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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss


Yuppi finally u will cont it.Badmash larki humain blackmail hmmm๐Ÿคฃ.You're welcome sinji sanju:DYaar I have a reaquest.Pliz dont make the update 2 much hot.U know na what I mean๐ŸคฃI mean hot is ok but 2 much hot humse digest nahi hota *sachi sachi*๐ŸคฃN one more reaquest.Pliz pliz pliz pliz pliz cont soon.I love ur writing my sanju.keep up the great work:D


dear... i am sure, after reading you will report that it could be more hot.๐Ÿคฃ
ohk... i'll try my best to keep it at a gud level. hope so you will enjoy it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i had exams,so couldnt read ur last updates!!!!!!! jst now read it!!!!!!!! its lovellyy!!!!!! uday's confession!!!! manveer love!!!! ,everythng was jst prfcttt!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 5

~: A NEW BEGINNING: ~

The marriage rituals were over and all the guests were coming up to the stage where the couple was standing. All the guests wished them a very sweet and happy married life. Then came uday's massi.

"Haye rabba'.kinni soni kudi hain'. Shukar hain jindagi main ek to dhang ka kaam kar saka mera uday. Jaroor pichle janm main koi bata punya kiya hoga jo aaj itti soni bahu mili hain." Manyata blushed at her remarks. "aise hi hasti reh. Haste hue bahot cute dikhti hain." "dekh puttar, uday ko tere haathon saup rahe hain. Jigar da tukda hain who hum sab ka. Khyal rakhna uska'." She said with teary eyes. Manyata held hand in hers. "chinta mat kijiya massi ji. Khud se bhi jyada khyal rakhungi uska." Manyata said in an assuring tone. Uday looked at the scene with atmost pride, for selecting such a girl for his family. Massi smiled at Manyata. Manyata bowed down, so that she cud kiss her forehead. Massi moved aa bit forward so that she came more near uday. She said to him "uday beta'. Dekh kitni pyari mundi hain meri. Uske aankho main aasu dekha na'.(says holding his ear) toh teri khair nai puttar'." "ouch ouch ouch'. Nai massi, kabhi nai' aasuyonka toh sawaal hi nai uthata'.. ise khush rakhne keliye kuch bhi karunga main'.sacchi" uday said holding her hand which held his ear. Massi left his ear and both bowed down to her. She blessed both of them.Many many guests had came there. Uday and Manyata sat down as there was no more chain of guests in the vicinity to meet them. Manyata closed her eyes. Uday said "bhagwan, jaan hi nikal di meri' kitne saare log, paar'" and he abruptly stopped. Uday got up and smiled to the person. The person had the most beautiful boquet of flowers in his hands. "bolo na' par kya?" Uday made a step ahead to hug him but he retreated a step back. "hey'tumhe kuch nai karne wala'hug toh karo". They both hugged. Manyata opened her eyes and was shocked to see the scene before her. the two men were hugging each other and uday hd a tight grip of closeness."hey tum!!! Thanx' I donno how to thank you akash'" Manyata said with a feeling of gratitude towards him. "hey please'.u don't hav to thank me'its all ok." He said trying to convince her. To ease his work, his parents came up the stage. "Manyata beta'." His mother said "ye kya karne jaa rahi thi tum apne zindagike saath huh?? Hume bataya kyu nahi pehle ki tumhare sapnoka raajkumar koi aur hain'" she said looking at the strong mighty uday standing like a guardian besides Manyata. "huma sabko toh laga ke akash aur tum ek dusre ke bahot acche dost aur dosti kea age bhi badh rahe hain." Manyata felt a pang in her heart. "sorry beta'. Hume ho sake toh maaf kar dena. Tumhari zindagi ke saath, tumhare sapnoke saath khilwad karne ka hume koi adhikaar nai hain aur chahte bhi nai. Akash keliye koi tujh jaisi pyaari nai par koi acchi khasi toh jarur bani hogi. Us ladkika hum intajar karenge." His mother said teary eyed. "auntyji please'.." Manyata cud say only this. the couple took their blessings and his parents moved down. But akash was there on the stage as if still had to do sum thing. He looked at his passing parents and then at Manyata. Manyata like understood what he wanted. She looked at uday and uday knowing wat his wife wished agreed. Manyata took a step ahead and hugged akash. The work for which akash waited was over. He broke the hug and said t Manyata "yaha pe koi mere liye hain kya?". "hawww'.. hat pare'..jaa' yaha pe to koi patne nai wali." She said hitting him. "oh'.." he said rubbing his shoulder. "better luck next time'." Uday added to his sadness. The three laughed a bit. "bye'happy married life'." Akash said. "bye'and thanx." The two replied. Now it was time for the two hungry birds, hungry love birds to hav there meal. It was a ritual that the first morsel is to be fed by the groom to the bride and vice-versa. The two did the same. They loved the concept so much that rest of the meal was fed to Manyata by Uday and to Uday by Manyata.

