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Shru

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Posted: 12 years ago

NOTE this is not a BIRTHDAY THREAD...<3😛 please say Belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY... and also HAPPY NEW YEAR...🤗

Shru: 'Birthday ke din aap sabko har koi wish karta hai right? aur Birthday ke baad koi nahi karta wish'

Everyone: Haan, Right Right...

Shru: 'Lekin Birthday ke baad hum wish karte h..taki voh sabko yaad rahe😉

Everyone: Ye ladki pagal hogayi h😆

Shru: 'Haan voh toh mai hu hi' Lekin please read the rest and decide how pagal I'm🤣

Okay Everyone would be wondering what's going on here! First of all a heartily greetings to all the lovely readers, silent visitors who would visit here!...

This Thread is Named 'An Attempt' why you would be wondering right?

Well let me explain...'I hope you have fastened your seat belts as we have a long way to go'😉

Alright My Attempt here is honestly to bring a hug grin on someone special's face, and also Mushi's..

Someone who's close to my heart on IF I know this is the last day of the year so I want to make it more special for her.

An Attempt why?

-Only because I couldnt, actually I didnt wish someone on their birthday..

-For someone who loves me like her own little sister

-Because I love her so much...

-Also because I dont want my another sister aka Mushiroxx aka Mushu's work to be wasted. I dont want her efforts to go down the drain!

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I hope my attempt would be successful so here's what I'm trying to do.

I'm creating this thread for FIZA28 aka my fizadi, Mahi's HJ and Mushu's Sweetheart😆

Below is Mushi's wish through an OS for Fiza (I couldnt let that effort of her's go waste). and the post below would have another Os IN 2 parts😆

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Thanks to Afnan aka luvyoubarun🤗

P.S: My OS would be updated before this year ends! So, lets being shall we!😉

P.P.S: This is not an official bday thread, but it is a thread dedicated to Fiza di, for being late... hey... 'Better late than never' Right😉 I hope you like this di m sorry for being late isliye I have something all ready as my saza not already🤣

OHHOOO Its Belated Happy Birthday guys!!! 🤣

**EDITED**

Ohh just in 'TAZAA KHABAAR ' as suspected by me, my dearest Mahi's pc is having the Crazy Virus problem... so di (Fiza di) mera bakwas OS apko sehan karna padega😆 Mahi wont be here to rescue you for now😆

but mujhe laga tha ye ladki new cell ke saath busy hai...😆 anyways... hope Mahi comes back soon.😊

OneShot INDEX

Page 1 - Mushi's Os (Mushiroxx)

Page 1 - Illusions Part 1 & 2 (Shru)

Page 4 - Just a Wish (FeistySoul)

Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 12 years ago

Mushi's OneShot:

Clad in a white gown with curly strands of hairs falling on her shoulders, touching her back. She looked at herself in the mirror, a smile crept on her face when those words echoed in her head again "I now declare you both man and wife. You may kiss the bride now."

That was the first time he kissed her, she could still feel the soft sensation of his touch. Her cheeks turned red and she hid her face with both her hands. Suddenly the door opened. It was about an hour now since they both returned home from the church.

After greeting all the guests, she came upstairs as she was extremely tired and after 10 minutes he also came up, leaving his parents with the remaining guests.

This was their day and he wanted to be by her side. Here entered the man himself, clad in a three piece black suit he looked handsome as ever. Her heart skipped a beat seeing him in the mirror.

He had that same smirk on his face as he saw her blush and turn away. He bolted the door, came near the sofa and took off his coat, hung it in the wardrobe and then went near his beautiful wife. "So Mrs. Fiza Sameer Rathore," he said in his husky voice, he slide his hands from her shoulders, warmly moving them on her bare arms taking them all the way down to her hands, engulfing her in his strong arms.

He placed a small peck on her neck, which made fiza shiver. He looked into the mirror and smiled "ab itni khoobsurat lag rahi ho to is mein mera kasoor to nahin hai na." he winked at her and fiza laughed a little. This made Sameer take a sigh of relief. "ye hai na meri FIZA," he said still holding her in his arms. Fiza turned around and rested her head on his shoulders saying "I love you Sameer."

He removed the single strand of hair from her face, replying "I love u too wifey and will always do." Fiza's placed her left hand on his chest, she moved her head to look at him but he pushed her towards himself from her waist and she crashed into his chest, her one hand on his shoulder and other round his neck.

Sameer then moved his left hand on her waist which made fiza weak in her knees. He placed his second hand on her cheeks, cupped her face and then moved his fingers in her hairs bringing her closer to him.

