just like meri aadat gussa karne ki hain, tumhaari bhoolne ki. There is nothing wrong in it! It's your signature style….! (wink)

Simmi: no guys, hum seriously kuch bhool rahe hain!

Vicky: shaayad tum ladkiyaan yeh bhool rahi ho ki humne kaago se alag hokar, hum dazzlers ke liye rehearsal hall book kiya hain……

Nilesh: aur phir bhi hum practice nahi kar rahe!

Sinni: oh yeah, practice!!!

Sharon: idiots! Rey nahi hain, humaara captain nahi hain! Practice kaise kare??

Simmi: this is the fifth practice which he is missing! Where is he??

They looked at the boys for answers as they all were having a basket ball match before the practice.

Nicky: kriya……

And they all knew it. If rey played a two hour long match with his boys and had a very little time with kriya that day, then there is no way he was going to attend a four hours long practice after that.

Rinni: rey aaj kal kuch zyaada hi kriya-kriya nahi kar raha!?

Simmi: understand the situation man! Agar tum kissi se itna pyaar karne lag jaao, you start a secret relationship then immediately you both are cruely separated and the other person has no choice but lie to you and then all that tragedy happens and after all the misshappens that kriya faced; you guys are back together and so truly and deeply in love so will you able to stay away from him?

Rinni was first time thinking very hard. After fifteen minutes of thinking, she finally spoke.

Rinni: sim, tumne situation ke baad kya kaha tha?

Simmi: arhhh!!!

Nilesh: chill simmi, tumhaara answer Vicky ne hi de diya! Jabse tumne bolna chaalu kiya, bhaaga-bhaaga apne kaago ke paas gaya…..

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Swayam enters the canteen and looks around. Rey enters the canteen and looks around. They spot ShakaHa and goes to them. They don't know if the other is doing the same thing.

ReYam: kriya kahan hain?

They look at each other as they said in unison and didn't know what the other was about to say or was even there.

Rey: tu kriya ko kyun dhoondh raha hain?

Swayam: who meri teammate hain aur mujhe usse kaam hain.

Vishaka: aur tum kriya ko kyun dhoondh rahe ho? Tum toh humaari team mein bhi nahi ho!

Rey: woh-

He was saying something but was interrupted by neha's scream.

Neha: Babu!!!

They all turn to see Vicky at the canteen entrance.

Vicky: kaago!!!

And then they run to each other in slow motion (yash chopra romance style) and when finally they reach each other and Vicky opened his arms wide and neha blushes and turns to the other side (isshhh…….style). Vicky turns her to face him and they look in each others eyes in slow motion. Like all hindi movies, wind blows and a few strands of hair come on neha's face. Vicky moves his hand and remove them and stick them behind her ear, again in slow motion. ReYam and Vishaka reach them before Vicky finished putting the strand behind her ear and they left their spot when he had already touched it. Rey clicked her fingers in front of his eyes and brought them grumpily out of their meloydrama.

Rey: tum apni mautanki band kyun nahi rakhte?

Vicky: tujhe humesha beech mein kyun aana hota hain?

Rey: who chhod aur yeh bata, tujhe abhi practice mein nahi hona?

Vicky: hum apne captain ke binna practice nahi kar sakte aur tu kyun nahi aaya??

Rey: main kriya ko dhoondh raha hoon!

Vicky: iska matlab tu kriya ke paas nahi tha?! Kya yaar, faltu mein Sharon bhatki!

Swayam: ekk minute! Sharon bhatki matlab?

Vicky: who jab rey practice mein kriya ki wajah se nahi aaya toh main bhi wahan se challa aaya apni kago se milne.

He holds her hand and they again start looking in each other's eyes and all.

Swayam: phir????

Vicky: phir raaste mein mujhe nilesh ne pakda aur hum kriya aur rey ke baarein mein baat kar rahe the aur tabhi………..humne apni aakhon ke saamne kuc dekhaa!!!!

He was telling it in such a meloy drama story telling way that vishaka couldn't help but laugh.

Vishaka: (in between laughs) p-phi-r-r??

