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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome updates
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Thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: ..Aliya..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
These few chapters are not what I had originally intended but I changed the story in favor of India's daughter "Damini" I sooo wanted her to live and see the light of the day again. may she rest in peace. These chapters are dedicated to her all those girls who go unheard and unwept like her..Lets keep the fire burning lets not forget her and others for as long as it takes to have a safe society . Chapter 12

It was late and she got out and stepped in to the water which was warm a contrast to the cool sand under her feet. Trishna followed her they were looking towards the dark, very dark horizon. Madhu was feeling a turbulent storm rising in her heart. There was something else that they saw on the distant horizon a boat. A boat sailing a rough sea and some shadows were in a kind of duel on it. Was she seeing things. It was pitch dark, she was hurt she could be imagining things. Trishna asked Madhu " do you want to talk about it"

Madhu replied " do you also see it"

Trishna:- " yes , it is all over your face and deep in your eyes"

Madhu looked perplexed " What are you talking about?"

Trishna looked at her and that sad look on Madhu's face was gone''.Trishna saw an alertness in her attitude and concerned look on her face. She looked in the direction where Madhu was concentrating and squinted her eyes. She too saw a boat shaking like a leaf in storm and shadows wrestling in it. Her eyes widened, they were now adjusted to the darkness and the vision was not that blurry. Probably the boat had come a lot closer.

" Madhu that is a boat and it will capsize if nothing is done'.."

Madhu ran to her jeep to wireless all the stations in the vicinity. Trishna took to her mobile called Mukund.

" Mukund Juhu beach'.sinking boat'.people wrestling on it'.and me and Madhu alone here"

Mukund did not wait to listen another word he cut her off. He was at the police station Mira road he wirelessed JUHu beach station and ordered his staff to board the jeep and within a minute he was in his jeep and speeding away to Juhu

IG's House

RK was too upset he needed to go out or else he would bring something down. Going out of his house heard a familiar voice in his father's car. Need immediate assistance on Juhu Beach''. a boat with questionable activity spotted'..few people involved in duel onboat''boat may capsize'''.urgent on sea assistance needed''.all alone here''..then she spoke her code ''

RK could not falter in deciphering the voice it was her. It was Madhu and she needed help '.but how come it was just 10-15 minutes back she had left. The message aired again. RK had no doubts it was Madhu he screamed to the couple of constables on guard. Don't you hear it go give this message to your boss. He screamed at the top of his lungs "BITTUJI come out with the jetski trailor." Less than a minute Bittuji was out " Chief what is wrong"

Get in with me he did not even wait for his bodyguards and off he went towards the beach. He was the first to reach there.

Madhu was trying to get help from local fishermen but to no avail. The sea was choppy and rough and a storm was predicted no one wanted to venture in. Time was crucial and she was not getting help. Just then she saw a car stopping close to her. RK got out and she saw Bittuji pulling his Jetski into the sea. It immediately hit her what rK was about to do. She cussed and screamed "Bull Shit RK you cannot go there"

"What else do you suggest''''" rest of his words got lost in the waves and the sound of starting Jetski.

"She ran towards him and literally jumped at the back seat. I cannot let you go alone. I have a license to kill not you"

"Ohhh!!! Yes, lets see how many you kill today"

While they headed towards the boat in question Madhu saw a shadow being pushed into the sea. " OH, NO!!!! they just dumped someone in water!"

RK needed no other instigation he was now on max speed. Madhu shot in air trying to scare them. As they got closer they saw to more coast guards steamers heading towards the boat. She heard the coastguard captain voice on amplifier. "stop right there all of you or we will be compelled to shoot.

