*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER pt 11 pg 118 28/2/2013 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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<font size="4">PART - 2

Flashback conti...

He regrets as he miss his chance.

'y u dont stop her?',he complains.

'hww(she slaps 1 mor time on his arm)u alligates 4 dis me?if u 4gt i calld u sevral times bt ur phone is always out of reach.where u r busy?',she askd furiously.

B4 he ans her 1 football bumped there nd he catch it.

'hey champ common fast match will b strt soon.',anothr young boy named Viraj came dere 2 remind hm about there football match.

'i m coming',he ans him.

Viraj left.

'so this is ur impo. work 4 whch u missd ur official date.'she stare hm.

'ya actually i 4gt 2 tell u about my practise session. Aftr u calld me,i recieved call frm Viraj nd he reminds me about 2day's match and practise session.now cmmon Mishti lets go wid me',he grasped her wrist and trying 2 drag hr with him 2wrds stadium.

'Maan stopit kaha le ja rae ho?'

'Mishti bhulna mera kaam hai tumhara nai.kitni baar btaya hai na jab b mera match ho i want u dere.ab chal.',he forced her 2 com wid him.

'nai main nai aaungi.'she snatch her had frm hs grip nd denied completely.

'dekh tujhe jitna gussa krna baad me kario par abi to chal dadima plss',he pleads like small child.

'no',she stick 2 hr point.

'ok mat aa',he left 4 hs match.

Maan is captain of football team,out of 4 teams of his collage. 2day his team is going 2 play against d team of Armaan,anothr hottest hunk of d collage. Match stard betwn d 2.half studnts support Maan nd half supports Armaan,but Maan's eyes only searching his Mishty,hs best frnd,his lucky charm.

'cmmon Geet aa jao,i need u',he thot while playing nd wishing her here in crowd applousing 4 him,as she always doing in hs evry match.

Refriee whistles,declaring time up,and d last kick was kicked by Armaan,in court of Maan and won d match. Hs team cheering and Maan fuming at hs defeat. He gt very angry on hs mishti.

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A knock sound broke d silence and he wake up,come out of hs past memories,he ws seeing in form of a dream. He raised little and found duvet on him.d next his eyes searching her in a whole room. He hear shower noise cming frm d washroom. He stand up and opnd d door. Gauri is standing wid her son Parth.

'gd mg champ,',she wishd hm and he smiled weakly.

Meanwhile she cm out of washroom,after having a bath. Gauri reachd 2 hr,kissd on hr 4head nd wish her 2.'gd mg bacche'.

'gd mg bhabhi',she replied wid a weak smile in a very low voice.

Parth who was watching all dis bcm so restless. He jump on a chair 2 match levl wid her. He wrapped his arms around her deligate neck and kissed on her dimpled soft cheek.

'gd mg girlfriend.today i m so happy coz mumma tolds me from now u r going 2 stay wid me 4ever',Parth is so excited and happy wid this marriage. He turnd 2 Maan and said in a commanding voice.'chachu bhale hi apne meri GF se shadi kar li hai,par ye meri GF hi rahegi or main koi chachi wachi nai bolne wala.ok'.

Maan pay no attention 2 his words and withou uttering a single word he moved 2 washroom.

'parth dont disturb dem.now b a good boy go and get ready 4 ur school',Gauri commnds her son.

'no mumma i wanna spend my day wid my GF.hai na gf?',he trying 2 escae from his mother's scold.

She hugged him nd kissed on hs cheek lovingly,'Parth if u going 2 school,den i promise we both play games on ur computer.',she trying 2 bribe him.

He thinks alot.'hmm ok fine but first take a pledge dat u dont broke ur promise.'

'promise i ll play wid u.'she said sweetly and made him convience with her.

Parth went out 2 gt ready 4 school.

'bachha ab tu b jaldi aaja or b.fast kar le,coz thodi der me relatives or neighbours aane lagenge muh dikhai ki rasam k liye god knows kitna time lag jaye,so its bettr u eat frst. Maan u 2 hurry up,Pratham is waiting 4 u.',she said nd leave.

Pratham is sitting on table's head chair wen she came down. 2 gave him respect as he is her jeth,she bend 2 touch hs feet,bt Prathm made her stop in btwn.

'khabrdar jo aisa kuch kiya to.bache ye ghar na to naya hai or na ye tera bhaiya.is shadi se to rishta or majboot hua hai tu formalities me kyu padd rai hai?shadi k baad b main or Gauri same pehle jaise hi hai.humare sir pe seeng thodi na nikal aaye hai jo tu aise sehmi si or pata nai kya 2 karne me lagi hai. I want u 2 b urslf as u r b4 dis marriage. Pure ghar me tufan mail banke daud,Maan ka sir kha,uski band baja.bhai hume to wahi Geet pasand hai.kyu Gauri?',he askd 2 Gauri cming frm kitchen.

'hmm baki sb theek hai par main to jethani banne ka pura fayda uthaungi or apni devrani pe rob b jamaungi.(both Geet and Pratham smiled widly and Geet felt shy 2) isliye meri pyari si devrani ji chaliye kitchen me(Pratham made a aww face)ghbraiye mat ye sirf 1 rasam hainai bahu se meetha banwana padta.and dont worry bache maine adhe se jada prepration kr li tujhe sirf hath lagna hai.chal aaja',she hold her hand and take her 2 kitchen 4 pooja. Geet smiled cutely and went with her.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
richa i send u frnd request send me pm of all ur stories ok😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
wow awesome update diii
loved it
😃
geet is maan's gud luck charm nd alll
nd nw wife😃
par maan use naraj saraj sa ku h
waiting to know more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
ohkeis...toh maan ki shadi geet se hui hai...but voh accept kyu ni kar raha is bat ko?? does he still loves sam?? not fair yar!!! anyways nice update!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Awesome shona soo maan loved sam in past but now he's married to geet awesome dear do continue soon...and loved maaneet's friendship bonding...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
maan ko kya hua oh aise kyuon hain
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
nice update...bt so many ques peeping in mind.hope gonna get the answrs in nxt update.really very happy 4 the marriage of maaneet,wthr maan is happy or not...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
SO GEET AND MAAN GOT MARRIED
THEY WERE BEST FRIENDS BUT MAAN WAS IN LOVE WITH SAMEERA, SO HOW COME THE TWIST
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
awesome udate
so our cutie geet is maan's good luck charm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: geetsmile

wow awesome update diii

loved it
😃
geet is maan's gud luck charm nd alll
nd nw wife😃
par maan use naraj saraj sa ku h
waiting to know more

Sweety u will get to know relly soon :D

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