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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nice good Luck for your exam


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thank u..
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-50(b)
Next morning maanvi sit on bed ..virat working on his laptop but he can noticed that maanvi lost in something..he abt to ask her just when tarun knocked on door and told them that jeevika bhabhi called them for breakfast..after breakfast virat getting ready for his recording..he combing his hair and asked maanvi..
V-maanvi vaise mein soch raha tha aaj sham kahi bahar chale?
He waited but she still losted in her thoughts..he turned and saw her stood near the bed with holding his Wallet and watch..he come near to her..
V-maanvi..he shook her..
Maanvi come in reality and looked at him..
V-kya hua? Mein tumse puch raha hu?
M-woh..kya..kya puch rahe the?
Virat looked at her with little worried..he make her sit and cupped her face in his palm..maanvi looked at him..
V-kya baat hai..kuch kahena hai?
M-woh..virat kal woh ladies tumse Jo baat kar rahi thi..she said hesitantly..
V-konsi ladies?..he narrowed his eyebrows..
M-woh..tumhe..matlab mere liye sychystrist..
Virat get serious with this word and stood up..maanvi also stood up..
M-virat mein kal..
Again virat cut her sentence and turned towards her..
V-agar tumne humari bate suni to mera javab bhi suna hoga..he said in serious tone..
M-haa..lekin ho sakta hai woh sahi ho..
Virat gave her surprise look..
V-what? R u losted or what? Tum kya bol rahi ho?..dekho meine unhe bhi kaha tha aur tumhe bhi kahe raha hu..tumhe kisi sychystrist ki jarurat nahi hai..he said in little angry tone..
M-lekin virat woh..
V-maanvi..plz..mein nahi chahta ki tum is bare me socho bhi..tum bilkul thik ho..aur kal tumne ye sabit bhi kiya..
M-lekin virat Dar to laga tha na..
V-maanvi..lekin phir bhi tumne uska samna kiya tha..
He tried to understood her that she didn't need doctor..and she tried to convey him for sychystrist..
M-virat plz..tum samaj kyu nahi rahe ho..
V-maanvi samaj tum nahi rahi ho..mein ab ek baar bhi ye sychystrist k bare me nahi sunna chahta..
He took his wallet and keys from her hand turned for leave..he about to leave but he stop and turned back and come near to her..he kissed on her forehead..
V-plz..is bare me ab aur mat sochna..aur apna khyal rakhna..he smiled..she gave him weak smile..
V-bye..
She hardly say..bye..
He left the room..
In afternoon jeevika and maanvi taked abt yesterdays party in virikas room..jeevika noticed maanvi look sad..she asked her reason..maanvi told her everything..jeevika hold her hand..
J-dekh mannu..mein ye bilkul bhi nahi kahe rahi tu galt hai..lekin virat ka najarya bhi galt nahi hai..woh tujhe lekar bahot protective hai..aur mujhe bhi virat ki baat sahi lagti hai..tujhe koi bahot badi problem nahi hai..aur ab to tu kisi bhi chij ko dekh kar over react nahi karti hai aur nahi panic ho jati hai..
M-lekin Di..
J-mannu..tu virat k nazariye se kyu nahi sochti..agar woh nahi chahta to thik hai na..tu vaise bhi apne Dar ko kafi kum kar chuki hai..
Maanvi smiled and hugged her..
M-thank u Di..
J also smile..
After few hours..its evening now..
Virat come home..he felt little guilty for talking her like that in morning..he walked towards his room..
Here maanvi talked with doctor on phone..she said no for appointment..
M-ji mein bahot soch samaj k appointment k baare kahe rahi hu..,thank u Doctor aap plz un sychystrist se baat kar lijiye ga meri taraf se...,
virat stood near the door and hearing her..he getting angery..
M-thank u doctor..
She cut the call and put phone on bed and turned..she saw virat stood near the door..first she shocked with scare..then she smile..
M-virat tum..tum kab aaye?
Virat come near to her..
V-bas abhi abhi..
M-thik hai tum fresh ho jao mein tumhare liye coffee le aati hu..
She about to leave but he stop her..
V-tum doctor se kya baat kar rahi thi?..he asked in serious but soft voice..
