JEET : KISMAT YA HAUSLE KI (VIRMAN) OS (SAD)

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Fizza

@Rose_Tandon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

OMg..so heart touching,,but being hinest dont want manvi to die in drama

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Samia

@Sam_15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wow Sumana, firstly sorry for the late reply and secondly thanks for the pm. I wouldn't have wanted to miss this OS. Even though it's sad and I hate to see or even imagine Virman sad and depressed, I loved ur OS to the core. It was beautifully written...so heart touching and emotional. I loved how u showed Virat's and Jeevika's love, helplessness and pain and Manvi's forced strength. Keep it up :)

Sam.

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Sanam

@meant4uonlie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

this was so sad ... but very well written ... i cud picture everything that was written... 😭😭😭

but i just hope nothing like this happens in the show ... 😔

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sakshi_aditi

@sakshi_aditi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

i have tears in my eyes while typing this and mind u i m not that type of a girl who cries so easily😭...amazingly written!!! i don't have words...plz do continue ur writing habits!! well not to make us cry all the time but smile too!!😊

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sakshi_aditi

@sakshi_aditi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: meant4uonlie
😭

this was so sad ... but very well written ... i cud picture everything that was written... 😭😭😭
but i just hope nothing like this happens in the show ... 😔

it won't 😊 don't worry!