Vicky: humne dekha ki wahan Sharon!! Aur kriya bhi!! Donno aamne saamnee!!!!! (his face displayed complete shock and amazement and was looking very over-reacted)

Rey: Vicky, aur nautanki karega toh maar khaayega!

Vicky: achcha fine!! (normal now) voh donno humaare saamne aur hum unko dekh rahe………hum donno unko dekh rahe aur who humaare saamne…!!

Swayam: yaar nilesh kahan hain, yeh toh ekk ghante baad bhi kriya aur Sharon ki convo start nahi karega!!

Neha: (speaking for the first time) BASS!!! Mera babu ab sabko sunayega! Joh hua aur jo nahi hua!! Babu, start na!!

Vicky: toh hua kuch aise ki Sharon ko aa raha tha gussa apne toote haath par, apne newly theek hue ped par aur rey par. Who aadhe-chalte hue saamne se aayi, in full on Sharon ka gussa mood aur saamne se kriya bhabhi apne i-pod kaan mein leke, bilkul mast mood mein aa rahi thi. Donno aamne-saamne aaye aur kriya ne apne kaan se i-pod nikaal kar, Sharon ko badi si smile di…….

FLASHBACK FROM WHERE VICKY ENDED

(normal flashback starts)

Sharon and kriya in the middle of the hallway and kriya gives Sharon a smile but doesn't get anything in return except some frowns and a fuming Sharon.

Sharon: kriya, stop smiling!!! Don't be the way you are all the time! Casue sometimes, like right now, it is considered to be a jerk!

Kriya: (confused) sha-aron??? What are you talking about??

Sharon walked up to her, ready to vent out her anger anger.

Sharon: kriya, don't behave as if you didn't do anything!

Kriya: (still confused) I seriously got no idea!

Sharon: then get an idea!! Cause I don't think you are like any of us to afford an airtel! Bloody weakling!! And you know what??!! ….

She takes out something from her wallet.

Sharon: ….take this 2000 bucks and get yourself a 3G idea cause you might need something to balance your dumbness with!!

Sharon tried to thrust the notes in kriya's hands but she wont accept it, as she indeed herself was kriya ghai.

Kriya: stop it Sharon!!! What the hell are you saying???

Sharon: you are right!! Miss Sharon raiprakash, time to get straight to the point cause this girl is such a dumbfreak she won't understand anythinga s it is!!

She started to circle around kriya.

Sharon: REYAANSH SINGHANIA!! My Best Friend!! Never betrayed me once from the time we first met!! No missing practice!! Having 24/7 life for his friends, whenever they need him….!! One passion….dance!!! Never missed a chance to dance; anywhere, anytime!! Dance, Dance and DANCE!!! And RIGHT NOW!! Practice…NO TIME!! Dance……NO TIME!! Sharon, his best friend…..for her….for me…….NO TIME!!!!! Friends…..NO TIME!! Dazzlers….NO TIME!!! And time to do what!!?? ……………..MISS KRIYA GHAI!!!! The ultimate wanna be!! The one, who always thought and still thinks…..that SHE can be Sharon!!! Kriya, you are talking about SHARON RAIPRAKASH!! No sidey or altu faltu!!! And definitely, NO WEAKLING!!!! Since that rose day completion I noticed…but you wanted to become like me since much before that!! The elections!! In that also, you just wanted to be ME!! Made your own hell f**king team, for crying out loud!!! Never accepted that and never will!!! And your name??!! Huh! The name I used to address you all with………WEAKLINGS!! You made that your team name!!??? And because of you, everything is WRONG again! See the way rey gives all the time to you?! And swayam??!! My lover…the one who loved who head over heels fell for me……LOOK AT HIM!! He is just about you, You and YOU!!! I know he and I are not in a relationship, no strings attached between us but still!!! ATLEAST he was my ACS!!! But now, he has more rather become the p.a. of Miss Wannabe!! Kriya, I hate you!! Cause I know why you are doing this…….to get above me!! You are going to trap swayam in your trap as you did before and as rey is all over and all for you, you are going to use him again and throw him like he is and then weaklings will win again!! Like I gues it happened long ago!! In the footloose we lost cause rey was with you!! He was committed to you and we lost!! Hah, just like that!! You….you miss kriya ghai……..YOU ARE DISGUSTING!!!! And I would now suggest you something for the sake of humanity……..BURN-IN-HELL!!!!