Madhu said " RK it is going to get ugly turn around now"

RK and Madhu were too close but RK knew what she said if they did any thing the coast guard would fire as they did not know that Madhu was police. Madhu saw another steamer heading towards them from the shore. Madhu said "RK turn around" RK did not believe his ears, he had never thought that Madhu would back off. Yet he turned as soon as he turned to go back Madhu jumped into the water. And started swimming under water as slyly as she could. She had managed to grab the under water glasses ,torch and the snorkeling tubes from RK's Jet ski and she headed steadily towards the boat all the time keeping under water. RK wanted to join her. He did not want to let her go alone. Yet he was helpless Madhu had taken the only goggles he had. He waited for a sec and then jumped. And followed as close to Madhu as he could. He did not have the advantage of the snorkeling equipment but he was an able swimmer and could hold his breath for long. Madhu did not notice him as the sea was choppy and the water was splashing all around. RK came up to breathe and saw that all the three steamers had closed in and now glared there search lights on the boat. There were 6 men on the boat. They were not fighting any more but had an iron rod in their hands. RK tried to look for Madhu but could not see her he had enough light to tread in water. So he took a deep breath and dived in again he saw Madhu swimming under the boat then diving inwards. RK followed her but it was getting dark. His eyes were burning. He could not hear anything from the top. He understood they were atleast in 15 foot under water. RK's breath was giving up but he did not want to leave Madhu behind. That tiny tube wouldn't last her longer that a couple of more minutes but he could not see her. Suddenly he saw the light again it was Madhu and she was dragging a girl along. Her speed was considerable slow. RK was loosing his breath but in one last dire attempt he dove towards Madhu. He saw a shocked look on her face on seeing him. That was good enough he thought if I die now I will still be happy. He saw Madhu struggling with breath too and pushed her up. He held the girl by the other hand and they both swam up. They reached the surface in a minute. And both gasped fanatically for air.

Mukund and the other coast guard by now had closed in on the boat. Mukund along with Juhu station police officer was on the boat. Trishna on the shore had told him that Madhu and RK were headed towards the boat. He had seen the jetski abandoned without both of them about fifteen feet away and he along with others was now getting ready to tread water to find Madhu and RK.

Just then RM and Madhu surfaced both gasping for air. All the guards aimed their guns immediately on them but on seeing RK they realized it must be the ASP they were going to look for. They saw a girl unconscious and stooped to pull her on board. The captain of the coast guard looked at her and it did not take minute to understand what the whole scene was about. He Checked for pulse there was a very feeble pulse there in her throat. He called for his steamer and she was immideatly boarded on the steamer and they left for the shore within a minute. Juhu police arrested all six of them.

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Edited by mytinypaintings - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHapter 13

Madhubala and RK were still hanging on the boat trying to catch some air. Madhu said panting "They dumped the girl in the sea when they saw us approaching. RK was first pulled up on the steamer. Everyone started fawning on him including Mukund. Madhu saw it once again it hit her where did she stand?

She saw a hand held out to her she felt atleast someone remembered that she was there. She took the hand and climbed up on board only to bump in a sturdy bare chest. She looked up and saw RK she saw something in his eyes she tried to understand it. Mockery no, affection hope not, then what was it adulation may be, but no it was not that. She looked at her self all wet her uniform conformed to every single curve of her body. He was ogling at her. She just sat down feeling ridiculed. She was a woman and people could either ignore her or only look at her as a body that is it. She felt sick and cold inside out. She broke down and clutched her knees close to her chest all that has happened since the evening was too much in a day. She wanted cry but she couldn't she just closed her eyes.

RK looked at her intently. He felt her pain, in just one day she saw so much. She was literally forced by him earlier in the evening and now this. The girl had been bashed he had seen the bruises on her entire self. Her clothes were in tatters. He felt sick to be one of the community. He looked up in those dark skies and felt why he was a man. A man who only thought about his rights and his needs, a man who if does not get what he finds fit he destroys it or snatches it. History shows the barbaric nature of man so vividly. He felt ashamed of being a man.

The steamer was sailing back to the shore Mukund was coming towards Madhu with a warm blanket. She had dozed off thirsty for water her lips were cracked and her ivory skin looked creased with dehydration. She had drifted into sleep she was about to roll of in to water again in her sleep as she was sitting on the edge. Even before Mukund could reach to her RK was there her covered her in his blanket and pulled her close to him. He felt a need to protect her, he wanted to say that he was wrong and he was sorry, he wanted to hug her close. He wanted to warm her up he wanted to reassure her. He could see the vulnerable Madhu at that moment , Madhu who was not that ferocious but was angelic. He stared at her face she had skin as soft as first snow. Her eyelashes were thick and sooty. She had lips like softest rose petals. Her mouth pouted when in sleep. She was beautiful and could give a mightiest of a beauty queen a run for money. She was brave and could bring the strongest man down in a minute. She was as tender as dew. She was a breeze of fresh morning air. she was a woman no, he thought, she is a woman. A woman who could sooth a scorched soul with her mere looks.

