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Posted: 12 years ago
Heya i really hope that ur exams went well and if there is any coming up all the best for that. by the way you have been a great help to me and your story updates have been going really good i havent comment for a long time but i want to say that i actually be waiting for ur story. so plez update soon.thank u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loveeed the Updates do continue soon and good luck 4 ur exam! :)
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PART-51(b)
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virat hearing and remember all things what he done in past few days..he felt really guilty for that..he looked at him..with each sentence he felt like he loose something..finally maanvi opened her heart in front of him..
M-virat tumhe dukhi dekh har mujhe kitna dard mein bata nahi sakti..plz mere liye..vapis vahi virat ban jao..she gave him requesting look..
He about to opened his mouth to say yes but she turned and walked away from their..virat turned and looked at her leaving the place..
Maanvi come in room and go in bed..she switch off the light and close her eyes..virat entered in room and saw her in dark room..he know that she is not sleeping..he locked the door and joint her on bed..maanvi felt him behind her lying on bed..she tide her cluch..its not so cold but she still make stiff her body..virat come near to her and hugged her from back..their body very close to eachother..virat covered her with his strong hand..he moved his head towards Her and try to hide his face in her hairs..tears fall on maanvis cheek..he tightly hugged her and wisheper in her ears..i m sorry..and slowly rubbing his face in her hairs..maanvi about to removed his hand but he hold her hands and tide his hold..she didn't want to feel him guilty but she also want to realize him..she know if this time she melted he never understand what she want to realize him..she hardly say..
M-mujhe sona hai..and bit her lower lip..
Virat moved his face little up but still slowly slowly nuzzling her..
V-i know tum naraz ho..lekin i promis asa kabhi dubara nahi hoga..mein puri koshis karunga ki tumhe aur family me kisiko ye badla hua virat ab kabhi na dikhay de..i promis..plz..
He bend his head on her solder..maanvi turned her face slightly..both felt eachothers pain and feelings..whole night virat hold her in his arm..
In morning-
virat wake up and sit on bed..with rubbing his eyes he remember abt last night he looks on bed for her but its empty..he snatched ot from bed and checked washroom but its also empathy..he hurriedly fresh n up and go out from room..he walked towards hall and saw everyone sat on dinning table for breakfast..he come to table and sit..he looks for maanvi..maanvi come with beeji and make her sit..she helps jeevika to serve..virat saw her behaving normal..she laughing and chatting with everyone..he smile and start teasing her..maanvi happy with his change..she also teas him back..everyone happy to see them back in real action..vanshika maa also happy to see virat behaving normal..other also joint them..after breakfast virat inform everyone abt his Mumbai trip..everyone get happy and excited for him..virat told maanvi for packing..
After few hours virat come in his room..he entered in room and saw maanvi packing her clothes and dabbu stood near to her..he walked towards them..dabbu looked at him and smile..virat smile and stood near to maanvi..maanvi not looked at him..
V-packing chal rahi hai..achcha hai..vaise mere bataye bina hi tumne apne beg bhi pack karli?..meine socha tha tumhe surprise dunga..he teas her..
M-mein beeji k saath kuch dino k liye rihshikesh ja rahi hu..meine Di aur baki sab se baat karli hai..she said softly..
Virat looked at her with surprisely..
V-lekin kyu? Mujhe bataya nahi..yu achank kyu?..
She zipped her bag and gave to dabbu..
M-dabbu ise apne saman k saath rakhvade Hume lunch k baad nikalna hai..
Dabbu looked at virat and leave..maanvi walked towards cupboard and come with some stuff..she stood near bed..she already packed his beg..she put his wallet and other important stuff near his beg..
M-yeh..tumhara beg meine pack kar diya hai aur baki ki chije bhi rakh Di hai..parth ka phone aya tha woh sham ko tumhe air port pr hi milga..tumhare sham k liye kapde tarun le ayega usse le lena..aur ha tumhara guitar kal tum subah garden me hi bhool gaye the to galti se tarun se shift karte waqt uska ek taar tut gaya tha to meine thik karvane k liye diya hai..jate waqt lete jana bill tumhare wallet mein hai..she said in starte without looking at him..he just staring at her with surprise and shocked expression..he stunt with her sudden change behaviour..
Maanvi turned and abt to leave the room..when virat walked towards her and turned her with holding her hand..
V-maanvi kya hua?..mujhe laga hum saath me Mumbai jayenge..
Maanvi looked at him
m-hum nahi tum..she correct him with weak smile
she again turned and opened the door but this time virat pulled her and locked the door..he come close to her..with back stepping she bumped with wall..virat looked at her with question look..
V-pr kyu?..mujhe laga kal raat k baad sab thik ho gaya hai..tumne mujhe maaf kardiya..aur aaj subah bhi..
Maanvi cut him..
M-mein tumhe kab ka maaf chuki virat..she said softly..
V-phir mujhe chhod k kyu ja rahi ho?
M-chhod k kaha ja rahi hu virat..bas kuch hi din..
He cut her..
V-nahi..tum mere saath chalogi..he said in little angry tone..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAANVI LEAVE FOR RIHSHIKESH...HERE VIRAT SADLY LEAVE FOR MUMBAI...
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update... Cont soon!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
manu to RIHSHIKESH...so sad yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.. manvi is leaving for hrishikesh 😲.. but why?? poor virat.. pls continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys...
Just now i complete my all chapters..for my tomorrow paper...
And i have break for 2 hours..
So first i m going to see todays episode and then i gave next update...
Its may be sort...
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PART-52
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both looked at eachother for sometime..after few second maanvi look down and take breath..she again looked at him..
