SKYLIGHT LOVE (Part 7/Page 15/3rd Feb) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
part 3
nice part...
Maan has reached there...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
part 4
WHAT?
Geet married Arjun and he is gone?
OMG poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WHAT...Geet married Arjun...

and he is dead...

why Geet is clutching his collar...as if she was waiting for him to come...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
oh my now its getting interesting...
geet married to arjun...interesting...

loved the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Oye wats dis?????

Geet is married???? Nooo...

Bt y she asks maan y u came wen evrything is finish...????

Plz conti soon.
Its difficult to wait nw...


One ques: why name is "skylight love"



As fr likes n comments dont knw y many still havn't read ur dis ff...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice parts

waiting for more

thanks for pm

do post soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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will update on sat 😊
sry for the delay stuck with work😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5

Mrs Singhannia this two words today had destroyed my whole world the color of my dreams were now drained and all I can see now was a world painted in my pain

I looked at Geet lying lifelessly in my arms

She is my world my soul screamed and held her close to my heart

But the loud voices screaming Mrs. Singhannia pierced my heart and snatched her away from my arms

I looked at her being dragged in her house in arms of strangers

Geet I called in my chocked voice hoping that her one look will give me strength to drag her back to me but that remained a tainted dream

Somehow I gathered my strength to get up on my feet hoping the nightmare will somehow end

I heard people still murmuring about her loss of her husband making me flinch in pain she is mine only mine my heart screamed I looked around at the alien faces and dashed outside the house looking for an escape

Daryl I screamed at top of my lungs

He came to me in a minute waiting for my command

I sat back in the car baffled

The crowded street now was scaring me making me feel I am stranger'.Stranger who is not welcomed here

Daryl I screamed again

Take me out of this place

Yes sir he said and reversed the car

Where should I take you sir Daryl asked?

Anywhere Daryl where I can breathe I mumbled as wiped the tears from my eyes

I looked at the vast blue ocean now which was as unrest as my heart

The huge white waves kept on crashing on the gray stone walls hoping to get passed by it but dying on its feet

It reminded me of the love of Geet no matter how much I hurt her she always kept trying and hitting my egoistic walls that protected my heart

Oh how much she loved me I thought and thumped on the ground

I looked at the sun that was merging in the sea biding the sky goodbye and leaving him alone for the darkening night leaving the memories of the skylight mornings

Geet I whispered isn't our love the same my sky changes with the light of your love and when you are gone there is only nights of pain and repentance to live

Geet I screamed this time making my voice crash against the emerging ways

You are mine and you always will be mine

I held my head in my hands and thought about her pained face

I needed so many answers from her

About her pain

About her betrayal

And about her wait that couldn't even hold my love in her heart

She said she waited then why did she not call

I looked at my clock it was almost 7.30 now

Daryl I called

And he was by my side in a minute

Can you please take me back to home'yes sir he said and opened the gates of the car

I looked at Daryl who carefully took a right turn making sure that I am not disturbed

I looked at the flickering street lights that were screaming the way I am on is not of home

Daryl I called again

Yes sir

Take me home please I murmured again

I am taking you home only sir the house that you have at the far end of the city

I smiled and thought was that home the house made of concrete bricks and cements but no love

Take me to Geet I asked Daryl

Who gave me a strange look but turned the car towards her house'

Home is where she is my mind spoke making my heart happy.

Edited by ayushi.sinha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Loved the chapter 😃
Poor Maan, helpless
it was very short Miki 😔
Waiting for this Mrs. Singhaniya mystery to solve soon 😳

Me first to comment 😳 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow Loved the Whole Chappy 😛

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