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Posted: 12 years ago
Why would such a man allow a stranger into his house for a week when he has two daughters around? Don't remember but I am sure he had not met Arnav before this visit? Intrigued with the possibility that they may have met earlier.
Kashi has been ostracized by her father now. I am sure this brave girl is up to the challenge.
Thanks for updating Devi. Feel better soon. Hope the pregnancy glow is making you feel fab and everyone around is pandering to your every whim😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

Why would such a man allow a stranger into his house for a week when he has two daughters around? Don't remember but I am sure he had not met Arnav before this visit? Intrigued with the possibility that they may have met earlier.

Kashi has been ostracized by her father now. I am sure this brave girl is up to the challenge.
Thanks for updating Devi. Feel better soon. Hope the pregnancy glow is making you feel fab and everyone around is pandering to your every whim😆


And why do I feel that this father knows his daughters only too well.
He knows that kashi would never leave the house unless he kicked her out.
It is just a thought because otherwise it seems too out of character.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16


And why do I feel that this father knows his daughters only too well.
He knows that kashi would never leave the house unless he kicked her out.
It is just a thought because otherwise it seems too out of character.

I agree. I can't wait to take a peek into the "Why"s..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Started reading your FF 2 days back and i must say its awesome!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 49: Omniscient

I have lost count of how many memories I hold…

How many ghosts linger in and around me…

When it was that both the living and the dead started breathing life into the teak and bricks that made up my limbs… or when their burdens became mine… or when I became theirs…

I watched him now… I watched him watching them without their knowing.

His eyes were moist, but theirs remained dry. They were strong in spirit, the both of them…

Too strong, maybe… it cut him up inside everytime he looked at them…

They survived all that came their way… their head always held high…

How he wished the Gods would show some mercy and ease the burden of their fate…

His days were numbered, he knew, age and hopelessness were catching up to him… and he considered his daughters his greatest blessing and curse… their beauty and their fate were their curses…

Many consider me to be their curse too… and yet they were loyal to me…

They were strong, the both of them…

I wish I could ease his pain… it was starting to poison my veins…

He knew that she understood why he asked her to leave…

They knew each other too well to misread such motives…

His gamble, though, was greater than hers…

The man loved her, he knew… It couldn't have been any other way… the man did not after all stumble onto my doorsteps merely by chance…

I called to him and he came… at least I would like to think that is what occurred…

I am willing to concede that maybe the man's destiny had a role to play as well…

The man did not love easily, he knew… but there was love in him now…

Kashi, he was less sure about…

His younger daughter valued so many things… loyalty, dignity, self-respect…

Her love, though, was all spent on her family… Love came with great cost… both his girls had known too much loss to not know that… but while the older one seemed to have an infinite capacity to love, the younger one was… he knew not if she would let herself love anyone else as much as she loved those she already loved… whether she would ever allow herself to be so vulnerable…

And so, he had forced her hand…

It was a gamble…

He had to hope that for once in her life, his younger daughter would let go of her misguided loyalty and reach for her own hopes and dreams…

And not cling onto what he thought remained here within me…

As omniscient as I would like to think I am, my consciousness is only as vast as theirs…

I cannot predict the future…

I can only show them the past…

And hope that they will not repeat the same mistakes…

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Posted: 12 years ago
Super stalker alert!!!

okay omg awesome update!!!
wow I'm glad you gave a chapter from the father's point of view, it was much needed. Things are so much clearer now.
I like how he understands his daughters, its very sweet, really.
He wants the best for kashi, knows that she'd never allow herself to fall in love and hence asks her to leave.
Can't wait for the next update!

Love your writing Devi, can't tell you how much it inspires me!

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Posted: 12 years ago
and now I understand! thankyou, thankyou for this chapter, it cleared a lot of things for me.

love
sonia
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Posted: 12 years ago
cannot love you any more for this chapter.. it brought back some Kalrikkal house I had not known was amiss in a while:).. and I really always imagined it to be only this old, and this reserved in its mysteries and magnificence.. it always seemed more benevolent.. how could it not be, for all that it has lived through its inhabitants..

and how could they not be, for all that is contained in it. loved the chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
He knew Kashi all too well! And I think forcing her hand would be the only way to break the burden of those heavy ties...

Kashi...her love is passionate and deep, but only for the privileged few. I hope this extends to Arnav...or will she rail against changing of the status quo? Of all the extant characters in this story she is the most reluctant to accept change...but she is also the one who also accepts most readily what must be...

She needs a dose of Pallavi's benevolence..and a few mornings being seduced of her senses by her veena!

OK just gone back to re-read...we're seeing from the point of view of the 'soul' of the house...looking on the father who wants his daughters to escape the burdens of their 'curse'. The same entity showed Arnav and Kashi the past in their dreams...Am I right?
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was thinking he let them both go for their own good future to be them together but in the last line said not to make same mistake again...as in what mistake he is talking about ??

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