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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hii friends this is my first post on PV forum. I have been a silent member, just decided to open an account here finally to adore & show my appreciation to this wonderful show,actors & this Forum. This forum is so peaceful & nice.

As i love to write so decided to share my creativity with u all. Hope u all will love my post.

This post portrays yash's pain & anguish.

Yash-'sapna jo dekha tha woh tut gaya.

kadam jiske saath badhana tha , woh chut gaya.

zindagi ko paane ki koshish mein, saath hi zindagi se chut gaya.

kitni ankahi baatein, kitne dabe hue jazbaat bayaan krne they aapse aarti ji.

par aapki haqeeqat ne , dil mera tod dia'.

#so frds this is it, next will be from arti's point of view.

#if u all like this, i would love to cont.

#you can also share ur creativity too here.

#Hope to make some gud frds here.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome to Pv forum😃
Awesome poem...Nicely written about yash emotionsšŸ‘ā­ļø
Continue soon
Waiting for aarti's point of view😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That were good words ji

TFS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanky for such a warm welcome. hope u like my small poem.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: srirad

Welcome to Pv forum😃

Awesome poem...Nicely written about yash emotionsšŸ‘ā­ļø
Continue soon
Waiting for aarti's point of view😊

thanky so much for liking it so much. & for such a warm welcome. i am really glad u loved it. aarti's part will be up soon.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Frozen007

That were good words ji


TFS

thanku so much ji for loving it.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: RG0209

nice...

welcome to PV forum

thanky so much.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hayee! somethings just fir to perfect even in words ā˜ŗļø
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome and this is one superb poem..
You penned down Yash emotions so accurately..
Loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome to the forums. nice to see your posts

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