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Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 23
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Thanks a lot for commenting and liking. Few generic questions / observation across the board so responding collectively –
Geet changing menu and not failing and Sasha getting scolded – I always felt that in the show, Geet was shown a little too immature for someone who had gone through so much in her life and Maan too simplistic for such a successful man. So I wanted to change things here a little bit to show how actually I wanted things to be
Devtara's involvement in the story – Yes, the first half of the story will not have much Devtara. There basic character is same but right now, they are not in the picture because they do not know about Geet being Maan's muse and they don't care about her. But once Geet is in Maan's life, his family including Devtara will play an important role.
Expectations from Kurbaan Hua – Well guys I am scared posting this part as I know how dear these moments are to all of us. My only hope is that you understand in this story how uncomfortable Geet is with party and men and hence expecting Maan doing anything different will be not in the character of the story.
Hope this clarifies and last but not least –
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Chapter 10 – Kurbaan Hua
Maan was looked around when his heart skipped a beat. There stood his object of dreams, clad in a simple white saree with silver border…looking beautiful, elegant and sexy. Maan finally lowered his eyes at that thought but very quickly again looked at her sensuous figure as she shimmered even amidst some very well dresses people.
He groaned inwardly "Only she could make something so simple look so graceful and yes sexy…today you will kill me Geet and who cares because I don't….You look so beautiful…like an angel has come down from heaven to grace me…today I want to die at your hands…"
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j91fUOR_Tn0&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]
Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j91fUOR_Tn0
Kurbaan Hua Teri Tisnagi Mein Yun,
Kurbaan Hua Teri Aashiqui Mein Yun,
Bekhudi Mein, Bekali Mein, Bequafi Mein Hua,
Tujko Har Dua Di Aur Daga Bhi Aur Fana Hua,
Kurbaan Hua... Kurbaan Hua
Ada Pe Wafa Pe Jafa Pe
Kurbaan Hua... Kurbaan Hua
Party started in its full zeal and in true Khurana style. All the guests were enjoying completely except for three. Sasha who was waiting eagerly for the food to be served so that she can see Geet failing. Maan who was finding it difficult with every passing moment to not whisk away the beauty who had mesmerized him to live his fantasy and Geet, who now after the adrenaline of arranging the party being over was feeling very uncomfortable in an unknown scenario.
"Sab log mujhe hi kyon dekh rahe hain…nahi nahi Babaji…bas mera waham hai…relax Geet…just relax."
(Why is everyone staring at me…no no Babaji…it is just my imagination…relax Geet…just relax.)
Finally giving up as his control broke, Maan gave into his desire to be close to her and walked towards her with an excuse of congratulating her for her efforts. But he knew it was just that, an excuse as in reality he just wanted to be near her to feel her warmth, to fill his heart with her aroma and submit his entire being to her scintillating voice.
"Geet tum mujhe pagal kar dogi…"
He was just a feet away when one of the client exec came and ask her for a dance. Maan could see how uncomfortable she was feeling. Her nervousness was clearly visible not knowing how to answer the man back but clearly not wanting to dance with him. She fidgeted with her pallu thinking of a reply when Maan joined them.
"Geet, can you get the food out?"
Geet was visibly relieved and thanked him through the eyes before running from there.
……
Sasha seethed in anger as Mr. Chopra once again praised the food and the party. Her eyes, which were red in anger, looked at Geet as she stood with Pinky and Adi.
"How did this behnji managed to correct the menu….mere pure plan pe paani pher diya."
Maan, whose eyes had not left her even for a moment also noticed her standing and chatting with Pinky and Adi. She talked animatedly with her hands and her eyes held a smile. She could be really talkative and chirpy when comfortable with the people around her. Somewhere he felt jealous that not only Pinky but even Adi had managed to be her friend in such a short time whereas she still felt awkward around him. But then Adi had a very non threatening innocent look about himself and his brotherly behavior towards Geet would have helped his case.
He sighed softly with a burning yearning as Pinky pulled her onto the dance floor.
"Kurban Hua" played in the background and he could almost feel his arms around her.
"Will she actually feel like silk as he envisioned when he will hold her hand in his.
Will his fingers shiver slightly as they will wrap around the curve of her waist?
Will she float like an angel as he will twirl her around?
Will her aroma mingle in his breath as he will move her around him? Will her eyes darken in passion as he will bend her on his thigh leaning on her?
Will she throw her head backwards in ecstasy as he will lift her just to bring her down brushing her soft body against his entire length?
Will her body have goose bumps like his, matching his desire and passion?"
Rubaroo Tu Magar Tanha Hai Yeh Jahaan,
Jal Uthe Meri Se Saanso Ka Yeh Samaa,
Kya Hua Pal Mein Jane Kho Gaya Kyu,
Tu Mila Aur Judai Ma Hua Yun,
Bekhudi Mein, Bekali Mein, Bequafi Mein Hua,
Tujko Har Dua Di Aur Daga Bhi Aur Fana Hua,
Kurbaan Hua... Kurbaan Hua
Ada Pe Wafa Pe Jafa Pe
Kurbaan Hua... Kurbaan Hua
His fantasy was broken as his cell rang and he realized that she was still there on the dance floor with Adi and Pinky, moving gracefully with a small smile.
He shook his head to clear the images his mind had conjured in the space of few moments and walked outside the ballroom to pick up his call. He could not understand why he had no control over his heart and imagination around her. He was lost in his own world which surrounded her.
"Damn It…I need to control myself…pata nahi kya ho jaata hai mujhe is ladki ko dekh kar…"
Sasha could not bear her smile, her dance and her happiness. She wanted to destroy her and in a fit of rage she moved towards her. As she came closer she realized that Geet's pallu was touching on the floor and she smirked. She wanted to humiliate her for the embarrassment she was feeling because of her failed plans.