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It was time for bidai. Manyata went ahead to her house, very near to the hotel. Here uday's baraat left to fetch the dulhaniya. With speed of turtle it was proceeding towards her house, while Manyata at the speed of hare had alredy reached her house and was preparing for her bidai. She entered her room for the last time, switched on the lights and filled the scene inside her eyes. She touched her fotos hanging on the wall. She looked herself into the mirror. She was looking the most beautiful bride ever on this earth. And the sindhoor and mangalsutra added to her beauty. She went to the wall where the poster of the soap she acted in with uday was hanging. She touched her and uday's foto in the poster. With teary eyes, she abruptly turned around knowing that her saajna wud be waiting for her. She switched of the lights, and closed the door and with heavy steps descended down the stairs. as she came, one of her relatives came running to announce that the baraatis had come ti the door. As soon as this was announced, the musicians started to play the piece and the singer sang''

Aa... Aa... Aa... Aa... Aa... Aa.. Aa..

(uday enterd thru the door and came walking towards her.)


Jo bandishein thi zamaane ki tod aaya hoon

Main tere vaaste duniya ko chhod aaya hoon
Aaya tere dar par diwaana -2
Aaya hoon aaya, aaya tera diwaana
Aaya tere dar par diwaana -2
Tera diwaana, tera diwaana, tera diwaana
Aaya tere dar par diwaana -2

(he stood beside her and held her by her waist. She picked the crisped parched rice in the cup of her hands, and threw it back
Tera diwaana, (tera)
Tera diwaana, (diwaana)
Tera diwaana, tera
Tera diwaana
Tera diwaana, tera diwaana, tera diwaana
Aaya tere dar par diwaana -2

Ye hai tera hi saudaayee, ye hai tera hi shahdaayee -2
Tere ishq mein hai isse mar jaana
Aaya tere dar par diwaana -2
Aa... Aa... Aa...

. With such slow steps they finally reached the gates. She hugged her mother, father and each of her relative. She hugged her best friend cum sister, her cupid, shri. Also ankita.)

She sat in the doli decorated for her. The doli was lifted up by her brothers on there shoulders, while uday was just ahead of her on his snow white ghodi. They reached the hotel where she was brought down from her doli. She and uday both sat in the beautiful white Honda civic. It geared and went forward leaving other relatives behind. From there, they were going to take darshan of god.

"yes uday'. I cant believe I am seriously married to you. Mera barso purana sapna such ho gaya hain' luv u luv u luv u'." she said hugging him and kissing tightly on his cheeks. "kya princess'.aaj humpe bada pyaar aaraha hain?" he said looking at her with eyes filled with love. "who toh pehle sehi aata tha." She innocently said. "waise uday, mujhe batayo'. Tum mujhe princess kyu bulate ho?" she inquired. "who kya hain na princess, aap humari sapno ki raajkumari, dil ki yuvraani aur zindagi ki maharani ho. Isiliye'." He said with equal innocence. "aaawww'.. u r sho shweet'.. mera pyara pyara guchi guchi shweetu shweetu uday'.." she remarked pulling his cheeks and moving his face left and right. Uday laughed as she left his cheeks. "ghar pe kya nautanki kar rahi thi'. Wha kitni ro rahi thi, jaise ki main tumhe ab bahot tang karne waala hu." He complained. "aisa nai hain, woh ab gharwaalonse hone waali doori ke aasu the aur tumhare saath ho gayee shaadi ke aasu hain." She said. by that time, they reached the temple, went in and took the gods blessing and proceeded ahead to uday's bunglow

