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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Tyro
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#342

Originally posted by: love2_soma
so maan's changing behaviour... nw d past will come...

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Originally posted by: misty_drastifan
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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: spvd
till part 17
nice story...
so Maan loves Geet...
and they used to play in their childhood...
Maan then as a kid too was so adamant...
cont soon dear...

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#346

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

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I will surely read other FF also...

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Originally posted by: dolly10
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Originally posted by: girlz-rule
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Posted: 12 years ago

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THANKS FOR ALL THE LOVE SHOWN ON THIS PART...

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THE NEXT PART IS COMING UP...DO SHOW THE SAME LOVE...

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PART 18:

here in office maan entered in his usual style but a difference was there...there was a smile on his face...all were shocked to see this smile...

maan without bothering about anything went to his cabin...he locked his cabin door and told the receptionist to not disturb him till he says ...all were shocked with it...because till now maan had never did anything like that...pinky and sasha wanted to ask about geet as they didn't talk to her till now after her accident...but their khadoos is not letting anyone come inside...

inside the cabin maan was rewinding this pages of life...which had changed him soo much...he was remembered of all the memories...all memories flased in front of him...frist he remembered his playing with geet as a kid and their promise to eachother...

then their distances for a year or so and her forgetting him...the way he used to wait so that she remebers him...then seeing her from far when she would come to Rishi's home...the long teasing sessions before her coming to HP...the little disappointments when geet would not remember him...all was moving like a movie in fornt of him...then their growing and my realising of my feeling for her...

his trip to south to meet her...after lot of coaxing rishi agreed and there was a large round of never ending teasing...finally meeting her and knowing her better...the sad day of leaving south and the happiest moment when geet asked his friendship...that was likely the most happies day in his life...coz after that the unfaithful day came when he lost everything...his wishes dreams and most importantly the person he love the most...

his mind was likely to drift to that day when he recieved a call...getting angry he wanted to give a piece of mind to the reciptionist for disturbing him he recieved the call...

"HELLO..."

"s...sorry si..sir...sorry to disturb u"

"DoNT WASTE MY TIME AND TELL ME WHAT U WANT???"

"woh...sir mam called from home and said that it was important and she wanted to talk to u immedately..."

"WHAT???OK...i will call her.."

"ok sir...t..thank u.."

**edited...**

the call was dead and maan was wondering why his mom called and what must be soimportant that she didn't wait for me to come back...i hope geet is well...

panic rushed into maan for thinking that somthing might happened to her...immediately he called to the mansion's LL...the servant nakul picked up the call...

he immedaitely asked him to make him talk to MOM...but nakul said him to rush home and it is an emmergengy...and he was needed now...and then the line went dead...

panicking maan rushed off the office and entered in the car...he drove at a speed at which the 30 minute journey was covered in 10 minutes in the heavy delhi traffic but who has the guts to stop MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

when he reached home a shock was awaiting him...

THAT'S ALL FOR NOW...

PRECAP:new entry and maan's past...

sry for the small update...

sry for the spelling mistakes...

THAT'S ALL FOR TODAY...

HOPE TO HEAR FROM U...

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LOADS OF LOVE AG...

Edited by kingofme - 12 years ago