OS: Khaamoshiyaan- Final Part Updated

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roseycheek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

awww. :'( that was wonderful yet heartbreaking

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Deeksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

This is a beautiful shot, Pinki. I liked it how Arnav would gift colourful bangles.That was very cute..

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Dimple

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

I really loved this! The ending was perfect, bittersweet. But I still got the message that all was going to be well, just because Khushi came rushing to Arnav's aid when he was hurt. Good job :)

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1DAlice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Just read your OS!!!

Very well written!!!

Awesome ending!!!😊

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..MorningStar..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

awww...love the "khamoshi'...but it was unbearable to me tooo...sooo intense...very beautiful...

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insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

awesome OS/SS!! loved the title. so apt for khushi and arnav's current state of mind. its the only way she could make that guy shut up! :) i loved how she described arnav's ugly writing as chicken scratch! hahaa😆 that was hilarious

the way arnav opened up to her was sooo cute! ^_^ "I am not going to apologize for what I did, because it's absolutely unforgivable. aaah that line was gorgeous