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There, her saans and her sasuraal was waiting for the couple. The best thing was even her maike ke log were called for her grihapravesh. As they got down from car, some one shouted "oye hoye' bajayo ji'" and the dhol, tashas, lezims, started to ring. All the people started to dance'. From the crowd the couple was led inside the compound till the red carpet which leaded till the main door of the house. It was filled with petals, and people standing beside the carpet threw flowers on the walking couple. Both,linking there arms, wre enjoying the jashn completely. They reached the door and Manyata saw her mother waiting there for her, and her face showed how immensely happy she was to find her mother there. Aarti was done and Manyata held udays and gently pushed the vessel with her toe. And the rise grains spread till a great distance. Stepping on those rice grains, they enterd. Udays daadi was present there. She said to the couple as they proceede towards her, "kehte hain, jitney lambe ye daane gire, utna hi lamba aur such bhara aapka aage ka jeevan hoga." Pointing towards the grains, she said, "aur tumhare to dekho bahu, kitni door tak aaya hain." The couple being pleased with the deduction bowed down to her. "caressing her cheeks daadi said, "badi pyaari hain tu'. Bahot khush rakhegi humare munde ko." Looking up said, "bhagwanji, shukriya, ye din aur humari sabse sundar aur pyari bahu dikhaneke tak jinda rakhne keliye." And her lips, wre covrd with a feather soft hand. "aisa mat kahiya daadi maa. Aapko apke pote ke bacche bhi toh dekhne hain'" said Manyata. It was time to avoid the emotional drama and also for manyata's gharwaale to make a move. Her father said, "toh beta, hum chalet hain bahot der ho rahi hain'" "areh dad, aap jaa rahe ho? Thike'. Bye, main aapko darwaaje tak chodne aati hu." She escorted them till the door, she hugged everyone. "aap sab ki bahot yaad ayegi. I'll miss u all." Manyata said with tearful eyes. Her mother covered her mouth, as she didn't want to break down once again, and sat in the car. Everyone bid her farewell and Manyata came back in the house. as she enters, she was shocked to see shri there. "shri, tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Sab chale bhi gaye'. Ab tum ghar kaise jaane waali ho? Ruko I'll arrange something for u." she said and was abot to go. "areh bhabiji,aapki misunderstanding ho gayee hain. Hum sasuraal ke side se hain.jaate to maike ke log hain. Sasuraal waale toh ruk the hi hain." Manyata was shoked at shri's reply. "hawww'. Raang badlu girgit. Besharm. Do minute pehle uday ko jijju jiju kehte ghoon rahi t hi aura b suddenly who tera bhai ho gaya.?" "meri behn ko rang badlu girgit kehne ki tumhari ye himmat?" uday said with a fake anger. "tub hi kuch kam nai hain use. Tu bhi waisa hi hain. Jaisa bhai, waisi behn." Manyata argued. Shri quietly sliiped from there enjoying the war between the couple. "baccho, plz jhagdo mat. Wo tumhari taang kheech rai hain." Uday's mother said pacifying them. "jao, tum dono bahr jaake akele main baat karo." His father added. "kyu? Kya hua? Hum itne seriously nai jhagad rahe."uday said. "areh, uske liye nai, shaadi se pehle baat kar nai sake na so." His father replied. "woho woho woho, 1 sec 1 sec 1sec. humari love marriage hain"'.. "jo humne arrange karwayee hain" shri interrupted uday. "whatever'" he said waving his hand and continued. "we know each other in and out." "in paach saalon main bahot kuch hua hain and you need to discuss that. Plz jao." His father ordered, and without arguing, both left silently, out in the garden.

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Note:

there were some isues regarding the story as it is a bit reality based. So I decided to change character names as its better that we all don't get into any fuss regarding its resemblance ahead. So, shritama is now shruti and is affectionately called as shru. Ankita is ananya. Akash verma instead of akash rawat. Sorry for the inconvenience. This change will be seen from this part of the update and ahead. And regarding its hotness. This is very cool update not even h of hotness is visible. Sorry for it if u feel that I made a disaster of there suhaag raat. I hav not at all described it well. Plz excuse me for it. Sorry if the update did not live up to your expectations.

Prankz aka Sanju.