He pressed his lips onto hers and rubbed her back for her to response. Fiza was a little shy in the beginning but she didn't want this moment to end so she kissed him back with the same care and tenderness. The kiss turned from being gentle to a passionate one in not time.

They stopped after a few minutes and then changed their clothes. Rathore wore his night trousers and vest, which made him look even hotter, fiza came out of the washroom wearing a pink night gown. Sameer was dumbfounded seeing her like this, she looked SEXY and he couldn't help but drool over her again and again.

He went near her and whispered in her ears "aj marne ka irada hai kiya?" fiza just blushed and replied "hmmm kyun itni jaldi haar gaye ACP SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHORE?" she winked at him and he just laughed. Took her in his arms and placed her on the bed.

He blew the last candle that lit near the bed side and they hugged, kissed and embraced each other lovingly throughout the night making it a memorable event of their lives. Mrs. And Mr. SAMEER RATHORE-their journey has just started!!!

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 12 years ago

OneShot: Illusions

Part 1

A girl in her mid-twenties smiled as she nudged hearing the chirping birds outside. She pulled the satin sheet over her as she simultaneously placed her hand here and there on the other side of bed as if she was searching for something or maybe someone... 'Uff' she exclaimed as she rubbed her eyes with warm palms and opened her green angelic eyes.

She got off the bed as she started to murmur to herself, soon tying her hair up in a pony as she pulled the hair tie out of her hand. She fixed her night dress before she stepped out of her bedroom.. 'Choti Baby, voh office chale gaye hai' informed her favourite servant hp😆. 'ji shukriya' she replied smilingly.

She walked into her room quickly closing the door behind her. She touched her cheeks as they were hot as sun rays and red as tomatoes.. She inhaled the smell of him from her skin, his cologne was so strong that she could still smell him on her. His touch still lingered on her body, her face, her hands... She was in heaven, 'Ye mai kaise sapne dekh rahi hu' her brain questioned weirdly. 'Unbelievable' her heart replied. 'Ye kabhi nahi ho sakta hai samjhi' her heart replied strongly.

Her excitement was soon shattered as she clearly remembered like every other night her dear husband came back from work, deadly tired. 'Henceforth, he doesn't even have time to spend with me' her heart complained out loud to her brain. She silently sobbed with a smile that played on her lips unknowingly as she remembered him coming home, talking to her for few seconds having his dinner. Shortly reading either his case file or some crime fiction novel, but this man had no time for me whatsoever her brain continued.. She continued thinking. 'Kahi mere se apne galti toh nahi kara diya na rabba' she complained and questioned her almighty at the same time.

'Ye tum kaisi baate soch rahi ho' her heart complained. She continued her thoughts ' Ye jinke saath mai rehti hu voh mere pati cum paying guest urf roommate jyada lagte hai' she smiled as she said it.. 'Itna hot paying guest' soon she blushed at her heart's words.

The young lady took a deep breath as she looked at the calendar that had every single day until yesterday circled. She pressured her brain hard as she tried to recollect her memories from that particular date 28th December 'kya hai' she questioned herself.

Soon her cell buzzed on the table, 'Ye toh silent pehle hai ye bhi.mujhse naraz hai shayad' she complained to her cell phone walking towards it. Before she could greet someone from the other side a voice took over her's 'Omg bajjiii belated Happy Bday' she exclaimed excitedly..

'Uffoo Shru I mean Anarkali kitni baar kaha hai mujhe baaji mat bulao' said the receiver.. But Shru continued 'ohhooo Di aaj toh mat daato na already we are late uske upar se aap baaji word ko lekar naraz ho Ufff' she exclaimed her annoyance softly. Soon another voice took over her's 'Hey HJ, belated happy Bday dear' she said a bit formally. 'ThankYou so much Chammak Challo' 'but aap dono late Kyuu hogaye' she questioned.. While Shru said Diii you know na apki Anarkali toh lateness aur laziness ki master hai. But before she could continue 'Hey sweetheart happy birthday' said a third voice..

OMG! 'What a shocker Mushi Tum bhi voh dono pagal kehta saath ho?? 'Haan Fiza mai bhi' exclaimed Mushi... The trio sent in their wishes through cell as they were miles away from Fiza to celebrate her birthday. Shru snatched the phone from the duo and said ' Di, I missed; missed u missed you so much actually m still missing u so much hope you're not upset with me' .she questioned but soon 'Btw Hj' interrupted Mahi.. 'Jiju ne wish kiya kya...' she questioned in a soft yet teasing voice.

