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Posted: 13 years ago
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zcbO3kIRz6M&feature=channel_video_title[/YOUTUBE]

hi readers hope you all are fine .. as few of you asked me to start a new story on Maaneet here i am with a character sketch .and prologue

Maan: a business man , always busy . dadi want him to get married but he always say " i dont have time for myself how i will give her"

Geet: belong to a middle class family . her opinion about marriage is " if i will like some one i will only marry then . i dont want to spend my whole life with an anonymous like a reboot'


Prologue

Maan going on a business meeting to china and Geet on a winter holidays ...


Geet: at airport ..fix her bag on shoulder " uff again flight is late " she walk to the shop and buy chips

Shopkeeper: madam 50 rs

Geet: damagh thek ha i will pay you 50 rs for this small packet ... rakho she turn back and bang in to Maan

Maan: just hold her both look at each other

Geet: sorry...

Maan: sorry

Geet: aap bhi na la kuch yahan se chor ha ..

Maan: smiled ...

Geet; walk to seated in lounge

Maan: walk to the show bought news paper... look at Geet who was sitting chewing her gum and listening music... " pagal ha " walk and seated far from her


there was announcement they both march to their class respectively...Maan in business and Geet in economy class.. the flight was smooth suddenly their plane came in air-pocket and it started shaking badly ...all the passenger frighten ...

Pilot announce " i sadly have to announce our plane is damage and we have to make an emergency exit please do as the crew advise you, it is minus 5 out so wear your warm clothes..May God bless you all "...


do tell me how it is if you all like it then i will proceed dont forget to comment..title yet to decide ... listen the track and tell me what suit


special thanks to Hasan Shirazi for the track


\if you want me to pm you plz mail me once or comment here
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
AWESOME prologue
loved it
cont soon
and do add me to your pm list!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the list of your F/F

Hope to read all of them

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow amazing stories u write di...
love thm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for compiling all ur works
Hope to read them all
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@naddiya26: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: girlz-rule

@naddiya26: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊

which one dear ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The link at Pg.8, I also read ur OS, FF n SS in the other forum (u knw which 1), must say they r very well written.😊

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