Arshi-Yuvreen-Rishbala:Under One Roof Part6 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sree_dey

Heyy!!!]
Interestng concept...go on...waitng 😊



thanx a lot...!! and ya will update very soon.!! 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue


First of all thanks a lot for all your support...This prologue I know does not have any Yuvreen, Arshi or Rishbala in it...!! This was just an introduction to the three great women of the FF Suvi, Kushi and Madhu...!! 😃😃😃


Amidst the busy street walks a young 18 year old girl'The bustling street, all busy in their own work'Now, she comes in front of a small roadside tea shop'The tea shop is crowded with some guys'smoking'chit chatting'The girl is now terrified'she is worried on how could she walk from there'the guys eye her'stare at her' "Arey wah'look at the scene there'she is so beautiful'bilkul tota hein tota'" (They start giggling)'Some ladies walk by'They stare at the scene'first eyeing the guys'later they stare at the girl, "Look there Mrs. Sethi'Today's girls have no dressing sense in them. They don't even know how to present themselves in the road." "Yes, you are right Mrs. Iyer. These girls are a shame on the society", said the other.

The girl who heard this remark on her, felt even more disgusted on her self'She just tried to clad her more with the stawl that she had drapped around her and she walked further'Three boys who were leaning on the motor bike just came forward and surrounded the girl. The girl now could not do anything. She felt helpless even though she stood in a bustling street. Many people just were walking by giving a sad stare on her, passing the same comments as Mrs. Sethi and Mrs. Iyer. The girl stood there helpless staring across. Her eyes clearly reflected her helplessness. It was crying out loud that "Help Me". But this cry of her eyes just went unnoticed by many.

"What is your name beautiful?"asked one guy.

"Why are you trembling? Don't worry we will not harm. What say?" another said and all started laughing aloud.

"What is your age?" questioned the third. "Wait let me guess Rohit" said the first one while he tried to touch the girl's cheek. She resisted, her eyes cried out loud for help. She was going numb with fear. She did not know how to react. The stare of people continued. There was none who could walk up to her and help her. The other guy stretched his hands to remove the stawl that the girl was clenching to. She had tears in her eyes. She was helpless.

Suddenly something unexpected happened. The guy who was holding the stawl was forcefully turned around and "THUD" a slap on his face. A girl in her early 20s stood there. On the other hand another young lady wearing a Anarkali suit stepped in and consoled the girl and gave her stwal.

Seeing this now it was the turn of the guys to be horrified. To their shock another girl came in with a pepper spray in her hand "Kyun'Spary kar doon kya bhayya ji??" asked the girl.

"Haan Haan'spray kardo iss KK ke aankhon mein'Puri tarah Chopsey ho jayegi isski" said the girl who had slapped.

"Hey devi mayya..!! Kya ho raha hein aaj kal huamare logon ko'? Sab kehthe hein Delhi wallon ka dil bahuth bada hota hein'Lekin inn jaise chote soch rakhne wale logon ke wajah se Delhi ka naam hi karabh ho jayega.." said the other with disgust clear in her tone.

The guys just made an hurried escape from there, leaving behind a crying girl, wearing a red short skirt with a top and these three women by her side.

Suvreen Guggal (the one who slapped); Kushi Kumari Gupta (the one who consoled); Madhubala (the girl with pepper spray as her weapon).

What do you think will happen when these three brave women meet'along with their boys'DRAMA..is what can happen..!!

Edited by Manish_Shetty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Awesome 😊
Kya teeno ki entry maari hai...

and yes, Suvreen toh thappad maarne mein maahir hai...Gogoi ko bhi maara tha...

Good good, Continue 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Monika_S

Awesome 😊

Kya teeno ki entry maari hai...

and yes, Suvreen toh thappad maarne mein maahir hai...Gogoi ko bhi maara tha...

Good good, Continue 👏



thanx di..!! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is really awesum..
nd fcrse these 3 ladies will rock!!!!!
aag laga dengi...do cntinue it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome..it was pure amazing..thnx for the update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

this is really awesum..

nd fcrse these 3 ladies will rock!!!!!
aag laga dengi...do cntinue it..



thanx a lot parul..!! 😃😃 waise wat is fcrse? sorry i am a lil week in all these accronyms..!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: tani18

awesome..it was pure amazing..thnx for the update..



thanx a lot tani..!! 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: sujairohit

Good one ,do continue.



thanx a lot di..!! 😃😃😃 and will continue soon..!! 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: sahashrabdidash

awesum...awesum polouge...do continue soon



thanx a lot..!! well but this is nothing when it comes to ur update..!! the update you wrote was just awesome..!!! 😃😃😃

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