'Tumhare Jiju aur wish hmmm' she replied. Shortly she excused herself saying she had her husband's call waiting on the cell phone. Fiza pouted as she hung up, but soon she heard her house bell go off. She walked out slowly; uneasily the sweat beads were soon building up on her forehead. 'Hope ye mera secret admirer ka na ho' thought Fiza in her mind. She saw Hp receiving a beautiful red bouquet from the deliver guy. Her eyes welled up at someone's interest, in keeping a wide grin on her face. Her expressions were becoming intense while at the same time she cursed her thoughts. How could you think about someone you don't know about, someone whom you haven't seen yet? Questioned her brain while she continued 'I agree Sameer hasn't been talking or paying much attention to you post marriage, but that doesn't mean he doesn't love you!!! Her heart tried to explain.

Fiza was totally confused; she closed her eyes whilst thumping herself on the couch. 'Fiza, I love you will you marry me? 'She saw herself nodding her head into a yes while Acp Sameer Rathore kneeled on the ground holding her hand.. Little I knew then that he was turning into my roommate than being a husband, Fiza murmured

'I understand and I know you understand we are two different individual but that doesn't mean we have to lead our own life? We are a couple for god sake' Fiza's mind repeated her own words as she got a glimpse of last night's fight. This was a daily routine now, her mind thought as she sobbed silently placing her palms on her face trying to cover it.

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Soon her thoughts were at rest as she was unconsciously slept off in a deep sleep. Where everything was black and white and there was no-one else to save her.

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Soon hours passed by like minutes and the setting sun hit her face as she jerked up with it. 'Omg, Sameer would be here soon' she reminded herself as she saw the clock on the wall.

'Hp' She exclaimed. HariPrakash came running to her, 'Kya hua Choti baby' he questioned worriedly. 'Woh aaj ka date kya hai?' Fiza quizzed him doubtly.

'Baby, aaj toh 30^th hai' informed Hp. 'Kya thode der pehle hi toh 29^th tha, aur aap keh rahe ho aaj 30^th hai, kye kaise ho sakta hai' she questioned as she had a small wonder inside the cool fridge for some cold water. 'Abh baby mai aapse jhoot kyu bolunga' said Hp

'Voh bhi hai, iska matlab Sameer kal raat ghar nahi aye kya? Fiza interrogated suspectedly.

'Nahi, unhone call kiya tha ki unko office mai kaam hai koi emergency case ko lekar' informed hp as he left from the kitchen before Fiza bursted out at him with more questions.

It was twelve already, and Sameer Rathore wasn't home Fiza tried calling him but it didn't work. 'He might be really busy' said her heart and her brain agreed. She walked towards the bouquet that she felt was delivered this morning, but apparently that today was yesterday her brain said. 'But how' she questioned herself as she inhaled the smell of the red roses.

Fiza's cheeks were crimson red as she remembered her engagement with Sameer. He had surprised her with the rose petals that fell on her head. Immediately after she placed the ring on his ring finger, and soon her trance of thoughts were interrupted as the door bell rung in the middle of night.

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This is by me!!!😛 Please di jhute mat marna😆

Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago

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Purva

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Posted: 12 years ago

Shru aap aur apke funky ideas...mast hain 😉

Nice idea

Happy birtday 1ce again Fiza di

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sneha

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Posted: 12 years ago

haha...awesome fp...tumse yahi umeed thi😛
Once again happpy birthdayyy munni di🥳

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 12 years ago

OneShot: Illusions

Part 2

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Fiza immediately opened the door as she saw Sameer standing at the other side of the door. He was about to knock when Fiza opened the door, Sameer's knuckles almost hit her head but he had stopped his arms in mid-air. 'Lagi toh nahi' he asked in a husky voice. Fiza just nodded at him.

'Khana lagau' she questioned politely.. but there was just a 'hmm' in reply.

'Kaisa pati hai, huh dhang se reply bhi nahi kar sakte. UFFF' she complained as she heated their dinner.

Sameer let out a smile, as he heard her murmuring on his antics. His cell rung and he received the call locking himself in the room. 'Yaar lekin kab tak' he said annoyingly. 'Jab tak voh pagal nahi ho jati' said a female voice. 'What the' he replied roaring like a lion on the phone. 'I'am already'' before he could continue the female said.. bas khana khane tak'

Sameer sighed and smiled in relief 'Thank you' he said softly.

Sameer quickly had a shower, and companied Fiza for dinner. It was a silent dinner whilst she remembered 'Sameer, aaj ka date kya hai' Fiza questioned innocently. 'Aaj toh ummm 30^th tha I mean its 31^st' he replied confusedly. Ohh god maine toh gadbad kar di said Rathore in his mind. Fiza replied silently as she continued her dinner. Sameer finished his dinner and went off to his bedroom he kept pacing here and there.