She stopped circling her and said the last past on her face. Sharon left kriya and stormed out of there and went to the atrium. Vicky and nil saw kriya blink back her unshed tears which were formed in her eyes as she was the centre of attraction. She took a long breadth, clutched her handbag tight and walked out of the college, to god knows where…….

FLASHBACK ENDS

Vicky: aur bas uske baad nilesh, simmi aur rinni ke paas challa gaya aur main apni kaago ke paas….

Vishaka: I knew it!! That entire friendship, concern and now attitude change thing was just a drama!! She is and will remain Sharon, the so called dazzler!! No offense guys, because I seriously don't find you all like that but her!!! I can't stand it! Excuse me….

And with this vishaka also went out and left the rest of them deep in thought.

Neha: neha going to Vishaka and finding kriya…..

Neha left and Vicky volunteered to help her. Rey and swayam both were quite. None of them speaking a word. There eyes speaking volume, filled with rage. They looked at each other, not knowing who was angerier but they knew one thing, they had to go to the two of them: kriya and Sharon. Rey understood what his best friend's eye's spoke, they wanted to go to kriya and hit Sharon bad, but no where could he find that he was on Sharon's side. Not that rey expected him to be but not even a bit of question to why Sharon did so just that he hates Sharon to hell right now. Even rey was angry at Sharon, but the rage was less, she was his best friend, he did not know why she did so but she did wrong and he knew it but never the less she WAS his best friend so he was not feeling as if to kill her as he could see in swayam's eyes. He was confused, yet remained his peace. The thing that really bothered him was that swayam was racting like this becaue everything happened to kriya, and kriya was his best friend……but wasn't Sharon his love?? Or she wasn't?? cause love word was only giving the answer kriya in his eyes which ofcourse rey could read, knowing him so deep and so well.

Rey: umm….i am going to kriya……I think you should go to Sharon.

Swyam just nodded but rey didn't miss the look in his eyes that desperately wanted to go to kriya but for rey, kriya was his, only HIS!!

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I know the update is not good but that's all I have cause I realy wanted to show the affects of the new born feelings inside the four……I hope you all like it as I would further explain it in my next chapter……

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Posted: 12 years ago
sejz u update really some1 pinch me plz😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
unres. . . .
Wow. . . .
Awsome update. . . .
Yuppiee u updated. .
Sharon ka gussa. . .my god, . . .kya gussa tha! .
Itna zada bhadak gayi woh kriya per. . . .
Bechari kriya,pata nahi kya feel ker rahi hogi voh,
ha ha ha. . . . .
Vicky ka full-melodrama was awsome. . . .
Lovd it. . . . .
and rey and swayum,
pata nahi woh sharon ka kya karenge. . . .
Take care update. . .
And nxt time jaldi update krna. . . .
Mujhe pm nahi mila,
nxt time mujhe bhi pm chahiye. . . . . .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee update👏
loved it😊
waiting for d nxt part😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres
U updated it!!! really??!! 😲 btw r u fit n fine now?? really missed ur updates...
coming to d update...it was verryyy nice.. I luvd VIHA's part or I should VIHA's nautanki!! 😆
so KriSha's typical fight starts 1ce again...
looking forward to seeing much more KR scenes in nxt update...
take care n update soon if itz possible 😊
Edited by shukti_19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

sejz u update really some1 pinch me plz😲

pincchh!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu3003

awesomeee update👏

loved it😊
waiting for d nxt part😳

thanx!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
at last u upday
i thot u hd 4gt abut it
da updat ws soo nice
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
my sissy!!! 😭😭
shoo late!!!
but ma shona kamino! firstie!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

ouch itna jor se kyn pinch ki
n dekhna tune itne din ke bad update di n mera 1st cmt
hetu n preetu😛😛

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