M-virat plz..mein nahi aa sakti..mujhe mu..
Again virat cut her..
V-meine kaha tum mere saath ja rahi ho..he calm down..maanvi mein sorry bol chuka hu..kyu kar rahi ho ye..mujhe saza deni hai to koi aur dedo pr plz ase mat karo..he said emotionaly..
Maanvi put her hand on his solder..
M-virat meine kaha na mein naraz nahi hu to saza ki baat kaha se aagai?
V-achcha to ye saza nahi to aur kya hai maanvi..mein samj nahi pa raha hu..ya phir asa hai ki mein hi kuch jyada ummid kar raha hu..tum mere saath waqt hi nahi gujar na chahti..maanvi tumhe kaise samjau mein ki nahi rahe sakta tumhare bina..
M-mein bhi nahi rahe sakti virat..
V-phir kyu kar rahi ho ye..jawab do?..he said angrily..
M-tum bolne doge tab na..kab se yahi to kahene ki koshis kar rahi hu..ki mein tumse naraz ho k ya tumhari vajehse nahi ja rahi..
He gave her question look..maanvi turned and walked towards window..his eyes follow her..
M-kal mummy papa ki barsi hai..unhe gaye hua 18 saal pure ho gaye..tears fall on her cheeks..
M-pichli bar Di k bina hi barsi hui thi..aur is baar bhi pregnancy ki vajehse woh nahi ja payengi..isiliye mein jana chahti hu..
She turned towards him with teary eyes..he felt guilty and selfish..
M-virat tumne subah sab ko jab apne Mumbai trip k bare me bataya uske baad biji ne to mujhe mana kiya tha aane k liye lekin mein hi jana chahti hu..mein janti hu tum mujhe apne saath le jana chahte ho virat..pr i m sorry..yakin mano mere liye tum me aur mumma-papa meise kisi ek ko chunna asan nahi hai..har baar mein is pooja k waqt ghat pr hi hoti hu..aur is baar bhi rahena chahti hu..kahete hai ki is pooja k doran jinke liye ye pooja hoti hai unki atma kuch palo k liye vaha ati hai..mein us waqt waha hona chahti hu..mein janti hu ki mein selfish ho rahi hu..i m sorry..
With this she close her eyes and crying..virat come near to her and pulls her in his arm..tears also slip from his eyes..maanvi hugged him back..
M-i m sorry..
V-no..i m sorry..bina baat Jane tumpe naraz hogaya..i m sorry..tum kabhi selfish nahi ho sakti..
After few second they broke the hugged..virat brush her hairs from her face and put them behind her ears and wipe her tears..she looked at him..he also wipe his tears and cupped her face..
V-tum akele nahi mein bhi tumhare saath chalunga..he smiled little..
M-nahi..
V-kyu?
M-tum apni ye important trip chhod k nahi aaoge..meine parth se baat ki thi usne bataya ki tum se recording pichle 2 week se tal rahe ho agar is baar ye recording cancel ho gai to financially Jo nukshan hoga so alag aur upar se tumhari image bhi khrab ho jayegi..mein ye sab nahi chahti..
V-lekin..
M-lekin vekin kuch nahi..she make cute face..tum Mumbai jaoge aur apna kam khatm karke jaldi se aaoge..mere liye..
V-pr maanvi ek week mein kaise..
M-virat..plz mere liye ye aur muskil mat banao plz..
V-okey..but promis ki tum rihshikesh se jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi nikal kar Mumbai aaogi..
M-kya?
V-haa..agar tum promis karti ho tabhi mein jaunga..
M-achcha thik hai..she smiled
virat again abt to pulls her for hug when dabbu come and told them to come for lunch..virat wisheper..har baar galt waqt pe aata hai..
They went for lunch..after lunch maanvi take blassing from family members and come out from house..shesit in car she saw virat come and sit with her on..
M-tum kaha ja rahe ho? Aur dabbu kaha hai?..she asked surprisely
V-mein kahi nahi ja raha..tum chal rahi ho..
M-matlab?
V-matlab ye ki tum mujhe airport drop karogi phir rihshikesh k liye jaogi..tab tak ye dabba age baithega..he indicate his finger towards passenger seat..
M-lekin..
V-lekin kya?..beeji aur baki sab dusri car mein nikal chuke hai..ab tumhari kbc khatm ho gai to chale?
She staring at him..he told driver to start driving..driver drove the car towards airport..
In car dabbu hearing song in his ipod..maanvi saw virat staring her with some naughty smile..
M-kya baat hai? Ase muskura kyu rahe ho?..she narrowed her eyebrows
V-bas ase hi..he smiled..
M-vaise tumhari flight ko to abhi waqt hai phir tum itni jaldi ghar se kyu nikal aaye?
Virat rolled his eyes..and gave her mischief smile..
V-woh tumhe pata chal jayega..and winked..
She gave him question look..
After few minutes virat told driver to stopped the car..
M-kya hua..car yaha kyu rukvai?
V-sab pata chal jayega..he turned towards dabbu..
V-dabbu tu driver k saath jakar jaise meine kaha vaisa karna aur baad me Hume airport pe milna..hum dusri car me vaha pahochte hai..thik hai..
D-thik hai jj..he smiled..
Virat come out from car and open door for her..she looked at him with confusion..
V-ab bahar aaogi ya mein..
He abt to pick her when she stop him and come out from car..he took her towards other car which parked near the road..he make her sit in it and also sat in car..dabbu left with driver in car.
Virat sratr the car.
M-hum kaha ja rahe hai?
V-bas 5 min..he winked
She look front with confusion

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update.. Thanks for updating..All the best for your exams 👍🏼

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