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Dis OS is Specially For Jr.MSK...Pata hai late ho gai dene main Sollyyy...

Mummmaaa…A Voice came from room… Just not once but repeated times….

And the only reply he got from his mumma is haan bacha ruko aati hu

Mummaa aao idar..

Aai baba ruko…said she…

Geet…Geet….Says a man

Hey babaji….Ab yeh aapki bachi kya karee k tarf maan hai aur ek taraf dhruv…

Itni bhi parwa nai ki ghar main ek nanha MEHMAAN aane waala hai aur yeh dono muje hi aram nai de rahe…Par Dhruv chota hai usse dekhe aati hu…

Geet goes there in the room n sees both are together n are shouting for no reason…

Dhruv Maan Singh khurana



Apple Of his parents..he is in his 4 years now…n today he is very much happy as it is his Mumma n dadda ki 5th anniversary…..n even he knows his new family member is going to cum at any moment as his dadda made him understood him but dhruv being a little boy all went above his head but understood a little that another member is coming to play with him...

Maaneet is living a married happy life…Many struggled obstacle tried to separate them but nothing succeed but it made Maaneet's relation strnger with love n trust..Now any Problem can't come n make them apart…Having a sweet Family Maaneet Dhruv dadi n anni n now a new member to be joined….

Geet: Kya hua Maan.. ye dhruv kyu chilla raha tha aur aap bhi iska saath de rahe ho..

Maan: wo nah main dhruv ko humari Marriage ki video bataya abhi n ab Pic bata rahu…

Geet: Maan Muje Bhi dekhna hai…

Maan: Isliye hum tumhe bula rahe the..

Dhruv :Muma muje dekh ni aap ache dikhe aap

Geet : aallee lee mele Eddy teddy ko ushki mumma achi lagti hai

Chalo aap idhar aaye mere pass

Main nah aapko aapke dada ke bare main boltu hu…

Aaapke dadda se sab darte the…who humesha chup baithe..kabhi haste na the…Bas kaam kaam karte the..Phir main unse mili n hume dheere dheere pyar hua . n shaadi karli thi

Aapko bata hai hum nah Hoshiyar pur main mile the….

Dhruv: Mumma aap na isme bahut achi lag rahi ho..

Anni : Dhruv kaha ho idhar aao…Cake lene jaane hai yaad hai na aapko..chalo..Mumma n papa ko bye bolke aao

Dhruv: Bye Mumma

Geet : bye mere Eddy Teddy

Dhruv : bye Dadda

Maan : Bye mera Fighter

Geet : I love you

Maan : I love you too Mishty

Waise Tum Moti hone lagi ho

Geet : Moti toh hogi hi naah mera bacha Jr. Maan 2 andar jo hai

waise maan aap ne mere Jr Maan 2 ka name socha hai

Maan : Mishty iss tym muje Jr. Geet chahiye…

Geet : kyu boy hoga toh kya hoga

Maan : wohi main tumhe puchu toh girl hoga toh kya

Geet : muje chahiye…bas maine toh Naam bhi soch liya hai

Maan : aur who kya hai

Geet : Gurmeet,Surmeet,Barinder ,Narinder

Maan : Gurmeet acha hai but yeh sab kuch kaam ke nai hai kyuki iss tum baby girl hi hoga

Geet : nai maan baby boy hoga

Waise Maan Aapko yaad hain jab dhruv ke tym bhi hum aise hi fight kar rahe the gender lekar liye n baat mai jab baby boy pata chala to aapne project main sare names use kiya jaise Gurmeet cement or virendar constructions n MaaNeeT laughs …recollect tat memory..

*FLASHBACKS*

Geet was in her 8 month pregnancy, and from her 7 months, the argument starts

Its early morning, and Maan was back from his daly morning walk and entered the bedroom to see his beautiful wife sleeping soundly. He laid beside her and started to talk with baby which was his another early morning job.

After some times Geet's sleep broke by the whisper sounds. She smiled while her eyes were close.

Geet: maan aaj ki liye kafi hai, aab jai ye aur taiyar ho jayi ye

Maan: mujhe aap ni beti se baat karne do, hilo maat

Geet: waise Maan, ager baby ladka hua to?

Maan: nope, tum kuch janti hi nehi, mujhe pata hai, its baby girl, my princes

Geet: hawww, baato se aise lag rahi hai ki ye baby mere nehi aap ki andar hai

Maan: per papa to mai hi hu na

Geet: abhi se team bana rahi ho?

Maan didn't answered and flashed a bright grin and Geet could not stop herself to giggle back at him



*Back to present*

Geet : Uss outhouse kit toh aap baat hi mat kijiye…kaise aapne muje daraya tha…muje ghar se bahar nikala tha…

Maan : toh tumne bhi wohi kia..muje apne ghar se hi bahar nikal dia…aur tumne toh Maan Singh khurana ki zameen main sula dia…

Waise Geet Humari shaadi ko 5 years hogaye hai Fir bhi humari rishta itna mahboot hai… I really love u Shona..

Geet : Maan I love u too…Main Hamesha se babaji ko sukriya karti hu ki unhone muje aap jaise pati diye hai…Jo apni patni ki ek aahat se fatim hai…uski ek hassi ke liye wo kuch bhi kar skte..Maan aise log milne bahut mushkil hai…Aaj main kehti hu…"Meri Zindagi har subah aapse shuru hoti hai aur har raat aapse katam"

Maan : ye toh maine tumhe humari First Date main kaha tha…

Geet : haan aur wo bhi uss jungli main camp mein..

*FLASHBACK*

Geet : Aaj main aapko kissi bandhan main bandna chahti hu

Geet shows her the taveez wich she got from Mela where babaji sid usse yeh pehna dena phir dekhna babaji ki meher aap dono main hamesha rahefi...

Geet Makes Maan Wear tat taveez...

Maan : ye taveez..Hume hamesha jodti chali aai hai

Geet: aur aaj ke baad zindagi bar ke liye bandhte rahegi

Maan: Zindagi par

Maan : Ab Zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi aur tumse khatam hogi

Geet: Zindagi ki har subah aapse shuru hogi aur aapse hi katam hogi

MAANEET HUG...Maahhiii..Maahiii


*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Both r recollecting the times they used to spend times in office n Outhouse…They didn't know how the time has passed away…

Oopsss main toh bolna bhul gayi ki Geet is pregnant n is in 9th month….at any moment ushki Labour pain start ho sakta hai….U knoe wat all wish ki baby aaj aaye thaki maaneet ki anniversary n baby birthday same ho….

Now Dhruv comes after getting the Cake n comes to room…Sees his mom dad r lost…he starts singing song..

Dhruv : Mumma..Mumma Ki jawani..She so Texy…..

..Mumma Ki jawani..She so Texy…...Mumma Ki jawani..he started singing to get attention of his mom dad…He used to sing since maan have thought him dis wording saying Dhruv tat ur mumma have dance on it..

Both Maaneet gave to the world From their maaneet world n

Geet : Eddy Teddy tum ye gaana bandh karo

Dhruv : na…u nai bola..kya hua…Ye song..( he is asking U didn't say me still abt tat song)

Actuallyy Maan never said tat it was his party n geet came to c him…

Geet : acha baba sunno kya hua

*flashback*

At the Boy's bachelor party, Shila ki jawani was playing

Maan was busy in taking sips from his drink. All back up dancers came and drag Maan to the dance floor. And after some time Maan too started grooving. Geet entered and saw Maan holding a girl. She became mad and walked past Maan. Maan hurriedly followed her and was trying to explain her



*flashback end*

Dhruv: OOO..Bad Dadda..

Maan made baby face and looked at Geet to support him. But Geet find a good situation and started laughing at Maan's buri halat

Suddenly Geet felt sum pain…But it was minor.. Den She started screaming Like hell…Tats it…D Labour pain has stared…Dhruv got afraid by dis scream n hid himself behind his dadda…Maan Was consoling both…But he couldn't make out wid geet..So he shouted for daadi maa n anni

Both came n saw n rushed her to hospital

They reached houspital n maan shouted for DOCTOR DOCTOR…..

