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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhu18

can never forget any of your story ... but i was out of station for 15 days and now have lots of pending work so less time on IF



Oops didn't mean to hurt u dear... I was toh just being little naughty ☺️

Am truly honored dear 🤗

No probs dear... finish ur work
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Posted: 12 years ago

To my readers: Thank you all for your support, likes and lovely comments.

Thank you so much guys.

Please keep blessing the SS and I will try my best to entertain you.
Please please more likes and comments, kindly don't remain silent

Please continue to shower your love

I have added translation to Hindi dialogues in English in bracket in purple color



Last Part


(Assume they are lying on bed)


They stayed like that for ages finally finding solace in each other's arms, they had felt so incomplete without the other. They wept silently as they almost crushed the other in the hug just not wanting to let go, as if wanting the time to stop there so that they could remain like that till the end of time submerged in one another. Even the Almighty had tears in his eyes seeing the pure love of those divine lovers and HE too felt at peace to see the soul mates together once again.

They finally came out of the hug as they heard a knock on the door.

Maan: Please come.

Annie: Bhai, woh physiotherapist has come for Bhabhi's session

Maan: Hmm… Annie tell him to wait for just two minutes, we will be right there.

Annie: Ji (and she left them alone while Geet raised an eyebrow "Kya hua Maan?" ("What happened Maan?"))

Maan: Tumhe kya laga mei tumhe mujhe meri Pari se juda karne ki koi bhi saza nahi doonga (and Geet's heart sank, what would her punishment be, she just pleaded to her Babaji to not separate her from her Maan, other than that she was ready to pay any price for her sins. Maan could see the fear in her eyes and he immediately hugged her waist pulling her close to him as if assuring her that he would never let anything come in between them ever again while Geet was taken by surprise by his sudden action and looked up. But as soon as their eyes met she blushed ☺️ seeing the naughty and mischievously twinkle in Maan's eyes and heart beat rose OMG what was her punishment. Maan continued pulling her more close to himself as he whispered huskily into her ears almost teasing her senses) Tumhari saaza yeh hai ki ab se tum har ek pal meri aakho ke saamne hi rahogi chahe kuch bhi toh jai (and Geet blushed ☺️ Hayee… she loved her punishment while Maan smirked a little thinking about his naughty plan)

(What did you think that I will not give you any punishment for separating me from my angel. Your punishment is that from now on you will have to stay in front of my eyes each and every second come what may)

The physiotherapy session went well and the doctor was really pleased with Geet's progress. As they came back to their room Maan gently rocked his Jaan to sleep as he knew how trying the session had been for her.

It had been a couple of hours since Geet had fallen asleep and as she slowly blinked her eyes, hayee… she was completely lost in her Maan who was sitting beside her… hayee… he looked so mesmerizing, handsome, serene and breadth taking that she just couldn't take her eyes away from her Jaan, her Maan when all of a sudden she saw lines of tension on his forehead, it felt as if someone just ripped her heart apart as he slightly winced in pain and she immediately got up all worried.



Geet: Kya hua Maan, aap ko bahut dard ho raha hai na (Maan was surprised to see her awake and gave her his mesmerizing smile shaking his head as if assuring her that all was well when she realized what he had been up to which was causing him the pain. Really furious snatching the laptop from his hands and putting it aside) Maan aap ne apni halat dekhi hai, aap ke haato ke ghaav abhi bhare bhi nahi hai aur aap (tears rolled down her eyes as she gently caressed his bandaged hands.)

(What happened Maan, your injuries are paining a lot? have you seen your condition, Maan, your hand wounds haven't even healed yet and you)

Maan (as tears brimmed his eyes): I am absolutely fine Jaan, please don't cry na angel.

Geet (furious, ek toh he was not well uper se he was exerting aur toh aur ab jooth bhi bol rahe hai): Fine, aap isse fine kahate ho (she said showing him his wounds as fresh tears rolled down her hazels as her heart winced in his pain) Aap ko kitna dard ho raha hoga na

((furious, first he was not well on top of it he was exerting and now he was telling lies as well): Fine, you call this fine (she said showing him his wounds as fresh tears rolled down her hazels as her heart winced in his pain) You are really hurting na)




She said as she kissed his wounded hands as if wanting to absorb all his suffering, trying desperately to wash away all the pain via her love while he was completely blown away by her love and care

Maan (wiping her tears as he gently shook his head): Nahi angel tumhare haato mei toh jaado hai, mera sara dard gayab ho gaya Jaan. (he said with so much sincerity in his voice that Geet simply hugged him and he too very lovingly cocooned her in his loving embrace)

(No angel, there is magic in your hands, all my pain simply vanished Jaan)



Geet (in the hug): Mei jaanti hoon aap ka bahut sara kaam pending hoga na (Maan was quiet he didn't want to hurt his angel anymore when an idea clicked in Geet's mind breaking the hug) Arey haan, hum ek kaam kar sakte hai, you dictate and I will type, what say (she winked 😉 at him all beaming and hayee… Maan was completely lost in his angel's mesmerizing smile and so it was like that Maan completed all his pending work with the help of his angel along with his drooling sessions wink 😉)

(I know a lot of your work must be pending. Yeah of course, we can do this, you dictate and I will type, what say)

It was evening and Geet got up to go to the washroom but Maan stopped her.