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"U first" Manyata screamed even before uday cud say anything. Uday sighed and agreed and he startedโ€ฆ

"this is after the restro bar drama which u raisedโ€ฆ." . "haawwโ€ฆ. Saara drama maine kiya? How dare u say that?". She interrupted. "toh kya maine kiya, waha kisna kaha, 'chalo girls lets go sumwher else'(in a typicl girlish voice.) u shud hav said atleast hi mr. Udayveer singh. u luvd me na? so?" "so? So kya? Tum bhi mujhse pyaar karte the na? why didn't u say anything?" she again interrupted "Areh? Mere haath se glass gira, I tried to say 'manyata' par waha se tuk tuk(sound of her heals) karte huye kaun nikal gaya? Main? Ya tumhara bhoot huh?" he asks keeping his hand on his waist and other pointing at her and then waving in air. Manyata realized her mistake, but as usual, felt weird to say sorry. "whateverโ€ฆ go ahead." She replied looking away. A smirk flashed in his face signifying his victory and without adding any more oil to the fire of there argument,, he proceeded. "I went to masrine drive, wher we used to hang out. I recalled everything that happened with us. Then I was firm on confession and I headed directly at shri's house as I had no guts to face u after the restro fiasco.(Manyata giggled on the thought that her hubby is afraid of her) there I confessed everything to shri, and she told ke humari madam shaadi karne nikli hain." "toh" she asked him excitedly. "toh kya, I toh started to cry only. Fir humari shru ke dimaag main kahase ek idea tapak pada. Who aur main seedhe teumhare ghar gaye." "what? Mere ghar? Tab main kaha thi?" she again interrupted him. "tum? Tum tumhari who restro bar waali adhoori rahi hui party dene gayee thi. Fir hume mom n dad ne tumhara aur akash ka rishta kaise fix ho gaya uski kahani sunayee. Jab hum waha se nikal rahe the, tab hume tumhara so-called 'fiance' mil gaya. Usne shru ko pehchana. Fir humne shaanti se baithke use humari story batayi. Hum expect kar rahe the wo kuch action le like, 'I am sorry, I'll help to bring u n Manyata 2gether.' Par pagal ne kaha 'so?' main to use wahi pe hi maarne waala tha. Par shri ne roka and made it more clear. fir I told him to meet u and ask u such questions.." "ohhhโ€ฆ.isiliye mr. aise sawal puch rahe the." Manyata laid her opinion. "fir humne tumhare ghar main ek small meeting rakhi. My mom n dad, tumhare mom n dad, akash aur uske parents aur shru. Then in it, it was decided that I'll marry u aur shagun ki len-den, shru k eek se badhkar ek ideas, au raise karte I met u directly in our shaadi!" he ended in an excited tone. "1 second, tum mere ghar meeting kar rahe the, aur main kaha thi/ mere hi shaadi ki meeting aur main nahi?" she asked. "pagal, kya tum mujhe waha dekh ke dimaag se kaam leti? Duniya sarpe leke shor machati. So." He answered. Manyata gave him a terrifying look and said, "waise tuymne maun vrat rakha?". Uday hit his forehead. And replied, "he bhagwan, iske sar main thori si akal de do. Maine maun vrat nahi rakha tha. Din bhar bak bak kiya jaa raha tha. Sab tayaari kar raha tha. Bas wo kuch minute ekdam chup tha kyunki agar tumhare sawaalonke jawaab de ta, toh meri awaaz pehchanke pata nai chalta, ki main uday hu, akash nai?". Manyata left a sigh a realization. "ab tumhari baari." Uday told her.

"ok. So, actually tumhare bina jindagi iski maine thori mental preparation karke rakhi ythi. Suddenly tum mere saamne tapak pade. I thot and realized ke varmaala aur angoothi maine tumhe pehnayi hain. Matlab half battle won! I cudn't believe it. Fir came ur love confession. I went weak before u. mujhe laga my love is nothing before yours. Jo pyaar pyaar ki hi kurbaani de sakta hain, sirf for the happiness of your lady love, who toh kitna strong hoga. It cud also survive that attack. Mujhe laga ke agr main London nai gai hoti, bas ek do din aur ruk jaati, toh abhi, this very moment, hum happily married hote, 1-2 anniversaries bhi ho gayee hoti humari. Maine jo bian soche action li, uska anjaam mere pyaar ko bhugadna pada. Sirf mujhe nai u too suffered. And that thot, ke because of me u suffered so much was damn horrifying. So I cudn't even get up as I was so weak. I called u but, I wasn't audible I suppose. Fir I decided, I cant do this. taqdeer ne galti sudharne k eek aur mauka diya hain, I cant leave it, so I came running." Manyata ended and all uday cud do was hug her tightly. "princess kitna sochti ho!!! Its nothing like that. Tumhara pyar bhi equally strong hain. Ohk. Aisi pagalon jaisi baate mait karo. And why did u slap me? Ek bar kiya, wo toh accha nai tha, par do bar? That was worst." Still they both were hugging. Finally Manyata broke the hug to answer. "see basically it was ur mistake. Main completely Manveer mood main thi, ke we will talk all and only about us, par tumne akash naam ka jaap shuru kiya. Toh fir toh meri satak gayee. Aur maine bajaa di. I had come to speak, ke after 5 whole years we got a chance to be romantic once again, par tum?" "ohk baba, got it, but doosri bar kyu?" he asked. " but naturally, tumne bataya isliye." She replied in a childish tone. "haawwwโ€ฆโ€ฆ dtas not good ohk?" he answered and Manyata giggled.he held her by her waist. "tumhe pata hain princess? After u went, jo award function tha, usme mere saath tumhe bhi fresh new face ka award mila, aur humare soap ko the best daily ka. U know, I went and collected ur prize." He told her with pride. Manyata rested her head on his chest. After a while, she looked at him she raised her head. He brought his head close to hers. There lips came near each other. Their lips had just touched each others gently, when,

"tujhe dekha toh ye jaana sanam,

(they came a bit apart)

Pyaar hota hain deewana sanam,

(they broke the hug)

Ab yaha se kaha jaaye hum,

(uday held Manyata by her waist)

teri baahon main mar jaaye humโ€ฆ.."

"shru ye sab kya tha?" Manyata asked her sternly. "main na aaj raat ki trailor dekh rahi thi. Sirf video tha. Socha background music bajau?" shru answerd her. Before uday cud say a word shru said, "chalo jaldi se icecream aa gaya hain, aur dusri rasmonka time bhi." And went inside. Manveer followed her.

They reached in the hall and had icecream and did all the rasms. After they were over, Manyata started to pick the bowls and help the ladies. Uday's bhabi held her hands and said, "ye kya kar rahi ho, aaj hi shaadi hui hain, kal breakfast bana lena. Abhi u cant do anything. Thak gayee hogi tum, jau jaake so jao." Manyata looked at her mother=in-law confusedly, and then at uday's bhabi. Her mother-in-law nodded and Manyata kept the bowls and went

She met uday while she was heading towards there room. Uday escorted her inside and as soon as Manyata was going o sit on the bed, he shouted, "rukoโ€ฆโ€ฆ" manyata was half seated and got up with jerk. "kya hua?" she asked him. "kya hain na, main ghar ka sabse badmaash ladka hu. Sabki suhaag rat barbaad karne main expert hu. Toh, badle ke daur pe, sab wahi karne waale hain, jo maine aaj tak kiya hain." She looked at him in a what-has-this-to-do-with-me-sitting-on-the-bed look. He said "aage dekho hota hain kya!" and he lifted up the bedsheet.

"cheeeโ€ฆ.." Manyata shouted as she spotted all khakras lying on the gadda, under there bedsheet. Uday told Manyata to pick them all up and keep on the table.shhe followed his instructions. Uday offerd her a khakra and she refused with a very diry face. He ate one, and while eating said, "princess, (counting on his fingers,) hume in all 8 alarm clocks aur mobile fones humare kamre main dhoondne hain" Manyata looked at him blankly. Start finding, he told her. While they were searching and removing the device from its place, uday told her that, the devices had alarms set in them. After one-one hour, each of them wud ring turn by turn. They got 8, switched of the alarms. And as uday was going to leave a sigh of relief, there was a loud thud on the door.