'Ufff, at least voh teeno ne late wish kiya mujhe, inhone toh wish hi nahi kiya' complained Fiza as she washed the dishes. Sab kab hum karo aur Aaram voh! Huh she continued. Little she knew that Sameer could hear almost everything she murmured because she was unconsciously speaking out loud.

Sameer heard Fiza's footsteps nearing he jumped into his bed and quickly pulled the sheet on him hiding his face. Fiza walked towards his side table, ran her fingers through his wet hair. She kissed him slowly on his forehead before turning his bed lamp off. She walked to the other side and snuggled in. Sameer couldn't help but feel extremely sad for Fiza, the way he had treated her recently was hurting him as well. 'Then why are you doing this' questioned his brain. 'Okay I wont wait any longer' he talked to himself turning over to Fiza's side. Almost immediately to find Fiza missing.

Fiza had walked out of the bedroom silently as she had already over slept in the afternoon. Moreover, her thoughts didn't agree that she slept for nearly a day and over. But to keep herself awake she read some fashion Magazine. Sameer tiptoed to his bedroom door to find Fiza reading some Magazine. He sighed as he got to work.

Few hours later, the day had begun with little birds chirping out loud. Rathore acted as if he woke up from sleep and ordered Fiza for a strong coffee. He sipped his coffee, and smiled at her murmuring antics inwardly. Fiza noticed the smile that crept on his face, but couldn't understand why he was smiling. She pour herself a cup of coffee, watching Sameer intently soon his gaze fell on the bouquet. 'Ye kisne diya Fiz' he questioned bitting his tongue.

'Umm voh' said Fiza scared she was still pouring the hot coffee in the cup but as she was afraid of what Sameer would say, she by mistakenly poured it on her hand.

'Ouch' aaahhh' She winced in pain. Sameer ran towards her held her hand and washed it under cold running water. He took the tea towel, and dried her hand asking her to sit quietly on the dining table, which she did as she was told. Sameer Rathore had his eyes welled up all teary, a man who can shoot criminals, had a very soft heart for his dearie wife. He couldn't see her in pain, even a single tear of her's shatters him deep inside.

'Sameer I'm fine' said Fiza controlling her pain. 'Shut up just Shut up' mai hu na kuch nahi hoga continued Sameer. He quickly brought the first aid box and applied the burn cream on her hand where the redness had spread.

'Dukh raha hai kya' he asked softly while Fiza constantly looked at his caring side with love expressed eyes. 'I'm so lucky to have you' she said softly, Sameer looked up to her and smiled. They had an intense eye lock, as Fiza's cheeks turned crimson red, Sameer's smile kept widening. He bent forward and kissed her forehead caringly, fiza took the opportunity and wrapped her hands around him placing her head on his chest as soon as Rathore kissed her.

He hugged her back, apologizing her for all the troubles he had been giving her recently. Fiza was shocked as to why he was doing this. They parted 'Woh mai kya bolu, tumhari behane' said Sameer but before he could continue Fiza bursted out laughing while she hit Sameer's chest slowly in anger. 'I'm sorry' said Sameer as he sighed and hugged her again. She inhaled his cologne, it felt fresh. 'Aap soye nahi the kya? Questioned Fiza.

'Nahi tumhara wait kar raha tha mai' replied Sameer with sparkles in his eyes.

He parted the hug, cupping Fiza's face with his thumb and the index finger. She looked at his eyes intently. Rathore kissed caressed her cheeks before he placed a kiss. Soon he claimed her kiss, Fiza smiled in between their kiss soon kissing him back slowly. The kiss deepened with so much passion, they didn't know how long they had been kissing each other. Sameers hands tightened around her waist, while Fiza tightened her grip on his neck whilst playing with his hair.

He picked her up in his arms and carried her to their room, he placed her gently on the bed. Fiza looked around the room shockingly 'Ye sab kya hai' she questioned. The room was decorated with Red ballons, red candles, everything was red' 'Belated Happy Birthday Biwi and Happy Anniversary' he said lying slowly next to her. She pressed her lips on his gently, as she moaned unknowningly.

Sameer nibbled her ears, before he kissed her forehead slowly trailing down her face. From forehead to her chin, Fiza couldn't help but think everything was illusion 'I hope I'm not dreaming' she talked inside her mind. But she saw it was real, as Sameer continued kissing her down her neck to her collar bone..Fiza continued her moan!

The series of kisses never ended, even though it started with the day but never had an end. Just like the candles didn't melt out for days!

P.S: The bouquet wasn't sent by Sameer Rathore😉

Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago