MAYUR FF:A New Hope-A New Dawn Pg-16;Update-4 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Faria.

btw next update kab koaroge???

Originally posted by: -Yukti-

Its lovely Ishika...I am reserving

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Aaah it was such a nice reading the whole part...I cant help appreciating your writing skills...It was amazing...And meri nupur, i literally felt her pain she was going through the whole OS...seriously yar, meri chulbuli nupur jab is tarah depress rahti hai toh I get tears...I kept imagining everything and every situation in your OS...It was like I am watching MJHT in my mind😆...and wo mayur ka nok jhok, awww it was so cuteee <3 <3 but all was a dream :'( and why the hell this rashi is coming b/w mayur...mayank ko koi aur ladki nahi mili thi kya...lol I cant see any other girl b/w mayur chahe wo positive ho ya negative...jaldi se mayur ki loveishtory start kar na.😆...aur ho sake to nupur ke liye bhi ek new hero ki entry karwana so that mayank gets jealous...lol just kidding...Continue your story as per you have planned..

It was such a refreshing to read MN story again...You made me nostalgic Ishi...😭..my heart wants to keep MN in my dabba now 😆

Amazing OS I once again say👏👏
Keep it up...
Cant wait for the next update..😳

Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

waooo gud update
thanks for pm me

Originally posted by: Ayan-

beautiful ff

Originally posted by: ..aastha..

Lovely ff.

A NEW HOPE-A NEW DAWN

Part-2; Page-12

It was a starry night.Cool breeze was blowing and so the curtains inside Mayank's room were dancing to its tunes.However the Mayank's mood inside the room was tensed.He was very much disturbed.To divert his mind he switch on the video player and started doing some paper work given by the professors.But when he listened to the music playing he looked up and much to his astonishment it was the CD of the college fest playing.Mayank got up from his bed to stop playing it..But he stood stand still on his way holding the remote in his hand.

THE CD WAS SHOWING WAS MAYANK-NUPUR DANCE TOGETHER IN THE FEST!!!

Mayank was watching the video in shock'he totally forgot about his paper work..

Mayank was lost in the beautiful face of Nupur..She was dancing like an angel in white anarkali

Aahista

Aahista aahista

Mujhe yakeen ho gaya

Aahista aahista

Yeh dil yahin kho gaya

Yun gira gira hai chand ya

Teri hai roshni

Yun udi udi si hai zameen

Aahista

Mayank now comes from behind in a red shirt and blue jeans and started dancing with her matching her steps

Ho' ho'.ho'..

Hua yeh pehli baar

Ho'ho'ho..

Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Ho' ho'.ho'..

Hua yeh pehli baar

Ho'ho'ho..

Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Mayank put his left hand around her waist and pulled her a little close.Both were lost in each other's eyes..

Dekh loon yeh khwab main

Ke raaton mein tu aa key eh kahega

Ke tu ji rahi hai meri zindagi

Sochi kya baat hai

Yeh ankhon se tu dheere se sunega

Kyun na rok loon main yeh din yahin

Nupur blushed away ran towards the front stage and started singing

Kissi se bhi na

Kahenge hum na

Yahin pe kho jayenge

Mayank came from behind and hold her hand,looked at her angelic face..

Yun gira gira hai chand ya

Teri hai roshni

Yun udi udi si hai zameen..

Mayank was completely lost.Seeing Nupur's smile and her mesmerizing beauty his face brighten up.Mean while Mayank's mom outside was knocking the door to his room for some time now.She now opened the door and entered getting no response from Mayank.

"Mayu why where you not opening the door?I was knocking at your door!Accha chodo you must be busy in studies".Mayank paid no attention to her words!He was still watching intently at Nupur's face..and smiling at her!