M-pahele tum fresh ho jao hum baad me baat karte hai..
She just turned her face and he again asked..with angry tone..
V-tum Dr se kis bare mein baat kar rahi thi?
M-meine kaha na baad mein baat karte hai..koi itni bhi khas baat nahi hai..tum tired lag rahe ho..mein coffee le aati hu..she smile and walked towards door..
Virat become anger and pulled her towards him and cough her with hands..he hold her tightly..maanvi looked at him..he looks angry and irritating..
M-virat..aahh..kya kar rahe ho..dard ho raha hai..
Virat looked at her hand and loose his grip but still holding her..
V-meine tumse pucha uska jwab kyu nahi de rahi..meine mana kiya tha phir bhi..
Maanvi looked at him with teary eyes..
M-nahi virat..mein to tumhe..
He removed his hand
V-mein to tumhe kya? tumne mujhe bataye bina appointment leli?
he asked angrily
m-lekin
she try to defence
V-lekin kya? tum samaj kyu nahi rahi ho mein nahi chahta koi tumhari mentali halat pr sawal uthaye tumhe koi is tarah se dekhe mein nahi chahta..he tried to explain her
V-lekin nahi..tumhe samaj na hi nahi hai..bas bachcho ki jid karni hai
he turned angrily
M-with tears-i m sorry..lekin mein appointment lene ki nahi cancel karne ki baat kar rahi thi..
she walked out from room
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ITS 12 O'CLOCK IN NIGHT..VIRAT COME HOME AND WENT IN ROOM..HE SAW ROOM EMPATHY..HE WENT TO DABBUS ROOM AND SAW HIM SLEEPING..HE SEARCHES FOR HER..HE ABT TO PASSED FROM TARECCE WHEN HE SAW MAANVI STOOD ON TARECCE NEAR THE RAILINGS..
HE COME NEAR TO HER AND STOOD BEHIND HER..SHE LOOKS TOWARDS SKY..SHE DIDN'T REALIZE HIS PRESENCE..SUDDENLY SHE FELT WARM HANDS AROUND HER..SHE COME OUT FROM HER THOUGHTS..
VIRAT MOVED HIS ONE HAND AROUND HER STOMOCH AND OTHER ONE AROUND HER UPPER PART..NEAR HER CHEST..HIS PALM ON HER HEART..SHE TRY TO MOVE HER HAND BUT VIRAT HOLD HER TIGHTLY AND CLOSE HIS EYES...HE RESTING HIS CHIN ON HER LEFT SOLDER..WISHEPER IN HER EARS...I M SORRY...
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update.. precap sounds nice..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
precap i feel somthing romantic
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi guys...
My first paper done today...
I have break till 12 Nov...
I tried to gave next update today...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope exam went well
Great update
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-51(a)
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Maanvi turned in anger when she saw jeevika in front of her..virat also turned with her last sentence..he abt to stop her but he shut with look j on door..j looked at both..maanvi gave her helpless look..tears fall on her cheeks..j abt to say something but maanvi walked out from room..j looked at virat..virat looks down..j come near to him..
J-virat..mein nahi janti ki tum dono k bich kya baat hui..lekin agar ye sychystrist ko lekar hai to mein Tumhe bata du ki kal jab mannu hospital gai thi tabhi Dr ne use sychystrist se ek bar consult karne ka suggestion diya tha..
Virat looked at her surprisely..
J-virat mannu ko khud Dr ne hi appointment fix karke Di thi..lekin tumhare mana karne k baad usne tai kar liya tha ki woh unhe mana kar degi..
Virat brushed his hair and shook his head in embers..he feel guilty..
V-aur meine maanvi ko kuch moka hi nahi diya..he said with regret..
J-shayad..ab jao use baat karlo..mein bas ye batane aai thi ki mein aur viren ji bahar ja rahe hai..
V-yeh to bahot achchi baat hai..aap jaiye mein maanvi se baat karlunga..smiled
j smiled and leave..