Pinky felt thirsty and Adi moved with her towards the drinks bar. Geet twirled once again as song ended and was shocked to hear an unmistakable tearing sound. Her saree's end was stuck in Sasha mam's heel and her delicate chiffon saree had torn at the shoulder where it was pinned.
She tried to stop it from tearing further, but Sasha seemingly oblivious to the fact turned with so much force that the piece totally tore away and fell down.
Her eyes widened in alarm and she froze with fear. Her past and present once against merged. Past where she fought for her dignity and honor…her izzat from the devil and present where she felt exposed. Every eye in the room seemed to be on her, accessing her and she felt hot and red with feeling of almost nakedness.
Tears trickled her eyes and finally realizing the situation, Adi started moving towards her to help her.
Maan meanwhile entered the room and was shocked to see Geet standing in torn saree with full room looking at her as if she was a showpiece. He was distressed to see her standing in the middle with her arms crossed over herself to protect her modesty with tears flowing. He did not know hat happened but could not understand why no one was helping her or why she did not move.
"Yeh sab kya ho raha hai…why is standing there like this…Oh God!!!"
Marne Ka Sabab Mangta Raha Darbadar,
Mitne Ko To Dil Pal Mein Raazi Hua,
Puri Hui Har Aarzoo Har Dastaan Meri,
Ke Tum Shuru Hue Jahan Mein Khatam Hua,
Kurbaan Hua... Kurbaan Hua
Ada Pe Wafa Pe Jafa Pe
Kurbaan Hua... Kurbaan Hua
Anger cruised through his veins seeing her look so vulnerable and embarrassed. He took long strides giving everyone a glare making them look down. He reached her before Adi and quickly removed his jacket putting it over her. She seemed in a daze and shocked out of her wits. When she still not moved, he gently held her elbow and moved her towards the door and onto the alley.
Sasha fumed seeing her yet another plan going wrong and bringing Geet and Maan closer.
He gently made her sit on one of the chairs and sat beside her. He let her cry and offered her his hanky silently when she seemed to have calmed down a little bit.
Geet wiped her tears and looked at Maan. Her eyes had so many emotions in them - pain, gratitude, and a question which asked "why me?"
Though Maan was feeling very upset himself but thought of what she must be going through made him keep a lid on his own emotions. He just wanted to take those tears away and wipe the pain in her eyes. Somehow, he gave her a small smile and asked her softly where her dress was. She still looked dazed and seeing her so unresponsive, Maan realized it was probably best to just drop her home for now and talk to her later.
"Don't worry I will ask Pinky to take care if it. Let me drop you home. You go and rest."
His words broke her trance. She had worked so hard for this party and last thing she wanted was Maan Sir to face any trouble because of her. She slowly shook her head in denial telling him that he needs to be present as the main event was still left. She apologized for ruining it already to an extent.
A fresh wave of tears spilled form her eyes piercing his heart. He sighed. He did not know to be in awe at her concern for him…scratch that…for his company or revel in her strength. But he knew that she will end up feeling guiltier if he went with her at this moment.
"I will go and change sir. My dress is in the spare room only."
Maan held her hand softly and took her there and asked her to go inside while he waited outside. He suddenly remembered Dev and called him. He asked him if he or Naintara had come with the driver and for the first time thanked the extravagant streak of his brother. He told him that he will be using the driver for few hours as they wouldn't need both their cars till morning.
As he finished the call, Geet came out. She was still quite traumatized and Maan escorted her till the car.
"Iski koi zaroorat nahi hai sir"
"Geet, just go."
Geet had no strength left to argue and she sat inside the car. As driver started, Maan leaned in on the window.
"Geet it was just an accident and don't let an unplanned misfortune scare you. Take proper rest and I will be waiting for you on Monday at office. I trust you to make a right decision. Remember ki agar tumne aaj ka saamna nahi kiya toh kal ka bhi nahi kar paogi. "
Maan's words acted like balm at her wounds. She looked at him in wonder as the car moved forward. His words gave her an unknown strength as for the first time in her life someone actually trusted her to take a decision about her own life. Till now only her family decided and she followed their commands.
"Nahi Maan Sir. I will never let you down. Pehli baar kisi ne mujh pe bharosa kiya hai. Mujhe sahi rah dikhayi hai. It is true that I am alone and I have to walk on this path alone only. But today I know the value of good people who guide you, support you and affect your whole life for good. You are my guiding star sir. You are my pillar of strength. Your words will always remain with me to show me the right path.
Pata nahi kaise aap meri sharam, meri majburiyan, mera dar samajh lete hain…you are my angel Maan Sir."
Halki si dhoop badlon se chupa chupi khelthi
aur zindagi ke har pehlu dikhati .
Thand ki dhoop zindagi ki garmahat deti
wahi sard hawaien zindagi ki raat ko aur gehra deti .
Cherries ke phoolon har rang bhar deti ,
tumse se tassavur karati
By Hermoso
Maan went back to the party and apologized to Mr. Chopra for the mishap. But Mr. Chopra took it well and himself said sorry for momentary shock which led to everyone freezing up and embarrass the poor girl more.
Geet reached home and thanked Maan Sir again in her heart. With great difficulty she fought her nightmares from today and past to drift into a fitful sleep.
Maan reached home and could not sleep. Her tears, her restlessness, her pain was affecting him. There was no point in denying it any further and he stormed into his gym doing aggressive tai-chi. He knew it was an accident but his heart and mind were fighting. Heart was telling him that he failed to protect her and Mind was telling her to stop getting affected by her.
"I was just empathizing with her. That's all. No girl can change me….no one."
Precap – Main ne kaha phoolon se
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