Geet: Arey Maan, I am just going to the rest room.

Maan (shaking his head): No you can't (and Geet was like "kya") Arey Geet ab itni bholi bhi mat bano… (but Geet was still lost not trying to understand what he did he mean) Arey did you forget your punishment??? (and Geet was totally shocked "Kya" as her mouth formed a perfect "O")

(Now Geet don't pretend to be so innocent)



Geet (protested): Par Maan aap washroom kaise aa sakte ho mere saat (she said as her cheeks became all red ☺️ totally complimenting her completely flushed face, as she lowered her eyes not able to meet his intense gaze, whispering the rest) Kuch toh sharam kijiye na. (while Maan was really enjoying himself and it was with great efforts that he was controlling his laughter 😆 seeing her blush like that all red ☺️)

(But Maan how can you come with me to the washroom. Have some shame)



Maan (somehow controlling himself as he continued in a stern voice): Na, nothing doing, saza toh saze hai and how can I trust this devil (he said pointing to Geet) with my angel, kya pata kab iska irada badal jai aur yeh meri pari ko mujse door bhaga ke li jaye (and Geet was like "Kya"… how can she both be the devil and the angel at the same time she wondered scratching her head)

(No, nothing doing, punishment is punishment and how can I trust this devil (he said pointing to Geet) with my angel, who knows when your intensions change and you take my angel away from me)



Geet (she tried protesting again making a baby face with puppy dog eyes and hayee… how could he not melt for that one): Please Maan…

Maan (thinking): Hmmm… Acha ek kaam ho sakta hai (and Geet was super excited like a small kid as she asked "Kya Kya") you will have to sing a song whenever you go to the washroom (Geet was like "Kya" completely taken aback as she was a really horrible singer) yeah that way I will know that you are in the washroom only and didn't run away (he smirked with that devil look in his eyes and Geet knew there was no getting out of this one and she gulped hard as she slightly nodded before heading to the wash room)

(Hmm... ok we can do one thing)

As Geet grumpily dragged her feet to the washroom she cribbed to her Babaji "Dekha na Babaji yeh kitne Dhust ho gaye hai, hai na" Then as if her Babaji denied it "Aur nahi toh kya dekhiye na… inhe pata hai mei kitna bura Gati hoon aur toh aur mujhe toh koi dhang ka gaana bhi yaad nahi hai uper se inhone aisi saza de di… bataiye na Babaji ab mei kya karoon" she cribbed as she so cutely pouted looking upwards and Maan was giggling away 😆 listening to his adorable sweetu si Jaan.

(As Geet grumpily dragged her feet to the washroom she cribbed to her Babaji "See Babaji how bad he has become, right" Then as if her Babaji denied it "Yeah see na… he know how horribly I sing and I don't even remember any nice song and on top of it he gave me such a punishment… tell na Babaji what should I do now" she cribbed as she so cutely pouted looking upwards and Maan was giggling away 😆 listening to his adorable sweet and cute Jaan.)

Geet went inside the washroom and was still wondering what to sing when Maan screamed from outside.

Maan: I am waiting Jaan (and Geet was like "Ufff, yeh mei kahan phas gayi" ("Ufff, where did I get stuck"))

Geet (without thinking she started singing): Chinta Ta Chita chita Chinta Ta Ta… (and Maan was laughing outside holding his stomach 🤣 she sounded so besura (out of tune) hehehe 🤣 when Geet cribbed) Ab aage kya tha… aisa karti hoon isse hi repeat kar deti hoon (Now what was after this… yeah let me do this I will repeat these lines again) (though Geet cribbed in a low whisper our darling Maan heard it all and was giggling 😆 away to glory) Chinta Ta Chita chita Chinta Ta Ta… (it all continued like this and our Maan laughed and laughed 🤣 till he had tears in his eyes. He was truly enjoying his Jaan's sweet plight)

And so the saza continued every time poor Geet went to the washroom she was lost thinking a song while Maan was having a gala time troubling his Jaan.

