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Posted: 12 years ago

HAPPY GANESH CHARURTHI..

PART 16:
the next day geet got ready and went to pooja room to do aarthi...she started singing bhajan...hearing her voice maan's mom came there and started to chant prayer...slowly all the servants came...the prayer overed and geet gave everyone the prasaad...first she gave Maan's mom...then all the servants...last was maan..seeing maan there all got shocked except geet...
MM: maan what a miracle!!!!u here??
G:y mom doesnt he come??
MM: no bete...
M:aacha...now u all want to hav the breakfast here or in the table??
MM:[second shock..]:what breakfast???here???
G:maa why are u giving shock reactions for everything...[not understanding maa's behaviour...]
then all went to the table and the food was brought...there was aalo paratha...geet's favourite prepared by MM...then there was Italian pasta...prepared by???I GUESS U ALL KNOW...
maan had the first bite of pasta and relished it soo much...
M:this is soo nice...nakul ur cooking has become very good...
N:maan baba...this was not prepared by me...
M:then maa...u made this???
MM:s beta...
M:wow mom...make this frequently...
MM: ok bete...
after breakfast maan went to outhouse to get ready and came in 15 minutes...
M:mom i am going to office...
MM: ok bete...but why r u saying...u never said and went...
M:mom when i say and go u hav problem and when i dont u hav problem...what should i do??
MM: sorry bete...ok..
M:i will come early...and will hav dinner here...
MM: what???u and early???
M:yes..
MM: ok...will wait for u...
M:bye...
G:sir...wait i am too coming...[rushing down the stairs...]
M:geet slow down...
G:ok sir...wait i am also coming...
M:where are u coming??/
G:obviously office as u are going there and if i come with u means i am also going to office..
M:nooo...
G:what???
M:no u r not coming to office...
G:but why???
M:because i am saying...got it...
G:par...
M:no par var...u go and rest for some time...
G:par maa...i want to go...
M:no means no...and mom u dont think that geet should rest???
MM: for this i with maan geet bete...u must rest for almost i week...
G:par...ok but on one condition...
M:what???
G:sir i want to see the outhouse...
M:what??no..
G:pls sir...
M:geet no...and now i am going...will come and talk to u...bye mom and geet...
G:see maa...ur son hides so much...
MM: yes bete...till today i was never allowed in his outhouse...god knows what treasures he is having there...
G:maa can i ask u something???
MM:sure bete...u hav the right to ask anything..
G:what happened after maan returning from south that he changed this much...if will feel free to tell then u can share it else no need...
MM:there is nothing like that...i can share anything with u...i was just waiting for the right time...and i think that this is the right time...to let u know what happened...hope u undersatnd why my maan is like this...
G:sure maa...i also want to know the reason behind maan's changed behaviour...
MM: ok then u fresh up and come to my room..
G:ok maa...i will come now...
PRECAP:maan's story..
THAT'S ALL FOR TODAY...
HOPE TO HEAR FROM U...
FOR PMS PLS BUDDY "AGpm"
LOADS OF LOVE AG...
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Posted: 12 years ago
so maan's changing behaviour... nw d past will come...

excellent update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
till part 17
nice story...
so Maan loves Geet...
and they used to play in their childhood...
Maan then as a kid too was so adamant...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago



I have added u as buddy---ur id AGpm...

it is really interesting FF...

I will surely read other FF also...

please pm me when u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
@kingofme: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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