"uday mamu/chahu, darwaaza kholo na!!!" Manyata was pleased to hear such a sweet voice while uday crashed on the floor shouting "oh noโ€ฆ" finally he went and opened the door, and the 6 children rushed in, and stood in a disciplined manner. "kya hain?" uday asked irritatedly. Rocky said "hum aap dono ke saath aaj isi room main rehne waale hain". Baby, his sister clarified his point "aap hume pichle kuch din avoid kar rahe hain. Humne aapke sath khela h nahi hain. So aaj raat bhar hum aapke saath khelne waale hain." Next was sunny "hume humare parents ne bheja hain" sony clarified his point, "hume humare parents ne kaha hain, jo aap dono karenge, wahi hum sab yahi isi room main karenge. Aur ha, unhone ye bhi bataya tha ke aapko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki unhone hum sabko bheja hain." Next lucky said, "hume aapki room bahot pasand hain" and in clarification, jassi said, "jaise ki ye gadda" and all the six of them jumped on it as if the gadda was a trampoline. Uday knew wat had to be done. He said, "chocolate triple Sundae kisko khana hian?" and all the kids including uday and Manyata stretched their hand up in air. "toh agar aap sab yaha se gaye, toh kal 2-2 bar tum sabko chocolate triple sundae khilaunga (joining his hands) par abhi jau tum sab." The children with sad faces got down as they cudn't miss eating choco triple sundae two times. And before going uday said to them, "jau sab apne apne parents ke room main jao, aur agar sundae chahiye toh wahi raho raat bhar. And don't forget to tell them ki aap sab ko maine bheja hain." The children ran from there and uday closed the door now leaving a sigh od relief. Manyata came near uday and said, kitne pyare pyare bacche hain na!! kash hume bhi aise bacche ho. Looking at her uday answered, uske liye bahot kuch karna badta hain. And I suppose sant kabir hi the jinhone kaha hain, kal kare so aaj kar aur aaj kare so ab. And tightened his grip around her. Freeing herself, Manyata said, "hat pare, besharam." Now uday was really tired and said, "I am sleeping gud night." "Kyu?" she asked. "kyunki main thak gaya hu. Pehle shaadi, fir ye sab khakra and stuff, fir bachhe, aur fir tumhe manate manate."

Uday sat near the back rest of the bed, which touched the wall. Manyata came there and said to him, "pata hain, stamina badhane keliye doodh ki jaroorat hoti hain. And I suppose ab tumhe stamina ki bahot jarurat padne waali hain." Uday looked at her surprised. With her eyes, she signaled at the milk which ws kept beside him. Smiling, he drank the milk in one go. And looked at Manyata, looking at him, Manyata tried to run, but in vain. Uday caught her by her waist and puuled her back. His back rested on the wall and manyata's back on his chest. He gently removed her dupaata and threw it on the ground.

He removed her bindi and kept it on the side table, kissing her forehead. He removed her earings at kissed her earlobes. Same he did with the necklace and other ornaments. Now only anklets were left. He kept her gently on the bed. He bent near her toes and removed the, and kissed her ankles. He slowly scaled up. Her ghagra was coming between his lips and his lips and her skin, so he went a bit up and untied the dori of her ghagra. To ease his work, Manyata pulled her logs close to herself, due to which the ghagra slid down her legs and uday threw it of.

Same he did with her other garments. He tore his garments apart.He ensured that not a single place was left on her skin which was unkissed, he enterd her. The room filled with her soft and sweet moans and the night passed in bliss.

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Uday had taken all the precautions that his suhaag raat will not be disturbed. The newly weds were allowed to sleep till 9. And he had calculated that many clocks or fone to be present. But poor uday, his prediction went wrong, he counted till 8 by mistakenly and the last device, which was very near to him, rang in a harsh sound. He got up franktically. He looked here and there. And found the clock and closed it. He looked around the room. It was neat clean and tidy unlike it was in the night. Manyata was no where to be seen. There clothes were no where. Her ornament weren't there, instead there was his track pant and a note beside it. Wore the pant and read the note,

"my dear dear hubby,

Goodmorning sweetu. Maine tumhare kapde bathroom main rakhe hain. Jaldi se brush karo, naha lo aur wo kapde pehne neech ajao. Aaj main cook karne waali hu. M waiting

Tumhari

'Princess'"

He closed it and did exactly as his wife had told him.

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Sorry for the delay and grammar mistakes. Hope u liked it. Might be I may get more irregular in posting as I hav my prelims. I'll try my best to be up to date in updating. Luv u all and lots of love from me. And do post long long comments. (esp. u sniggles) plz like it. Hope it was good

Prankz aka Sanju.


Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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yey ..
yippe im the first one ..
awesome update continue soon .. :):)
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Originally posted by: Udaylovie

yey ..

yippe im the first one ..
awesome update continue soon .. :):)



thanx... will surely continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
it was gr888!!!!!!! waitng to read moree!!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
aww so sweet update๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
loved each and very scene
culd literally imagine it happening infront of my eyes...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

do cont soon
dear
bdw eagerly waiting 4 manveer's first ni8๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Truly amazing update Sanju.
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I reread the entire chapter again ... it was awesome.
Thanks for the PM๐Ÿ˜Š.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
thanx navi!!
that was a precious comment
luvd it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
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Awesome sanju.
Nicely written.
Thanks 4 the long update.
Expressed emotions very well.
Good luck on ur exams, been wondering where u were lately.
Continue as soon as u get a break. thanks 4 pm.๐Ÿ˜‰

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