Doctore came n took her to her the operation theatre

Maan Dhruv n Daadi n anni were standing outside waiting…

Everytym Dhruv used to ask where is mumma…Dis tym also

Dhruv : Mumma kaha

Maan : baby…mumma nah andar hai room main…Wo aapke liyenaya Baby lene gaye hai

Hearing Dis Dhruv started screaming mera baby mera baby….Maan was happy C-ing him happy…

After few hours Outside they heard a small baby's crying noise..

Maan n all got up hearing dis..n doctor came out n said It's a baby boy…

Doctor : Congratzz Mr.Khurana It's a baby boy….Mrs.Khurana Wants u to be with her…

Maan made dhruv stand near dadi n said main aapke baby ko leke aata hu…

Maan Went inside n sat near geet n kissed her n baby…

Maan : thank you Geet For giving a precious gift on Dis Anniversary…I Love U

Geet : Thank you for coming in my life Maan…I Love U Too…

Dadi Comes n puts kala thika on all three…kisses on there forehead n same does Dhruv

Anni : tOh Bhai bhabhi iska naam Kya hoga…

MaaNeeT : GurmeeT

Both See Each Other n smiles….

MAANEET LIVED HAPPILY AFTER…..


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I really Mis you Maaneet….You Reallyy hold avery special Place in My heart….

Every moment I think about u…U have thought me wat love his.Wat Couples n relationships are…U gave me everything…Its true I love u like mad…Love u MaaNeeT/GurTi…

No Matter How Many Days Passed

MaaNeeT Will Be In Our Hearts

Like Ever Green Couple In Television


A poem On it *thanks to google ji*


No words can express my FEELINGS….

That how much I MISS U everyday….

Day by day the loneliness grows….
How I MISS U…..nobody knows….
No one knows my SORROW…
No one sees my WEEP…
Bcz everyday,I've to pretend
I've to a fake smile…
I've to a fake laugh…
I've to pretend everything is OKAY…..when ITS NOT…..

U told me,thar U loved me….
So why did u LEFT ME…..
I told u, I'll never Leave U…
I kept my promise,but u didn't…
Everyday, I sit and wonder
Why I MISS U…why I LOVE U…
But I found no reason,the LOVE I'VE FOR U….

Now I just can't keep quite anymore….
So I'll tell U everything,that
"THERE IS A PLACE IN MY HEART….
THAT NO ONE ELSE CAN FILL…
I NEED U…I MISS U SO MUCH…..
I LOVE U WITH ALL MY HEART AND SOUL….
AND I ALWAYS WILL…."



My First OS...SSPecially Wanna Thanxxx to My Bossyy Sissh(sumi) and My Shona(sam) who have guided me For it..Love u Both...I reallyy dont know how it is..I have wrote it adding all flashbacks n specially for Our Jr.MSK...Hope u all Like it...Will wait for Ur likes n Comments...




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Posted: 12 years ago
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soo sweet update.how cute.maaneet happy family.drub tooo cute.😊😊.purane memory phirse tazzza ho gay.thank qqq vanshi daring.it really really sweet update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiyariya

soo sweet update.how cute.maaneet happy family.drub tooo cute.😊😊.purane memory phirse tazzza ho gay.thank qqq vanshi daring.it really really sweet update


Glad u liked it...Thankuu...😊😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story dear liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haaye! cute story Anshi 😳
Loved it, and speially the Flashbacks ⭐️
Awsmn job. 👏

Waise, me just LOVED the title, very unique and New. 😳

Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome nd sweet
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ALL MAANEET ADORABLE MOMENTS YOU GAVE GLIMS OF IT... N REALLY CUTE,SWEET OS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww soo sweet and cute love it awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
really cute n sweet
bechara maan...dono baar uska guess galat nikla
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
As say truely nt so much intresting...its really boaring...Lagta nhi ki yeh maaneet hai...Inka Conversation aisa hai hi nhi...bt nyc try...Think abt it..sry...

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