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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guyzz i thought to write an OS on virika :)) this is my first attempt i hope you like it :D
do comment :))
Part 1
the story begins with viren..
viren always go for a morning walk on sunday ... viren and virat talking ..
Viren: Oye sun! main walk pe jaraha hun ..
virat:han bhai theek hai :)
viren went to the park ..
he was looking a smart hot guy :)
wearing a white t-shirt and a black trousers with white+red jockers :))
now jeevika was also going at the same park for some work ..
as she is an indian girl so she was wearing her pink shalwar suit ..:)) hairs on one side :) she was looking beautiful and simple :)
she was cuming towards the park and viren saw her..
viren asked for the lift :))
V=kya ap ko koi madad cahiye?
J=ummm wo main park ki taraf jarahi thii pr koi nhn main chalii jaungi .
V=main bhi wahin jaraha hun ajae ae main ap ko chor dunga..
J=OK! shukriyaaa :)
viren smiled :D
tell me if i should continue :))

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it defo continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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arey yr!itna short? :O
continue it n make it longer :P

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue its very interesting. I want to know what will happen next. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Okayyy guyzz i will continue tomorrow :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Defo...no doubtsss!!!!! do continueee soon and plsss PM me when u update the next part!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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If you guyzz want me to pm you add me in ur buddylist :)
PART2:
virika reached the park ..
jeevika was about to go viren stopped her and said :
V=wese ap apna naam tu batati jaen ?
J=ap mera naam jan kr kya karogey? wese bhi mujhe anjan logon se baat karna achaa nhn lagta ..
viren whispered anjan logon se baat karna achaa nhn lagta lekn lift lena acha lagta hai :p
J=jii ?
V=okay.. i can understand .. :)
jeevika went ..
viren was walking and jeevika was sitting on a bench .
viren came towards her and said ..
V=ap yahan bethne ae ho ?
jeevika whispered itne sawal hain ese ..
J=jii nhn mujhe kuch kaam hai ...
V=ohh :) personal ?
J=jii..
V=ohh tu tmhara bhii bf hai ?:p
J=personal kaam sorf bf se nhn hotey .. and mera koi bf nhn hai i am a simple girl :)
V=so you are single ?
J-yess ..
V=impressed :D
and went from there ..
jeevika whispered kitna bolta hai .. chalo choro :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
do update soon and PM me please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaaayyy
first one to comment :D
but dii itna short?ye to theek nahi hai :P
u tell everyone to write long n urself u write short :P
anywat nice
continue soon and LONGER :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part3
Next day :)
jeevika was a teacher in the same school where shlok study
one day viren came to drop shlok and he saw jeevika with a lil baby :)
viren was shocked :o
viren called jeevika and asked ..
V=are you married ?
j=what ?
V=are you married tm shadi shudha ho ?
J=are you mad ?
V=give me the answer
J=no mr i am not married ..
V=then who was that baby ?
j=strange :/ she was my student ..
V=ohh thankgod :D and gave a big smile :))
and jeevika went ..
viren was thinking ye mujhe kya horaha hai agr wo marrried hai tu us se mujhe kya :/ chalo koi nhn forget it :)) achii baat tu ye hai ke wo married nhn hai :D
Viren in his room ..
viren was onlyy thinking about jeevika :D
V= ae bhagwan ye mujhe kya hogaya :/
Virat entered ..
virat : kya hua bhai kya soch rahey ho ?
Viren: tere bhabhi mil gae :p
virat: oho bhai :)
will continue tomorrow now :))

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