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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Gorgeous OS! It's not forgiving but a chance to redeem! Fabulous one!

Thanks for the PM :D

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asumi

@asumi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

"Her weapons her lack of them"

that was soo amazing!! and also- the part where she says - i am giving you a chance! gosh loved it!!

loving the fears Arnav has, loving the love he has and the way she accepted him- heart warming!! amazing OS!!
you rock!! 👍🏼

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

How did I miss this? Fab!

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

OS # 10 -Comment -1:06 am.

I think I've commented on this before? but the tender picture you have painted on them you've lainted so well, the mplications of what happened the previous night are all there *blush* and that tender loving feeling you've evoked from your readers is truly splendid.

A very innovative OS.

-Aashifa

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

That was beautifully penned..

Loved the portrayal of emotions.

The descriptions were awesome.

Great job..

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PCdublin

@PCdublin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Beautifully written!!! I truly think that ASR is terrified that one day Khushi will realize that he is not worthy of her! Probably why he wants this marriage done quickly ;-)

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

I LOVE the way you lie--- lol( i couldnt resist) i love the way you write...
I dont know how i could have missed this story.. So glad i found a new fantastic author