Next day Geet had gone to take bath while Maan was enjoying her plight as she was singing all sorts of random songs when suddenly she was all lost and started singing "Ahhh… Ahhh… Ahhh…" while Maan covered his ears... it was really horrible and really loud and Rano Maa came rushing to their room.

Rano (really worried): Maan… Geet ko kya hua why is she screaming like this… Kahi woh bathroom mei slip toh nahi ho gayi… (she said all worried while Maan was having a really hard time controlling his laughter)

(Maan… what happened to Geet why is she screaming like this… I hope she hasn't slipped inside the bathroom…)

Maan (acting all innocent): Nahi woh giri nahi hai (and Rano sighed in relief) Pata nahi Maa… par jab se nahane gayi hai woh aise hi chilla rahi hai… (while Geet had just come out and she was furious hearing Maan… ek toh uski wajah se woh pagalo ki tarak gaane soch rahi thi aur gaa rahi thi aur woh… ufff… Dhust… nahi… nahi… Dhust Danav she said cribbing to her favorite Babaji while Maan was really enjoying this) Batao na Jaan why were you screaming like this (and Geet was like "Grhhh… you just wait and watch, I won't leave you Mr. Maan Singh Khurana")

(No she hasn't slipped (and Rano sighed in relief) Don't know Maa what's the matter… but since the time she has goen to take a bath she has been screaming like this… (while Geet had just come out and she was furious hearing Maan… firstly because of him she as thinking about songs like mad and on top of it she was singing too and he… ufff… Dhust… no… no… Dhust Danav she said cribbing to her favorite Babaji while Maan was really enjoying this) Tell na Jaan why were you screaming like this (and Geet was like "Grhhh… you just wait and watch, I won't leave you Mr. Maan Singh Khurana"))

Rano (worried seeing Geet's weird reactions): Kya baat hai beta, batao na why were you screaming…

(What is the matter beta, tell na why were you screaming…)

Geet (somehow controlling her anger even as steam was clearly visible coming out of her ears for her Maan): Kuch nahi Maa… haan… woh toh mei bas gaana gaa rahi thi… (and Rano was like "Kya" but Geet made a baby pleading face and Rano let it be shaking her head "Lagta hai sab pagal ho gaye hai")

(Nothing Maa… yeah… I was just singing a song… (and Rano was like "What" but Geet made a baby pleading face and Rano let it be shaking her head "Looks like all have gone mad"))


Precap: Epilogue


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Posted: 12 years ago
yipppieee me second di
amazing update
maan n geet finding solace in each other's arms
trying to absorb each other's pain
maan giving saza to geet for making him stay away from his angel
geet is so scared at the thought of saza
thinking he will go away from her
but maan can he ever see her scared no na
his saza was so sweet
doctor is really happy with geet's progress
maan's pure n unconditional love is giving her the strength to get well soon
maan working even in this condition
iska kuch nahi hosakta
even in so much pain he is working
geet is so worried about him
trying to absorb all the pain she unknowingly bestowed on him
maan n geet together completed all his pending work
maan is teasing geet so much
bechari geet kuch kar bhi nahi sakti
maan ki saza jo hai sehni toh padegi
he knowz how bad geet sings
then also she has to sing whenever she goes to the washroom
maan is having so much fun listening to her
omg rano maa actually thought she fell down or smthing 🤣🤣
maan is acting so innocent in front of maa
n geet is stuck 1nce again
maan beta bachke rahiyo
geet se panga le rahe ho
chodegi nahi woh
rano maa is so confused looking at the behavior of the two
but then yeh dono kab kya karte hain kissi ko nahi pata hota
precap is epilogue 😭
update soon di
waiting eagerly
luvvv yaaa
muahhh
Edited by maanluver - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣🤣🤣


geet dubara bus gana mat 😆


awesome choice of song chinta chita


loved punishment b maan


continue soon with big epilouge


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Posted: 12 years ago
kya sazza thi yaar..
it reeminded me off my big brother..
poor my brother had this aadat of singing when ever he was in washroom and now his son.. my nephew has the same habit..
i swear we at home enjoy this cute singing sessions from my 7 year old nephew.. who sings all sorts of song..
loved maan's punishment
surperb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
marvelous
superb
waiting for epilogue
cont soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG that ws.so funny...Geet singing a song...lol
awesome updAte...loved it
waiting for next...continue soon
thank.for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome n superb
it has both elements funny yet caring
me waiting fo epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan is very naughty yaar,...geet and gana😆😆😆 ..maan having gala time ufff..waiting eagerly for epi..pls update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part,cont & waiting 4 the epilogue.

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