MAYUR FF:A New Hope-A New Dawn Pg-16;Update-4 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Maria.

Nice part but in the middle of update i get confused but after the convo i realized after the convo she get concious.

anyways nicely written

continue soon.

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

Ishi, main aagai 😎 I dont think ki mujhe apna intro dene ki jarurat ha, so sidha comes 2 the ff,

I must say tu ekdin hum bengali's ki naam roshan karegi, kya writing skill ha dear,

Mindblasting start, n the 1st part was just outstanding! Description was too good,

feel bad 4 nupur, egarly waiting 4 mayank's pov story part, MayUr part was full on MayUr style realy Loved it,

Rashi ka charecter kon play kar raha ha??

Rashi ko aur janna chahungi, so egarly waiting 4 next part

Do continue soon, LOVE YOU,

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

aww. poor nupur!😔
poore duniya mein sirf rashi ko hi nupur ko takrana tha!

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

Mayur is separated from start. nice update. continue soon

Originally posted by: mayu-nups

Nice

Originally posted by: likaboss

Firstly really love your writing style !! This was a amazing update , Mayur fight though Continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: -Yukti-

Its lovely Ishika...I am reserving

Originally posted by: gopi06

nice updt
feeling bad for nupur...can't see her like this
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: shukti_19

aftr a long tym I've read a MaYur OS!!!!

itz beautiful...

luvd it

Originally posted by: Faria.

hey ishika another beautiful part dear
awww my npur was very hurt after hearing that news frm sam.
she was so hurt that she dint notice that a car was approaching to her..
But thanx GOD- she was fine..

aww so mayur had a fight abt project.
hmm Mayank was right - nupur was a bit careless abt her career.
but mayank has to make his career for his mother's ake na- he cant careless like nupur
but nupur was sorry for her deed. so i think mayu should forgive her.
weldonr dear
keep it up