Virat know this time he really over reacted..he went out from room and search for her..he asked abt her to vanshika who told him that maanvi go with dabbu for buying something..he about to go to her when his phone rang..its his PA's call who tell him to come fast as he can..with half mood he drove towards his studio..he reached at studio when parth his PA planed his meeting with his new music album producer..after meeting they Decided that the album shooting done in Mumbai..virat has to come to Mumbai as early as he can..virat decided to leave for Mumbai tomorrow..he told his PA to booked 2 tickets..he want to go with maanvi and spend time with her..
At night he returned to home..all are waited for him..after fresh n up he come to dinner..he find maanvi missing from their..he asked abt her to vanshika..she answered him that she told her that she already eat something with dabbu with shopping..virat understand why she lie..he again asked that where is she..again vanshika told him that she just abt to go towards room before u come..after it virat hardly eat food with vanshika's insisting..
After dinner he hurriedly walked towards his room..its long time when he saw her and specially when she hurt by him..he want to apologies to her..he want to see her..he entered in his room and found it empathy..he thought perhaps she go in dabbu's room bcz they leaved tomorrow for rihshikesh..he checked in his room but he saw dabbu sleeping in his room..he worried little..then he remember something..he rush towards terrace..he reached at terrace..he looks for her..he loose around the terrace when he saw her standing near the side railing..she staring at sky with teary eyes..he walked toward her..he stood just behind her..maanvi realize his presence..she get alert..she wipe her tears and looks here and there with anger..virat want to say sorry to her but he know that its not enough for now..she really hurt..when she about to turned away virat hold her tightly from back..his one hand hold her with her stomoch and one hand covered her upper part...his palm plased on her heart..maanvi try to move when he tied his hold and resting his chin on her solder..she closed her eyes..he more close to her..maanvi felt her heart beat increasing..virat closed his eyes and wisheper..
V- i m sorry..
Tears slip on her cheek..they stood in same position for few minutes..after it virat opened his eyes and removed his hands from her and turned her with solder..she still closed her eyes..virat wipe her tears and cupped her face..
V-i m sorry...plz mujhe maaf kardo..he said sadly..
Maanvi opened her eyes and looked at him..
M-kyu karte ho virat asa?..mein manti hu ki tum meri bahot care karte ho..mujhe har taklif se dur rakhna chahte ho..lekin virat in sab k bich mujhe ek dusra hi virat najar aata hai..she said with tears..
Virat just looked at her with little wet eyes
M-woh virat Jo mere cancer k waqt nahi badla Jo kabhi mere samne dard ya udashi ko nahi lata tha hamesha khush raheta tha..mera virat Jo meri masti me mera saath deta tha..jo bina mujhe tang kiye rahe nahi pata tha woh virat shayad kho sa gaya hai..
V-nahi mein vahi hu..he said
m-nahi..tum woh nahi ho..woh virat mujh pr is tarah bar bar chilata nahi tha..woh mujhe ek bimaro ki tarah treat nahi karta tha..woh chhoti chhoti bat pr servants pr gussa nahi hota tha..woh virat sirf pyar karna jaanta tha..plz mujhe woh virat lotado..mein manti hu mein pahele jaisi maanvi nahi hu lekin mujhe apne usi virat ki jarurat hai..Jo kal ki na soch kar aaj ko jiye..mujse lade..mujhe chidhaye..
He removed his hand..she wipe her tears and told him seriously..
M-mujhe ek caring husband se jyada apne partner ki jarurat hai..mein nahi dekh sakti tumhe is tarah..mere liye tum khud ko badlo meine kabhi nahi chaha,us incident k baad tumme change sab ne notice kiya hai virat aur is k liye mujhe guilty feel hota hai..
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M-MEIN BEEJI K SAATH KUCH DINO K LIYE RIHSHIKESH JA RAHI HU..
V-SURPRISELY-KYA? LEKIN KYU? TUMNE MUJHE PAHELE BATAYA NAHI..MAANVI ASE ACHANK...
MAANVI IGNORE HIM AND ZIPPED HER BAG AND GAVE IT TO DABBU..
M-DABBU ISE GADI ME RAKHVA DE..
DABBU LEAVE..VIRAT TURNED HER TOWARDS HIM..
V-MAANVI..HUM MUMBAI JA RAHE HAI..HE GAVE HER QUESTION LOOK..
M-NAHI..SIRF TUM..
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update.. nice precap.. 😊

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