OS- Waiting... - Page 2

its so intense!brimming with emotions!!I am not much into dark stuff bt this something very real!!so much emotions..amazing piece of work!resembles salvation in true sense!

Originally posted by: -Dee-

A beautiful piece! Somehow seems to be a page out of an ordinary person's diary and a moment when one cannot be sure if he has everything he deserved. Tears so wet and warm yet so cold. 😊

Originally posted by: LoveToLaugh

Wow! This is extremely well written! Your command over the words is incredible.

Initially, I did feel this was part of a larger piece. And you really could develop this into a larger work. But then again, this OS is beautiful and complete in itself. A real beauty! 😊

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

I am speechless...this is wonderful piece of writing...you can feel each and every word while reading..so intense so deep yet so simple if u feel...lovely.

~~Ruchi~~

Originally posted by: Archismita

it was really very nyc and touching... I'm feeling kinda speechless after reading this... so much of sadness in just those few lines, it's bound to make ur heart heavy for a while.. but the end was perfect, how the protagonist still has hopes about the future... afterall its optimism that has the world going on.. loved reading it...

Originally posted by: sweetdoc

Looks like u read my mind...nd wrote my feelings down...awsumm.

Originally posted by: --Rumeli--

its so intense!brimming with emotions!!I am not much into dark stuff bt this something very real!!so much emotions..amazing piece of work!resembles salvation in true sense!

^ Thank you ALL for reading, liking and commenting. Honestly was not expecting any comments but super happy that you guys liked it and took out time to post comments. Highly grateful for all the encouraging feedback. It truly means a lot to me. A big thank you. :)

Wow ANUUU

@anu its reall w'ful piece & i just don't've words 2 praise u. u r always gud at such things. and while reading it, i was feeling that u r writing my feelings which i sumtimes feel & words which i want 2 write.👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: 55shobha

Wow ANUUU

👏 truley a heart touching OS specially ur words r superb🤗