Madhu stirred in her sleep and then leaned into a strong wall for support. Yes she was a woman who needed man to care, and nurture her, to love her. Mukund saw all this from the corner of his eyes and smiled affectionately at Madhu.

They reached the beach and the steamer stopped. RK woke up with a startle. It took him a second to get adjusted to his surrounding. Was he dreaming was Madhu still sleeping on his chest. He felt his chest warm and then looked down and saw Madhu's warm and soft cheeks resting on his bare chest. He felt his heart warm up. Before he could say a word Madhu also woke up with a startle. She saw where she was sleeping. She felt sick to be so careless to seek support from someone who was not as bad as the perpetrators but was no better. She immediately collected herself and stood up. RK saw the same arrogant, ferocious, closed out Madhu. He felt he stood in front of a mirror. She stood up and said a curtly " Mr Kundra I, no actually the entire police department owes a thanks to you if not for you we might not have got the victim. I hope your effort does not goes in vain and I hope she is alive."

"I hope so too Ms Mallik" RK knew Madhu was not here. Infront of him was a closed out iron wall and there was no point banging his head in a wall.Madhu jumped in the shallow water and started moving towards the beach Mukund and the coast guard captain also followed came down along with RK. Madhu looked back she saw Mukund talking to RK heartily. He did not care once to ask how she was, so much for camaraderie. She reached the beach a few woman constables headed towards her she asked for drinking water. She saw chetan running towards her, and saw a whole bunch of press there. Said to herself again " this time we need you" for the press. Chetan came close to her with a hot cup of coffee she smiled and took it greatfully atlast, someone still found her visible.

Madam aap theek hain na? Chetan said in a concerned tone?

She smiled and said "haan. Chetan wo larki"

"ZInda hai madam aur hospital le jayi gayi hai. Bahut chot aayi hai madam par wo jiyegi. Uski maa issi basti ki hai. Usko jaane se pehle hosh aa gaya tha. Usne apni ma ko bola " main theek hoon maa main jiyoongi tere liye. Mujhey yakeen hai madam wo theek ho jayegi aapki itni mehnat bekar nahi jayegi"

" hmmm" she said. " not all of them are alike" she thought to her self. She looked across her shoulder and saw Bittuji moving RK swiftly towards his car she saw that the journalists were not thronging RK this time had stepped back to let him go. RK stood infront of his dad for a few seconds. IG malik touched his shoulder with affection and pride. RK moved ahead. And went into the car.

She felt warm inside she felt he deserved much more than a thanks in reality she owed her life to him. She took a deep breath, one day and her life became so complicated. She saw a huge lot of journalist for a change were waiting patiently. She felt warmth on her shoulders and turned around startled she saw Trishna leaning her head on Madhu's shoulders. IG approached Madhu and said touched her shoulder affectionately, she smiled timidly and asked " was she raped" he said " It is anyone's guess as of now we only know that she was assaulted. Madhu go home your malik is waiting for you. Mukund will take care of every thing here. Report back at 7hrs tomorrow." Madhu noded and gave him a crisp salute. He smiled back a proud smile. Madhu and Trishna drove back home with Chetan ofcourse. On they way Madhu said " didu I ruined your special day"

Trishna said " you gave me thebest gift ever , you saved that girl I am so proud of you Madhu" They both hugged and remained silent for the rest of the drive'.

Edited by mytinypaintings - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

A Sweet Angel lost her precious life in a gruesome way. May her soul rest in peace

Thanks for writing the update in her remembrance Saumya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

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A Sweet Angel lost her precious life in a gruesome way. May her soul rest in peace

Thanks for writing the update in her remembrance Saumya.

it was such a sad occurence...it has shaken all of us I guess
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
May Damini Rest In Peace.

Both updates were well written. I hope the culprits are punished.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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may the girl's soul rest in peace. Very wonderfully written! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
May her soul Rest In Peace.

Very well written 😊 . Thanks for PM

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