Maaneet FF ~ Immeasurable Love ~ Pt9 Pg40| 5th Feb - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 5
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice part yaara lovee itt so muchiiee Mahiii😳😳😳😳its as sweet as u are😆😆lovedd it

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Love yaaa😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 4


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Posted: 12 years ago
so nw geet n prem r frnds...dekhte hai age jaake kya hota haai...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congo kiddo. Will wait for the base to set but really loved it & still have doubt about this guy.
Do cont soon & do PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
so now geet and prem are good friend. wonderful news
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PART 6

After our classes were over, prem & I bid goodbye. When I reached home it was 6:45. Suddenly my heartbeat had somehow found a new rhythm. It felt as if my knees would just melt in anticipation of hearing the most beautiful voice in just 15 mins. I quickly rushed to my room, stopping in between to check if someone's there outside the room & then entered the room slowly hoping no one would be there. I quickly thanked babaji finding no one there. Just 5 mins more. Geet, u are getting ridiculous day by day… this is seriously too much… I thought to myself.

And then my phone rang. The feeling that coursed through me that very second was indescribable. I picked the phone in a few rings feeling so very nervous, and his voice made it even worse.

Itni der me kyu pick kiya call? He complained.

Wo.. um.. ha.. actually I was doing something…

Acha.. so would u plz pinpoint.. what exactly do u mean by 'something' ..

Apka wait aur kya pagal.. I muttered under my breath.

Kya kaha tumne..?

Nahi kuch bhi to nahi..

Geet.. tum saaf saaf bolna kis zindagi me seekhogi..

Apke samne iss zindagi mein to nahi. I muttered again.

Sunayi diya mujhe iss baar.

Sunane ke liye hi bola tha..

Oh really?

Ji haan.. really..

The next one hour was extremely beautiful & colorful for me just by the presence of maan& our sweet knok-jhoks in it. He may have not realized it but I felt on the top of the world.

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It had been a month since I had met maan… I'm sorry… I mean talked to maan… since practically I had never ever seen him… except for in his pics. Everything was going on very smoothly. The days in school.. oozing out colours of friendship, the initial part of evenings with prem.. oozing out the true spirit of friendship, and then as the dusk came.. maan occupied all my heart and mind.. his voice making my life a living heaven.

As I completed my homework, I was reminded of yesterday, when everything changed drastically. Maan had called me just like usual. It was a Sunday and he was at his friend's place, partying.

Geet.. there's something I'd like to ask u.. he had said.

Haan bolo na..

Actually.. see u know I'm married, right..

Haan I know.. I hesitated a bit when the word married came..

Meri ek friend hai.. I mean she's my collogue & we even travel by the same cab..

So..?

So.. she kind of proposed me..

The turmoil that ran through me was unbearable. My thoughts were so unclear. It seemed he had just spoiled everything. I didn't knew what was I thinking. Actually, I didn't knew what was happening. I remained mum.

Aisa nahi hai ki I don't like her.. she's nice.. good.. but I cant say its love or something like that. Love is when u feel those butterflies in ur stomach.. love is when u can wait for that person endlessly.. love lies in being with that person unconditionally, no matter what the situation is.. love is forgetting all the odds that u share..

Aise mein.. what do u think I should do..

But u are married.. I couldn't say anything else though i so much hated even the thought of him being with some girl.. relationship.. not at all..

Aisi shaadi jis ke koi maayne nahi hain.. is that even called marriage..?

Maayne nahi hain.. matlab.. my voice was already breaking down.. clearly he was trying to say his marriage doesnt matters & it shouldn't stop him from seeing someone else.. & the thought itself was breaking something inside me.. but the fact that his marriage means nothing gave me immense happiness which was overclouded by the fear of him being in a relationship.. with some other girl..

Matlab.. we don't share what every husband and wife share.. & I'm not implying just to a physical relationship.. but even mutual understanding.. we don't even live under the same roof.. don't even look at each other.. forget talking to each other.. Its just a namesake marriage geet..

So.. are u interested in that girl..? I so wished that he would say he's not at all interested..

Geet.. even if I am interested.. does it matters..? B'coz when she'll know that I'm married, she'll back out on her own accord.

But its just a namesake marriage.. if she really likes u.. she would understand.. I decided to deal with this practically.. shoving my emotions back

Geet.. if u were that girl.. would u understand..

I was shocked at the sudden question but then I realized that maybe I would.

Yes, I would.

Well then, I would say sab log tumhari tarah nahi hote geet.. for them life is much more than love.. & everything ends on money..

Do u wanna say that she's just after ur money..??

Maybe.. but if she would know that I can give her love but i cant give her money.. bcoz wo kisi aur ka haq hai.. she wont be interested anymore..

That means she doesn't loves u..

Geet.. my mumma knows all abt whats going on between seema & me.. Though I don't want to be with her.. but I cant leave her.. she has no one but my family..

Wo bahut acha khana banati hai.. I love her cooking.. but agar wo utni hi achi insaan hoti.. to it would have been much better.. she does all the household chores.. happily.. but that's not what I look for in my life partner..

Use kab kya bolna chahiye.. iss ki bhi samajh nahi hai..

But still even if I decide not to live with her.. I'll have to support her financially.. no matter what happens.. & no girl would approve of such a complicated relationship.. even if I love her unconditionally..

I don't think so.. a girl should be mature enough to know that u are also tied up.. u cant help it..

I told u geet.. not everyone thinks the way u think.. but just think if u are that girl.. would u agree to be with me in spite of all this..?

I.. I don't know.. I mean yes.. maybe.. aap.. see I'm not that girl.. so forget it..

Uhhm.. ya okay.. geet I need to go.. I'll talk to u tomorrow okay.

Okay..

I was brought back to the present by the beep of my phone.

Maan's msg.

Geet.. I want to talk to u.. I'll call u in 10 mins ok.. & make sure no one is there around u..

He was making everything more and more complicated. First what all he said yesterday.. I still couldn't figure out why was he saying all that, and now wanting to talk to me.. abt what I wondered..

And then he called finally.

Hii.. I tried to sound normal.. kya baat karni hai..?

I heard him sigh..

Geet.. I think this is enough..

What is enough..?

This.. our.. I mean our friendship.. I cant be friends with u anymore.. It'd be better if we part ways now..


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I know its been a month since I've updated. I'm so sorry. I was busy with studies :(

Anyways hope u liked the update.. their story is very very complicated.. so lot of rona dhona is present.. but the good thing is that the rona dhona doesnt lasts more than a day.. thank goodness for that :D 😆😉

Okay now u may proceed and plz dont u dare close ur browser's window before commenting.. I mean to say plz do comment 😆

Love

Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for ur nxt update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Babydoll, PM nahi kiya na. Mein phir bhi comment karungi. Maan really needs Geet. His talk and life says so. The love that he want can be given only by her. All of it was amazing par last mey dhamaka, kya baat hai. You know the reason of my short comment.

Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHY DOES MAAN NOT WANT TO BE FRIENDS WITH HER ANYMORE

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